TZMSMR - AK Part 4 - 22 Dec - Page 4

Good part, sara!
So Kripa loved Angad, Nishant forced her to marry Prithvi....whose kid is she expecting? Or did she lose the child?
Now Angad is returning to her....😃
pallavi

well written!! 👏
so nishant was the one to separate kripa from her love just because he wanted to avenge his dad. i hope now he keeps his word and doesn't fore kripa to marry josh. i guess the person who is packing his things is angad and he is going to ome back to kripa 😳

😳😊

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part. i'm sure that's angad the one who was talking to kripa's photo . i hope kripa doesn't get married to josh. hmm.. so actually nishant was the one who seperated kripa from her love just coz his dad agreed for it. that's really sad. poor kripa sacrificed her life for her bro nishant. loved this part. can't wait for angad's entry cont soon .

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~Sana~

Thanks Chana. 😉 Yah Nishant separated them. But the peson talking to the photo is Angad?? or Josh??? 😉 Chalo i will try posting the part. But u see. I was very busy. Sorry for not continuing.

Originally posted by: bheegi

U write well Sarah...keep up the great work

Thanku Soooo much for reading my FF.😳

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

areh waa chutki...loved the dialogue you used in this ff...especially between nishant and kannan....am looking forward to reading more so jald se jald update kar

Thanks Chutki.😃Karoongi chutki. Lekin thoda sabr karlo.

Originally posted by: deeya123

great start.i really liked readin it.
well the guy is quit obvious angad and he must be coming back!right?

Thanks Deeya.😛 It is Angad?? or Josh??? 😕 I will try updating.

Originally posted by: vallanki

gr8 part.

nice poem..u wrote? awesome!!

the person kissing pic must be Angad and NK talking about im. nisant disliked Angad ...reason?..he tries to bring kripa back into normal!!

kripa loves prithvi?? nope only angad and crying for him...baby ko kya huva??

continue..change ur style of posting hurting a lil...try to post in blk font.

Thanchuuuu Pyaari Behna. Haan yaah. I do write poems sometimes. Loves or loved??? Crying for whom??? Intezaar kijiye.. Surely will change my font. Meri behna ko pasand nahi aaya toh how can i keep it?? Try to kyun di. U can order me na?? Badi behen jo hain!!😉😊

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part....loved it...cont. soon

Thanks Babyyyy. 😃 Will surely try to update.

Originally posted by: tava

wow i just caught up with ur fanfic is really great can't wait for the next part continue soon

Hey thanks a lot Sweety. 😳Will try to continue.

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

chutki hurry and update please

Oye titli. Karti hoon. Sabr kar. 😛

Originally posted by: iamsmart

saara plzz cont soon

Aree chana - mein karungi na. Lekin intezaar karna padega.

Thanku Di. Yup Nishant forced her. Is she expecting or someone took it or she lost?? Yeh sawaalon ka jawaab to baad mein mile gaa.

Thans a lot Jiya. 😳Nahi I will call u jiyu?? or Joy??? 😆

Yah Nishant was the one. Yah hope he keeps his word. Good prediction. But woh Josh bhi ho sakta hain, right??? 😉 Lets see.

Sorry Guyz. I am very very sorry. Actually I was not well so I didnt continue. I was having high fever and tests also. So Im really very sorry. Plz forgive me.😭🤢 Will try to continue ASAP. May be 2mrow I will post the next part. Once again sorry to keep all of u waiting.

Edited by aksksara - 17 years ago

👏 👏 👏 great ff dear thx please apni ff ke aage aangad kripalikh diya karoo warna kaise pata chalega 👏

oye chutki u didnt tell me you were sick...stupid...take care first okay... 😳 😳

Awesome Parts Sara

I loved the poems there were so sweet

Part IV (right?? I am confused. Bhool gayee 😆)

A big mansion is shown, it is the KHANNA MANSION. There is hustle - bustle all around. There is a middle - aged lady ordering everyone to do this and do that. We see her face. Its a bhoot face and she is none other than Mrs. NAINA KHANNA. She is the wife of the Mr. DILIP KHANNA. One of the top ten richest person of India living in the state Mumbai. She looks happy but yet she is tensed about the arrangements. She starts shouting and says "Yeh log ko bhi koi kaam dhang se karna nahi aata. Aaj itne saalan baad mere dono bete waapas aa rahe hain. Kam se kam ek ki toh shaadi ho jaaye. Hey bhagwan, tu hi in ka kuch bhala kare" At that time, a hand with full chidiyaan (bangles) lands on her hand.
The person is none other than Anam, Mrs. Sahil Khanna. She says to Naina
Anam - "Mom, aap fikar mat karoo. Angad bhai aur Armaan bhai zaroor shaadi karenge. Lekin kab woh mein nahi keh sakti hoon. Un dono ka dil bahut berehmi se toda gaaya hain. Though Armaan bro has overcome it, Angad Bro kabhi nahi maanege. Armaan bhai ne apna pehla pyaar ko bhoool kar Ridhu Di ko apna liya lekin Angad Bro Kripa di ke bina nahi rahenge."
Someone intruppts her and says
"Mom, mein bhi aap se waada karti hoon ki Kripa di ki shaadi Angad Bro se ho ke rahegi, chahiye Nishant bhahiya maane ya naa mane. Mujhe Rishi ki kasam, mein aapka sapna zaroor poora karungi" We see her face she is none other than Mrs. Shazmin Rishi Khanna.
Naina sighs, then gets up and hugs both of them and says
Naina - najaane mein ne kaunse aache gun (deeds) kiye they jo mujhe tum jaisi betiyaan mili. all of them smile and then go of to clear up all the work.

Everything is prepared. Naina's son Angad or Armaan one of them is gonna come. At that moment someone completely unexpeted enters the Khanna Mansion and bends down to take blessings from Dilip and Naina but both of them back out. Josh then opens his mouth to say something before that an elderly woman who is Mrs. Devyani Khanna, Dilip's mom, better known as Dadi comes and says "Tumhare liye iss ghar mein koi jagah nahi hain. Tum ne jo Angad aur Kripa ki zindagi mein kya, uss kel iye tum hamare pairon par bhi agar giro ge to kuch nahi hoga. Agar itna hi pachtaava hain to Kripa se jaake maafi maango. Agar Angad Kripa tumko maaf karde toh phir hame karne mein koi aiteraz nahi, lekin pehle un dono se maafi maango aur yaha se kuch kahe bina chale jaao." She turns back and goes and sits on the couch. Josh with guilty eyes looks toward Rishi and Sahil, both of them feel pity for him and try to go to him, but a hand on both there shoulders stop them. They turn back and see there respective wives standing infront of them. They get deadly glares from both of them and then both Rishi and Sahil turn their backs towards Josh. Naina points her fingur toards the door and Josh with a sulken face goes to his car and breaks down.

At the same time a red beauty enters the gates of KHANNA MANSION. A guy in his late twenties is driving the car. We see his hands driving the car. He takes a look around the parking lot, spots Josh's car and tightens his fist over the steering wheel. Then he looks at the picture infront hanging on the car ceiling, its Kripa's picture wearing a mehendi colour saree. She looks beatuful in it. Angad smiles at the picture, takes it in his hand and kisses it. Then he gets down in front of the Khanna Mansion doors. He is wearinga brown coat, brown pant and white shirt. The front 2 buttons of the shirt are open. He turns around, and the door of the Khanna mansion open, and we see the whole Khanna family standing with dadi in the centre holding a aarti. She does the aarti and this person bends down to take the blessings from her. She stops him mid-way and says "aaj mujhe sukoon mila hain, to jo waapas aa gaya." she affectionately pulls his ears and says "Dadi itni paraayi ho gayi thi ke toh dadi ki ek khwaaish poori karne nahi aaya??" He winks at her and replies back that "Sweet heart, ab toh aa gaya na. yeh emotional drama band kijeeye. I am getting bored darling. Lets enjoy." Dilip slaps his back hard and he turns around - aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh. We see his face. Its none other than our dashing raj kumar ANGAD KHANNA. Naina and dilip hug him and then he goes toward his best frnd Sujal Garewal who is standing over tehre with a grin on his face. Both of them hug and Angad says where is my life??? Sujal playfully punches him and says "Back out she is mine"
Angad "Mein kaunsa usse tujhse cheen lunga. Mien toh usse bas mil na chahta hoon
Sujal - Abbey saale, tu chup baith.
Angad - Mein Kashish ka bhai nahi re
Kashish comes and Angad and Kashish hug each other. Then Sumeet Kumkum, Kavya Anjali, Neev Prachi, Robbie Kasturi, Adi Maithalli all hug angad and start pulling his leg. Angad then searches for his chote aur khote bhai Rishi and Sahil. Both of them come and hug Angad. Then Shaz and Anam come and they peck on Angads cheeks.
Angad says "Hey beautiful ladies, how r u???"
Shaz / Anam - Hello handsome, we r fine.
Rishi and Sahil start pulling there wives out of Angad arms. Anam and Shaz give deadly glares to there husbands and they turn back and mouth a sorry and move away. As soon as they go, the whole gang starts bursting out. Then Sujal says chal agad tu fresh ho jaa, tujhse baatein karni hain, Okk and he goes to his floor the 3rd floor. No one other than Dadi, Sujal, Kashish, Kavya, Anjali, Kunal, Nimmo, Sumeet and Kumkum. All his close freinds can only enter it. He opens the door with a secret password, he goes inside where there are walls who know his story, who can listen to everything he has to say. He opens his bedroom door & he feels Kripa aal around, bcoz large posters of Kripa are pasted on the walls. He stares at the photo and says "Chalo issme toh hamare darshan ho gaaye. Shahayed tum mujhse nahi miloge lekin Kripa maine ne tumhare shartein poori ki hain. Maine aapne waade ko nibhaya hain. Lekin yeh sab mein tumhe mera ek mission hain, usko khatam karne ke baad hi mein kuch kahoonga, tub tak tum mujh par vishwaas karoon yah nahi, tumhari marzi. and then the rest is mute.

Scene shifts to Rishi and Shazmins bedroom. U can hear noises of shouting. We see Rishi on the bed and Shazmin punching him and Rishi is trying to save himself. She starts shouting "Tumne josh ko kyun dekha. Maine kaha tha na ki Josh ko tadpayo lekin tumhe mari koi ehmiyat hi nahi"
Rishi - Nahi darling aisi baaat nahii......
Shazmin - SHUT UP!! KUCH MAT BOLO. 2DAY U HAVE TO SLEEP ON THE COUCH!!!
Rishi - Sorry sweetheart mein phir se aisa nahi karonga. Pllzzz give me any other punishment par mujhe apne se dooor mat karroon. He makes a puppy dog face.
Shazmin - (fuming) - Ek baar keh diya sunai nahi deta tumko?? Shukr karo kamre mein sone de rahi hoon warna laat marke bahar pheek deti. Aur tum to jaante hoon i was a Karate black belt in college.
Rishi - Okk (with a sulken and sad face) He goes to the washroom mumbling "Kaha phas gaya mein bhagwaan"
Shazmin - (smiling evilly) - Serves u right!!!
And she goes to the kitchen.
In Sahil and Anams room, sahil is facing a similar situation, or a worst one u can say. We see Sahil trying to save himself and Anam is throwing whatever comes in her hand. She shouts at him "tum ko kya hugaya. hamesha Angad bro ke saamne mujhe embarass kartee hoon."She picks up a rod and throws it at his face. he ducks but it hits his hand. He cries out in pain "owwwwwwwwwww"
Anam shouts at him - "SHUT UP SAHIL!! NAUTANKI BAND KAROON. FIRST AID BOX CUPBOARD MEIN HAIN. CLEAN UR WOUND. ITNA CHILLAKAR MERA SAR MAT KHARAB KARO!!! SIRF EK MAAMOLLLI SI CHOT TO HIAN!!!
Sahil just nods his head and goes to the washroom with tears in his eyes.

At the Sharma House, Dadi who is the closest Khanna member to the Sharma family comes and starts taking with all. Then when kripa madam comes to meet her she announces that Angad has returned. Nishant's face pales. Kanan looks happy. She statrs jumping around. But Kripa toh....... her eyes open wide with shock and we hear a THUDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD. All eyes turn over there and see that...................................

Intezaar karoo. Phir pata chalega Kripa madam ko kya hua. What kasam Angad is taking about?? Why do Anam and Shazmin talk so rudely with Risi and Sahil?? Koi wajeh hain yah phir nafrat?? Wait and Watch.

I am sorry guyz for making u wait so long. I am damn busy with guests and stuff. Plus i am not well. Sorry, 🤢

next part wil lahve a part of other jodiz. U can mention which ones u want? bcoz i cant give all in one aprt.

PS thanku for ur beautiful comments. Surely Moni i will change it after my guests go. Predictions and comments are most welcome.

omdayzzzzzz y did rishi take me out of angus arms i lub him but i luv rishi too y am is o nasty to him lol anywayz da ff gr8 apart frum me calling angad bro da rest is awesoem cant wait til nxt part

shaz 😛

😆 poor rishi and sahil. wonder wht mission was angad talking about and wht did josh do? why is dadi angry wid josh? it's good he can atleast stay away from kripa😆 wht's wrong wid kripa why is she away from angad??? there r a lot of questions😆wonderful part. cont soon.


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~Sana~

Awesome Part Sara

I am damn shocked how can i be so cruel to sahil