love actuallyRN & iqbal,pallavi p1&2 pg3

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''I love you''

''No I love you''

''I loved you first''

''O yeah''

''Yeah''

He grabbed her by the hair and kissed her passionately

''What was that for'' she said trying to catch her breath

''I just proved it I love you more than you love me''

''o really'' she moved forward grabbed him by his collar and kissed him with all the passion she had

''now who loves who more'' she said giving him a challenging look

''I still love you more than you love me''

''no I …… wait a minute, did I just say what I think I said, did I just say I love you''

''yes you did my princess''

'' don't princess me you fool, I'm gonna get married and I am kissing his brother…… o my god what was I thinking'' she shouted

'' hey wait a minute there's nothing wrong in falling In love''

'' but falling in love with my going to be husband's brother is wrong''

''yeah but if your going to be husband aka my brother aka Rajveer is in love with some one else already and he's only getting married for his parents sake then''

''you mean………………… aaaaaaaaahhhhhh! I LOVE YOU''

Ok hey guys well this is going to be my second fan fic the first one was Mausum pyar ka it was a shiv(iqbal) and gauri (pallavi) fan fic but it didn't turn out the way I expected, so I have started a new one and this one is going to be about two of my favourite onscreen couple Rajveer and naina (Rajeev Khandelwal and Priyanka Bassi) and shiv gauri( Iqbal Khan and Pallavi Subhash)

Rajveer and naina have loved each other since forever and had always dreamt of getting married but fate had another plan in store for them.

Rajveer the son of the richest man in India has always been lucky, he achieved quite a lot in young age and his only dream in life is to get married to his childhood sweetheart naina but his dad wants him to get married to Gauri Chaterjee ( Pallavi Subhash) the second richest man in India's only daughter because she's beautiful, talented, intelligent and most importantly rich but neither Gauri nor Rajveer want that but to keep their parents happy they agree to it……………

Ok guy's well the first part was just a sneek peek of a part

Which will happen later on in the story, that's if you all want me to continue, the second part is just a small introduction of the story, the story revolves around four main characters, you've probably guessed by now, Rajveer - Naina and Shiv-Gauri

If you want me to continue please leave your comments and I continue as quick as possible😊

p.s the lovely siggie above is made by ani, i would like to say thanks to her for making such an amazing siggie for this ff and if i get enough comments i'll put on a character sketch and then i'll post part 1 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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its awesome too good plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

its awesome too good plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.

thanks😊 but i think you are the only one who like it.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 nice concept ..continue soon
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thank you for the comments guys but i don't think i should update as no is replying 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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come on yaar pls updateeee.post it in lrl forum
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come on yaar pls updateeee.post it in lrl forum
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was good! Hahaha.. When I was readng it I was like 'What?' Hhahah.. that line was funny 'don't princess me you fool, I'm gonna get married and I am kissing his brother' 😆 Do continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice concept
looking forward for u to start
plz cont soon 😊

p.s plz post it in kaa forum too

Edited by mintfresh - 17 years ago
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awww thank you sooooo much guys 😳

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