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Posted: 17 years ago
ok...this was soo unexpected....I mean kripa being pregnant??....I had a feeling that Josh was going to use her....but I didnt know that Kripa was the one who was going to actually fall for his tricks!

On top of that she wants to abort the child 😡 omg seriously I have lost all respect for kripa in this part...I completly understand that she has a career to make and considering the fact that the child will not get the love of both parents can ruin the child's life...and taking all these things under considertaion I would agree with these reasons but that does not mean that I agree with the abortion idea...I am highly against the idea of abortion specially if it's out of foolishness.....But on the other hand kripa is still being selfish she is thinking about herself more than anyone else....If she really did care about her parents respect then she wouldnt have taken that step....especially with a person she herself didnt love

I really didnt like when kripa said Z..Zaib…calm down….you are over reacting…it is just an embryo we are talking about….not a real child," she said hesitantly. ..I really did not like the fact that kripa called her child a THING....for God sake she really does not have a heart....I mean no matter what culture or society one belongs to but the gift of motherhood knows no culture, society, or religion.....being a mother is considered to be the best gift given by god....and I belive that noone has the right to take that gift for granted in any way...and Kripa certainly does not have a right to abort the child...because the child is there because of her stupidity...yeah if it was out of rape or something then considering the circumstances maybe.....but Kripa is the one to be blamed for what she did....and she has no right what so ever to punish the child for her mistakes

And I cant belive that she blamed Zaib for all this tooo... she cant tell Zaib that if it were not for Zaib's presence in the US, she would have never driven herself into something so foolish. .....I mean how in the world is Zaib responsible for all this??.....it's not his fault that she was confused about her feelings....Infact he is actually trying to help her out of her circumstances...so she wouldnt commit a sin by aborting the child and later regret what she did.....but no she's not even willing to take his help....I mean it's not easy for anyone to still accept someone when they know that they have been with someone else.....but Zaib he's still willing to marry her and accept her child....so her and her child wouldnt have to face the harsh reality of the society....and she wouldnt have to kill the child...Zaib has certainly developed great respect in my heart by his actions in this part...till the start to the end...I myself wouldnt have liked it if Zaib had decided to stay and be a part of this abortion...Hats off to Zaib he truly deserves it 👏

I really liked the way in which you portrayed the two differant cultural view points on pregnancy.....Its certainly true that in America many children at an early age learn eveything about precautions regarding pregnancy....but in our culture we dont learn all these things from the start...I dont know if I would call that a good thing or not...I mean it would be better if people had a general understanding of such things so they would be aware about it....however the negative side of knowing such things is that people might misuse the information and might end up making foolish decisions like Kripa....But I guess its better to have an idea of such things so atleast a person isnt to naive....and would be able to take smart decisions and face the society by themselves

Even though kripa hasnt been brought up in the American society .....but i didnt think that Kripa was imprudent enough to not recognize the consequeances

Lisa is a good friend....and she is trying to help kripa get out of the problem....however the only thing is that Lisa'a thinking is Americanized...she herself being an American is thinking of the solution through out her cultural aspect....she's agreeing with Kripa about the abortion because she finds that a solution to her problems and thats what her custom and religion teaches her that its ok to get abortion...but our cultural aspect is totally differant...We would consider abortion to be a sin...specially in Kripa's case

What can I say about Josh....He has lived up to my expectations completly 😡 ....Being a Jerk he is ...I would have totaly expected him to not accept kripa and his Child....and try giving money to kripa thinking that it would solve all problems

Zaib's character on the other hand has certainly developed alot...this incident which took place in Kripa's life has certainly shown a side of him which we all were unaware of....from a tender heart, crazy in love, considerate, shayar, he has certanly shown that at times of need he can be a true fighter, and has the courage to stand up for what he belives in even if it means to stand up against the ones he loves.....specially if they are the ones who are wrong

I am glad that Zaib has actually left kripa at this point...This will definatly teach kripa a lesson in life she will never forget

I really loved Zaib's dialouges towards the end....his words reflected all his emotions his pain, his love, his hatred, his concern everything!!....I really loved these two particular passages said by Zaib....I thought they were fantastic...even though the words he used seemed harsh but in fact its the truth that had to be told to kripa by someone....and maybe hearing such words from Zaib may have a bigger impact on kripa than hearing them from someone esle......

"Kripa….main tumhein hamesha apni sang-e-marmar ki murti samajhta tha……bilkul sahi samajh ta tha……you are indeed as pretty as a beautiful marble…..but as stone hearted as a marble…..tum ek aurat nahin….ek patthar ki murti ho……is khubsoorat chehre ke peeche sirf ek patthar dil insaan hai….kitna pagal hoon main…..jo apna dil sirf tumhari baahari sundarta ko dekh kar de baitha…..chalo achha hua….der se hi sahi……tumhari assliyat tho pata chal gayi mujhey,"

YES…I AM AN EMOTIONAL FOOL KRIPA! Yaad hai tum kehti thi ki main ek poet hoon…..aur har cheez mein sundarta dekhta hoon…..you were absolutely right…..yes….i see beauty in all nature's creations…..and there is nothing more beautiful and pure than a child…

I really agree with your points about intimate relations coming with commitments...and that is something which I strongly belive in too....Its not all about pleasure....but its about willing to face the consequences later on....Yes I also agree that kripa doesnt want any part of Josh in her...but I still belive that it doesnt give her the right to take someones life away...specially when she wasnt forced into it....and willigly took the step....

I cant even predict what I think might happen next in the story 😕 ....I mean this ff is certainly unpredictable...But lets see how Kripa changes and how she gets her love back...fantastic part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work. 👏

Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg 😲 this is all i can say 😲

but awesome part!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
great but sad part!
i wonder wat will happen next.atleast kripa will know how zaib felt when she broke his heart.poor zaib and kripa.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

Di when are you going to continue? I hope Zaib goes back to Kripa but i guess Kripa kind of deserves it😭 nd i hope nothing happns to Azaan nd Afreen 😭 ❤️



soon..hopefully..i have written 1/2 the chapter so far 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

ok...this was soo unexpected....I mean kripa being pregnant??....I had a feeling that Josh was going to use her....but I didnt know that Kripa was the one who was going to actually fall for his tricks! On top of that she wants to abort the child 😡 omg seriously I have lost all respect for kripa in this part...I completly understand that she has a career to make and considering the fact that the child will not get the love of both parents can ruin the child's life...and taking all these things under considertaion I would agree with these reasons but that does not mean that I agree with the abortion idea...I am highly against the idea of abortion specially if it's out of foolishness.....But on the other hand kripa is still being selfish she is thinking about herself more than anyone else....If she really did care about her parents respect then she wouldnt have taken that step....especially with a person she herself didnt love I really didnt like when kripa said Z..Zaib…calm down….you are over reacting…it is just an embryo we are talking about….not a real child," she said hesitantly. ..I really did not like the fact that kripa called her child a THING....for God sake she really does not have a heart....I mean no matter what culture or society one belongs to but the gift of motherhood knows no culture, society, or religion.....being a mother is considered to be the best gift given by god....and I belive that noone has the right to take that gift for granted in any way...and Kripa certainly does not have a right to abort the child...because the child is there because of her stupidity...yeah if it was out of rape or something then considering the circumstances maybe.....but Kripa is the one to be blamed for what she did....and she has no right what so ever to punish the child for her mistakes And I cant belive that she blamed Zaib for all this tooo... she cant tell Zaib that if it were not for Zaib's presence in the US, she would have never driven herself into something so foolish. .....I mean how in the world is Zaib responsible for all this??.....it's not his fault that she was confused about her feelings....Infact he is actually trying to help her out of her circumstances...so she wouldnt commit a sin by aborting the child and later regret what she did.....but no she's not even willing to take his help....I mean it's not easy for anyone to still accept someone when they know that they have been with someone else.....but Zaib he's still willing to marry her and accept her child....so her and her child wouldnt have to face the harsh reality of the society....and she wouldnt have to kill the child...Zaib has certainly developed great respect in my heart by his actions in this part...till the start to the end...I myself wouldnt have liked it if Zaib had decided to stay and be a part of this abortion...Hats off to Zaib he truly deserves it 👏 I really liked the way in which you portrayed the two differant cultural view points on pregnancy.....Its certainly true that in America many children at an early age learn eveything about precautions regarding pregnancy....but in our culture we dont learn all these things from the start...I dont know if I would call that a good thing or not...I mean it would be better if people had a general understanding of such things so they would be aware about it....however the negative side of knowing such things is that people might misuse the information and might end up making foolish decisions like Kripa....But I guess its better to have an idea of such things so atleast a person isnt to naive....and would be able to take smart decisions and face the society by themselves Even though kripa hasnt been brought up in the American society .....but i didnt think that Kripa was imprudent enough to not recognize the consequeances Lisa is a good friend....and she is trying to help kripa get out of the problem....however the only thing is that Lisa'a thinking is Americanized...she herself being an American is thinking of the solution through out her cultural aspect....she's agreeing with Kripa about the abortion because she finds that a solution to her problems and thats what her custom and religion teaches her that its ok to get abortion...but our cultural aspect is totally differant...We would consider abortion to be a sin...specially in Kripa's case What can I say about Josh....He has lived up to my expectations completly 😡 ....Being a Jerk he is ...I would have totaly expected him to not accept kripa and his Child....and try giving money to kripa thinking that it would solve all problems Zaib's character on the other hand has certainly developed alot...this incident which took place in Kripa's life has certainly shown a side of him which we all were unaware of....from a tender heart, crazy in love, considerate, shayar, he has certanly shown that at times of need he can be a true fighter, and has the courage to stand up for what he belives in even if it means to stand up against the ones he loves.....specially if they are the ones who are wrong I am glad that Zaib has actually left kripa at this point...This will definatly teach kripa a lesson in life she will never forget I really loved Zaib's dialouges towards the end....his words reflected all his emotions his pain, his love, his hatred, his concern everything!!....I really loved these two particular passages said by Zaib....I thought they were fantastic...even though the words he used seemed harsh but in fact its the truth that had to be told to kripa by someone....and maybe hearing such words from Zaib may have a bigger impact on kripa than hearing them from someone esle...... "Kripa….main tumhein hamesha apni sang-e-marmar ki murti samajhta tha……bilkul sahi samajh ta tha……you are indeed as pretty as a beautiful marble…..but as stone hearted as a marble…..tum ek aurat nahin….ek patthar ki murti ho……is khubsoorat chehre ke peeche sirf ek patthar dil insaan hai….kitna pagal hoon main…..jo apna dil sirf tumhari baahari sundarta ko dekh kar de baitha…..chalo achha hua….der se hi sahi……tumhari assliyat tho pata chal gayi mujhey," YES…I AM AN EMOTIONAL FOOL KRIPA! Yaad hai tum kehti thi ki main ek poet hoon…..aur har cheez mein sundarta dekhta hoon…..you were absolutely right…..yes….i see beauty in all nature's creations…..and there is nothing more beautiful and pure than a child… I really agree with your points about intimate relations coming with commitments...and that is something which I strongly belive in too....Its not all about pleasure....but its about willing to face the consequences later on....Yes I also agree that kripa doesnt want any part of Josh in her...but I still belive that it doesnt give her the right to take someones life away...specially when she wasnt forced into it....and willigly took the step.... I cant even predict what I think might happen next in the story 😕 ....I mean this ff is certainly unpredictable...But lets see how Kripa changes and how she gets her love back...fantastic part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work. 👏




Thanks for ur wonderful, awesome, detailed comments Mita 👏 👏 Looks like Zaib's character and his arguments have really moved u a lot. Well, Kripa is going to be affected and haunted by his comments all her life too....let's see how she redeems and pays penance for her one foolish mistake 😡 thanks again for ur great comments
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Temi

great but sad part!
i wonder wat will happen next.atleast kripa will know how zaib felt when she broke his heart.poor zaib and kripa.




thanks Temi...yes both are heartbroken right now 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww...no update tonight??? 😭 😭 😭 I am curious to see what else you have in store for us bheegi......by the way...i read your first fanfic "faasle"....it was awsome........i couldn't stop...i read the whole thing in one sitting. Seems like you like to focus your stories on a love story between people of two different cultures eh? except....in that fan fic...Kripa was muslim...here....Zaib is muslim..lol.......tell me which other fan fics you wrote...i want to read them ALL.... 😃
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Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

awwww...no update tonight??? 😭 😭 😭 I am curious to see what else you have in store for us bheegi......by the way...i read your first fanfic "faasle"....it was awsome........i couldn't stop...i read the whole thing in one sitting. Seems like you like to focus your stories on a love story between people of two different cultures eh? except....in that fan fic...Kripa was muslim...here....Zaib is muslim..lol.......tell me which other fan fics you wrote...i want to read them ALL.... 😃



thanks ekta..sorry could not post the update as i was out. Will post it in am for sure. Faasle and DP are the only interfaith LS I have written. I will PM u the links to my other ffs...thanks Ekta. U might want to start with the Turtleneck girl- it is one of my personal favorites 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry bheegi di i have exams so cudnt comment uptil now...

haila itna sabb kuchh ho gaya......yaarr ye ladki.... if she cud hav indulged in something so serious thinking of it as casual sex...didnt she have the brain to take a morning after pill?american pari hai...don't tell me she hasnt heard of it...ab to india me bhi itni awareness hai...but i dont blame her wen she doesnt want the baby(though my personal point of view is the zaib one-embryo is life...aur apni life ki itni chinta thi to pehle kyu nahi socha?)...
well...well well...are u going to make them meet soon aur is it lambi judai...telme...she isnt heartless enuf to kill her own baby...zaib ke shabdon ka itna asar to hua he oga...but she wont keep it even...are u going to solve the mystery in next part or later...y will zaib be in need?aa ka chakkar...
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Posted: 17 years ago
are there going to be leaps?...bheegi di at this point i pity kripa...though a part of me is cursing her...but being preggy lik tht is no joke....i feel really sorry for her..poor soul...she will pay now...hey vishnu ji...jaldi iska pashchataap kara do...bahut nazuk ladki di hai...i pray to god(rather u)to give her the strength to bear all the pain she has brought upon herself)

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