My FanFic: Continuation from 082504

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I am starting from where Thursday, Aug 25th episode ended!!!

And this story is dedicated to my sweet cousin Tulsi... who i love lots!!!!!!!!!!

Part 1

Kripa is thinking about the decision she made for marrying Prithvi....

Kripa: did i make the right decision??

Then she starts thinking about Josh's words about what he said about Angad!!!

Kripa tries to get in touch but no use!!!

Angad is indeed staying w/ Josh

Angad: Why did you have to tell Kripa the truth??

Josh: I am sorry!! But i couldnt take it anymore!!! She went too far!!

Angad: Yeah but now i cant even face her anymore!

Josh: Look i am happy that i let the cat out of the bag.... It was time she found out the truth!!!

Angad is like what ever!!

In the meantime... Prithvi was waiting by the door and listening to thier convo!!!!

Angad: I just hope that Kripa and Prithvi get married!! Deep down inside i want her but she doesnt deserve me!!!! And plus what do i have nothing!!!! My own brother kicked me out of the house!! Where will i go now?

Josh: What you cant stay here?

Angad: How much will you do for me?

Josh: What ever it takes!!!!!!!

They both smile and do their special handshake thing!

Prithvi knocks on the door and Angad is shocked to see him!!!

Angad just turns around

P: Why did you turn around Angad? You cant look at me

Josh: Why are you here?

P: To talk to Angad...

Angad walks off w/o saying anything!!

Josh: What ever you wanted to tell him... tell me

P: I dont want to marry Kripa anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Josh is shocked!!

Josh: WHat?? Why?

P: Because Kripa and Angad belong together... and i just came in between

Josh: Do you know what you are saying?

P: Yes i am!!!!!

Josh is left thinking!!

Back at Khanna house

Naina is crying and crying and Karthik is like mom get over it!!

He's just jealous cuz Angad gets more attention!!

K: Why are you still crying? He wanted to leave on his own!!! So he left!! He doesnt care about us! So why should we?

Naina: He's my son!!!

Karthik roles his eyes!!!

Naina: I want him back into this house!!!! I will do what ever it takes!!!

Karthik is shocked!!!!

Kripa and Dadi are talking

P comes back...

P: Kripa i have decided not to get married to you!!!

Kripa is shocked!!!!!!!

Kripa: Why? did i do something???

P: No... Becuase if i married you.. i would be happy but a certain someone will be miserable!! and you know who i am talking about!!!

After a while they talk and talk... w/ Dadi of course....

Kripa decides to go and meet Angad!!!!!

P is happy!!! and so is dadi!!!

Kripa is going in her car but then the car breaks down....

Kripa gets furious.........

She walks to Josh's house.. when all of a sudden that guy kidnaps her...

He ties her up, blind folds her, and makes her sit in the back of the car

The driver sees this and is shocked...!!!!!!!

The driver gets to a near by phone...

He calls Prithvi but he's not answering.. He gets a hold of Angad and Angad runs to the rescue!!!!

The guy takes Kripa to some old scary house!!

Kripa doesnt know where she is!!!!

Angad is driving and looking all around but fails to find Kripa!!

Kripa's blind fold is taken off!!!!

She looks up and is shocked to see Damini and Mishty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay you guys the end!!

I will cont tomorrow!!!! Hope you guys liked it!!!!


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Posted: 19 years ago
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whii...that's gr8..plz continue soon yaar.. 😉
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that was sooooooo good!! i hope this really ends up happening! 😳
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Part 2

Kripa: You guys?

Damini: Yes!! Us!!!

Kripa is shocked!!

Kripa: Why????

D: Becuase you ruined my son's life once and i didnt want to happen again!!!!

M: Yes!!! And also.. you took Angad away from me!! You didnt want him and he didnt want to come by me!!

Kripa is sad and shocked

Meanwhile Angad is finding Kripa thinking where could she be!!

Prithvi calls up Josh

P: Has Kripa arrived there?

J: Here?? No...

P: She left an hour ago... she was gonna meet Angad

J: Are you sure?

P: Yes!!!!

J: Okay let me call you back

Josh calls up Angad

A: Hello Josh.. bad news Kripa is kidnapped again!!!

Josh is shocked!!!

J: What??

A: Yes and i am looking for her

Josh takes his car and starts looking for her.... at the same time he calls up Prithvi and informs him and he also looks

Kripa is tied up and is trying to get out but she cant

She is crying... and the other two are just looking on happily!!!

The guy who kidnapped her leaves.....

He is driving!!!

The three guys are looking for her... everywhere but no use!!!

Then all of a sudden Josh finds Angad...

They are both looking and then they spot the kidnapper....

He doesnt notice them... but he left his phone behind and turns back around and goes back

They follow him

They try to be quiet and then from a window they see Kripa

Angad is so sad!!!!!

Josh is like Poor gal

Damini and Mishty are just blabbering

Josh calls up Prithvi and informs him that Kripa has been spotted...

P: I will be there

J: You have to be here... because if i tell you then you wont believe us!!!

P: arrives there

Josh and Angad dont want him to see from the window... they want to catch them red handed!!

So they quietly open the door and they all three are caught!!!!

Damini and Mishty are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But not as much as Prithvi

P: Mom?? You????

Neither of them know what to say!!!!!

Josh unties Kripa.....

Luckily Angad informed the police so they were around the corner

They come in

D: No.. you cant take us to jail... Prithvi do something!!!!

They are pleading and pleading!!!

P: Inspector.. please arrest them!!!!

They are shocked

So are Angad, Josh and Kripa!!

P: I cant believe you two would stoop so low!!!!!

They take them away!!!

Kripa and Angad stare at each other!!!!!!

Angad turns around and has tears coming down.... P and Josh are standing right behind him and P notices it!!!

Angad just walks away!!!!

Kripa is just there helpless!!!!!

Angad goes into his own car and drives off!!!!

Kripa goes w/ Josh... cuz she really wants to meet Angad!!!

P just leaves on his own!!!

Khanna house:

Naina is worried about Angad.....

W/o informing anyone.... she goes to Josh's house.... and goes and meets him... because she knows thats the only place where he will be

Naina arrives there.......

Josh and Kripa arrive there as well

Naina mad dogs Kripa as always....

Angad is shocked to see his mom!!!!!!

Angad: Mom you?

Naina: Yes!!!

Angad: what are you doing here?

Naina: I am here to ask you the same thing!!!

Angad doesnt say a word

Naina: Why did you leave?

Angad: Just because i felt like it!!!

Naina: I hope someone wasnt a influence!!!

(Looking at Kripa at the same time)

Angad: No....

Naina: Why dont you come back home?

Angad: Why should i? No one cares about my happiness

Kripa and Josh want to pop the bubble and tell them that Karthik was behind it all....

Naina: Why are you saying that?

Angad: Thats it mom!! I dont want to talk about it.. its better if you just leave!!! Please!!!! I dont want to argue w. you!!!!

Naina is sad and she leaves

She walks out

Josh screams....

Josh: Why didnt you tell her??

Naina hears that and listens quietly

Angad: Tell her what?

Josh: That Karthik kicked you out!!!!!!!

Naina is shocked!!!!

Angad: Because!!!!

Kripa: Becuase why??? Karthik told me too!!!!

Naina is shocked.. and she gets a flashback when Kripa came that day to find Angad and then Kripa was by the door talking to Karthik

Angad: Look i dont want to talk about it!!!!!!!

Kripa is sad!!

Naina is even more sad!!!!!!!

Naina: (herself) Karthik kicked him out of the house?


Okay i will cont tomorrow!!!
Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 ya i reali liked it plz continue soon
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Thanx gulli for dedicatin this story to me. luv u very much
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Part 3

Josh: Okay i am going to leave you two alone

Josh leaves.... Naina is still watching

Angad and Kripa just stare at each other

Angad turns around.... Kripa is like what should i say?

Kripa: Angad??

Angad: Dont say anything!!

Kripa: Why???

Angad: Becuase

Kripa: But listen to me once

Angad: No

Naina is still listening

Kripa: You're in this mess because of me!!!

Angad: No... i did all of this because i want to see you happy!!

Kripa is sad

Kripa: but look at ur self

Angad: So...You said that i hope i live an unhappy life... but today i am happy because ur happy!!!!!!

Kripa: But i want you to be famous again!!!!!

Angad: Dont worry about me... worry about ur future......

Kripa is not gonna tell him that her and P arent getting married

Kripa: No.... Angad Khanna will be famous once again!!!!

Angad turns around and Kripa gives her hand and he gives her a five!!!

They smile!!!

Naina is like.... I will support you all the way... but i wont tell Karthik about anything!!!

Naina leaves....

Karthik is on the phone talking to someone....

Naina walks in so he hangs up

Naina is all mad!!!

K: Mom where did you go?

Naina: No where!!!

She mad dogs him and goes upstairs...

He's all wondering whats wrong w/ her?

Next day

Practice for the show begins

Kripa, Josh, and Angad.... are getting ready to do another show!!!!

Josh has his things down

Kripa and Angad are doing a song together

They kind of feel unconfy dancing together since its been so long

Kripa is just not getting it... Angad tries helping her

They finish the dance and at the end they stare at each other

Josh is smiling at them

Everyone claps and they get of dream land!!!

Josh: Hey that was excellent!!! Way to go!!

They just smile at him

1 week later

Day of the show and everyone is getting ready

Kripa is getting ready ... she looks good and so does Angad

The show is house full!!!

Everyone is cheering on Kripa..... but they dont know Angad is in the show!!

Naina quietly sneaks in and can see the stage!!! And she is watching!!

The show begins

There are some other dancers dancing...... crowd is cheering

Next up Josh performs...

Everyone is going crazy

Kripa comes up next!!

Then Angad comes......

The crowd is confused.....

Angad starts singing....... and then gets into it.. and everyone is looking at each other.... and everyone loves him and they cheer him on!!

Naina is like Whew!!! She is smiling and supporting him!!!

Next up for the finale.... Kripa and Angad's performane...

Naina's smile turns into a frown!!!

They are dancing and singing and everyone is going crazy!!!

Then Naina realizes that all of this is happening because of Kripa.. so she smiles!!

Kripa and Angad are almost finished....

And they finish it w/ a BANG!!!!!!

Everyone is clapping and screaming

And for the 1st time.. Naina is clapping!!!!!

Everyone is called on the stage indiviaully.....

When Angad comes out Naina is clapping w/ a smile!!!

Angad sees her... but Naina doesnt notice and she just walks off!!!

Angad is wondering why was she here?

Naina is walking on the road.. No car this time and she is thinking... about everything she has done to Angad

Angad goes back stage and runs out and is running behind Naina

Angad: MOM?????

Naina doesnt hear

Angad: MOM??

Naina turns around and is shocked

Angad: mom.. what were you doing here?

Naina: Nothing!!

Angad: Mom dont lie...

Naina: Just wanted to see my son's performance!!

Angad: came to see or cause trouble!!

She's sad

Naina: Listen.. i heard everything last week after i left

Angad is shocked

Angad: About?

Naina: You know what!!

Angad looks down

Naina: I havent talked to Karthik...

Angad: Dont say anything!!!

Naina: But why?

Angad: Because!!

Naina agrees!!!

Naina: I am really truly sorry for everything i have done!!!

Angad: How do i know its not one of your tricks???

Naina: Its not!!!!

Angad doesnt seemed convinced!!

Naina: And.. i want you to do one more thing for me.....

Angad: What?

Naina: But promise me that you will do it....

Angad: tell me 1st and i will try

Naina: Marry Kripa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad is shocked!!

Naina is smiling

Naina: Yes!!!!!

Angad hugs Naina!!

But Naina is really serious this time!!! No joking!!!!

Angad goes back.... and Naina turns around... and starts walking but before she takes a step Kripa is standing...

Naina: Kripa? You?

Kripa: Yes!!!

Naina doesnt know what to say

Kripa: You want me and Angad to get married?? Why??

Naina: Um...

Kripa: How do i know that this isnt one ur tricks to ruin me?

Naina is shaking her head

Naina: No its not!!!.. I heard everything.. last week.... about Angad!!!

Kripa: What makes you think that i will agree to marry him?

Naina: Because deep down you still have feelings for him!!!

Kripa is shocked.. and she knows its true!!!!!

Naina: And for everything he did for you.... you two are made for each other!!!!

Kripa just looks at her

Naina walks off and Kripa is left thinking

Kripa goes back.....

Josh: Angad.. that was one of the best shows!!!!

He's so happy Angad is still looking at him!!!!

Kripa walks in and they both stare at each other and both of them are thinking of Naina's words!!!!

Angad takes her things and leaves...

Josh: Hey.. where are you going??

Kripa: Home

Josh: W/ who?

Kripa: I dont know

Josh: Angad.... take her home!!!!

Angad is like "Josh"

Kripa is blushing!!!

Angad and Kripa are in the car...... no one says anything!!

Then all of a sudden Angad puts his arms around her...

Kripa is shocked.. and she enjoys it... and they both smile...

But then it was just Kripa's imagination

The house is here.. and Kripa gets down...

He helps w/ her things and he takes them in the house... and there is dadi....

Dadi looks at Angad....

Angad looks down

Kripa goes to her room

Angad is trying to leave

Dadi: Angad!!?

Angad turns around

Dadi: Come here!!!

Angad: Yes dadi!!

Dadi hugs him and Angad is like in heaven!!!!! After a long time....

Angad starts crying!!!!

Dadi: Take good care of her!!!!!

Angad: Who??

Dadi: kripa who else!!!

Angad: But.. i just dropped her off here!!!

Dadi thought something else!!!

Dadi: Oh.., you guys..

Angad: No!!!.. Anyways i better get going....

Dadi is like " Darn... "

Angad gets in his car.. and Kripa is looking out the window and Angad sees her too and they stare at each other for a while

Angad gets into his car and drives off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



OKay the end!! I will cont 2nite!!!!!!!!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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i loved it!!! i love theway you write i also read your tumhari disha fan-fic!!
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wow this is so cool plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do cotinue i just love it
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Part 4

Kripa is thinking about Angad and vice versa w/ Angad!!

They show flashbacks of their precious times together!!!

They both are smiling!!

Next Morning:

Its all over the paper about last night performaces.. and the front page picture is of Kripa and Angad!!!!!!!

Karthik reads it

K: Mom, look at this!!!! Heh.. what does he think of himself?

Naina reads and she is happy!! But w/ Karthik she pretends she's mad!!

Naina: Look at him!! he thinks we are nuthing to him!!

K: This is your son!!!! And this is all of Kripa!!! One min she loves him.. next min she throws him like trash

Naina is getting really pissed off!!

She throws the papers and leaves!!!!

Karthik has a smile on his face

Josh, Angad, and Kripa are together.. and they see the paper as well..

Angad and Kripa look at it...

Josh: Wow!! Dont you guys just look great!!!!

Angad and Kripa just look at each other

The three of them decide to go and have breakfast together and the press is outside....

There are a lot of fans as well and they ask for all three of thier autographs!!!

There are so many people.. .and Kripa cant take it.....

Angad sees her and takes her away

Angad: Okay... no more!!!!.... Kripa lets go...

All three sit in a car....

Kripa is relieved

Josh: Are you okay?

Kripa: Yeah i am fine!!!

They go and have breakfast..... and go back to Josh's place

The phones are ringing and ringing and people are just calling about the performance.. and fans want to see another one

Infact they only want Angad and Kripa to perform!!!!

Both of them are shocked!!

Deep inside.. both of them would love to do it.. but are scared what the other might say

Josh: Well what do you guys say?

Angad: I dont know!!!

Josh: You dont know? This is ur oppurtunity here!!! Come on go for it!!!

Angad: Nah!!!

Josh: You Kripa....??

Kripa: Well if he says no.. then...

Josh: He will say yes!!! Come on!!!

Angad: Okay i will do it!!

Josh: Yes.. thats the way!!!!!

Angad and Kripa are practicing for the show....

Kripa twists her ankle.. and Angad is there for the rescue...

Kripa: Ouch!!! My ankle!!!

She cant walk..

Angad picks her up...... and takes her out..

Kripa is looking at him while Angad is looking straight...

Angad sits her down.... . He gets an ice pack and puts it on her

Angad: How does it feel?

Kripa: It still hurts..... Ouch!!!!

Angad: Look if u dont want to do it...

Kripa: No i will!!!!

After a couple of hours... it gets better!!!

Angad tells her to take it easy for Kripa says she can handle it

After practice.... everyone leaves....

Kripa has a driver so he takes her.......Angad knows about that but kinda feels sad cuz he cant take her

Kripa leaves

After 10 mins.. Angad sees that she forgot her phone...

So he leaves and goes and gives it to her

On the way.. some cars are following Kripa....

They dont notice....

Then all the cars are surrounded....

Kripa is scared... she tries to call but realizes she doesnt have her phone....

She panics!!!

7 guys come out and tell her to get out....

Kripa locks the door....

Guy 1: Really?? ur not going to open it....

The guy has a bat and he breaks mirror in the front...

Kripa is crying....

The break the window where Kripa was sitting and they open it...

They pull her out from there

Kripa: Let go!!!!

Guy 2: Man... i want her!!!!

Kripa is so scared!!!

All the guys gather around her.....

Kripa cant go anywhere!!!

The guys try to go up to her to touch her but she slaps one of em...

He gets mad

Guy: No one has ever slapped me like that before!!!! Today i am going to teach you a lesson that your not going to ever forget!!!!!

Kripa just looks

He pushes her down..... rips her blouse some what and is about to get on top of her...but he gets kicked by someone.....

That person is the one and only Angad!!!!

Kripa is crying!!!!

Angad: what were you about to do?

Guy: Hey.. who are you??? She's ours.... go get your own!!!

That makes Angad so mad!!! 😡

Angad just punches him!!!!

Angad: You mess w/ her.. you mess w/ me!!!!

Guy: Hey.... what is she to you?

Angad: You want to really know...... I love her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa is shocked!!!!!!!!!

Guy: Oh look... boyfriend and girlfriend!!!!!! How sweet!!!

Angad just gets so mad... he beats the crap out of all of them......

They all run away!!!!

Angad looks at Kripa.....She's just crying.....

Angad goes by her.. he helps her up.... and gives her his jacket to wear....

Kripa cant take it anymore and just hugs him!!!!!!!!!!

While hugging she is also crying!!!!!!

Angad takes her home.........

She's so sad about what was about to happen to her.... she's just a statue..

She's home.... The car has stopped but she hasnt noticed....

Angad gets down and opens her door

Angad: Kripa....???!!!

Kripa is so lost!!

Angad: Kripa?!!

Kripa: Huh?

Angad: Ur home!!!

Kripa walks in and Angad walks her to her room....

Angad: Just get some rest!!! You'll be fine by tomorrow!!!!

Angad is about to leave but Kripa holds his hand...

Angad is shocked

Kripa: (She hesistes) Can you stay w/ me?

Angad nods his head..

The "I Love you" is echoing in Kripa's mind!!!!

Kripa: Angad...

Angad: Yeah

Kripa: When.. you said to them... that you..

Angad: I love you!!!!!!!

Kripa looks at him

Angad: I know what you're going to say so just let me have it...

Kripa looks at him...

Kripa: I love you too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad is like shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa smiles and so does he........ and they both hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dadi listened from outside.... and she is smiling!!!!!!!



Okay the end!! i will cont tomorrow!!!
Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago

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