TZMSMR - AK Part 4 - 22 Dec - Page 2

PART II

This is just a part of intro. Next part will include Kripa and most rpobably our dashing hero.

Yes Guyz, U r right. The lady is definately Kripa. She is a widow. She lost her husband. (How and when will be revealed later). She is in Sharma residence. And yah, the person standing at the door way was Sharma, Nishant Sharma. The oldest son of Mr. Suryaban Sharma. He is married to Kanan Khanna who is now mrs. Kanan Sharma. He is really sad seeing his ladli behna Kripa. Lost from the world, like a dead soul. Away from everything, just in the thoughts of her hubby. Nishant doesnt know what to do. All his younger sistas are happily married. But his ladli was the one suffering. The other sistas were very stubborn, arrogant and all were brats, except Kripa. she was the sweetest and innocent of all. She can win anyone's heart. Her smile is the most beautiful smile ever. And she can make anyone and everyone smile. But 2day she herself forgot how to smile. Nishant has many sisters. There is a stroy behind that also. Nishant has 6 sisters Kumkum, Kashish, Kripa, Mukti, Anam, Shazmin. And 3 brothers - Vivek, Kavya and Kunal. There are 3 more daughters to Suryaban from another wife, whom he doesnt like bcoz there not from the same blood. They are Prachi, Kasturi and Maithalli. When ever they were small and Gayathri and Surya had to go to meeting. Vivek and Nishant were left to take care of them. Nishant used to take everyone and leave them alone in the house with the servants. Vivek used to tell him but nishant bein elder by 3 hours was the boss. He never listened. These gals were always the one who never went out. They always were under-estimated. Later these gals also got maried to there Prince Charming. Till date Nishant never thinks about them. The only people who thinks of them as there sisters are Vivek, Kripa, Kumkum, Kashish and Kavya and kanan thinks of them as her nanads. Though Nishant and she had lots of fights on this matter, bcoz he loves kanan he forgot them.
Kumkum is married to Sumeet Wadhwa.
Kashish to Sujal Garewal.
Mukti with Prem Basu.
Anam to Sahil Khanna
Shazmin to Rishi Khanna.
Vivek to Sadhna Basu.
Kavya to Anjali Khanna,
Kunal to Namrata Garewal.

Prachi to Neev Kapoor.
Kasturi to Robbie Sabharwal.
Maithalli to Aditya Mehra.

Kripa to Prithvi Bose. Who has died. She was the only one who had an arranged marriage. Bcoz she didnt want to marry and the family forced her to do so. So why does Nishant not think of Prachi, Kasturi and maithalli as his sisters??? His dad's first wife was Gayathri Sharma. He fell in love with her and married her. Everything was well. He had children and his luck he had twins or triplets at a time. He was happy. But one day, a lady joined hi college who was a cheap character lady and shee started seduced Surya. He got caught in her web and then they married. This news gayathri new but the other wife Jaya did not know. She thought Surya was only her husband. Gayathri went through a gr8 shock and she was on the verge of a gr8 breakdown and would surely die. But seeing the innocent faces of her children specially her daughter she survived. And then she took a vow that she will act as a wife infornt of the children but internally she will be breaking all the ties with Surya. She would not wear a mangalsutra instead she wre a black beeds haar which she bought and kept the mangalsutr in her jewellary box. On the other hand, Jaya was pregnant. And she gave birth to triplets but while giving birth she lost her life. As she was weak. These 3 children were motherless and when gayathri came to know about it her heart melted. She knew jaya was wrong but what was these children's mistake?? She readily thought of accpeting them and Surya was gr8ful to her. Later on he realised hiss mistake and he forgived her. They got married again in the mandir and Gayathri was once again pregnant.
So the children are like this
Nishant Sharma and Vivek Sharma are twins.
Kumkum, Kripa, Kashish and Kavya are quadraplets
Mukti and Kunal are again twins

then jayas kids - Prachi, Maithalli and Kasturi - triplets

then lastly she got two daughters Anam and Shazmin as twins.

All the daughters were treated equally by the parents. But all this tragedy did not go unnoticed by the eldest sons. Vivek did not mind it though but nishant had an effect. He took it to heart. And started hating his father for it. Gayathri tried to make him understand but he never understood. He used to behave well with surya but lost the respect which a son should have for his dad. Vivek respected him ad he didnt mind that all. So there childhood was very fun - loving and these were all brats. Kripa was a good, bubbly, cheerful but she was mature. She knew what to do and when to do. She could win anyones heart. She was Gayathri's replica. Her best frends were Angad Khanna and Prithvi Bose. Amgad Khanna was a flirt from childhood and would even flirt with Gayathri and he does that till date. There was another reason for that. Prithvi Bose loved someone from the start but his mom never allowed him to get married to that gal and then they married him to Kripa. Kripa also didnt love him. Actaully she didnt love anyone. She was waiting for her Prince charming. But gradually after her marriage she fell in love with Prithvi. And then sooon a tragedy took place which left Kripa dead from inside.

How was it?? Waitng for ur comments.

Hugs And Kisses

Saara

P.S. I think soo i will be out of town 2mrow so I might not continue. I have to bring my Paternal Grandmother 😭 . I might go or only send my parents. so it depends. If I dnt go i will surely post the next part. 😃

Originally posted by: iamsmart

hey sara i'm glad u've started a ff
and the intro is amazing
cont soon

Thanks Sana.😳 I already continued.😛 Chk it and plz comment.

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice intro.waitin for u to start

Thanks a lot Deeya. 😳

Originally posted by: vallanki

Wow! good shayari

good concept as well..continue...

title is fine no need to change it.

golden brown hair? is she blonde? eager to know what would have happneed.

we can guess he was dead (hope, not ran away) and she is crying for him..accident? how did she lose her baby too then?

continue soon, if you had writen it already

Oh thanks a looooot Di.😳 😳Yah sometimes I do write shayeri. Yah she was crying for him.😭😭 Baby is mystery. Wait for it.

Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Sounds Really Interesting! Do Cont Soon! x

Thanks for ur comment puja.

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Great start! Sounds interesting. I actually think "Mere Jeevan Saathi" would be a better title because this one is a little long. But whichever you prefer is fine.

Thanks Sweety. Umm i think i will change it a bit later. Actually u know, I am very lazy😆. I will think of changing it. When the story processes, then i will think of changing it.😃

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great intro and story. Can't wait for you to continue .

Thanks for ur shweet comment dear. Ur wait is over now.😉😛

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Hey Sara, Great intro, plz continue soon!
Is that Kripa? Is she widowed? Awww so sad, and she lost her child too?
Whos the guy helping her? Nishant? Prithvi?

I think Mere Jeevan Saathi would be a better title....

pallavi

Thank u Behna. I will think of changing the title as the story progress. U know na, I m very lazy.😆 Yah di, Kripa is widowed. and that child is a mystery. Wait u wil come to know very soon.

Thanks a lot to all of u guys for commenting. They mean a lot to me. Now, I know how precious these comments are for a writor. I am sorry for not commenting in ur FFs. I will surely try my level best to do soo. Once again Thanks.

Saara

👏👏👏I liked it, very good start, I like the backstory a lot!
~ The poem at the start was really nice as well! Keep it up!

xxxxx

Great part. I feel so sad for Kripa. Continue soon 😃

AWW it was prithvi..still sad to hear about his death.

eager to know what had happened. Good story but too many names...I might forget some 😉 but keep writing

gr8 part. wonder wht happened wid kripa that she had totally changed? wow!!!! everyone had triplets and twins that's good 😆


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~Sana~

Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~

I liked it, very good start, I like the backstory a lot!
~ The poem at the start was really nice as well! Keep it up!

xxxxx

Thanks a lot Ouma. 😳Back story - I thought u guyz might feel it is baqwaas. i am really suprised.😲

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part. I feel so sad for Kripa. Continue soon

Thanks Sweeto for the sweet comment. Yah me too. Bechari. But Angad haina to make her happy. 😉

Originally posted by: vallanki

AWW it was prithvi..still sad to hear about his death.

eager to know what had happened. Good story but too many names...I might forget some but keep writing

Thanksshh for tomeenting.😳😆Yes it was the sweet Prithvi.😉 If he was alive - angad kaha se fit hota???😉 Names haan woh to zyaada important characters nahi. But mein mention karungi ki kaun kiska beta beti hain before i write something about them. Hope that solves ur problem?? 😃

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part. wonder wht happened wid kripa that she had totally changed? wow!!!! everyone had triplets and twins that's good

Thanku Sana. Nahi I will call u shana or chana??

lolzzz saara u better call me sana not chana


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~Sana~

wow chutki...tumne mujhe bataaya hi nahin ke tumne ek ff shuru kiya hai...very bad bataaya ni....very very bad...kher chodo...wow pagli love this ff...love the concept and the details you give...plz continue soon cant wait to read more... 😳

Hello everybody
The next part is in a few minutes!!!

Nishant moves away from Kripa'z door. He goes to his room and thinks. He has his head in his hands. He speaks aloud - Kya uss din jo maine kiya woh galat tha??? Kya woh such much Kripa se pyaar karta tha??. He is in his thoughts when someone keeps a hand on his shoulder. HeIts his wife Kanan. She sits beside him and tell him "Dekho Nishant, aaj tak maine iss baare kuch nahi kaha. Tum ko dukh poohchega issliye mein chup rahi. Lekin sach baat to yeh hain ki tum ne Kripa aur uske pyaar ke saath naainsaafi ki. Tum ne usse dhoka diya. Uss ke pyaar ko nahi samjha. U were selfish. Tum ne hamesha uss par dominate kiya. Hamesha jo chaha woh kiya. I agree tum ne uss ki har khwaish poori ki lekin tum ne yeh sab papa ki dushamni ke wjeh se kiya. Papa ne kaha ki Kripa jisse cahe usse shaadi karegi toh tumne majbooran uski shaadi Prithvi se karwaadi. Jhoothe naatak kiye. Dono ko tadpaaya. Lekin tumhari dushmani papa ke saath thi, uski sazaa kyun tumne Kripa ko aur uss maasum ko di. Mere bhai ki zindagi ke saath saath tumne apni ki zindagi bhi barbaad kardi. Kripa ke pyaar bhari raah mein tum ek bada kaanta they. Jab tum ne khud uski zindagi barbaad kardi. Prithvi ki dhamkiya ko asaan le liya toh ab tum kyun pachtaa rahe hoon??
Nishant(N) - maine uss ki zindagi nahi barbaad ki. Mein uska bhala hi chaha.
Kanan (K) - Tum ne bhaliye nahi ki. Tum ne usse apna pyaar bhoolne ko kaha. Tumhari khushi ke liye woh bhool gayi. Tumhare liye usne Prithvi se shaadi, usski patni banna chahha, lekin Prithvi bhi to usse nahi chahta tha. Yeh jaankar tum ne unki shaadi karwaayi.
N - lekin uss maasum ka kya hota?? Woh bacche ko baap ka naam dene ke liye hi toh yeh sab kiya na??
K - woh baache ko naam usska asli baap bhi de sakta tha na??
N - nahi Kanan. Mein nahi maanta woh kaise khud ko badal sakta hain??
K - Agar ussne saachaa pyaar nahi kiya hota toh phir woh kyun woh usse shaadi karta?? Mandir mein lee jaakar kyun uske maang mein sindorr bharta. Tum ne chah kar bhi usske sindoor nahi mita paaye. Woh safeed saree pehenti toh hain, lekin maang hamesha mere bhai ke sindoor se laal. Uska diya hua pendent pehenti hain woh apne gale mein.
N- theek hain kanan. Men usse iss baar azmaa kar dekhloonga. Woh aa raha hain na kuch dinon mein, tab uske pyaar ko main azmaalunga. Mein Josh se kripa ki shaadi nahi karwaaunga, jab tak kripa raazi nahi hoti. Mein usko apne pyaar aur usko pyaar karne waale ke paas choodunga. Jo woh faisla lengi mujhe manzoor honga.
K- yeh hui na baat Nishant. Chalo mein tumse waada karti hun Nishant ki mera bhai Kripa sey saacha pyaar karta hain. Azmaalo jitna azmmaana hain.

Else where u see - a big mansion, a guy sitting on the bed packing hi things. Looks like he is going somewhere. he then takes a photo. It of a smiling Kripa. He kisses it and then lovingly careesses it. Then he saya - Kripa mein ab aa raaha hoon tumhare paas. Tumhari yeh muskaaan waapas laaunga. Tumhe aapna baanunga. yeh waada hain mera. I LOVE U KRIPA. U r my love, may ray of light, my reason for living, my jaan, my life and also my wife, jeevan saathi and premika.

Kripa is stting in her room. She is writing her diary.

If only u were here
To take away my tears,
Tell me its alright
And got nothing to fear

I cry when you are gone
Running out of my mind
Attempts to calm myself
But peace i cannot find

These past days were horrible
Im not sure what I should do
Holding on by a thread
My heart turning blue

Its still beating for u
But without you, its sooo sad
Feeling dead on the inside
Its hurting just too bad.

Yeh Kripa kiss se pyaar akrti hain?? What is this Josh - Kripa marriage thingy?? Yeh ladka jo Kripa ki photo dekh raha hain kaun hain?? Kripa kiss se pyaar karti hain??? Prithvi yah phir koi aur?? Aur yeh nishant jiski baat karr rraha hain woh kaun hain??? Jawaab chahiye to intezaar kariye

Sorry guyz!! My mom is around and I got time with gr8 difficulty to post the update. Nxt part might be on Saturday.

Plzzz comment

Hugs and kisses

Saara