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Posted: 17 years ago
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update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part.
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Introduction of characters

Rajeev Khandelwal as - Rajveer
Rajveer is a 23 years old business man, he has achieved a lot in such a young age, and his parents are proud of him especially his dad because he always wanted his two sons to be the most powerful business man in India, Rajveer is a very sweet and polite person with a magnificent personality every girl in the world from children's to old ladies love him for that but he only loves one girl and that's his childhood sweetheart Naina singh Alawaliah.

Iqbal Khan as- Shiv
Shiv is 21 years old and is currently in London doing his MBA so once he comes back he could help his dad and his elder brother Rajveer in their business, he like his brother is very sweet and caring but unlike Rajveer he could stand up to his dad, girls of all ages drool over him but he just ignores it, he doesn't believe in love because he had his heart broken by one girl who was after his money when he was at college but that changes when he meets a special someone, he respects his elder brother a lot but hates the fact that he is ruining his life because of his father.


Pallavi Subhash as- Gauri
Gauri is 21 years old business women, she helps her dad in his business, she is the only child in her family and that's why her parents have given her everything she wants but still she has never been spoilt brat unlike the other rich kids, like every girls she has a dream of getting married to her prince charming but that dream gets shattered when her dad arranges her marriage to Rajveer, she is very beautiful , intelligent and very talented, she loves singing and dancing but she couldn't fulfil her dream of being a singer because her dad wanted her to take care of their business which she is doing with great determination

Priyanka Bassi as - Naina
Naina is 21 years old and she is a magazine editor, she lives all by her self because her parents died when she was a little kid, since then her elder brother Naveen who was an army officer took care of her but he also died when he was 20 in war, since then she lived all by her self in her small yet beautiful apartment near juhu beach which her brother bought before he died. Naina is a very beautiful girl, she is sweet and caring and everything what a man will want in his bride, she loves Rajveer her childhood best friend but when she finds out that he is getting married to some one else she is left completely heart broken
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part one

Closed off from love
I didn't need the pain
Once or twice was enough
And it was all in vain
Time starts to pass
Before you know it you're frozen

But something happened
For the very first time with you
My heart melts into the ground
Found something true
And everyone's looking round
Thinking I'm going crazy

But I don't care what they say
I'm in love with you
They try to pull me away
But they don't know the truth
My heart's crippled by the vein
That I keep on closing
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
You cut me open

Trying hard not to hear
But they talk so loud
Their piercing sounds fill my ears
Try to fill me with doubt
Yet I know that the goal
Is to keep me from falling

But nothing's greater
Than the rush that comes with your embrace
And in this world of loneliness
I see your face
Yet everyone around me
Thinks that I'm going crazy, maybe, maybe

But I don't care what they say
I'm in love with you
They try to pull me away
But they don't know the truth
My heart's crippled by the vein
That I keep on closing
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
You cut me open

And it's draining all of me
Oh they find it hard to believe
I'll be wearing these scars
For everyone to see

But I don't care what they say
I'm in love with you
They try to pull me away
But they don't know the truth
My heart's crippled by the vein
That I keep on closing
You cut me open and I

Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
I keep bleeding
I keep, keep bleeding love
Keep bleeding
Keep, keep bleeding love
You cut me open and I


''so guys wasn't that beautiful that was bleeding love by the new singing sensation Leona Lewis'' Rj Sapna from radio mirchi was saying

''yeah it was truly beautiful'' a young women in her 20's said turning of the radio
''oh god another day in office, oh well there's nothing I could do about it'' she said picking up her bag and few important files.

She went downstairs and sat down in the breakfast table
''kaka'' she said
''jee betiya''
''papa kaha hain''
''voh beti voh office mein hai''
''subeh subeh office mein''
''haan keh re hain te kuch zaroori kaam hain''
''teekh hain……. Mama ne nasta kar liya''
''nahin…''
''kya…….voh hain kaha''
''mandir''
''acha teekh hain, mere liya brand flakes are pure orange juice ley ana ''
''jee''

Om Jaye Jagdish Hare / Swami Jaye Jagdish Hare
Bhagt Jano Ke Sankat / Khshan Mein Dur Kare ...
Om Jaye Jagdish Hare a sweet melodious voice was singing
The girl got of her chair and went towards the mandir and saw her mother singing

Maat-Pita Tum Mere / Sharan Gahun Kiskee
Tum Bin Aur Na Duja / Aas Karun Jiskee ...
Om Jaye Jagdish Hare the girl continued singing

The old lady turned around and saw her daughter standing there smiling flashing her dimples
'' gauri beta tum yahan'' the old lady said
'' aapki awaaz ne mujhe yahan kich laaya, seriously mom you sing beautifully'' gauri praised her mom
''you sing better than me''
''no way mom you are the best''
''acha acha meri tarif band karo aur chalo…….nasta kar liya tumne''
''nahin'' gauri said shaking her head
''toh chalo hum saat saat nasta karte hain''

They went towards the dining table and sat down eating there breakfast
''beta are you happy''
''what do you mean mama'' gauri asked confused
''gauri I know that you always wanted to be a singer but because of your dad……..''
''mama'' gauri interrupted '' I am happy, I'm actually enjoying it, I know that this is not what I wanted but I guess it was in my destiny''
Gauri's mom was looking at her with affection, gauri turned to look at her
''kya hua………'' she said
''kuch nahin…..bas yeh dekh rahi hoon ki meri choti si guriya itni baari hogayi hain''
''maa aap ki gauri humesha aapki choti si guriya hi rehegi, no matter what…………. Acha mama mein chalti hoon''
''teek hain''
Gauri got up from the dining table and give her mother a kiss on her cheek
''bye ma''
''bye''
Gauri went out the house towards her car when all of a sudden she heard a loud voice near the gates, she turned towards the gate to see a young women with a child in her hand begging to come in , looking at her state the women looked poor
''kya hua'' gauri shouted
''meme saab yeh aurat aap se milna chati hain'' said the guard
''toh andar ane dijye''
''jee'' the guard opened the gate and the women came straight in and fell in gauri' foot
''arai yeh kya kari hain aap''
''meme saab mera baacha bimar hain, aur meri paas uski ilaj kileya paise nahin hain, meme saab meri madad kijye, aap jo bhi kahengi main voh karoongi'' pleaded the poor women
''dekh ye main aap ki madad karne kileya tayar hoon, aap uthye''
Gauri took some money out of her bag and gave it to the women
''yeh lijye aapki baache ki ilaj kileya paise''
''shukriya meme saab''
''aap ek kaam kyun nahin karti aap naukri kijye aap ko apni zaroorat kiliye paisa milenge aur phir kisi ke agai haath nahin phelana parega''
''mein jaanti hoon meme saab, bar mujhe naukri kaun dega……… aur agaar mein naukri karne lagoo to mere baache ka kaun dyaan rakhega''
''tum humari ghar kaam kar sakti ho aur rahan savaal tumhari baache ka to din mein to voh school jayenga aur jab voh ghar lautega to tumhari duty katam ho chuki hogi''
''baar meme saab school jaane kileya bahut saara paisa lage ga''
''tum uski chinta mat karo mein sambhal lungi'' gauri said '' radha'' gauri called one of her servants
''jee meme saab''
''radha inko andar le jao, ache se kapre dekar unko unka kaam samjha dena''
''jee''
Gauri got in her car and drove off.

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part two

''yes sir aapne mujhe bulaya''
''jee mr. mehra, mere liye koi aya tha'' said a very handsome man who was sitting in his office playing with a snow globe with two figures in it, one of a girl and another of a man
''haan saab mr. singhania ka phone aya tha voh aap se kuch important baat karna chate hain''
''teek hain aap ek meeting tayar kijye''
''yes sir'' mr. mehra said and left the office

The man was sitting in his chair still playing with the snow globe and thinking of a special some one and smiling to him self
''I love you jaan'' he said
He picked up the phone and dialled a number
Ring ring…………
''hello'' a sweet voice from the other end of the phone said
''hi jaan''
''aap…….. Kaise hain''
''teekh hoon, I'm just missing you''
''I miss you too jaan………where are you''
''at office''
''oh……well I was wondering if you could meet me for lunch''
''sure sweetheart ..when''
''at lunch time sooo it'll be round about 12''
''ok I'll meet you then''
''ok….I love you''
''I love you too''
''bye jaan'' he said
''bye''
He put the phone down and smiled to him self and took out a picture from his draw and kissed it

Knock knock
''come in'' an old man with very handsome features stepped inside the office
''dad aap''
''haan beta…………son I wanted to talk to you about something''
''sure dad what about''
''beta kaal mere bahut acche dost Alok Chaterjee ki beti gauri ki 21st birthday hai aur humai vaha jaana hain''
''jee dad I'll be there''
''good aur haan, kaal tumhara bhai bi anne vaala hain''
''SAACH……. That's great '' the man said excitedly
''he'll come straight to the party after he arrives''
''ok dad''
''aur haan Rajveer''
'' jee dad''
''…will you be able to buy gauri a gift.. cause I haven't got the time''
''em… ok dad I'll do it''
''this lunch time ok…… cause after you get home your mom wants to take us to some kind of pooja''
''dad this lunchtime'' he said
''yes any problem''
''no dad''
''good''
The old man left and Rajveer sighed
'' damn it'' he cursed
He picked up the phone and dialled the same number again
''hello'' said the same voice
''hi sweet heart''
''Rajveer aap phirse''
''haan''
''kya baat hain you sound dull''
''em jaan voh''
''kya baat hain'' she said sounding worried
'' I don't think I could meet you for lunch'' he said
''oh……ok…..kya mein pooch sakti hoon kyun'' she said sounding upset
''haan…..voh actually dad ki kisi dost ki beti ki birthday hain kaal and he wants me to buy a gift for her''
''oh……..jaan well I can come with you and help you choose a gift, because knowing you you'll choose something pathetic and then we can have lunch''
''oh yeah, why didn't I think of that''
''as I said Rajveer, your pathetic''
''oh really''
''really ''
''well I'll show you how pathetic I am when I meet you darling''
''ok……bye sweetie''
''bye''

He put the phone down and started his work.


well guys this was the first and second part of the fic i've only introduced gauri and raj so far i'll introduce shiv and naina on the next two parts, pleaseee leave your comments guys 😊

p.s i hope your happy now shweta2005😊
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its awesome too good waiting eagerly for da next part soon fast asap with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was great! Please do write the next parts as soon as you can! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow this is a really nice ff please cont i over shiv and gauri the old one's well hope you continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update fast plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well Shiv and Gauri are not exactly my favourites but I just love Raj and Naina.But Raj and Gauri are really a misfit.

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