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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 18

THANK YOU FRIENDS FOR ALL THOSE NICE COMMENTS..... 😊

{{RECAP:They all play antakshari...Sania proposes Laksh and she tries to hug him..Kt sees it...Sania lies that Laksh tried to kiss her...Kt slaps her... }}

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Sneha and Kt were walking back to others where the fire was lit...

S:Kt, why didn't you hear what Laksh wanted to say..?
K:I don't know Sneha...(angrily)I am really angry at that Sania...How dare she??
S: I know...But why are you behaving like this to Laksh..Usse kitna bura laga hoga..
K:(looks at Sneha)Haan..Woh to hai..Kya main jaake usse baat karoo...
S:Haan Kt...

But when Kt turned she saw Laksh coming, a little behind them..He was looking at her with a sad face...
Kt felt really bad..But she didn't know what to say to him...She went to him...

K:I am sorry Laksh...But you know..
L:(keeps his finger on her mouth)Shhhh...There is no need to tell sorry....Tumhari koi galti nahin thi..
K:(feels relieved)(looks down)I never liked that Sania...And I had told you before itself that her intentions are not right..
L:(smiles)Haan...Woh toh hai...(naughtily)But what can I do if all the girls are after me...?
K:(surprised)Kyaa....??You....(and starts beating him)Aur kitne hai tumhare girl friends....?Bataao...bataao...
L:Arre baap re....Ouch...Ouch....Arre Sneha dekh kya rahi hai...Mujhe bachao naa is ladki se..
S:Tumhe bachna hai to bhaago yahaan se...Kt bahut gusse main hai....Main nahin bacha sakti...(laughs)

Laksh ran away from Kt...

Kt:(her hand still raised)Tum....(laughs)Paagal ladka..!!
S:Ab chale..?

Kt and Sneha came back and sat in their place...Sania was glaring angrily at Kt...Kt didn't look at her...Laksh was sitting near Manthan...

At 8 pm they all stopped playing..It was time for having the dinner...Since Laksh's group had prepared the dinner,It was their duty to serve the food...So Laksh,Kt and Manthan and the other group members went to the kitchen and started serving food...

By 9 pm everyone had their dinner and were sitting here and there in the down floor of the house...Laksh,Kt,Manthan,Sneha,Prachi and Neev were sitting in the sitting room were there was no one else....The remaining students were sitting in some or other rooms and many were still outside near the camp fire...

N:Today we all really had great fun...Hai na..?
M:Haan..Woh toh hai....Itne dinon se jo baat mann mein tha woh baat Sneha se kehne se main bahut acha feel kar raha hoon....Kyun Sneha..?
S:(smiles slightly)Kya Manthan...Tum bhi na..
K:Sneha tum sharma kyun rahi ho?
L:Achi baat hai Sneha..Tum Kt ki tarah har baat pe Manthan ko maarti toh nahin hai na..
K:(irritatedly)Laksh...Tumhe toh main..(raises her hand to beat him)
L:(moving away from Kt)Ab shuroo mat karo...Prachi,can I come and sit near you..?Yeh ladki mujhe bahut maarti hai..(and gets up)
K:Nahin Laksh..I am sorry..(tears began to fill her eyes)
L:(didn't notiice)No way..I am going....
K:Laksh..Please..(voice shivers)
L:(turns back)Arre Kt..Main toh sirf mazaak kar raha tha..(comes to her and puts his hands around her)
K:(starts crying)Mera mood waise bhi kharaab hai aaj..Aur upar se tum is tarah ki baatein kar rahe ho...Jaao..Mujhse baat mat karo..(she pushes him, gets up and leaves the room)
L:(looking at all)Maine kya kiya?
N:Ab tumhe hi usse manaana hoga..Jaao..
P:(angrily)Haan Laksh..Jaao..

Laksh came out to the hall and searched for Kt...But she was not there..There was no one in the hall..He went and peeped in the other rooms,but she was not there also..Then he decided to try in the kitchen..He looked in there and there was no one there..He turned back, and then he heard someone weeping from the outside the backdoor of the kitchen..He went to the backdoor and he saw Kt standing near the tank with her back turned to the door..She was weeping badly....Laksh felt really bad..He didn't know what to do..

Laksh went and hugged Kt from back....He put his hands around her waist and kept his head on her shoulder..

L:Kt...I am sorry...Mujhe maaf karo..pleaaase....
K:(trying to take off his hands)Chodo mujhe...Mujhe tumse baat nahin karni....
L:(grips her more)Nahin chodoonga...Pehle tum bataao ki tumne mujhe maaf ki...
K:Kyun maaf karoo...?You always keep teasing me...Issi liye to main tumhe maarti hoon..Ab main tumhe aur nahin maaroongi...Aur tumse baat bhi nahin karoongi...Ab jaao yahaan se....
L:(leaving her)Acha toh tum mujhse baat nahin karegi..?Abhi tak tum kya kar rahi thi...?Or was I just imagining you talking to me..?(stands with an expression of imagining about something)
K:(turns and sees him standing like that)You...(angrily starts beating him)Badmaash...
L:(stands like that itself)And I am now imagining that you are beating me...(looks at her)Or are you really beating me?
K:(laughs)Tum na..Ab tum jaao yahaan se..Nahin toh main..(looks around and finds a broom,she takes it and runs after him)
L:Arre baap re...(runs)
K:(laughs)Laksh idhar aao..Main nahin maaroongi..(puts down the broom)

Laksh stopped running and turned back..He saw Kt standing there and she was smiling..Laksh came to her and looked into her eyes(YOU KNOW HIS EYES ARE SO ROMANTIC 😳 😳 😳 ).She also looked back into his eyes with lot of love..Tears filled her eyes..

K:Laksh tum mujhe kabhi chodke toh nahin jaaoge naa..?

He took her hands with both his hands,raised them to his lips and kissed them..Then he kissed her forehead..And then he hugged her...

L:Main hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga Kt..And I will never leave you...

K:(smiling)I love you Laksh….

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END OF PART 18......

HOW WAS THIS PART??......HOPE YOU LIKED IT........PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.....THEY ARE REALLY ENCOURAGING….

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Edited by hp_2006 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved lakshya kt's scenes!!!!!!!!!!😳

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey naina fab part as always i loveeeee reading ur FF i am addicted to it so love the LKT scenes update soooon

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i loved that lkt scene it was so cute 😳
please continue soon 😊

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PART 19

{{RECAP: K:Laksh tum mujhe kabhi chodke toh nahin jaaoge naa..?

He took her hands with both his hands,raised them to his lips and kissed them..Then he kissed her forehead..And then he hugged her...

L:Main hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga Kt..And I will never leave you...
K:(smiling)I love you Laksh….
}}

Sania and one of her friends had come to the kitchen to take some water in their bottles for them to drink in the night...Sania heard this conversation between Laksh and Kt and she saw them hugging each other..

Both of them didn't make any sound and they came to the hall....

Sa:(to her friend)Ohh!!So these people are in love.....Now I understood why that Kt was so furious when I hugged Laksh....Bechara mera Laksh...!!Uss Kt ne mere Laksh ko apni jaal mein phassaakar mujhse alag ki hai...
Fr :Remember Sania..She slapped you...!!You should never forget that..
S:Forget...??I will never forget...I will teach her a lesson...Sania se takkar lene ki keemat chukaani hogi usse...(smiles with an evil look)

And both of them go away...

Meanwhile at the backyard :

Laksh and Kt come to their senses and both of them pulled out of their hug...

L:Kt, raat bahut ho chuki hai...Lets go and sleep..
K:Haan...Chalo..

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It was morning....The sun's rays were playing on Kt's face...The time was 6 am....Kt got up, brushed and took her bath.Then she went to Sneha and Prachi both of whom were still sleeping...She shook both of them and woke them up..They also brushed and took their bath...

Now the time was 7 am..It was the time for starting their works...All the students assembled in the hall downstairs...Kalpana M'am came to them...

K:Good morning students....Today we can clean the whole village...You would have noticed all the waste materials accumulated here and there....All the groups have been allotted different areas for cleaning..All you have to do is to clean the surroundings, collect all the waste materials and dispose them properly...I will give you the necessary instructions after I divide the works for each group...
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They had started their work...Neev's group had got the cooking job for lunch that day...
Laksh's group had got the job to clean the pond which was polluted with waste plastic bags and weeds and moss..So Laksh,Manthan,Kt and the other group members were standing on the steps to the pond...

L:Who all know swimming..?

All the boys and one girl (Jyothi) raised their hands..

L:Jyothi,there is no need for you to enter into the pond....We boys will collect the wastes from the pond and give it to you girls..You can go and dispose them properly...

Then Laksh,Manthan and the other 3 boys removed their shirts and watches and kept them on the steps with their mobiles..They jumped into the water...

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After some time Kt was walking to the pond after disposing the wastes...When she reached there, she saw only Laksh swimming in the pond..The pond was mostly cleaned by now..Laksh was collecting the final round of wastes..

K:Where are the others Laksh..?
L:They will come now..They have gone to wash themselves in the river...
K:If you have finished you also come up Laksh..
L:Yeah..I am coming...

Laksh swam back to the steps with the remaining wastes..His body was all wet and covered in moss. Now the pond was really clean…

L:Kt,you look after our mobiles,watches and all..I will dispose these wastes and come..

Laksh left from the pond and Kt was sitting alone in the pond's edge with her feet in the water..She was looking in the water which was rippling around her feet..It was really cold..

Sania was walking along the pond and she saw Kt sitting there alone..She came to her..

Sa:Hello Miss.Kt…(with a rude look)
K:(equally rudely)Hello…
Sa:(sits near her)Waise tumhe badi khushi ho rahi hogi na..?
K:Woh kyun?
Sa:(looks to the water)Kyunki Laksh tumhe pasand karta hai aur..
K: (irritatedly)Dekho Sania..Tumhe kya chahiye..?Tumhe koyi kaam nahin hai kya?
Sa:Mujhe kya chahiye?? Mujhe Laksh chahiye..!! Kya tum de sakti ho??? Tum ne usse apni jaal mein phassaakar mujhse alag ki hai...
K:(angrily gets up)Sania mind your words…!!
Sa:(gets up and faces Kt)Nahin toh…??Tum kya karlogi Kt?(pushes Kt on her shoulders)Mujhe maarogi..?haan..?(again pushes on her her shoulders)
K:(moves backwards showing her index finger)Sania…

But suddenly Kt's foot hit on a stone and when Sania again pushed her, Kt slipped and fell right into the deep pond…Kt began to drown as she didn't know how to swim..She was struggling hard to remain on the surface of water…Water entered through her nose and mouth….She was struggling to breathe…..

K:Sania…Please mujhe bachaao….(struggles to breathe)…Bachaao..
Sa:(shocked)Oh my God..!!I don't know even to swim…I can't rescue her….If someone sees me here they will doubt me…Oh no!!I will have to go from here…

But when Sania turned to leave she saw Laksh…..!!

L: Kt…Oh no!!
K:LAKSH…(goes down the water and again comes up)…Lak…sh…(again her head goes down)

Sania was rooted to spot and shocked beyond limits..Laksh looked at her with anger and contempt…..Then without wasting time he jumped into the water..He caught Kt's long hair pulled her up and swam back to the steps…Then he laid her on the step and pressed her stomach. Water came gurgling out of her mouth and nose..….

L:Kt…Kt…(shakes her)

But Kt was still unconscious and cold…. Laksh began to rub her feet and hands with his hands for heat…Sania felt really bad and she bent down and was about to touch Kt..

L:(stops Sania)Tum Kt ko choona bhi mat Sania..Why you didn't try to help her..?
Sa:(tears filling her eyes)I am sorry Laksh…But I don't know to swim…
L:But you could have called anyone…Instead,you were going to leave!!…I heard you saying so…Tumhe apni friend kehte huye mujhe sharam aata hai…Agar Kt ko kuch ho gayi toh main tumhe kabhi maaf nahin karoonga…Waise tum yahan kar kya rahi thi..?(then doubtfully) Kahin tumne hi toh Kt ko...?

Suddenly Kt coughed and opened her eyes…

L:Kt…
K:(coughs)Laksh…(and she sits up)

L:(hugging her tightly)Oh Kt….Thank god!!Tum teek toh ho…Kaise ho gaya yeh sab..?Kya is Sania ne....?
K:(voice shivering)Woh… mere pair slip hogayi thi…bas..(and cries)
L:(pats on her back)Don't cry Kt..Its alright..Now you are safe…Come on lets move to the house…

Laksh helped Kt to get up…But Kt couldn't move because her leg had sprained because of the slipping…Laksh scooped her up in his powerful arms and he walked in the direction of the house carrying her...Kt leaned her head on his chest and closed her eyes..Manthan and the other boys who were coming back after washing themselves in the river came to them.

M: Laksh, kya hua Kt ko?Kya woh behosh hain?
L:Nahin..But she fell in the pond and I rescued her...Pata nahin kya hota agar main wahan par time par nahin pahunchtha..Oh my god !!Main soch bhi nahin sakta hoon..Agar Kt ko kuch...(shudders at the thought..)
M:(pats his shoulder)Thank god Kt teek toh hai..Tum Kt ko leke ghar chalo...I will go and inform Kalpana M'am..

Manthan and the others went away…Laksh reached the hall in the house and made Kt sit on the steps of the staircase..Kt was shivering badly because of falling in the cold water…Laksh went into his bedroom and took his blanket..He came to Kt and wrapped her with that blanket…Then he sat beside her..

L:Kt,tumhe aur kya chahiye..?
K:Tum bas mere paas baitho…

Laksh moved closer to her and she leaned on to his shoulders…….


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END OF PART 19......

THANK YOU FRIENDS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS……😊
HOW WAS THIS PART??......HOPE YOU LIKED IT........PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.....THEY ARE REALLY ENCOURAGING….😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
awww...!! such an AMAZING part luved it!!! 👏 HATE THT SANIAA!!!!! 😡 ...but LOVE LAKSH!!! 👏
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awwwww laksh is like the prefect boyfriend 😳
i hate sanya 🤢
please continue soon 😊 😊 😊

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o wow!!!!thnk u sooo much for the update!!!!!! i luvvved it!!!!!omg it was just soo awesome!!so fabulous!!!!wonderful job man!
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PART 20

{{RECAP:Kt falls in a pond because of Sania..Laksh rescues her}}

Manthan,Kalpana M'am,Sneha,Prachi,Neev and some other students came to see Kt..

Ka:Kya hua Laksh..?How did she fall in the pond..?Where were you all at that time..?
L:Woh M'am…I had went to dispose the wastes and I asked her to wait for me till I come..She slipped and fell into the water..
Ka:Kt,How are you feeling now..?
K:(slowly)I am alright now M'am..
Ka:Sneha,Prachi..Both of you help her to move to the bedroom upstairs..
L:Her leg is sprained M'am..Shall I carry her to the bedroom?
Ka:Hmm..Ok Laksh..Sneha and Prachi you take care of her..No need to work today..I will give you a pain balm to apply on her leg..It is very good for sprains…
S & P:Ok M'am..

Laksh carried Kt upstairs and laid her on her mattress..Then he laid the blanket on her..Sneha and Prachi also came with them to the room..

L:Get well soon Kt..Take care..

Kt smiled and Laksh went away..Sneha began to apply the balm on her leg..

S:Kt..Tum aaram karo..
P:Haan… At lunch time we will bring lunch for you..Till then you can sleep..
K:Ok(closes her eyes)
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After sometime Kt woke up…At first she couldn't believe her eyes..Sania was sitting in front of her and was looking at Kt with a sad expression on her face..

K:Sania..Tum?
Sa:(comes close to her. There were tears in her eyes) Please forgive me Kt…I didn't intend to kill you…And thank you for not telling Laksh or anyone that it was because of me that you fell in the pond…Sorry Kt….I know that you and Laksh are in love and I will never try to come in between you and Laksh..I had come to say this much..(gets up)Take care Kt…(turns to leave)
K:Sania..
Sa:(turns)Kya?
K: (holds her hand out)Friends??
Sa:(smiles happily and takes Kt's hand)Friends….!!
Sneha and Prachi came in with the lunch and they saw Kt and Sneha happily shaking their hands with each other…

S:Sania..Tum..?
K:Arre Sneha..Tum log lunch lene gaye the..?Sania,then you go and have your lunch..
Sa:(leaves Kt's hand)Ok..Take care Kt..(leaves from there)
P:What was all that Kt?

Kt told them everything which happened at the pond's edge till now..

S:Oh..How did she find out about you and Laksh..?
K:I don't know..But she knows…
P:How are you feeling now Kt?
K:I don't know..But I am feeling really cold…and a bit tired..But my leg is alright..
S:(feels her forehead)Kt,your head is really hot..I think you are having fever..I will go and tell Kalpana M'am..(she leaves)

After sometime Sneha came with Kalpana M'am..

Ka:(feeling her forehead)Kt, you are not well..Its better for you to go back to your hostel..Sneha, you can stay with her..Take her to the hospital if her condition gets worse..Now itself you pack both of your luggages..I will tell Laksh to come with you till the hostel in our college bus..
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Laksh,Kt and Sneha were sitting in the bus..Kt was sitting with Laksh..She was sleeping peacefully resting her head on his shoulder..Laksh had put his hand around her..Sneha was sitting in another seat..

L:(sadly)Sneha..Take care of Kt..
S:Sure Laksh..She will get well soon..Don't worry..
L:I will have to go back to the camp after I leave both of you at the hostel..I will miss her(looks at Kt)
S:(feels sad for Laksh)The days will move fast Laksh..You will all be back on Saturday …
L:Yeah..I guess..

After sometime they reached the college girls hostel..

L:Kt..
K:(eyes closed)Haan..?
L:Utho..We reached the hostel..
K:(opens her eyes)Oh!!

Sneha,Laksh and Kt got down..
L:Kt..Take care..Dawaai time par lena..(touches her cheek)
K:(smiles)Ok Laksh..
L:Sneha..Take care of her…I will call you from there Kt..Bye both of you….(gets into the bus)

The bus left and Laksh was waving his hand at them through the window..Sneha and Kt also waved back..Tears filled Kt's eyes when the bus went out of sight..Sneha noticed this..

S:He will be back soon Kt..
K:Hmmm..(wipes her tears)

Both of them went inside…

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That week passed away easily and Saturday came soon…Kt was alright by now…Laksh called her atleast 10 times per day to ask about her health…Both of them couldn't wait to see each other…Kt woke up early that morning..She took her mobile and dialed Laksh's number..

Laksh was packing his luggage when he saw his mobile ringing..Excitedly he picked the mobile and he saw Kt calling..He answered the call..

L:Hello Kt….How are you sweetheart..?
K:I am fine Laksh…Tum jaldi aajaao…
L:We will reach there soon Kt..Probably by 9:30 am..
K:Ok….I will wait for you at the college..Bye….
L:(smiles)Bye Kt…Ummuah..
K:(shyly)Ummuah..(giggles and hangs the call)

The time was 9:30 am….Kt and Sneha were waiting anxiously in the college at the place where the buses would stop..After some minutes the two buses came and stopped in front of them..Laksh,Manthan,Neev and Prachi came to them….

S:Hii everybody….
M:Hiii Sneha…Missed you very much(puts his hand around her)…Kt how are now?
K:(smiles)I am fine now..

Everyone was talking excitedly since they saw after one long week…They had to tell each other about so many things….

L:We will be back after sometime..Aao Kt..
K:Kya baat hai Laksh..?
L:Aao toh sahi..

Laksh led Kt to a corner where nobody could notice them..

K:(surprised)Yeh sab kya hai Laksh?
L:(closes her mouth with his hand)Shhhhh…..(and he hugs her tightly)Kitne din hogaye tumhe dekh ke Kt….Ohh!!I missed you Kt…I really missed you…Main tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahin reh sakta…
K:Main bhi Laksh…(tears fill her eyes)

He looked into his teary eyes..Laksh began to kissed away the tears on her cheeks slowly….. He kissed her forehead and hugged her again…..

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END OF PART 20......

THANK YOU FRIENDS FOR YOUR NICE COMMENTS…….
😊 😳 HOW WAS THIS PART??......HOPE YOU LIKED IT........PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.....

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so sweet part great to see kt and sanya friends😳
hope she is not acting😭😳
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛

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