My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 17

aww great job guli...keep up the great work and continue soon

awww that was a cute part! plz continue soon

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contiue soon i hope priya and karthik get married 😛

Part 49

Everyone is looking at Priya

Dadi comes over

Dadi: come here!

Priya is shocked!

She looks at K

K is like go!

She walks up to her

Dadi: dont cry!!!!! why are you crying?

Naina; you have no reason to cry!!!! we are all here! arent we like family!

Kripa: Yes!!! we are!!

They try to cheer her up

Its working a little bit

Angad: and we know how much you like K bhaiyya

She blushes

She smiles a little

Angad: What is that?? do i see a smile?

Angad smiles

She hugs Dadi!!

Dadi: hey you shouldnt feel bad it wasnt ur fault!

Naina tells everyone to cheer up and get ready for the baby shower for Kripa

Naina: And Priya will get Kripa ready!!!

Kripa: Yes!!! My future sister in law will help me

Kripa takes Priya

K is happy

So is everyone else

Priya and Kripa are talking

Kripa: So how much do u like our Karthik Bhaiyya?

Priya is shy

Kripa: Dont be shy!! we all know he likes you very much!

Angad comes in

Angad: What are you guys talking about?

kripa: Nothing!!! and besides go and leave!!! this event is no men allowed!!!

Angad: hey whos the father of this child?

Kripa: SO? priya can you please tell him!!!

Angad: Oh no!! dont get her involved!!!!

Kripa: why? she is older than you isnt she?

She just laughs and enjoys the fun!!

Angad: Fine!!! becuz of Priya Bhabhi i will go!!!

Kripa; Thank you!!

Priya has done a very good job on Kripa

Everyone is impressed

Priya borrows something of Kripa's becuz she doesnt have anything

The baby shower is under way

Naina annouces their new addition to the family who is Priya

Everyone clap for her

She is happy (priya) becuz she never got the love like this!!

She never thought that she would find people who like her for who she is!

Everyone gives Kripa gifts!!

She is smiling

Afterwards its over

Angad comes back

Kripa is upstairs taking off her clothes

Angad comes behind her and helps her

He hugs her from behind

They have a nice moment together

Priya is in her room (guest room)

Karthik comes there

Priya is shocked

P: what are you doing here?

K: cant i come and see you?

P: what if someone will see?

K: let them! you are my wife to be arent you!

Priya blushes

He stays for a little while and then leaves

Priya smiles at him

He smiles back and gives her a wink!!!




The end!!

Part 50

Next Morning

Kripa wakes up

She goes down

Priya wakes up to

She helps Kripa in the kitchen

Kripa: What are you doing?

Priya: helping you!

Kripa: You relax!!

Priya: I am gonna be part of this family right and besides you should be resting!

Kripa and Priya laugh and talk in the kitchen

Everyone wakes gets ready and comes down

They all eat breakfast

K keeps staring at Priya

Naina talks about the wedding date for the both of them

No engagement go straight to the wedding

They finalize the wedding for next week

Everyone is happy

Esecially the couple to be

Naina starts with the preparations

Everyone is excited

Priya is happy

She is in the room just thinking

K comes there

K sits next to her

K holds her hands

K: Whats wrong?

Priya: nothing!!

K: Something must be wrong!!

Priya: I am fine!!

Priya starts having tears in her eyes

K: arre why are you crying???

Priya hugs him!!

Priya is just saying how her parents arent gonna be there

K: Hey.. dont worry!!! everything will be fine!!! You got mom and dad.... who love you!!!

Priya: I know!!!!

K: hey everything will be fine!!!!

He wipes her tears

K: Now no more crying

She cheers up a little bit

Kripa is eating in the kitchen

She has a big bowl of ice cream

Angad comes there and joins her

While they are having ice cream

Josh and Aliyah come there

They are surprised to see them cuz they havent seen them for a while

Everything has been okay with them

They sit down and they start catching up

Al apologizes to Kripa for not making it to the baby shower

They dont mind

Priya comes into the kitchen

Al and Josh are looking at her as if who is she?

Angad: She is the new member to be in this house!

Josh: really?

Angad: yes!!!

They get to know her and they like her

The wedding is tomorrow

everyone has been invited

This is suppose to be the biggest wedding on the block

Everyone is busy with the preparations

Even Josh and Al

Everything is done

Angad tells Kripa to rest and not to do anything

The wedding day has arrived

K and Priya arent allowed to see each other

Its killing him

Kripa is ready

She goes and helps Priya get ready

Priya's parents dont even show up

They dont care!!

They now claim they dont own her

Priya calls them but her parents tells her mean things

She hangs up

Now she knows that their relationship is over

Kripa cheers her up and tell her that dont worry about it becuz they will give her so much love that she wont even think about it



The end!

OMGGG GREATTTT JOB UR REALLLY GOOOOD!!!

great job guli hun....keep up the awesome work and continue soon

so sorry i couldnt post yesterday!!! i had to go to a bday party for my cousin!!! and she lived 1 1/2 hour from me!! so 2day i will update all fan fics (5) so please be patient!!!!!!! thanx!!!!

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Part 51

The wedding is on

K is down on the mandap

They are waiting for the bride to come

Everyone is there

They are all happy

K is really happy

He likes Priya a lot

Priya comes down

Everyone is looking at her

She is smiling

So is he

She comes there and sit next to K

Kripa and Angad are standing next to each other

Both smile at each other

The priest begins

Then all of a sudden Kripa feels bad

She holds her stomach

She cant take the pain

She doesnt scream or anything cuz she doesnt want the wedding to stop

She tells Angad

Angad senses something is wrong

They both walk

She comes outside

She screams

Angad: what happened?

Kripa: my stomach i think i am having the baby!

She is screaming

Angad is shocked!!!

Angad gets a car and they both go to the hospital

She is admitted

The wedding is going on

Naina is looking for Angad and kripa

They arent seen

She tries not to think about it to much

K and Priya take the pheras

He puts sindoor and the mangalsutra

She is happy

he winks at her

They take everyone's blessing

Priya hugs dadi and Naina

Since none of her fam was there she feels a bit sad

Naina cheers her up

After a while the guests leave

At the hospital

Angad is waiting for the docs to come out

He is getting agitated

At home

They are wondering where Angad and Kripa are

Naina calls Angad cell

Angad picks up

A: hello?

N: Hello where are you?

A: IS the wedding over

N: yes they are married!! but where are you?

A then tells her

N: what??

Everyone looks at her

N: Okay we will be there!!

K: What happened?

N: Kripa is in the hospital!!

Everyone is shocked!

They go to the hospital

Kripa is shouting and screaming

People are holding her down

Everyone is waiting for something

Angad is walking back and fourth

Dadi tells him not to worry

Angad apologizes to K and Priya

They tell him dont worry about it

Doc comes out

A: How is Kripa?????? and the baby???

Doc: I'm afraid we will have to operate on her becuz the baby is not in its normal position!! and this could harm either the baby or Kripa!

Angad is shocked!!

So is everyone else!!!


the end!