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Posted: 16 years ago
Abey OOOOOOOOOOOO.........
Continue na !!😒
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Posted: 16 years ago

But …bang came a thought ..n arya almost felt numb bout the idea….She called up sumbody again…..

"Abhimanyu!!!!"

"bol raha hun!!! "

"Tu ponhonch gaya na !!!! "

"Yes!!! …..its been jus 10 minutes…. "

"n Ryan!!!!! ….. I was always very scared bout this part of the plan!!!"

"I noe!!!…u were completely against it…but u dun worry….kuchh nahi hoga usko …I made sure to reach here in time…n humaara maksad Ryan ko maarna kabhi nahi tha"

" I noe…. How is he!!!!"……her voice became eager

"In the operation theater ….all the arrangements were already done much before I reached here …there are the best doctors doing their best …..I'm sure he'll come out fit n kicking"

" yes I trust Rizwaan sir….nothing can be wrong if he is there….chal … bye"….this time she was on the verge of sobbing

"hey stop it haan….. he is alive ..nt that what they r showing in the news out there"

"I noe…u take care"

"Bye"

This side there was someone who dint think of it as merely a coincidence …. None other than Ryan's sweetest enemy Robert…

"They think I'm fool"….said he …to one of his chelas

"wat do u think sir"

"u noe …what it means by no dead body"

"Wat????"

"Ryan is alive …I'm sure…this must be a plan by Samuels to protect him frm the police after what he did in the night club…. This guy has guts …tried to shoot Christine D'sousa !!!!!"

On samuels's side……

"This cant be true…..Ryan cant be dead"….samuels's voice was heavy

"but sir…… he was declared dead in the hospital only….its another matter altogether that his body is missing"

"that bas***d Robert must have done this……if he cudnt get Ryan when he was alive …why nt take himwhen he is dead….Robert is sick….but still I cant believe it….Ryan cant be dead!!!!….he was my ace ….. nobody can be like him…..nobody!!!!"

So now u see …there is a third party behind it …Samuels thinks its Robert n Robert thinks its Samuels…but yes Robert is right …no dead body means RYAN IS ALIVE……HE JUS CANT DIE SO EASILY……

It was 2 hours that Ryan was in the operation theater ….n this was the time that the doctor came out….. Abhimanyu chauhan (gaurav Chopra)…. Was standing there with a very smart n man of great personality Rizwaan Shah (Nasserruddin shah) were standing there waiting for the doctor to come…Rizwaan sir's expression were at ease……as if doctor was goin to say the things he knew very well….Abhimanyu was a little tensed …but Rizwaan sir was right like always…because the doctor's expressions proved it very well

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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry aaj bas ek part....cant help it u noe....I have my internal exams on Saturday...n I've jus started reading ....so I cant say I'll be able to post the next parts before saturday..... sorry to keep u guys in suspense....some new charecters have come through ...n all I can say that they r linked with sumthing really important in Ryan's life....so keep reading ...n dont hate me for the suspense I've created ...next part will unfold the mystry n unfold all ur questions...waise I hope ye padh ke kuch confusions clear ho jaayein.....
N jaanvi Ryan parts will soon be right back into the story....but pls guys dun complain .....Arya has to be given equal footage as jaanvi...my story has 4 main charecters ...Sid to waise bhi nahi aa pa raha hai story mein
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Posted: 16 years ago
Akkkiiiiii..........me going to grab u and beat u up larki.........!!
Aise edge-of-the-seat parts likhke choding......!!
Ab 2 parts bache hain post karne............jaldi karo post........And u better get Jhanvi to meet Ryan soooooooooooooooooooooon,aj hi !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i completely agree wid vandu dii haan
nt fair & nt done at all ek to 1 hi part 4 the day & uper se on the edge part😔
aise na kiya karo yaar
& haan jaldi ab dusra wala post karo wil b w8ing
saturday se exams shuru ho rahe hai hosake to 1/2 parts plzz usse pehle post kardo na
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Posted: 16 years ago

The police finally declared to the press that the body went missing…n they r trying to find it out …but this in any case wont serve the purpose …becz the dead body wont say by itself why it tried to kill Christine D'sousa……

On this isde Doctor came out all smiling……

"The patient is fine …..we successfully got the bullet out of his abdomen….but u noe it was the difference of jus 2inches…..had the bullet been hit 2 inches above …..he cudnt have survived "

Abhimanyu looked very very guilty …but Rizwaan Shah put hands on his shoulders…he said curtly …

"But it was 2 inches below right !!!!"

Doctor laughed …..

"sahi mein Rizwaan Sahab ….aapse koi bhi nahi jeet sakta…."

"Main bhi kuch aisa hi sochta tha …jab us ladke (ryan) ka baap zinda tha…"

"I noe…..malhotra sir was the best fighter ever"….Abhimanyu said softly…he continued……

"Kitna sunaa hai maine unke bare mein aapse….subah shaam …. Kitna achha hota agar aaj wo humaare beech hote…."

Rizwaan shah felt very proud to hear such words of honour to his best friend Raj….

"Isliye to ye sab kiya……only this man can fill that place Raj left twenty years ago…he has got it…the same spark , the same ability , the same courage….."…he said pointing at the operation theater

"Bas bas sir …ab aap fir se shuru mat hona….kyunki agar ek baar aap shuru ho jaate hain unke bare mein ….then there is no full stop…"…..Abhi said laughing n was soon joined by the doctor n Rizwaan saahab himself…..

"I want to see that boy for once…u noe when he was 4 years old ….I came to visit Raj… he(Ryan) came to open the door for me n wen I asked him what his name was ….what he said u noe…. If u dunno my name…..why u came out here….hahahaha…. he was a very naughty child…Christine bhabhi always complained bout his mis deeds when I went there…."

Saying this he went to see Ryan …who was still inside the operation theater…. He kindly caressed his forehead with luv as he was his own son…..

"ise kehte hain kudrat ka karishma ….. Raj hume bhale hi chodd gaya ho … lekin sath mein chod gaya tumhe …… kyunki iss poori duniya mein agar Raj jaisa ya us se behtar koi ho sakta hai …to wo was tum ho…. Jyaada der mat soye rehna …bohot se adhure kaam poore karne hain tumhe…."

Saying this he again touched his forehead n left …..

This side Arya was trying Abhi's number …but it was switched off….she kept on trying but nothing happened …..finally she tried Rizwaan sir….

"Sir abhi phone kyun nahi utha raha hai ….is everything fine…."

"Yes yes my child…that red light …which freaked all of u has been off for quite a time now!!!!!"

"Which red light!!!"

Abhimanyu snatched the phone from him …..

"The red light on the OT …miss tubelight"

"U bas***d ….loafer no 1 ….. u inhuman cockroach…phone uthaane mein itni problem thi tujhe …ki kameeney saandh tune apna cell swich off rakha "

"Kya karun …tujhe sataane mein to mujhe badaa maza aataa hai"

"aane de mujhe ….dekhti hun tujhe main ….jaise tune ryan ko shoot kiya tha na …waise hi main tujhe shoot karungi …wo bhi tere sar mein"

She cut the phone….Rizwaan sir laughingly said to stop these kinds of childish activities…n went away ….Abhimanyu's guilt returned….Rizwaan sir saw this…

"Humne tumhe bola tha aisa karne ko ….ur nt guilty my boy …n Ryan …wo baap pe gaya hai …aisi maamuli si cheez se usko kuch ho bhi nahi sakta tha"

Abhimanyu hugged him warmly like a small child…..

Now I must clear what exactly happened that night…..

First Arya meaningfully talked to Christine bout Ryan …Christine became anxious to see Ryan …..then she reached the night club …where abhimanyu dressed as waiter made to drink him 6 shots one by one ….Ryan was now out of senses …then came Arya n got involved in talks with Ryan …..suddenly Christine entered n Ryan cudnt help it coz the mental trauma that existed in him…..he began to move towards Christine with the murdereous eyes….only then the security guards ran towards him to stop him…by this time Abhi had changed into the security guard…..he got hold of him …n even Ryan noticed that …this man started pointing gun into his Abdomen…but by now there were so many guards …n he wasn't even able to move ….Arya took out Christine safely frm the night club …n only then Abhimanyu was successful in shooting Ryan……In the van in which Ryan was taken to the hospital….Abhi made sure that he put the icepack on tha place where Ryan was shot to perevent as much blood loss as he can…he even insisted to go to the nearest nursing home ….. The doctor who came to see Ryan had no choice but to declare him brought dead…because his family was abducted …..The security guards tried to call the police but abhi insisted that …since the guy is dead …..they should wait for the police to cum by themselves….Police never arrived ….The people who arrived dressed as police were Abhimanyu's team mates ……n then they brought him to the Base ……..where preparations were already made for operating him…when Ryan was being carried with them …Abhi made him wear the oxygen mask so that his breath doesn't stop!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kool part
lekin abhi bhi samaj ni aaya ke ye sab kis liye? wat do they want frm ryan😕
acha temme whre's jaanvi & wen will ryan b bak in action?
story going slow re lekin fir bhi fun 2 read the confusion as well😛
acha ab jaldi se ek naya kool part post karo me w8ing theek hai!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmm........OK !!
Ye kya tha but??
Mereko ye to samaj aya ki kya hua !
But ye kyun hua???
Ye uske dad ke friendz hain.........to y did they purposely make ryan do this......And it means ki Arya police me nahi hai???
Ughhh.........M gonna go mad now !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey aakii; sorry for late reply....hope itz k..😳.......the update was fabulous.. relli well written nd the story's goin gr88..!! yayyy.. ryan's is olrite..!! woww.. u're goin gr88 swthrt..plzzzz continue soon..😳
Edited by kuhu98pihu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Hmm........OK !!

Ye kya tha but??
Mereko ye to samaj aya ki kya hua !
But ye kyun hua???
Ye uske dad ke friendz hain.........to y did they purposely make ryan do this......And it means ki Arya police me nahi hai???
Ughhh.........M gonna go mad now !!

Part toh I dunno wen I'm gonna post....(may be kal)....so better that I clear up confusions...well they wud have been cleared in the next part only but ab If I'm nt posting then will have to do this
!st question: why did they do this?
To cut his connection with the crime world....dead cant work for the underworld right!!!! he had got into bad ways of life but he had got it in him that made him an imp person ....so they had to spare him in any case
Arya is in holland police...she is jus helping out Rizwaan sir ...n in doin this she fell for him...she came with the purpose but u noe when its Ryan...........

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