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Posted: 17 years ago
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episode 5 :

all the 3 reach adventure world...as soon as they reach gauri looks up into the sky stretches both her hands and takes a round (lol, did u all get what i m trying to say? 😆)

g:woooooooooow.... pratham, tumhe yaad hai ham yahan aakhri baar kab aaye the ?

p: (thinking) ham yahan pehle bhi aaye hai kya? 😕

g: (disappointed) stupid tumhe yaad nahi😭 yaad nahi ham yahan hamari school ki picnic karne aaye the ?? duffer ... sab bhool gaye ho ...

p: sach? mujhe to yaad nahi ... (he winks at mayuri... actually nw he cud recall but still hes making fun of gauri)

g: (very sad) tum apne is dimag me sirf medical ki hi padhai ki jagah rakhte ho kya?? thoda aur bhi kuch yaad rakha karo..

m: nahi woh kya hai na di , jab tak india me the thik the .. ab do din se tumhare saath reh reh kar phir se buddhu ho gaye hai ...

g: kyaaaa ... mere saath rehkar?? teri to ... idhar aa ab batati hu tujhe ...
gauri is running behind mayuri when....

p: arey gauri .. gauri arey yahan aao .. mujhe sab yaad hai.....

gauri stops running behind mayuri listening this ...

g: kya to tum mera mazaak uda rahe the?? (and starts running behind pratham)

p: arey nahi nahi ... main nahi .. (gauri stops) ham dono, main aur mayuri dono ...

(gauri has this big eyes with kyaaaaaaaa and again starts running behind him)

p: ok chalo sorry , ab tum jo bologi woh main karunga yahan ok ....

gauri calms down .. pratham again winks at mayuri..

m: hahahahahah.... hans hans ke mera pet dukhne lag gaya hai .. chalo ab mujhe bhook lagi hai .. pratham bhaiyya kuch khilao...

g: kyaa... moti tujhe to hamesha bhook hi lagti hai ..yahan ham khane nahi aaye hai .. rides par maze lene aaye hai...

m: woh sab mujhe nahi malum .. mujhe bhook lagi hai

p: ok bolo tumhe kya khana hai .. burger , pizza, ??

m: eeew.. woh sab nahi khana...thts all fattening ... mujhe ice cream ki bhook lagi hai ...😉

p&g: kya? ice cream ki bhook😕 kya ice cream fattening nahi hai😕

m: haan woh bhi two ice cream

p: ok . memsahab as u wish ...gauri tumhe kuch ?

g: umm .. nahi ... accha thik hai .. ek diet coke le aao 😃

p: hehe .. thik hai ...

pratham goes 2 the ice cream parlor to get 2 icecreams for mayuri and diet coke for gauri ... he gets one ice cream for himself as well ...gauri n mayuri are waiting there for him and teasing each other as always ... just then gauri looks tht pratham is coming ..she sees tht pratham is not comfortable to handle 3 icecream cones and the diet coke can .. he has some personal bag with him as well... she gets an idea... she runs away from there when mayuri gets busy with some other child ....she slowly comes behind pratham and points him with her finger on his back and shouts "STATUE" and comes in front laughing loudly ... now pratham is all in a fix...

g: ab aaya unth pahaad ke neeche .... us din mayuri se milkar mera mazak kiya tha na party me ... ab meri baari hai

mayuri realizes this and comes there

m: oh no .. di ye kya ... is waqt to nahi karo .. yahan kitne log hai ... pratham bhaiyya ke haath bhi bhare hue hai ....woh bhi meri ice cream se..

p: (in mind) ise apni ice cream ki padi hai .. meri kuch nahi

g: tu chup kar ... us din bhi to itne saare log the aur tum dono milkar mera mazaak kiya tha na ....

gauri removes few tissue paper packets frm her purse and puts it on prathams hands...pratham is more uncomfortable ...gauri cannot control her laugh😆 gauri keeps doing this until pratham cannot bare at all and is abt to fall something .. gauri removes 2 tissue packet frm his hands ... lol😆

mayuri is less bothered abt pratham .. she wants her ice cream ...

m: ummm ok theeek hai ... atleast main apni ice cream to lelu ... tum dono ka mamla hai tum dono jaano...

she is abt to take one ice cream frm prathams hand but pratham fears tht if she does tht ice cream will fall cos he is holding them with very difficulty ...pratham makes big eyes saying no to mayuri and making voice ... gauri cannot do anything but laugh n laugh ...

m: (in her mind) oh no ... ab jab tak di inhe over nahi karti tab tak mujhe ice cream nahi milegi .... (to gauri) oh no di yeh dekho ice cream melt ho rahi hai .... mujhe ice cream chahiye😒 ...aur phir ride par baithna tha na tumhe to .... kab jayenge ... late ho jayenga di .. pls over karo ..pl pl pl pl .. meri pyaari di .. plsssss

gauri realizes this ...

g: hmmm ... ice cream ke waqt di pyari ho jati hai kyu...

m: hehe😃

g: thik hai thik hai... .... over .....

p: phew .... what is this gauri .... tum bhi kisi bhi waqt statue kar deti ho ...

g: tumhari hi friend hu ...sab tumse sikha hai ...kyu? 😆😉

p: haan thik hai thik hai .... bohat smart ho gai ho...

g: hehehehe😃

p: kya hehehe .. chalo ab ...

they start going for the rides ...

end of epi 5

sorry guys had to stop here cos it was getting long ... have more things in mind so thts for next part ....



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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: gaurifan

I read all parts just now and must say its very cute and sweet story.. but wat is it? It is 2 months back u wrote last part please update it... please please please



thanks for reading it and the beautiful comments .. i knw it tht i had nt written it .. but i get very busy in studies ... few days back i was thinking to drop the idea of writing it but then thought i ll continue it cos i want to put the story i have in mind ... anyways , i dont knw when will i continue next mayb tom , day after or after 2 mnths 😉😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
episode 6:

p: chalo kaunsi ride par baithenge gauri?

g: umm main to boating karungi .. mujhe rides wides nahi pasand...

m: hahaha...abhi thodi der pehle to keh rahi thi rides par jana hai .. ab kya hua...

g: bas yuhi .. mood nahi hai

m: haa haa pataa hai ... tum aur tumhare moods ... pratham bhaiyya di ko dar lagta hai 🤣

g: errr... nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai ...

m: haan aisi hi baat hai ..agar main tumhari age ki hoti to bindaas baith jaati .. ye log mujhe baithne nahi denge ... 😳

p: gauri tum sach me nahi aa rahi ho .. maine turbo mountain me baithne jaa raha hu ... (he keeps moving .. lking at gauri .. he wants to make her sit on the ride...gauri is confused what to do ..)thik hai mat aao .. chalo mayuri ham jate hai .. tumhe main waha kahi tumhari ride me bitha dunga...
[turbo mountain is like roller coaster]

gauri is just lking pratham went to the ride .. he lking at her n smiling ...the ride is abt to start when gauri comes and sits beside him ...

p: arey tum .. tumhe dar nahi lagaa ... bhauuu

g: ouuuuu ... shut up pratham.... haan mujhe nahi lagaa .. yahi batane aai main ... 😛

gauri is very frightened .... the ride starts and she like oh no .... oh no ... she holds prathams hands tightly ... 😳 pratham lks at her ... shes holding tightly with eyes close .... screaming OMG OMg.... pratham smiles cutely .... and the ride goes 3...2...1 .... and Bhhhaaaaam!
everyone is shouting with "YAAAAAAAAAY" and it stops .. gauri opens her eyes n feels relief to find herself safe😆

p: tum thik to hona gauri 😛

g: (touching her cheeks... cant believe shes on the .. few mins bk she was in the sky) errr.. haaan😕

p: hehe thik hai chalo ab tumhari boating karne jaate hai ... mayuri ko bhi dekh lete hai woh kahan hai ..

g: haan chalo ...waise pratham ek baar aur baithe isme 😃

p: kyaaa? sacchi ?

g: haann😃😉

p: ok par ham water ride me baithenge .. its similar to this ... sirf neeche paani ... grt na ?

g: umm sounds good ... ok 😛

they go and find mayuri .. they take her and go for boating ....
all the 3 of them sit in the boat .... the boat starts ....
pratham has a call .. hes busy talking on phone .... gauri gets bored ....she watches tht pratham has finished his call... as soon as he offs the phone ..

g: hey pratham (pratham lks up, gauri takes water and throws) SPlashhhhhhhh...

p: oye .... (he takes too and starts throwing it on gauri ...)

mayuri lks this n does the same to both of them .. they in turn do it to her ... its like cake fight they r doing water fight😆 all the other ppl on other boats starts watching them ....

one couple to each other : so cute kids ... i hope we get same cute kids ... they lk adorable while fighting 😳

g&p : kids 😲 .... hey we r not kids ....

m: aise baccho jaisi harkat kar rahe ho to tumhe sab mujhse bhi chota hi samjhenge ...

g&p : errr... they give blank smile to each other ....

p: dekho tumne kya kiya ab lunch kaise karenge ... aur hamari water mountain wali ride to yahi hogai ...

g: to accha hai na .. main kehti thi na .. boating karo .. yaha aur bhi mazaa hai 😉

p: hmmm .... what mazaa? anyway lets go we will sit somewhere under the sun n then go for lunch ...

g&m: okay ....

they go to the restaurant to have lunch ...pratham goes to get all eatables in a tray .. gauri n mayuri r sitting... mayuri is nw upto to do her shaitani 😈

m: gauri di .. i m thirsty ...get me water na ...

g: chup .. pratham abhi laa raha hai na .. wait for a while ..

m: after a while ... dekho ab tak nahi aaye .. waha bohat bheed hai .. pratham bhaiyya khana lenge phir pani lene jayenge .... di its going to take sooo much time .. pls di pls ..

g: oh god .. isko pratham ne kyu layaa hoga ... tu ghar par kyu nahi rehti .. mera dimag khane yahaa kyu aa jati hai ....

m: hehe😃 sorry di .. luv u ..

g: haan chup luv u ki bacchi ... ruk zaraa ....

gauri starts getting up ...

m: di ruko abhi nahi .. thodi der baad ....

g: kya .. abhi to tune boli pani chahiye ..

m: haan par wahan bhi crowd hai ... thoda ruk jao

g: ok as u wish ...

as mayuri watches pratham is taking eatables ..

m: di go fast .. warna koi aur aa jayega ....

g: uh .. ok .. ok babaa ....

when gauri leaves pratham comes with all the eatables in the tray...

p: wheres gauri, mayuri?

m: woh pani lene jaa rahi hai mere liye ....

p: oh magar main laaya hu na pani ...
he runs to call gauri along with the tray in his hand.....

p: arey gauri yahaan aao maine pani laaya hu ...

gauri was in her own world and she turns with a bang .. she falls directly on pratham n the tray falls with all the gravy n sauce n stuff on prathams face n some on gauri ... 😆🤣😉

end of epi 6


next part will be in the mall.



Edited by talkativetaurus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow lovley parts taurus i loved both............ 👏
mayuri is such a shaitaani bachi..... 😆 😆 😆
she made pratam and gauri to fall and all eatables r on their face........... 🤣
so wat is gauri gonna do to mayuri........ 😛 😛
i am waiting to read abt....... 😉
great part buddy..... 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahalakshmi2303

wow lovley parts taurus i loved both............ 👏
mayuri is such a shaitaani bachi..... 😆 😆 😆
she made pratam and gauri to fall and all eatables r on their face........... 🤣
so wat is gauri gonna do to mayuri........ 😛 😛
i am waiting to read abt....... 😉
great part buddy..... 🤗 🤗 🤗



lol thank u soo much .... u encourage me like this .. i ll for sure post the next part ... and tht will be for u 😳 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: gaurihiten fan

the part is absolutly brilliant 👏 👏 👏
mayuri is great,she wanna see PG together like uss.....awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😳 😳 😳
i'm loving P's sweet nature and Gauri's bubbly natureeee 😳
can't wait to read the nest part as it's gonna vry vry interesting 😃
bt yaar when u get time plz post the next part 😉



thanks for the comments ... and yh sure i ll post the next part soon ... i have exam this week so next week for sure
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice story 👏 👏 👏
i loved the bubbly nature of gauri 😃 😃 😃
continue soon 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: seasplash

hey nice story 👏 👏 👏
i loved the bubbly nature of gauri 😃 😃 😃
continue soon 😳 😳



thanks for the comments ...i ll continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey when will u post next part hun i am waiting da............. 😉 😉
i will be waiting for it.......... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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episode 7

now after banging with each other pratham n gauri are one above the other with gauri above pratham. pratham was all bathed in foods .. gauri lking this starts laughing loudly .. pratham is totally blank ... he wipes his face and tries to see whats happening ... all the ppl gather around them .. prathams bcoms so embarassed .. imagine the bholu face of pratham! gauri was so busy in laughing tht she didnt even realized tht shes above pratham ... pratham tries to stop her .. he whispers ..

p- hey gauri chup .. get up nw ... sab dekh rahe hai ...

g- (still laughing)oh sorry ... giggling ... tries to get up ... and then helps pratham to get up ...

mayuri comes .. shes giggling too ... gauri finally stops laughing when she saw mayuri ... goes near her .. mayuri is making a puppy kind of face as if she dnt knw what happened .. gauri holds her ears tightly ..

g - kyu , yeh teri hi shararat thi na ... aao pratham .. is baar to tum bhi isko forgive nahi karna ..
p- oh haan.. (he holds mayuri another ears tightly ..)
mayuri starts screaming ..

m- aaaaaaaaaa.. sorry ... sorry ....
g&p - hmm .. maaf karein ise ? on one condition ...(they blink to each other) u wont get the ice cream ..

m - nooooo ... plss .. ps pratham bhaiyaa ....
p- ok ok ...chalo nw lets go .. we r getting late for galleria ...
gauri and pratham change their dresses and they all leave for galleria .. one of the biggest malls in perth ..

p- gauri what r we goin to buy ,btw.
g- lets see ... i think we need some stuff for college ... mummy ne shw piece bhi kharidne kaha hai ..

p- hmm ok , u do one thing go on tht side .. waha shwpiece bohat acche milte hai .. mayuri aur main yaha college ki cheezein dekhte hai .. i ll buy them for u ..

g- ok😊

gauri is on the ground floor of the mall whereas pratham n mayuri move on the first floor ..
gauri is having a lk at all the shw pieces ... she finds one and is abt to ask it frm the seller when someone else comes in between and asks for the same ..

g- excuse me can u shw me tht shw piece
?- pls shw tht to me as well ..

seller- sorry sir just one piece ..
?- no prob pack it for me ..

gauri was disturbed listening this .. she thinks hw rude this man is ..i asked it first n hes poking his nose ... she turns to question tht man when ..

g- hey Mr. (and shes all quiet)😲 omg! its u Mr. Sa..Sa..uff Mr.Raheja , right ?

?- yeh... i m Sahil .. Sahil Raheja 😊

g- OMG, glad to meet you .. u r the same singer who sang in uncle Roys party right? the famous singer of Perth ??

s- yeh right! nice to meet you ...btw, hw do u knw ...

gauri interrupts ..

g- just a sec .. i ll be back .. pls dont go away frm here .. i want u to meet my friend .. i m a grt fan of urs .. i loved ur singing .. pls dont move .. i ll be bk ...

s- yeh sure ....
gauri starts running to get pratham ...she runs n tells him tht Mr. raheja she was talking abt is over here .. she wants him to meet mr.raheja ..

p- par kya hai .. why do u want me to meet him ..

g- plsss ..
p- ok lets go fast ...

they reach the ground floor and go near the stall.. but sahil is no where to be found ..

p- kahan hai tumhara mr.raheja?
g- yahi tha ... ek min ruko .. i ll ask this guy .. (to the seller) excuse me ... where has mr. raheja gone .. i told him to wait for me ..

seller- oh ma'am he left few mins bk .. he told me to inform u .. he got an urgent work so had to leave ..

g- oh .. thanks .. pratham woh chala gaya ...:(
p- ok .. mera itna time waste kiya ..
g- come on pratham .... ab pataa nahi kab mil payenge ham usse ...

gauri gets into her own world ...

ends.



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