My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 19

graet job guli...keep up the great work and continue soon

awesome part 👏 👏 plz cont soon

they were excellent parts
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Part 55

M is shocked!!

P: WHat??? where is he?

M: He was sleeping with me... and all of a sudden....

P: How can you lose someone's child?

M: I didnt mean to!!

P is mad

M asks him for his help

He gets mad and says he wont help her

She is shocked!

P says that since you got urself into this u will find a way out

P leaves

M is standing there

P gets ready and heads over to Angads place

He tells them everything

Angad is happy

Angad tells P what she did while he wasnt there

He cant believe it

She did so many things

P is so mad

He stays for a while...

Kripa is happy and is attached to her child!!

Angad and Kripa decide to name him Om!!

Everyone likes that name!!!

P leaves

Kripa is with Om 24/7

Angad is happy that everything is back to normal

Yet they still have to do something about M

That same night

M is thinking where could the baby be

P isnt helping her

M is on the couch

Kripa comes over to thier place

M is shocked

Thinking what is she doing here

Kripa acts all depressed and everything

P: Kripa you here? What happened why are you crying?

Kripa: My baby!!!

P: Baby??

M is getting nervous

Kripa looks at M

Kripa: YOU??????

M is scared

Kripa; YOu took my baby! where is my baby

M is shocked!!

She doesnt know what to say

P: Kripa..

Then P's phone rings

Its Angad

Angad is asking where Kripa is.. (but just faking it to fool M)

P says that Kripa is here

Angad comes over there

Kripa is shouting that she took her child

M isnt saying anything

Angad arrives

Angad tries to calm her down

Kripa is yelling that she took her child

Angad: Come ur senses!!

P" What happened?

Angad: SOmeone took our child!

Kripa: Yeah and it was her

Angad looks at M

A: Whats wrong M??

M: Huh?? nothing

A: The way you look seems like that u took it

M is shocked!!!!!!!!!

She is quiet!!

M: No.. i was just thinking who couldve done such a thing

Angad is looking at her in a funny way

M is getting nervous and is shaking!!!

P sees her

A and K leave

P is asking her whats happening?

P: That baby that you found... was that.............


M is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



The End!

great job guli...keep up the great work and continue soon....so glad that mishti is BUSTED....lol....continya soon hun

BUSTED!!!...awesome part gulli 👏

Part 57

M is shocked!!

M makes up some story of where she found the child!!

P acts as if he believes it

M is like thank god!!!

P leaves

HE thinks to himself that she is will pay for what she has done

Angad and Kripa are at home

They let Om sleep

They sit on the couch and hold hands

Angad: Wat are you thinking?

Kripa: That i have gotten everything today!!!!

Angad; really?

Kripa: Yes!! And the most important one is sitting next to me!!!

Angad kisses her on the forehead!

Kripa: promise me you wont ever leave me!!

Angad: That is one thing i will never do!!

Kripa hugs him!

Later in the night...

Kripa is having bad dreams about her and Angad being separated

Dont know why she is having such thoughts in her head!

She cant sleep and she tosses and turns

Then she wakes up sceaming Angad

Angad wakes up and asks her whats wrong

KRipa is just shaken up about losing him!

ANgad tells her not to worry

She comes more closer to him

She calms down and goes back to sleep

Next Morning

M is still wondering where that baby could be?

She cant stop thinking about it

She acts as though she isnt worried in front of P

But then she thinks why is she so worried about it?

Its not her kid

M goes out somewhere

P isnt home either

Pooja and K are together

K is wondering when will they go on their honeymoon

Pooja says it doesnt matter to her

K wants to go somewhere specialw with her

ANgad and Kripa go to P's house

P knew that they were coming so told the servants about them

M is coming back

Angad sees her

They take Om and put him there

They hide

M comes there and sees Om

SHe is shocked!!!!!!!!!

She goes by the baby

She looks around but no one is there

She picks up the baby

She goes outside and sees if someone is there

But there isnt

Then Angad and Kripa come out

They stand in front of her

M is shocked to see them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


BOth have angry faces

M looks at them

She looks at the baby


The end!!

great job guli....finally misthi is busted!! lol...keep up the great work and continue soon

busted!!!! all i can say


good job gulli 👏

Part 58

Angad: Wat??? Why are you so surprised seeing this baby?

M is speechless

Kripa: Did nt you take him from the hospital??

Angad: Why did you do this?? why???

P comes in

M: Bhaiyya.. look what they are doing? They are accusing me of taking their child

P : Wat? what is going on here? Angad what is this

Angad: She took our baby from the hospital

P: What??

M: They are lying!!! I didnt do no such thing

Kripa takes Om from her

P gets mad and slaps her one

M is shocked!

M: YOu slapped me??

P: Why did you do this??? Say something!! Why did you do this??

M: You are accusing me??

P: I Knew all along this was thier child!!!! so i took him in the night and gave it to them!!!!!

M is shocked!!

P: I didnt know you stoop this low!!!! And all the problems you caused them!!

M is crying

P: You are disgusting!!!

He walks off

She tries to say something but cant

Kripa gives Om to Angad

She slaps her as well

She starts yelling at her

Angad tells her to calm down

And they both leave

M is just left standing there

Kripa and Angad arrive back home

People come to see the baby!!

Everyone is happy!!

M is feeling bad

SHe just cries in her room

P doesnt even want to see her or speak to her

Pooja is walking cuz she went to go get something

Her parents are coming towards her

Neither of them see each other

Then they spot her

Pooja notices

She doesnt say anything to them

She tries to ignore them as much but her dad comes there and starts talking all this rubbish to her

She keeps quiet

Pooja just listens and cries

He leaves

She goes home thinking what he said

K sees her crying

K: Whats wrong??

Pooja: Nothing!

She walks off!!

K goes and follows her to see whats wrong

Angad is putting Om to sleep

He goes to sleep.. angad puts him down

Kripa comes in..

Angad comes behind her and picks her up and spins her

Kripa is laughing

Kripa: What are you doing?

Angad: Nothing!! Just being with my wife!!

Kripa is laughing

Angad: I am so happy today!!

Kripa is too!!

They both stare at each other

Pooja cries

K comes

K: Hey what happened why are you crying?

Pooja: Nothing i am fine!

K: No you are not fine! please tell me!!

Pooja tells him what her dad told her

He was just saying that she ruined her life and she will regret for the rest of her life and what not

And how K is no good!!!

Blah blah blah

K tells her to forget about it.... and she doesnt need them becuz she has got them!!!

Pooja hugs him!!!!

Pooja: Please dont ever leave me!!!!!

K: I wont!!!

He kisses her

Kripa and ANgad are together

Both are enjoying times with themselves

He has his arms around her and is kissing her

Kripa: angad.....

Angad: What???

Kripa; Stop it!!

Angad: No!!

He kisses her

She giggles

Angad; I dont want this moment to end!! i wish it will last forever!

Kripa: You never know it just might!

Both smile!!

Couple of days later:

Josh and Angad plan a show of the year!!!

This is going to be the biggest event of the year

They start planning for it and see who is going to be in it and wat not

They want people to remember this show for the rest of thier lives!

They start brain storming and think what they should do what they should have etc...

They get some ideas and write it down

They talk to people and organize it themselves

Angad and JOsh are tired for the day and decide to go home and work on it tomorrow

Angad goes home and Josh goes home

Angad is going to his car...

WHen he is opens it someone closes it

He sees who it is

And its some woman

Angad sees her and he is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

She is his old gf!

Angad: You??

Girl: Yes me!!!

Angad; What are you doing here?

Girl: Came to see you!

She starts flirting with him and starts touching him

He doesnt like that and tells her to back off cuz hes married

She is shocked!!

She says no.. you cant be married!!

Girl: You are only mine!!! Only mine!

A bit obsessive!!

Angad tells her to back off

Pushes her off and leaves

He leaves

She says that he will come back to her!!!



The end!!