DES PARDES 1(kyph) parts1-27 - Page 128

As I was reading this ff I was thinking to myself "this time bheeghi has written a very light story, not too emotional or dramatic." (I didn't know it had a part 2 till I read the last part). As I finished chapter 26 I thought at last she confesses her love and there out of the blue there was a thunderbolt in the 27th part. Sach mein I never expected such a twist to this story...U put the essence of the whole story in this last chapter. Awesome is the only word I can find.

U've used a lot od urdu sher and poetries in this ff and they r all very beautiful. I like the one abt people mistaking her for id ka chaanf and breaking thie fast.How do u manage to get the lyrics for all the songs?? The jagjit singh ones, kishore kumar's were all so apt and such beautiful songs.U r toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good yaar. I've run out of words........... love, ssh57

Originally posted by: ssh57

As I was reading this ff I was thinking to myself "this time bheeghi has written a very light story, not too emotional or dramatic." (I didn't know it had a part 2 till I read the last part). As I finished chapter 26 I thought at last she confesses her love and there out of the blue there was a thunderbolt in the 27th part. Sach mein I never expected such a twist to this story...U put the essence of the whole story in this last chapter. Awesome is the only word I can find.

U've used a lot od urdu sher and poetries in this ff and they r all very beautiful. I like the one abt people mistaking her for id ka chaanf and breaking thie fast.How do u manage to get the lyrics for all the songs?? The jagjit singh ones, kishore kumar's were all so apt and such beautiful songs.U r toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good yaar. I've run out of words........... love, ssh57

thanks ssh! UR an avid reader I must say. I have never reread any of my ffs (except Ehsaas and TMR as i converted them to AR ffs) but now i wonder if i should - just to see how i wrote such long stories in such a short time😆 Thanks again for ur appreciation- it does mean a lot to me. I love Jagjit singh and his ghazals as they are simple to understand for a non urdu literate person like me. I am honore donce again....hope u will stop at the Turtleneck girl next😉

Hi Bheegi, I'm reading the part 2 of DP now and turtle neck girl it shall be after that. No dont waste your time reading your old ffs. We r here to do that . You just keep writing new ones and continue to bring joy to all your readers and fans. (very selfish na) Love, ssh57

jus started readin dis 1
kripa's character is really different...
very interestin....

jus finished readin d whole ff di......
it was FABULOUS!!!
loved it how zaib's love changed kripa
ZK scenes in d jail n after zaib's release,in ind n after marriage wer awesum!!!
loved all d shers n poems u used
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