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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

Lovely update, liked the fact that the bulk of it was dedicated towards Atul's characterization and interaction with other people, be it with the successful surgery assistance, or the one-on-one with Mili. Many of the situations truly manage to show how great of a guy he is, defining his character, which I find absoloutely endearing.

Curious to find out what's in Keerti's glass-ball. This part has made me kind of hope that the story centers on Atul, even moreso than the AA1-romance, and his relationships with those around him.

Seems like you've decided to complete that once-upon-a-time's unfinished AA1 elevator promo. Looking forward.

🤗 🤗 🤗



Veeru mere dost! Special CB bear hug for you!🤗🤗🤗

Glad you enjoyed the update yaar! Yep, the bulk of it was dedicated to Atul and his interactions with various ppl...not really any romance this time😆...kind of a 'building things up' kinda chapter...and you're curious about what's in Keerti's glass ball?? So am I...would really like to look into her character more in the future...let's see where this goes...

And yes, I always had the intention of completing/putting in my own version of the Elevator scene b/w AA1...it was too much of an injustice the way it was portrayed in the show....So I'm going to see what I can manage to come up with😉

Take care yaar...and in case I don't see you again before I leave...have a fantastic time back home!🤗🤗Will see ya in July!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

Annnnnnuu!! 🤗
Awesome update, yaar!!
totally loved the Atul-Mili bit.. very very well written!! 👏 👏 👏
and oh, the last bit reminds me of that promo.. jo adhura hi reh gaya tha! i'm sure you'll do full justice to it! looking forward to it! 😊



Iffyyyyyyyyy meri jaan!🤗🤗🤗I've missed you sooooooooo much yaar!! This stupid internet never seems to work at night and I'm unable to come to the KK

Glad you liked the update yaar!🤗🤗....especially the Atul-Mili bit cuz that took me a while and I struggled a bit with writing it...but glad it came out ok still😳

And yes....the last bit is going to be the SNT version of the infamous Elevator scene...it had too much potential for me to let this chance slide by😳😆😆...Will try to do justice to it yaar!😳

Thank you for the lovely comments! Muahhh!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!(calling out like Riddz 😆 ok ok enough of the torture)missed u soooooo much yaara!! 🤗 🤗

Awesome update as usual..loved Milli,Tubby,Atul-part..it was incredible.my favourite for sure.Atul's emotions in OT were just correctly described.
im glad ur treating us wid the elevator part..still remember how we were soo upset abt them ignoring this plot in the show..Thnx yaar for bringing this up!time to call the creatives 😆 😆
waiting for the next part n where r u these days??it's been ages yaar! 😊
Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu 🤗 🤗 another excellent update. REally liked the fact that anjie inspired atul to do well in OT. Loved the Atul-Mili scene. Oh it so reminded me of armaan-minnie!!! Atul is such a darling, why can't the creatives copy something from your FF. Also, that elevator scene is something i am looking forward too.
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Posted: 17 years ago

ANU!
🤗 🤗 🤗

I know I haven't commented here in ages! But life's been busy...

Anways, I absolutely LOVED IT!!!!! 👏
Every single moment was so touching, from the OT scenes to Atul trying to communicate with Mili 😭
Atul-Angie's bond is just getting deeper. That sudden slip of the tongue on Atul's part made me think of all the things Shashank must have felt after a certain incident...Anjali slipped on that mask of hers, just like her mother spurned Shashank. I'm making such weird connections nowadays... But they all seem to fit perfectly. 😕 But thinking of that made me feel even more devastated for both Atul and Anjali, because I could understand how each of them felt.

Well, sorry about the brevity of this reply! You know that I'm a HUGE fan of your writing, though! 😉 And I'll be waiting eagerly for Chapter 16 when you get back from your vacation! 😃 Have a great time, Anu jaan!!! Love ya! 😳

Oh yes! I can't believe I nearly forgot to mention this! 😕 Maybe I won't be able to wait so patiently, after all! That cliffhanger in the lift had me on the edge of my seat... You really know how to torture us...Upar se itni kamaal ki chapters, aur ab yeh lift-waali scene! 😆 Not fair, yaar!

Edited by SRK-Kads4ever - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!(calling out like Riddz 😆 ok ok enough of the torture)missed u soooooo much yaara!! 🤗 🤗

Awesome update as usual..loved Milli,Tubby,Atul-part..it was incredible.my favourite for sure.Atul's emotions in OT were just correctly described.
im glad ur treating us wid the elevator part..still remember how we were soo upset abt them ignoring this plot in the show..Thnx yaar for bringing this up!time to call the creatives 😆 😆
waiting for the next part n where r u these days??it's been ages yaar! 😊
Continue soon.



Sareenaaaaaa🤗🤗I've missed you soooooooo much too yaar!! I'm at home these days yaar, and the internet here is really iffy (no reference to our iffy ofcourse😉😆)

So glad you liked the update yaar! Yep! Elevator scene coming up as soon as I'm back from vacation...let's see how it turns out😆😆....You take care yaar!🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hdalal

Anu 🤗 🤗 another excellent update. REally liked the fact that anjie inspired atul to do well in OT. Loved the Atul-Mili scene. Oh it so reminded me of armaan-minnie!!! Atul is such a darling, why can't the creatives copy something from your FF. Also, that elevator scene is something i am looking forward too.



Heya Hema!🤗🤗Thanks you so much yaar! Glad you enjoyed the Atul-Mili interaction....yep, the Armaan-Minnie days really were fabulous, weren't they?
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anu Di! you're vacation is over! Start writing man! Don't make me wait!!!! Plz Di!


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

ANU!
🤗 🤗 🤗

I know I haven't commented here in ages! But life's been busy...

Anways, I absolutely LOVED IT!!!!! 👏
Every single moment was so touching, from the OT scenes to Atul trying to communicate with Mili 😭
Atul-Angie's bond is just getting deeper. That sudden slip of the tongue on Atul's part made me think of all the things Shashank must have felt after a certain incident...Anjali slipped on that mask of hers, just like her mother spurned Shashank. I'm making such weird connections nowadays... But they all seem to fit perfectly. 😕 But thinking of that made me feel even more devastated for both Atul and Anjali, because I could understand how each of them felt.

Well, sorry about the brevity of this reply! You know that I'm a HUGE fan of your writing, though! 😉 And I'll be waiting eagerly for Chapter 16 when you get back from your vacation! 😃 Have a great time, Anu jaan!!! Love ya! 😳

Oh yes! I can't believe I nearly forgot to mention this! 😕 Maybe I won't be able to wait so patiently, after all! That cliffhanger in the lift had me on the edge of my seat... You really know how to torture us...Upar se itni kamaal ki chapters, aur ab yeh lift-waali scene! 😆 Not fair, yaar!



Thank you so much for the always sweet comments, Borna!🤗🤗🤗Vacation was great and I'll see if I can get started on the next chapter...especially since the internet keeps acting up at weird times for me😕😕....Dekhte hain ab lift waali scene ka kya banta hai😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Anu Di! you're vacation is over! Start writing man! Don't make me wait!!!! Plz Di!


komzie



LOL Komal🤗🤗I'll try to get started as soon as I can! I'm just amazed that you still found this FF after it got moved😆😆

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