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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome gulli...finally mishty will be caught
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PArt 36

K notices the wrapper

He sees it

There one one extra pill in there

He notices its the same one that he found

K: Misty?? It cant be!! Why?

M and Kripa come back into the kitchen

K turns around

M is shocked that K has seen it

He looks at her

K notices the face she had like she has got caught

K: What is this Misthy?

M: What is that?

Kripa is confused!

K: Shouldnt you know it fell out of ur pocket!

M: My pocket are you sure?

K: Yes!! And its funny becuz thats the same pill that i found the other day when the glass spilled over

M: Are you accusing me??? Why would i do that?

Kripa's cell rings

She goes

Misthy tells that its Kripa doing all of that

M: Yes she told me not to say anything. I think when i put my jacket there she put it in to make it look i did it!

K is thinking should i believe her or not?

Misthy tries hard to convince that its Kripa

K: You expect me to by that!! When i saw it last time Kripa was upstairs becuz she had fainted!!!!! So now all of a sudden you expect me to believe that??

M is thinking now what

Kripa comes back

K: Kripa? Why did you put this M's pocket

Kripa: I what??

K: yeah Misthy said that you put it in her pocket so you wouldnt get caught

Kripa: What is that?

K: You should know becuz you put it

Kripa: I didnt put anything!!!

M is all of a sudden quiet

K: M, why arent you saying anything??? 1st you were telling me that she did it and when i am asking her you arent saying anything!!

M is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Al is sad!!

She is missing Josh

Josh is with Angad

The phone rings all day for Josh

Al gets tired of answering calls

Kripa is calling the house

Al: I have told you people Josh is not at home

Kripa: Al?? Its me Kripa

Al: Oh Kripa??? Sorry!!

K: Its okay!! what are you doing?

AL: Nothing!

K: Come on lets go out

Al: NO i am not in the mood

K: Oh come on please

Al agrees to make her happy

Kripa is happy that she has agreed!!


Okay i am at skool and i have a time limit no one is waiting for a comp so be back in 1 min!! cuz it logs me off!!
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Part 37

Kripa is happy that she has agreed!

They both go out

Kripa is smiling and have fun

Al is like what ever

Kripa: Come on Al!! what happened?? How come ur not having fun?

Al: I am!!

Kripa: Oh come on!! it doesnt seem like it

Al: i am!

Kripa: Al.. why are you hiding it from me?? You can tell me!!!

Al: Tell you what?

Kripa: Look i heard you yesterday talking to your friend

Al is shocked!!!

Kripa: Why dont you talk to Josh about it?

Al: No!! and neither should you!!!

Kripa: But..

Al: No you cant! i dont want him to worry becuz of me!! now come on just have fun!!

Kripa is sad!

Al just walks

So they do some shopping and what not

Josh and Angad are talking

They are guys what do they talk about

Kripa and Al finish their shopping

AL goes home 1st

Kripa goes to the studio to pick up Angad

She arrives

A: Kripa?? How many times do i have to tell you stay at home! you need ur rest!

K: Oh come on!! I am fine!!

Josh: Yeah you should listen to him!!!

K: Josh you're suppose to be on my side

Josh: Hey i am not taking sides!!! fine i will stay out b4 i get accused!!

kripa sits

A: How much money did you spend?

K: How do you know i went shopping

A: I can see that glow in ur face!

K: A lot!

A: How many times do i tell you dont by too much stuff!!

K: What i cant help it! and plus me and Al had fun!!!

J: AL?? You went with her!!

K: yes why?

J: No nothing!! just wondering!!

K: Is everything okay between the two of you?

J: Yeah why??

K: No just asking

J: Did she say anything????

K: No!!! i guess you were getting a lot of phone calls so she got annoyed!

J: Yeah i have to tell them to stop calling my house phone!! they dont listen

Josh excuses himself

A: What was that about? Why did you ask him that?

K: becuz!

A: Kripa??? Tell me

K: Theres nothing to tell

A: Kripa.. u cant lie to me

K: really

Angad gives that look

K: Okay okay

She tells him

Angad is shocked to hear that

But its not Josh's fault cuz he doesnt even know

Kripa tells A not to tell him

A says okay!!

Josh comes back

They both stop talking about it

J: So guys... i am done for today!! i am going home!!!!

They say bye

Josh goes home

Al has just started putting some things away

Josh comes home and hugs her from behind

Al is surprised that he is home early

J: Hey listen

Al: yeah

J: Look Kripa told everything today

Al is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Al: She did??

Josh: Yeah.. why didnt you tell me

AL is quiet

She is thinking Kripa told him!!!!!

J: Look i promise it wont happen again!

Al is shocked!!!

J: And to make the thing better i will tell them to stop!!!!!

Al is confused

AL: Huh? Stop

J: yeah iw will tell them to call my cell

Al is like whats he talking about

Al" Wait.. what are you talking about?

J: The phone calls!!!

AL: Phone calls???

J: yes Kripa told me you wer getting them all day!!!

Al is relieved!!!

Al: Oh the phone calls!!!

J: Yeah what did u think i was talking about

Al: Nothing!!! i was confused

J goes and changes his clothes

Al is relieved!!

Back at Khanna house

K knows that it was Mishty but he has to find out why???

There has to be a reason for this

K: why did she do it? what did i do to her?

He thinks and thinks

He decides to go to her house

M is shocked to see him there!!!!!!!!!!




The End!



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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great...plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
GULI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i just caught up and it is awsome!!!! i love it!!! ughhh....stupid mishty!!! i hate her....continue sooN!!
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Part 38

M is shocked seeing Karthik there

M: You?

K tells her that he knows that its her

So why doesnt she just say it

M denies

K gets tired and blows his top

M finally tells him

He is shocked!!

M tells him why she did it

K is so mad

He accused Kripa and even slapped her

But M is like she wants Angad back

K: are you crazy?? now you totally are losing it!!!

M says she will do anything to have him back

K cant believe it

he just leaves from there

M is like now hes gonna tell everyone

K doesnt say anything

Meanwhile

Josh is with Angad

Al is sad

She is relieved that Kripa didnt say anything

Josh still doesnt know

Angad tells Josh to stop for today

Josh is like why

Angad just says why dont you spend time with Al and what not

Josh says that she doesnt mind

Angad knows what he wont say anything!!

Angad is like whatever

They both cont

Al is at home thinking of what to do

She is bored

She wants to spend time with Josh

But doesnt have the guts to say anything

Josh comes home

Al is happy

She starts talking

She blurts out why dont they go out

Josh says he's to tired

Al is sad

Josh says next time

He was to tired

Al goes to sleep early

Josh is goes in and sees her sleeping already

He's like whatever

Next Morning

Josh isnt there

He is talking on his phone

Al comes out

Josh rushes to leave

Al says does he have to go

Josh is like yes

Al tries to stop him but no use

Josh leaves

Kripa comes in

Kripa notices what happened

She cant do anything or else she would talk to him

Al just tells Kripa

Kripa thinks she has to do something!!!!!!


The End
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great guli plz continue soon
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Part 39

Kripa goes to practice and watch the guys

Prithvi and Mishty come

M sees happy to see Angad

But then she sees Kripa and she gets mad

She says hi to them

P gets a phone call so he has to go

M is alone

She watches the practice but is mostly watching Angad

She is smiling looking at him

Afterwards

She realizes that she doesnt have a ride

So she goes outside

She does something to Angads car

Comes back in

She tells Angad that she doesnt have a ride

Angad says he will drop her off

She is happy

After practice

Angad takes M

Kripa stays with Josh so she can talk to him

Angad is driving

M is so happy that she's in the front seat of the car

Then all of a sudden the car stops

M is smiling

Angad checks but cant seem to fix the problem

He tries calling Kripa or Josh

But neither of them can hear there phone

He is mad

M is like finally i have to myself

She comes to him and pretends that she is worried

Kripa is talking to Josh about just things

Then she mentions Al

Josh is like okay!! blah blah blah

K: So when are you two lovebirds gonna go on a honeymoon??

J: Dont kno yet i think after the show

K: Dont you think you spend time with her then be here!

J: Yes but i have to work you know

K: Oh come on Josh!!

J: what? I want to be with her all day but i have to do this

K: Well what if she feels that you dont spend time with her?

J: I know she hasnt

K: what if she does

J: Then i would stop what i was doing and go to her

K: really?

J: yes! nothing is important than her

K: So then why dont you be with her now?

J: I am almost done i will leave

Kripa checks her watch

She realizes they have been talking for 1 hour

She goes home

She finds that Angad isnt there

She calls his phone

Angad's phone is ringing (but doesnt have much signal)

But he cant get to it

M does

She sees its Kripa

She cuts her off

A: Who was that?

M: I dont know you lost signal so i couldnt see

A is like dam

Kripa is shocked

She calls again

But M does the same

Kripa gets mad

She stops calling him

Angad tries to fix the problem but nothing

So they start walking

They both talk

M is lost in his talks

K comes to Kripa

He asks her whats wrong?

Kripa says nothing

K insists on her telling him

So she does

K: but where did he go?

Kripa: to drop M home

K is shocked

He knows its probably her plan

Kripa: what are you thinking?

K: Huh nothing

Kripa walks off

K goes into his car and looks for them

M is walking closer

Angad doesnt notice

Then after 10 mins

A car is coming

Its K

He comes and picks them up

She is mad

K is smiling saying you wont get him!!!

Angad comes home

Kripa is upstairs mad

A: Kripa!!!!

He comes and puts his arms around her

Kripa: Dont talk to me

A: Why?

K: Becuz you cut me off!!

A: what?

K: I called you how come you didnt pick up?

A: I didnt have signal and plus the car broke down

K: what?

A: yes! and i didnt get service

K: Oh!!

She feels a lil better

Meanwhile

Josh comes home

Al cooked dinner

She gets it ready

Josh doesnt eat

Al is sad

She cooked and he doesnt even eat it

She tried telling him to eat but hes not hungry

She puts it away

He sits on the couch

She goes into the room

She wants the Josh that she knew before they got married

After he changed so much

Thats what she thinks

Josh comes in

Sees her

Comes next to her

Al asks if he has to go practice tomorrow

J: yes why?

Al wants to tell him not 2 but she doesnt have the guts

Al: just asking


She is sad


The End


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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great guli plz continue soon...hope josh realizes how alliyah feels soon...and keep up the great work
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Posted: 20 years ago
Hey everyone!!!! so sorry today but there is no update!!! reason... i didnt do my homework and i have to write a 2 1/2 page essay!! and its due tomorrow!!! this time i waited last min!! so i will cont tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!! so sorry!!!! thanx!!

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