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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

Phinally tussi update kar ditta🤗Mehakoooooooo, my sweeeetheart!🤗🤗🤗Inne dinan baad tuhade comments dekh ke jee khush ho gaya! Muahhhh!

As usual mind-blowing part..............creatives shud have done exactly this way..........but they rushed over that real scene n left it incomplete..........it was seriously not done😕

anyways u did a mind-blowing, fantastic, mind-boggling job anu darling!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much, yaar!

Chalo letz begin with my comments.........

First of all u designed a true picture of the situation, on readinf it one cud instantly imagine that scary small lift area n trapped ppl shouting for help...........u did it very very well👏

Then i loved the part where atul was trying to make anjali comfortable n anjali ended up in his arms unknowingly n on realizing this their awkward situation was described so beautifully👏👏 Aww so glad you enjoyed that part yaar!😳

and atul was amazed to realize that anji was actually nervous due to his presence🤣, kinna real hai na..........atul wud have never thought that one day anji will behave like this😆, but never mind.......though for a short period of time, but atul's dream scene came true👏👏 LOL....yeah, guess Atul's dream did kinda come true there for a bit, nahin?😆😆...Angie taan poori tarhan baukhla hi gayee si😆😆

Anu bhenji...........tussi taan chhaa gaye.........🤗🤗🤗Aww Mehakoo🤗🤗

And most important chalo atleast anji realized sumthing wat happened in those fraction of seconds, otherwise in the real show anji's character i ssuffering from temporary memory loss...........after few minutes only she forgets wat happened between them like that lab case, this lift scene n many more............but i m glad that here anji is getting into lover's shoes slowly😆😆 ROFL, Mehakoo! Angie 'getting into lover's shoes'?🤣🤣🤣 I love how you put these things!

So anu..................muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for this lovely part, i hope creatives read this n show this scene in real......... i would love to se this on screen..............🤗 Thank you so much for the wonderful comments, Mehakoo! Muahhhh!

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Posted: 17 years ago

anu , my love....

what a way to get back! oh, why could they not have showed it this way in dmg. why could they not have this sense, or rather sensibility and sensitivity.

i am too touched to write a detailed analysis, and a wee bit unwilling too, coz analyzing too much in detail might cause me to lose the delicious feeling of wonder and joy that reading the part gave me .

but i must say this, that i could sooooooo picturize not only every scene here, but also every nuance and almost every change in tone of voice of the AA1.

you sooooo caught the waY that atul wonderfully gets serious , and changes his tone. u know, when he is serious and caring, he suddenly sounds very very different and suddenly seems like the most deep and dependable guy around. i think anjie feels taht too. and her confusion at the comfort she derives from his presence and his reassuring touch.

no wonder pankit is overwhelmed yaar....this is believable, real, palpable and heart-stoppingly wonderful romance at its best....this is the atul-anjali i love and would love to see.

and anjie's confusion...and atul's delight at her confusion. 👏 👏 👏

she is smart enough to know what's happening, but is she honest enough to acknowledge or is she too scared of emotional attachments...but i am confident, in his unique way, anu's atul will find a way to wrap himself around his anjie's fragile,lonely and insecure heart and make it his own...

oh, i loved the way anjie tries to be smug about being taller and then cant reach it herself...and the way atul is totally cool with the fact that she is taller...he is one hell of a secure guy isnt he...

and ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh, anjie puts her hand in his, and is in no hurry to take it away....and it reminds her of the time she was sitting in his arms....dhik chak, dhik chak dance time!!!


but anu, atul should have been singing ULK yaar...after all she does say she is taller doesnt she????🤣

for a woman with a wondrous pen, darling u rock...and u rock our world...muuuuuuuaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh

🤗


Edited by sonalib - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh Sonali yaar 🤗 I am soooooooo glad you liked it so much! And you mentioned all the parts I really enjoyed writing! Muahhh! Cuz I really wanted Angie to make a mention of the fact that she's taller 😆 😆

And yeah, 'Anu's Atul' 😆 should be able to make his way into Angie's heart pretty soon...he's already halfway there, except she doesn't want to admit it to herself as you pointed out 😉

btw, ROFL@ Atul suddenly singing ULK...that song does suit them much more perfectly 😆 😆 😆 Hmmmm...maybe I WILL put it in in a moment of madness someday 😆 😆 😆

Love you, sweetheart! 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
whooooooooooaaaaa di, i am right after u!!!!


anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.......and the party is on!!!!


aap yoon hi agar humse milte rahe
dekhiye ek din pyaar ho jayega
aise baatein na kar o haseen jadugar
mera dil teri aankhon mein kho jaayega...


waah, waah, mashallah!!!!!

sorry for the gush!!! but i couldnt help it. oh anu, its sooooooo good to have u and snt back...and of course my fantastic AA1, who hve totally disappeared from screen but are alive only on snt.

pankit wrote u and no wonder...may i say not a word of that is not deserved or more.

the lift scene! how many days have we anguished over the editor's scissor which so cruellly chopped that scene off and left us in limbo and aghast. muuuuuuuuuaaaaaahhhhhhhh for giving it a resurrection and some solace to our wounded sensibilities.

is there no end to how romantic, how wonderful, how amazingly , delicately, finely you can spin a gossamer web of dreams and wonder. anjie in atul's arms, anjie nervous, atul recognizing that and feeling a sense of triumph...atul becoming a horse to give his anjie a leg up. the reassuring atul, the strong and supportive and yet gentle atul, the funny and fun atul...and the vulnerable anjie, the confused anjie, the anjie on the threshold of something new, unknown, exciting and yet scary...she stands on the edge ....will she take the plunge or wont she? it wont be easy, it wont be short...but atul will find a way. the positivity the guy and ur pen exude, reach out from these virtual pages and hug the reader and envelop is in a warmth that is oh so uplifting.

ooooooooohhhhhhh, anu...if only.....

kaisi hai yeh rut ke jisme phool banke dil khile....

👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Here's one for anu's anjie then:

let the magic creep up, let the love seep in...

let the world fade away, let it be only the two of us...

when the breeze wafts in, to carry my essence to you...

when my mind sees you when my eyes do not ...

and your voice caresses my soul with laughter...

i reach out to find you there, never far,

i stand here waiting, uncertain, scared,

a step forward, a heart beat more ,

or to turn back and venture not

for a new world is fearsome, and yet it draws,

oh to be able to shut my eyes, and not see

the smile that lights up your eyes....

and my world!!!!
Edited by sonalib - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Shonaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 🤗 for the lovely songs! Muahhhh! So glad you enjoyed it, sweetheart!

You humble me with your wonderful comments as always, yaar! I may or may not deserve them, but they always make my day! So biiiiiiiiiiig jhappi for that! 🤗 🤗

And if this chapter truly did hug you and envelop you with warmth, then nothing really could make me happier! So be this happy always, yaar! This is the Shona I love to see! Muahhh!

And that very last song...my fav. portion from it...

'kaise...kisiko bataayen...
kaise yeh samjhayen, kya pyar hai

ismein bandhan nahin hai, aur na koi bhi deewar hai
suno pyar ki niraali hai daastan.'

Aah how I love DCH songs....

Thank you so very much once again, sweetheart!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalib

Here's one for anu's anjie then:

let the magic creep up, let the love seep in...

let the world fade away, let it be only the two of us...

when the breeze wafts in, to carry my essence to you...

when my mind sees you when my eyes do not ...

and your voice caresses my soul with laughter...

i reach out to find you there, never far,

i stand here waiting, uncertain, scared,

a step forward, a heart beat more ,

or to turn back and venture not

for a new world is fearsome, and yet it draws,

oh to be able to shut my eyes, and not see

the smile that lights up your eyes....

and my world!!!!



Sonaliiiiiiiiiiiiii....man, you need to be here in front of me rite now so I can give you that big jhappi I so want to!! This was beautiful yaar, just so amazingly beautiful!! The highlighted lines especially are my favorite ones! They so totally capture Angie! Or atleast the Angie in my head...'Anu's Angie' as you call her😆😆.....Muahhh for this lovely poem...

And I have a song for you...which I'm sure you can guess...Imagine a better voice singing it, ok??

Tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi..
Yun hi nahin dil lubhata koi...

Jaane tu ya jaane na, maane tu ya maane na...

🤗🤗🤗Muahhh!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Imagine a better voice singing? this song? NEVER!!!

wouldnt trade your voice for this song, or u for a friend for anything in ths world..both are perfect as they are...

u make this song perfect, jhalli... 😆 😆 😆

tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi
yoon hi nahin dil lubhata koi

muuuuuuuaaaaahhhhhh urself!! 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu...
I can hardly breathe...This chapter was TOO amazing for words, seriously! 🥰
The sheer intensity of Atul-Angie's emotions throughout the scenes was so incredible, and I have to say that I LOVE the way that each and every line is written...I especially liked the way Atul is able to read Angie's expressions so well, and understand them. It reminds me of Pankit's comment about his and Sunaina's chemistry...*sigh*
I honestly don't think there's another writer out there who can describe and justify Atul and Angie's emotions as well as you can! 🤗 It's all so real, so believable, so touching.
I know this isn't as long a reply as I usually write, but I'm just too overwhelmed at the moment! Some of my most favorite moments would have to include:
- The sudden claustrophobia attack and Atul helping Angie calm down - the part when he cups her face in his hands would have been a beautiful onscreen moment....
- Angie's "I am taller, after all..." - and the leg-up after that
- The Bubble of Denial..."exhaustion" this time...tsk tsk, what's next on the list, Angie?
As always, I'm all hyped up for the next chapter! 😉 I'm off to reread this one!
Love you, jaanu!
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Posted: 17 years ago
THank you soooooooooo much, Borna!🤗

So glad you enjoyed all those moments! I loved writing the part about Atul consoling her....I could picture it being picturized on Pankit-Sunaina very vividly for some reason.....would've loved to see it in the actual scene....ah well...

And yes...I wanted Angie to mention her height in some way😆😆.....

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