TZMSMR - AK Part 4 - 22 Dec

Heya Guyz !!!

Long time i start my own Fan - Fic. I thank all my freinds and all the writers of Angad - Kripa Ficks who have inspired me. It includes many and I would like to mention some of them, though I might not have commented. Bcoz I am silent reader to many Fanfics.

Sangeeta Di aka bheegi, Viju Di aka vallanki, Pallavi Di aka Pallavi25, Mitu, Andekhi aka Sonali06, Neha aka Neha9, Sukhi aka Titli aka Mimi Rani, Anam aka Anam Ali, Amneet aka amneet_89, Shazmin aka memze, Kiran aka Kiran<3 (sorry I dnt remeber her ID - Her FF's are Dear Diary and Pyaar My Foot), Muniza aka munizaa, Numera, Rach aka Gaurav's Love, crazy_craze, Madiha aka Dark Love, Munnibaba2007, Faiza aka proud_2_br_mysel, Chocolate_luver, berkeleygirl818, Rejected, Sujalthegr8, mitali_s, cup_of_tae, cool_SK, arwa72, apra, *Shifali*, sujalangad_rock, tsamhita, griffinmonster, Shazia_haya, ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~ , Kaj!, RandomSquared and etc, etc.

Bahut bak bak karliya maine - lets go to the story. This story is also Angad - Kripa, but there might be other important characters.

So without further ado, let me start it

TERI ZINDAGI MEIN SIRF MUJHE RAKHNA

( I will be writing the short form of the title)

Ek Waqt Tha Jab,
Muskaraya Bhi Karte They Hum
Zindagi Ne Khela Aisa Khel
Bas Gaaye Sirf yaadon Mein Tum

They Tum Ek Diya
Ab Ho Gaya Andhera
Raah Nahi Manazil Nahi
Zindagi Hi Naa Rahi

A Girl is shown sitting in her room, wearing a white saree rocking on the chair near the window. Holding a photo torn in two parts close to her chest. We see her golden brown hair in a choti. Her Hazel eyes are seen, they are red and full of tears. Flowing over her beautiful face. Her juicy pink links are been chewed and bited by her teeth. She is in a very bad condition. She looks weak and pale. The photo she is holding is shown but the face is cut. Only the body is shown. (hope u understaand what I mean) It of a person in a wedding sherwani and the second peice has a girl who is in a bridal dress. She looks at the photo and says "Najaane Mujhse Aisi Galthi ya Galthi huii. Tum mujhe kyun aise chood kar chale gaye. Kam se kam apni nishaani to chood jaate. Uss maasum Ki kya galthi thi?? Kyun, Kyun??? Hey Bhagwaan, mujhe par itna zulm kyun kiya???" Again she starts crying. We see a person standing on the door and seeing the scene. Its a male person. Who is the girl??? Who was her husband?? Is he dead?? What happened?? Who is this person on the door??? Well-wisher?? 😕😕😕

Rest in Next Part.

Hope u like it. I have the part with me. I just have to post it. Waitng for ur replies. Comment. U guyz must be thinking that I never comment and I am asking uto comment. I will surely try to comment. Promise. Now comment sooooooooon.😳

P.S. tell me if the title is appropriate. Or should i change it to "MERE JEEWAN SAATHI"?????

Hugs And Kisses

~Saara~

amazing concept!!
would love to read the ff!
please continue 😃

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

amazing concept!!
would love to read the ff!
please continue 😃

Thanks Jiya. Will surely cont. But after i get some more comments.

hey sara i'm glad u've started a ff
and the intro is amazing
cont soon


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~Sana~

nice intro.waitin for u to start

Wow! good shayari 👏

good concept as well..continue...

title is fine no need to change it.

golden brown hair? is she blonde? eager to know what would have happneed. 😳

we can guess he was dead (hope, not ran away) and she is crying for him..accident? how did she lose her baby too then?

continue soon, if you had writen it already

Sounds Really Interesting! Do Cont Soon! 😊 x

Great start! Sounds interesting. I actually think "Mere Jeevan Saathi" would be a better title because this one is a little long. But whichever you prefer is fine.

Great intro and story. Can't wait for you to continue .

Hey Sara, Great intro, plz continue soon!
Is that Kripa? Is she widowed? Awww so sad, and she lost her child too? 😭 😭
Whos the guy helping her? Nishant? Prithvi?

I think Mere Jeevan Saathi would be a better title....😃

pallavi