My FanFic: Continuation from 082504 - Page 15

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Posted: 20 years ago
that was too good yaar 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
wonderful job 👏
please contiue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 43

Mishty is thinking to herself that she has to get Angad all to herself but how?

She is thinking and thinking

She hates Kripa

K knows the truth about her

She thinks that only way Angad will come to her is if Kripa loses her baby

Cuz then he would feel bad and not go by her

She thinks of some way for Kripa to lose her baby

But how?

Becuz that way once Angad comes to her she wont let him go

She smiles to herself

M comes to Khanna house

K sees her and tells her to get out

M says sorry and acts like she means it

She tells K not to say anything

K is mad

M begs

K gives in

M is like yes!!! he bought it

Now M is back in the house

She is thinking soon this is will her house

She looks around

She sees Angad

She smiles

Then she sees Kripa

It turns into a frown

All say hi

Then they all sit down

M and Kripa go into the kitchen

Both are talking

M is trying to think of something but nothing is coming to her head

K is watching them from behind

He has a feeling that M might do something!!

He thinks yes and no!!

But doesnt know!!

he is confused!!

He tells himself that he will keep an eye on M!!


The end!
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry it was short!!! i am tired went out! cuz of navrati!!! but i wanted to put something better than nothing!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
very nice
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👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx...hope u enjoy the navratri like i will next week 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful
i hope kripa doesn't lose her baby 😭 😭 😭
contiue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
very nice guli keep it up and continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry no update!! dont have time becuz of Navarti!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 44

K decides to watch all of M's moves

even though she is acting all nice K thinks that she can do anything!

He watches her

Couple of days later

M hires people to mess the brakes up in Kripa's car

The job is done

M smiles

She calls Kripa up and tells her if she would join her in a little shopping

Kripa thinks to see if she is busy

Then she says yes

M is like perfect!

kripa informs k that when Angad comes tell him that she is going with m

K is shocked!!

he tries stopping her but cant give a valid excuse of why she cant go!

Kripa leaves

She starts driving

She is driving slowly

K is worried that something is going to happen but doesnt know what!!

K informs Angad

Angad is like M cant do that

K is like yes she can

Angad calls up Kripa

Kripa says she is fine

K decides to grab his car and follow Kripa

K calls Kripa and asks her where she is

Kripa is wondering why does K want to know where i am?

She is curious

Kripa tells her

While talking she tries to brake but they wont

Kripa is shocked!!!!

She is still on the phone

Kripa: Oh my god!!!!

K: What?

Kripa: I cant brake!!

K is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K:What??

Kripa: My brakes arent working

K rushes and speeds up

K is telling her not to panick

Kripa is crying and scared

She looks down at her stomach!!

K calls Angad

Angad is shocked

He gets into his car

Kripa is driving out of control

She is driving left to right right to left

People are thinking she is crazy

K catches up with her

he is next to her

K tells her that nothing will happen

Angad arrives

She is the middle

Kripa is yelling help

Angad tells her to let her foot go off of the excelarator

She does

But nothing

The car is still going

K thinks he has to do something

But what?

K stops his car

Since Kripa's foot isnt on it

The car is still going but not to fast

K is running behind kripa's car

Angad and Kripa are wondering what he is doing

Meanwhile M is enjoying herself becuz she knows that Kripa wont make it to her house

She smiles

Back to the scene

K needs a way to get Kripa out of that car

But bad news is on the way

there are going towards a dead end 1 mile away

Kripa is screaming

Angad doesnt know what to do

K is still running

Kripa's car isnt going to fast

K tells Kripa to take off her seat belt

Kripa is yelling no

K: Just do what i say!!! Please!!! take off ur seatbelt

She does

K: I need you to hold on to the wheel

They are getting close to the dead end

Angad is going crazy

K opens the door slowly

kripa screams

The car is going at about 35 miles per hour

K tells her to adjust the seat even more back

She does

K is doing this wierd thing.....

The door is still open

He tells her to put her arms around him

The dead end is coming

K quickly takes her out of the car And carries her but she hits her stomach on the door.....

And she yells

Angad stops his car and gets out

Kripa's car is still going and crashes and her whole car is messed up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Kripa is yelling in pain

Angad takes her and take her to the hospital

M hears about it

She is happy!!! that she is in the hospital

She goes there pretending to be all sad

Everyone is there

They are waiting for the doc to come out

Angad is worried

So is K!!

Angad thanx K!!

Nice little brother moment!

They both hug!!!

Everyone smiles

Doc comes out

Angad: How is Kripa????

Doc: well she did hit her stomach

Everyone is shocked and sad

Doc: but.....


Misthy is waiting for the doc to say that she lost her baby!!!!


ANgad: but what??

Everyone is waiting!!



The end!

What happens??? find out later!!!!!


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