Pyaar aur Dosti-epi7 GH/GP - Page 2

Originally posted by: gaurihiten fan

woooooooooooooooooooooow,lovely parts 👏 ,love Pratham-Gauri's intro 👏 ,their sweet talks 👏 ,plz dost do continue 😳

thanks u dear , thank u so much ...

hello all ..first of all HAPPY DIWALI!!!

heres the next part...

episode 3

gauri is still a statue standing over there ... pratham has left ... gauri thinks now what ?? then suddenly she sees tht her sister Mayuri (who is only 7 yr old) is passing from there... mayuri is lil away and she cant see tht gauri is standing there like a statue ...

g: (in mind) now what do i do?? is mayuri ko to bulana hi padega kuch karne ke liye .. yahan se kaise hilu?? aur jab tak yeh pratham 'over' nahi kahega tab tak hil bhi nahi sakti ..

she starts making noise ... not calling mayuri but making noise so tht mayuri can listen her... mayuri turns towards her ..

mayuri=m

m: (looking at gauri with strange look) kya hai? kya hua?

gauri making eyes to come towards her ..

m: udhar aau ? (and goes near gauri) kya hua? aise kyu khadi ho? lag raha hai museum me koi indian beauty ka statue lagaa hua hai ..

gauri tries to say yes with her action .. that she is a statue ..

m: arey kya hua bolo na... kahin diwali ke din moan wrat to nahi rakh diya?? par usme statue hone ki kya zaroorat hai...

gauri is now angry with her .. making big eyes ...

m: itna gussa .. oh my god .. (then it clicks to her tht maybe she is statue cos of pratham) oh kahin pratham bhaiyyaa ne to ... ??

gauri is excited and starts making voice as if saying yesssss... usko jake bulao ...

m: thik hai bulati hai ... and she says oye pratham bhaiyya (who is standing just behind gauri) kya kiya jaye??

gauri is shocked ...

g: (in mind) mili juli sazish mere saath 😲

p: tum bolo .. my dear mayuri ..(he comes in front)

gauri is so angry ...

g: (in mind) bas ek baar over ho jaye phir in dono ki khair nahi .. yeh dono mere haath se bachne wale nahi hai ...

mayuri n pratham are laughing ..

m: chalo chod do bechari thak gayi hogi ..

p: thik hai , chalo 'over'

as he says over .. gauri starts running after mayuri ...

g: mayuri ki bacchiiiii main tujhe chodungi nahi ...

mayuri runs too

m: pakad sako to pakadlo ... (teasing her with tongues out)

pratham is there standing n smiling ..

gauri finally catches mayuri n mayuri shouts : mommmmmmmm

mom: kya hai ?? aati hu

g: arey baap re .. mummy .. agar mom aa gai to main to gai ..(she leaves mayuri) jaa mummy ki bacchi ...dekh lungi tujhe..

and she runs towards pratham .. pratham is standing over there talking to someone on his mobile ..meanwhile gauri ties both his shoe laces together ... and comes in front .. pratham finishes his call ...

g: chalo pratham khana khane... (she moves watching pratham wickedly)

p: haan chalo

pratham starts to walk n oh .. he falls down 😆 gauri bursts into a laugh .. pratham lking at her..

g: hahahaha, mere saath masti ki na ... mil gaya jawab?? (she leaves for dinner)

p: ohhh ... (whispering)haan mil gaya jawab ..(lks here n there to see if anyone has seen him fallng and gets up, unties his laces n moves)

at the dinner table:

g's mom: gauri aa gayi tum .. wheres pratham ?

g: umm mom woh .. bas woh pani pee raha hai .. aata hi hoga ..

meanwhile pratham comes..gauri lks at him and is laughing.. she cant control it but tries to .. still shes laughing ..pratham is embarassed ..

mom: kya hua bete, why r u laughing so much ?

g: mom woh hai na....

pratham interupts

p: aunty woh ... woh kya hai ki mayuri ne ek jk sunaya to yeh gauri se hansi ruk hi nahi rahi ...

mom: oh thik hai ... gauri its enuf dear ..

g: ok mom (still laughing n bit and starts eating like a good gal😛)

gauris mom lks here n there ..

g's dad: kya hua .. kuch chahiye?

mom: oh nahi .. mayuri kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi ... usne khana bhi nahi khaya hai ..main jakar use bula laati hu

dad: ok

gauri, her dad n pratham r eating..when they hear gauri's mom shouting mayuriiiiiiii... they all run over there ....mayuri's dress was burning with fire .. mayuri was crying n trying to blow it away but ...

g: mayuri........ (crying) somebody help ...

pratham sees this and runs towards her .. he removes his jacket n try to cool down the fire ... mayuri is crying .. calling pratham bhaiyya ...everyone is tensed specially gauri ..

g: pratham sambhalke ... sambhalke ..(crying loudly)

pratham picks up mayuri who fainted due to fear ...and takes her inside the house .. over there gauri comes n hugs pratham .. crying very much ...

g: stupid, kya kiya tumne ... kuch ho jata to ..

p: stop crying gauri ...kuch nahi.. main thik hu dekho .. bas mayuri ko ..

g: chup raho ..(she lks at prathams hand when he wipes her tears) oh tumhara haath ... ye to jal gaya hai ..

p: arey kuch nahi hua .. main medicine lagaa lunga..

g: chup raho boli na ... main lagaa leti hu ..(shes brings the first aid box and starts putting cream on prathams hand ..)

pratham is watching her .. how she takes care of everyone ...

g: (lks up) arey kya hua aise kyu dekh rahe ho? maine to tumhe statue nahi kiya jo tum is tarha se baithe ho aur baat bhi nahi kar rahe ...

p: (comes back to his senses,smiles) oh nahi kuch nahi... tumne hi to bola chup raho .. to chup baith gaya ...

g: oh haan ... chup hi baithna .. main khana lekar aati hu .. saathme kha lete hai ..

p: thik hai madam .. aur kuch farmaish?

g: nahi (smiles) bas aati hu ..

meanwhile gauris mom comes ..

p: aunty mayuri kaisi hai ?

mom: thik hai bete .. bas dar ki wajah se behosh ho gai thi .. ab woh so rahi hai ..

p: ok aunty

mom: pratham bete aaj tum yahi so jao .. bohat raat ho gai hai ..

p: oki aunty .. 😊

gauri brings food .. they both eat it and go to sleep..

end of epi 3

hey i know it was very big but thought to write more today as a diwali dhamaka 😃 hope u all like it ... pls dont forget to comment all ........... pls!!

WOW...
saare parts maine padhe...
lol...australia mein shooting ho rahi hai...😆
sydney mein nahin kar sakti thi kya, Syd bhi mini india jaisa hi hai 😛
aniwaiz, it was fantastically written...
so far shooooooo gud...
acha laga tumhara FF padh kar...😊
continue soon...


luv sanju
xoxo

Originally posted by: desi_punjaban90

WOW...
saare parts maine padhe...
lol...australia mein shooting ho rahi hai...😆
sydney mein nahin kar sakti thi kya, Syd bhi mini india jaisa hi hai 😛
aniwaiz, it was fantastically written...
so far shooooooo gud...
acha laga tumhara FF padh kar...😊
continue soon...


luv sanju
xoxo

oh sanju thanks a lot ... needed this a lot ...

Mujhe tumhare fanfic bohot pasand aya...and honestly ..tum to mujhse bhi zyaada achi fanfic writer ho...anyway..keep it up!...bye!

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Mujhe tumhare fanfic bohot pasand aya...and honestly ..tum to mujhse bhi zyaada achi fanfic writer ho...anyway..keep it up!...bye!

aww .. thanks .. but no yaar ... ur ff rocks too .. dont say like tht :)

okies time for 4th part

episode 4

its 10:30 am in the morning and gauri is still sleeping ...

g's mom : gauri bete , get up .. its already very late ...

g : no mom .. let me sleep ... pratham bhi to so raha hai na .. uske saath uthungi ..

mom : bete pratham to kabka uthkar chala gaya apne ghar

g: what?! (she sits right on her bed) when ? where? how ? why?

mom : arey bete ahista ..ahista ..so many questions.. usne tumhe uthani ki bohat koshish ki but u were sleeping so soundly ... isliye woh breakfast karke chala gaya .. usne kaha hai ki tum usse phone par baat kar lena ...

g: ok mom

gauri gets up .. and shes done with her breakfast n stuff...she calls pratham ..

p: hello

g: hi .. kaise ho ? kya kar rahe ho ?

p: bas kuch nahi .. college ki tayyari ... tum kaho kya karna hai aaj ..

g: wahi to poochne phone kiya tumhe buddhoo .. kya kare ..

p : chalo kahin jakar aate hai .. kuch college ki shopping kar lete hai .. mayuri ko bhi saath lelena ..

g : (shouts) mayuri ko ..

p: haan kyu , kya hua ? koi prob?

g: ummm nahi koi prob nahi ... ye mayuri ki bacchi hamesha kabab me haddi ban jati hai ... 😡(in mind)

p: thik hai chalo main tumhe lene aata hu.. aur kuch

g : kuch nahi , phone rakho nahi to lene kaise aaoge ..

p : oh haan .. bye

pratham comes to pick them ...

g&m : mom we r leaving .. raat ko late ho jayega .. pratham ke saath jaa rahe hai ...

mom : okie beta .. bye .. do one thing get a show piece from the mall so tht we can give it as a gift to ur cousin ..

g &m : ok .. bye!

mom : bye

in the car

p: chalo ab decide karo kahan jayenge ?

g: umm galleria...

m : oh ... no di .. pls .. galleria is boring ... wahan tum aur tumhara make up ... eeeks ..

g : shut up mayuri .. mall jana hi padega warna college ki shopping kaise karenge

p : haan woh to hai .. par aur kahan jayenge? chlo tum batao mayuri

g : hey mister .. tum mere friend ho ki mayuri ke ?? hamesha uski side lete ho ...

m: kyu ? jealous ho rahi ho ?

g: main kyu jealous houngi ...

p: oho .. stop both of u ... chalo ham pehle adventure world jate hai phir lunch karenge aur aate aate mall jayenge

g: great idea ... wow pratham .. tum to bade hoshyar ho gaye ho mere saath rehkar

m : tumkare saath rehkar nahi ... india se aakar .. accha hua jo india chale gaye .. warna tumhare saath zyada waqt tak rahenge to pratham bhaiyya to buddhoo ho jayenge ....

g: kyaaaaaa??? chup ..... (runs behind mayuri)

p : oh god... ye ladkiyan ... bhagwan kaunsi do shaitan ke beech phasa diya tune mujhe .. (lking upwards)

pratham runs behind them and stops .. holds both of their hands and holds gauri on right side and mayuri on left side ..........

p : bas bhi karo .. aise hi timepass nahi karo tum dono ..

g&m: ok .... lets go ...

they reach adventure world ..

end of epi 4

thats all for today .. pls comment .. pl pl pl ... in the next part i ll put some fun mazaa of the adventure world ... dont forget to read it ..

take care ...

omg!...its really nice!..love the parts!

hmmmm..
nice epi, talkative...
waiting for ur next part 😊

hi! mai marjawaan 🤢 !kiya story lekhe hai!sackae jawaan,
janaeman dill jeetliyaa ab tak kee story nae 😳 ,i don't know how to tell i was complitely lost in the story,so lost i was like where the next part,ufffffffffffffffff write it fast idiot,nahee otu gonns bhijwaoun kiyaa 😡
jaan mazza agayaa
lovely beginin,too good,
hey!u thinkin of makin a serial,i will finance it,what say,just pm me,we will then talk over,lovely,fantastic,mindblowin,jawab nahee teraa 👏