'O Meri Rani' AK *Part 4: pg8* :D

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi everyone i thought i would start an FF of my own im very nervous because there are so many wonderful writers here at IF and i know i may not be able to live up to their standards but please do bear with me and please forgive me if i make any mistakes in the FF or have big bloopers, when it comes to essays im an expert but creative writing is something i haven't tried in many years now

i would just like to say that i am inspired by each and every writer here on IF and on TCC and would like to say a big thank you to sangeeta D (bheegi) without your advise and encouragement i don't think i would've had enough courage to post the first part 🤗🤗🤗

I may not be able to update everyday but hopefully on a weekly basis and characters will be introduced as the story moves forward but for the time being Angad and Kripa are the main characters

*~*~*Please do have a read and let me know what you think*~*~* 🤓

O Meri Rani

Part 1

12am Friday night Eros nightclub a dozen guys make a grand entry via their stretched hummer, all but one dressed to in black, some with their hair looking slick and pulled back, some with spiked hair and some going for the messy yet drop dead gorgeous look all dressed to impress, with long queues and huge crowds waiting to be let into the already packed nightclub the group of guys head straight for entrance only to be let straight in by the bouncers thanks to the only guy out of the group dressed in a white transparent fitted shirt with few top buttons open to reveal his well built chest, white loose jeans with white smart shoes and a designer black belt together with his charming smile, charming personality and attitude making him stand out in the crowd yes it is none other than Angad Khanna and being angad's 21st birthday he was going to celebrate in style with the lounge/VIP area reserved for him and company he made his way straight to the dance for to show off his dancing skills.

Yes it was bhrangra/hip-hop/Arabic night tonight and as soon as angad hit the dance floor the music became louder and angad was immersed in showing his excellent dancing skills off grabbing any girl that appealed to his eyes. Making his way to the liquor bar he ordered his Bacardi breezer, catching girls eyes yes he was hot and looking extra hot tonight girls were literally throwing themselves at him but he would reject their advances as they were all the same and tonight he wanted to be with someone special, someone different 'arey yaar these girls are all the same you know I swear you cant tell the difference you know I mean right hahahahaaaaaa' angad laughs at his own promiscuous behaviour 'Angad your such a lucky dog a new girl every week and your complaining I mean look at me yaar iv been stuck with the same girl for the past year' josh sulked into his drink 'I cant believe you've stuck to one girl for one whole year you use to be worse than me I change my gf every week but you had a different girl everyday night!!'
'you know what angad I may sulk but I love her really she's changed me yaar GODDDDDDDDD stop me before I get even more lovey dovey lets enjoy, oooooo check out the talent bruvs' josh said eyeing all the ladies on the dance floor 'Nahin yaar none of them really you know turn me on I want someone special today you know what I mean' angad said carrying a cheeky smile on his lips winking at josh 'sudarjha angad you cant keep changing girlfriends you need to find someone that you can take home to mummy, you're getting old' both burst out in laughter and continued sipping their drinks and headed towards the lounge/VIP area.

1am all the guys with their new female companions for the night were lounging around having a laugh when all of a sudden someone caught angads attention he was speechless and mesmerized and completely oblivious to everything around him.
Standing in the bar area was a petite lass standing with a few other girls waiting for their drinks, she was absolutely gorgeous dressed in a short denim skirt with a gold vest top complementing her figure perfectly, hair in loose curls her eyes adorned in heavy eye make up to emphasize on her already big green eyes, they were locked in an intense eye lock as she felt a strong piercing gaze upon herself and that's when she caught him staring at her and lost herself in those light brown intense eyes. As if in daze like state when she realised those intense eyes had suddenly come a lot more closer so close that before she realised he had seductively led her from the lounge area onto the dance floor

O Meri Rani by the Bilz ft Kashif and Drega (http://youtube.com/watch?v=7IIeVQpeAn4 )

O meri rani, You're the bomb
I wanna know your name
The way you shake your body, Up & Down, You make me wanna dance
The way you move your hips and you bite your lip
Oh my god, Your body's off the chain
I wanna know if you're single, Do you have a man?
Are you available?
Come a little closer

Dancing seductively lip-syncing the words which expressed his desires and thoughts grinding and whining with the mysterious girl who was still in trance but managed to match his every move with equal passion and mischief teasing him further

(Chorus)
Oh, Ain't no way you wont love me
Oh, I'm gonna make you my baby
Oh, Before the night is over
You're gonna scream papi
Oh, You gotta stop teasing me
Oh, Girl it's driving me crazy
Oh, It's gonna get hot 2nite
Baby you're my spanish fly

He spun her around and brought her in back in against his strong hard chest as both continued to grind to the music angad's lips lightly brushing her exposed neck 'mmhhhhhhh you smell so good, O meri rani tell me your name' suddenly she broke away from angads grip 'you've got to better than that honey' she starts to walk off when he quickly grabs her hand and spins her back into his arms 'fiestyyyyyy I love that in a girl' he strokes her face 'hmmmmmmmm persistent aren't you' she laughs 'only because I know your worth it otherwise The Angad Khanna and chasing a girl never' he retorted arrogantly 'Angad O Indian huh itna ghuroor acha nahin hai Raja' surprised at her statement 'Raja kaun raja im angad khanna' she laughs 'you've been calling me rani so that makes you my raja' she laughs seductively 'enough jokes meri rani tell me your name' he whispers in her ear 'baas rani hii samjho' they both continued to match each others step teasing flirting enjoying each others company and dancing skills.

O meri Jaane Jaana, Can I get your telephone number?
You're the finest thing i've ever seen
And I wanna make you mine
You're the hottest shorty in the club
You're looking so right it's wrong
You make a brother wanna write a song
Honey let me sing just a little acapella for you

You're turning me on and I'm drowning in your love
Baby I think we're wasting time
Bring your body over here and we're gonna get freaky
I wanna blow your mind
I'm gonna, One, Make a move and start a little something
Two, I'm Understanding your body language
Three, You're all that I ever wanted
You should get with me tonight

(Chorus)
Oh, Ain't no way you wont love me
Oh, I'm gonna make you my baby
Oh, Before the night is over
You're gonna scream papi
Oh, You gotta stop teasing me
Oh, Girl it's driving me crazy
Oh, It's gonna get hot 2nite
Baby you're my spanish fly

'So meri rani how bout we continue back at my place' shocked at his request she replies sweetly 'O mere raja im not that easy sweety that after one dance one meeting one night I'l go back to your place sweety bye' saying this she gives him a quick peck on the cheek, angad glanced at the floor and picked up the charm bracelet which fell of her elegant wrist but before he knew it she had disappeared into the crowd leaving a very confused angad behind 'huh what the hell just happened where did she go???' angad made his way back to his friends 'angad who was that sexy chica you were dancing with she's hot where is she??' josh expressed his excitement 'paata nahin she said shes my rani and im her raja??? And then she disappeared I thought she was as interested in me as I was in her but she refused to come back to mine weird' josh started laughing hysterically 'Oh My God did THE ANGAD KHANNA just get rejected' hearing this prithvi and shabbir also join josh all three laughing hysterically 'did you at least get her number' 'No I don't even know her name let alone her number' angad exclaimed confusingly 'Oooooooooo' josh, prithvi and shabbir howled as they all teased angad for getting rejected 'No way this does not happen to Angad Khanna girls do not reject him he rejects girls I have to make her mine at all costs' he said with pure determination 'but angad you don't know her name, don't have her number you know nothing about her how can you even be sure she even lives in London' prithvi, shabbir and josh all expressed the obstacles facing angad 'I don't care where there's a will there's a way hihihiiiiiiiiii'

Meanwhile out side the club she ran as fast as she could panting she reached the rest of her friends 'Oh my God I can't believe I just did that arghhhhhhhh' 'wow kripa you have some guts I cant believe you just flirted and danced with a complete stranger' said a very excited anittah 'ok ok baaki baatein kal karenghe abhi jaaldi se ghaar jaateh hai vaarna humhare phol toh khul jaayegha' the small group of girls giggled loudly and quickly made their way to the taxi stand where black cabs were awaiting punters. Angad, the group of friends and their female companions enjoyed the night until wee hours in the morning before heading back to their rooms in halls of residence.
Angad woke up with a pounding headache his groans soon died down as a smile crept on his lips as he laid his eyes on the platinum bracelet with diamond charms he leapt across his bed to grab it off the side table, bringing the bracelet close to his lips he murmurs 'O meri rani'

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Loads of Love

Selina🤗

Edited by ShellyB - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing start
loved it.
i really liked the first part. the story is interesting
cont soon


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~Sana~
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice and interesting start... will love to read more
Love the name very very funny... 😆 O Meri Rani ahahahaha 😆 First I read it on TCC, and im like plzz be on I-F because I cant comment on TCC... and I see it here and I'm soo happy!!
Cant wait to read more
PLzz plzz plzz Im waitingg...!!!
Edited by crazy_craze - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! Lovely FF. I love the title though 😆 Can't imagine Angu saying it to Kripa! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start
interesting concept
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww Awsum and Cute story...Just a quetion is Angad in Luv with Kripa or is it just cause she REJEcted him... and ur story is realli interesting cant wait to read more 😃

Sakshi S. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice story. The first part was great, and my sister loves this song. Love the title. Can't wait to see where you'll take the story. Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start 👏
sounds interesting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

amazing start
loved it.
i really liked the first part. the story is interesting
cont soon

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~Sana~

thanks Sana 4 your encouragement 😳 😳

hopefully i should post another part within d next few days still sorting out d finer details😳

Edited by ShellyB - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_craze

Nice and interesting start... will love to read more
Love the name very very funny... 😆 O Meri Rani ahahahaha 😆 First I read it on TCC, and im like plzz be on I-F because I cant comment on TCC... and I see it here and I'm soo happy!!
Cant wait to read more
PLzz plzz plzz Im waitingg...!!!

Thanks Jassie😳

the name was sort of an impromptu decision da song "O meri rani" by the Bilz really inspired the first part dats why i named the FF "O Meri rani" 😳

Edited by ShellyB - 17 years ago

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