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hdalal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Anu šŸ¤— Bring it on girl. Loved every bit of it.

Though not much of AA1 interaction this time, loved the Atul-Sapna & Atul-Sapna-Armaan convos. Atul-Sapna share such a warm & sweet friendship. I really like the way you have developed the relationships between the interns. Am loving the idea of Saps helping Atul out. Anjie being all politely formal, now why am i not surprised at that. She has taken a few steps backward this time. How i wish she would talk to someone about what she feels, about her confusion, fears & insecurities.

So you having fun again at Ridz's cost huh? Lage raho 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG OMG OMG!!! I have no words.. i had just foudn this ff a couple days back.. and finally finished reading ALL the parts!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING... you are such an amazing writer.. and i have to say.. love reading about atul and anjali.. your descriptions of EVERYTHING is so real.. can sense it.. picture it.. anjali's emotional thoughts about her mom on the day of her parents anniversary.. her relationship with her dad.. and resentment towards ridz.. her friendship with armaan.. and ALL her feelings, thoughts and confuions with Atul.. just great!! i love atul's chirpy character.. his concern and love for anjali is so pure.. his dialogue with mili. so touching.. ahhhh.. hehehe.. i can keep going on and on..
the words you use to describe everything.. iceprincess and all that.. just so perfect...
in short.. i love this ff.. a great angle.. and i CANT WAIT till you update again..
would it be possible to pm me when you update again? THANKS!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Haye Bhagwaan...

I'm in LOVE with Atul, yaar...😳 (I know he's reserved for Angie, don't worry!)
His monologue on his feelings for Anjali just left me breathless! I loved each and EVERY word..."the girl whose one smile lights up my entire world"..."the girl behind the Ice Princess"...and the "unexpected vulnerability"...Wow! It's all so beautiful...Thank you soooooooo much, Borna!šŸ¤—Glad you liked it!
It's so easy to see just how deeply Atul loves Angie, even though he can't do much about it at this point of time. šŸ‘šŸ‘
Sapna, Sapna...šŸ¤— She's such a good detective! And a great friend, but that just goes without saying! Haha, her eyes are pretty sharp, huh? Her ability to figure out (and effectively read everyone's faces) what was going on between her four colleagues at the Nurse Station was awesome! Yep, I figured it would be fun to have Sappy shaking her head at them in all their confusion about lowe showešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
"He hasn't picked an easy person to love..." So true, but his love and concern is strong enough to overcome Anjali's hesitation and confusion...
Anjali sneaking glances at Atul this time?? Hmmm...😳 That part was so CUTE!!!
The poor girl is so confused when it comes to matters of the heart...Hehehe....yes, the poor girl is pretty confused....she's dealing with a long of issues running thru her mind right now...
Oh yes, and the confusion with Armaan, Atul, and Sapna! That was absolutely hilarious! Good save by Sapna there...šŸ˜† I can SO imagine Atul and Armaan's shocked faces! I loved writing that part!! Thank you so much for liking it!😳😳
Well, all in all, I'm SO glad that Sapna is around and she knows everything!
Hopefully baat aage badhegi...Until then, I'll keep waiting! With Atul-Angie, it's a well-developed habit!
Love you, Anu! šŸ¤— šŸ¤— AwwwwwšŸ¤—šŸ¤—.Thank you for all the encouragement yaar!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Annnuuuuu!!šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— i'd say, this one's your best so far! S.U.P.E.R.B!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Meanwhile, Armaan was upto his usual antics. He gave Riddhima the once over, knowing it would irritate her, taking in her turquoise green salwar kameez and said, 'Looking good for a change today, Basket! I'm impressed! Did you finally decide to take some valuable fashion advice from your beautiful sister?'

'Oh shut up, you loser!' retorted Riddhima. 'Like you're one to talk! Mr. I'll-wear-two-collared-full-sleeved-shirts-all the time. Yeah, that's realllllllll fashionable.' She rolled her eyes.

Armaan grinned back at her, and leaning in, said, 'Kyun? Tumhein pasand nahin hai?? If you want, I can take one off? Or do you want me to take both of them off?' he smirked.

Riddhima gaped at him in shock, her jaw dropping open, 'What??!!! Maine'.Tum'' she sputtered uselessly.

'Chi Chi Riddhima!' he said suddenly, shaking his head at her. 'What are you thinking?? You think I'm going to take them off right now?! I meant, changing out from them into something else later on! Tumhari kismet itni aasani se nahin chamakne waali! My god! Yeh aaj kal ki ladkiyaan!' he finished in mock horror, shaking his head.

loved this part!! ek zamaane mein Armaan aisa hi cool dude hua karta tha.. aur ab.. i wish serial bhi itna hi acha hota! **sigh**
n hey, the beginning was good too!! very good, yaar!! keep it up!



IffyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyšŸ¤—Muahhhhhhhhhhh! Thank you so much, sweetheart! So glad you liked it!! Haan yaar, kaash is the word....for the many things filled with potential killed in this show

Oh well, I enjoy the original cool dude Armaan thru SNTšŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

I can't decide whether you're a magician or a mind-reader. I suppose both, because just after reading the last chap., yesterday, I was missing Saps incredibly. Was really really pleasantly surprised and glad after reading this chapter šŸ˜ AwwwwwwwwšŸ¤—šŸ¤—So glad you enjoyed it yaar! I'd started out wanting to write a Sappy scene in general, but she kinda took over the whole chapter before I knew itšŸ˜³šŸ˜†....And I absolutely loved writing about her!

AreYaar thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hdalal

Hey Anu šŸ¤— Bring it on girl. Loved every bit of it.

Though not much of AA1 interaction this time, loved the Atul-Sapna & Atul-Sapna-Armaan convos. Atul-Sapna share such a warm & sweet friendship. I really like the way you have developed the relationships between the interns. Am loving the idea of Saps helping Atul out. Anjie being all politely formal, now why am i not surprised at that. She has taken a few steps backward this time. How i wish she would talk to someone about what she feels, about her confusion, fears & insecurities.

So you having fun again at Ridz's cost huh? Lage raho 😃



Thank you soooooooo much, Hema!šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Yep, really not much AA1 interaction this time...and I surprised myself with thatšŸ˜†šŸ˜†...cuz I'd thought of putting in some scenes before...but now that's been postponed to the next chapteršŸ˜‰

So glad you enjoyed the Sapna-Atul-Armaan scenes! I had a ball writing them! And it's been quite a while since I enjoyed writing a chapter this much.

And who's having fun at Ridz's cost?? Innocent ol' me??šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜†....Actually yaar, main toh AR ki gaddi aage badhaane ki koshish kar rahi thi is chapter mein! Aage aage dekho hota hai kyašŸ˜†šŸ˜†
AreYaar thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

OMG OMG OMG!!! I have no words.. i had just foudn this ff a couple days back.. and finally finished reading ALL the parts!! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING... you are such an amazing writer.. and i have to say.. love reading about atul and anjali.. your descriptions of EVERYTHING is so real.. can sense it.. picture it.. anjali's emotional thoughts about her mom on the day of her parents anniversary.. her relationship with her dad.. and resentment towards ridz.. her friendship with armaan.. and ALL her feelings, thoughts and confuions with Atul.. just great!! i love atul's chirpy character.. his concern and love for anjali is so pure.. his dialogue with mili. so touching.. ahhhh.. hehehe.. i can keep going on and on..

the words you use to describe everything.. iceprincess and all that.. just so perfect...
in short.. i love this ff.. a great angle.. and i CANT WAIT till you update again..
would it be possible to pm me when you update again? THANKS!!



Thank you so very much!😳😳😳....So glad you liked it! Will try to update soon! And no problem at all...will surely PM you the next update😊😊....Thank you so much once again for the lovely comments!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu...looking forward to the next chapter then 😊 I was really surprised that AR got more footage than AA1 😃😃 But looking forward to the next update for AA1. Glad to know that you enjoyed writing the chapter. I remember you saying earlier that you were not enjoying the updates as much as you would like to.

And i completely believe you not having fun at ridz's cost šŸ˜‰ Oye, what has gotten into you? AR ki gaddi ke baare mein soch rahi hai?šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
But you've got me all curious now, aage aage kya hone wala hai yeh sochke. Am sure you will come up with something cool & funny.
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Posted: 17 years ago

first of all AnušŸ¤—..Pappu in ur avtaar is gorgeous!!😃.....and thn im really sorry for not commenting on the previous part..was a lil busy...and good for us u updated quite soon!

Anu dearest this part was Awesome..Sapna observing everyone makes her the most sorted out of thm all.. there only for her career!and the way Atul confides in her was brilliantly written..
i loved the part where Sapna wonders if Armaan will realise his feelings ..i remember tht frm the show as well and loved tht u noticed too and even added to ur masterpiece!!
...and i have to tell u how much i adored the elevator scene..Anjali's claustophobia and Atul comforting her ..it was so capturing..i could visualize every bit coz we saw tht in promo and remember how much we waited for the epi..tht WAS actually the killer weekend....miss the good old days..acha buss bahot depress hojate hain hum is show ke peechay so im just staring at Pappu avtaar for a breakšŸ˜†heheh...
ur just amazing at this..waiting for the next update sweetie!!Love ya!!šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
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Posted: 17 years ago
..and not to forget the OUR favourite last scene...
tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi
yunhi nahi dil lubhata koi
jaaaane tuuu
ya jaaaaaaaane naaa!šŸ˜šŸ˜†

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