'Socha na tha' Updated: Chapter 23: Pg.78 - Page 39

Originally posted by: ftm_ca

[quote]"Ohhh…alright. So…uhh…you didn't..uhh…see anything?"

Do you mean your Pehla Nasha special performance, Dr. Atul? [/quote]

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You are honestly on a roll! Churning out chapters this fast, and with such flow?! 👏 👏 👏 What's the motivation, boss? 😉 😆 Thank you so much, Fatty!🤗🤗🤗Motivation??😆😆...Nothing in particular...I feel this weird urge to write when I hear certain songs😕😆

Smriti got some screen-time! 🥳 (Ok, make that written-time 😆 😆) LOVED it! 😍 Your ability to explore emotions other than that of romantic love is just wonderful, be it friendship between Atul/Saps, or parent/child love between Shanks-Smriti-Angie! Definately one of the things that gives the story an edge.Thanks, yaar! I was missing Smriti too, and thought of incorporating her a bit into the story😳

TUBBY the elephant? 🤣 😡 😎 Yeh kya mamla hai, bhidu? 😆 😆 ROFL!! Didn't you just love it??😈😆😆...Mamla kucch khaas nahin hai, bidu😆...it was the first name that popped into my head when I thought of naming the elephant😕😆😆

I've got a hunch there's a major track coming up with Atul-Mili (Random: I imagined Atul in Orange/Green while picturing this in my head, in the warm fuzzy, stickered childrens ward of Sanjeevani, and let me say: If it was to be picturized....Cute! 😍 😍 😍 It SO would be!😍) Lets see what you've got cooking in your head! 😉 😆 😆 ....Wait and watch!😉😆😆

Lovely as always, you and your writing 🤗 🤗 🤗 Thank you soooooooo much once again, yaar!🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

ANU!!!!!

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I'm totally speechless!!! Really, I don't know what to say. 😳

👏 That's really not enough to compensate for my lack of words, yaar. Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! Oh, I love you, I love Anjali, I love Shashank, and last but certanly not least, I love Smriti!

I'm in shock, seriously! 😕 😕 I was just starting to write the beginning of my SS fanfic, so I was watching some of my favorite SS moments as well. And then I come here, and I see a new chapter! 😃 What timing, jaan! Thank you SO much!

Oh, god...Anjali's deep love for Smriti touched my heart, how she remembered their wedding anniversary, and wondered if Shashank remembered as well...
And Shashank's undying love for Smriti even after all these years...His helplessness in not being able to understand Anjali, his grief at Smriti's sudden death... 😭 😭 Poor, poor Shashank!

OMG, I loved Atul's "Pehla Nasha" performance! 👏 Wah! And his interaction with Mili was oh-so-adorable! Yay, Tubby the elephant! Too cute! 😆

Okay, I've wasted precious time writing and not doing my homework... 😕 So I'll have to cut this reply short. If I have time, I'll comment more later! Until then, back to work.

Love you, jaan!

p.s.- How did Smriti die in your fanfic? And how old were Anjali and the n-o at that time? Can you PM me about that?
Also...I'm having title trouble for my story...Any suggestions? (That could be PMed too...)

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Meri pyaari pyaari Di!!!! It was awsome as usual!!! Minnie ki jaggah Milli? Cho chweet!!!! Atul is such a sweetheart!!!!

You know Anu Di, the part where Atul was singing 'Udta hi phiroon main hawaaon mein kahin' before I even read the line that said he did a fake waltz thing, I totally was seeing him waltzing around the locker room. Then I read that line and was like..... HEY BHAGGU!!! I was just thinking that!

The way you showed us Anjali's childhood memories..... SUPERB! That was classic Di. Beautifully written! Her dad totally loves her, he just doesn't know how to show it.

Atul's relationship with Milli was cute! He wanted to be friends with Tubby! 😳 So sweet! I loved the way he interacted with her. I thought only Armaan was good at that. Maybe because they never show Atul interacting with kids.

But honestly Anu Di... it was very beautifully written. So smooth and flowing! Lol. Aap bhi soch rahi hongi ki main aaj hyper bachhi ki tarhaan jump around nahi kar rahi. Woh kya hai naa, maine socha ki aap toh hamesha hi itna khoobsurat parts hi likhne waali ho, toh energy bachaa ke rakhni chahiye. Nahi? Aapko toh pata hi hai ki main aapki sabse badi fan hoon!!! Har baar prove karne ki kya zaroorat. I love your fic. period! lol!!!! It was beautiful! 👏


Love you Anu Di!!! Continue soon!!!!!


Komzie

Originally posted by: nureat01

Awww, thank you soooooooo much, Borna!🤗🤗🤗So glad to know you liked it this much!😳...I knew you would enjoy the portion about Smriti...our conversation the other day stayed with me and I wanted to explore their history a bit as well😳...and glad you enjoyed the "Pehla Nasha" performance as well😆😆

Didn't really figure out the details about Smriti's death in my mind yet😳...was going to maybe touch on it later on in the story....and Angie was about 10 when she died I think...and Ridz was 5 I guess😕...I'm continuing the blooper from the show that they are both interns at the same time despite being five years apart😆😆

Suggestions for the title of the SS story?? Hmmm...well, I picked my own title from one of my favorite songs😆😆....why don't you try something similar?😉

Awwww, you're so sweet, Anu! 😳 I love this story even more now, if that's possible! You manage to outdo yourself with each new chapter! BRAVO!

Well, if you do figure out the details, PLEASE tell me!

I might consider using the details in my own story if it goes that far...Or maybe in another FF, if I ever get to it! 😆 I'm having so much fun writing out the Shanks-Smriti interactions that I don't want her to die!! Maybe I'll keep her alive. I hate the Human Sleeping Pill anyways...🤢

Ooooh, they're 5 years apart in the show? 😕 I had no idea! I thought they were just one year apart! Haha, that explains a lot! So Anjali's 5 years older than Ridz, and Atul's 2 years older than Anjali...Hmm. That'll take some re-figuring...😊 And apparently it's been 15 years since Smriti passed away according to the show. So according to the correct calculations, Angie's 25/almost 26, Atul's 27, and Ridz is 21. Cool. Okay.

I've been trying, yaar! I spent the whole day trying to figure out a suitable title that's not ginormously long! 😆 😆 I wanted it to link to SS's life story, as well...Which imposed many more problems on me! I only came up with one, and that was based on a film song used in the show that I'm in love with now! It even has two versions, so it's perfect! 😆 Maybe I'll post up the title soon...😉

Edit: I forgot to say: I love that AA1 pic in your sig box! 😆 😆 One of my favorite moments!