'O Meri Rani' AK *Part 4: pg8* :D - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
awesom part
im guessing angad is at the door
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
nice part i think it was angad i hope soo it was him can wait for next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Amazing fanfic. I like Kripa's character! I know it's Angad at the door. Does that mean they're brother-sister. Or just friends?! Hmm. Continue whenever you can. No rush.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
thanks a lot for all your comments, much appreciated
finally the next part, i will try and update weekley if not then atleast fortnightly insh'allah 😊
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Part 4
Precap: (ding dong ding dong) 'Oh my god that must be her, why is she ringing the bell when she has her own keys offfffffff ho mum can be soooo bulakar at times' she mumbled to herself 'kripa can you get the door please!' aliyah yelled from the kitchen.

'OH MY GOD, YOU!!!! WHAT ON EARTH ARE YOU DOING HERE!!

'stop stalking me or I'll call the police you bloody freak' quickly shutting the on his face, kripa was frantic 'o my god what am I gonna do now he's stalking me' all sorts of thoughts and fears were running through her mind when she heard aliyahs voice, kripa quickly composing herself, made way to the kitchen 'who was at the door krips' questioned aliyah 'no one, it was those sales people, they're so annoying, hope you don't mind I got rid of them' kripa was quick to cover her little encounter as apart from anittah nobody else knew fully about angad n kripa 'nah its fine, seriously they come every other week its either cheaper electricity bills, phone bills or broadband, they really need to get a better job hahahhaaaaa'

'aalooooo' a deep but familiar voice came from behind 'arghhhhhhhhhhh bhaiiiiiiii' aliyah ran into his arms while kripa stood there in utter disbelief her mouth wide open, turning away as she couldn't bare his smirk anymore, hand on her head 'why me' kripa questioned her fate. 'okay baba lemme put the shopping down then you can hug me all you want, theres more bags in the car as well' aliyah released him from her tight hug went to the car to help her mum with the rest of the bags.

Angad made his way into the kitchen to put away the grocery bags all the while his eyes fixed on his rani, as she did her best to avoid his gaze 'hi beta you must be kripa, maine tumhare bhaare mein bahut kuch suna hai' walked in a aliyah's mum, naina a very modern, sophisticated lady in her mid-late 40's 'ji namaste aunty' kripa greeted naina with folded hands 'namaste beta, are vah khoobsurat ki saath saath bahut sanskari bhi ho, jeete raho beti' naina pleasantly surprised started placing the grocery items away.

'ahem ahem' angad cleared his throat 'oops o yeah kripa this is my one and only brother angad, bhai this is my new friend kripa, kripa sharma' angad extended his hand towards his rani 'Hi KREEEEEPA nice to meet you' emphasising on her name 'bhai its kripa not kreeeeeeeepa' aliyah corrected him before helping naina, kripa had no choice but to shake his hands with a forced smile 'yeh nice to meet you too (not)' she mumbled under her breath.

Taking this opportunity he held on to her hand raising his eyebrow his whispered 'akhir tum mujhe mil gayi meri Rani oops I mean kreeeeeeeepa' kripa's eyes widened as they were still in the kitchen 'mere haath chodo' kripa pleaded embarrassed by her predicament, when naina turned her attention to them, angad immediately released kripa's hand 'areh beta tum sab lounge mein ghupshup karo mein abhi khaane ka intezam karti hoon' 'aunty mein aapki kuch madad kardoon' kripa offered 'awwwwwwwww kripa tumne poocha yahin kaafi hai beta, are vah Aliyah tumhari dost itni achi hai, kya khayal hai isse rakhle humhare paas beti yeh phir bahu banake' naina teased an embarrassed kripa and aliyah.

Angad stood arms folded against the kitchen door smirking 'maaaaaa and you wonder why I don't invite my friends around, come on kripa' said aliyah as leading the way back into the lounge through the kitchen doors with angad giving way to the girls whispering as kripa walked by 'idea itni bhi buri nahin hai, kya khayal hai' 'hmph in your dreams' she mouthed looking back at angad.

Before she knew it was 8pm and pitch black outside with exception of the street lights 'liya I'll make a move now it's getting quite late' kripa said looking at the wall clock 'angad why don't you take my car and drop kripa home its quite late and dark outside I don't want kripa taking the underground on her own at this time' naina suggested handing her car keys to over to angad 'sure thing maaaaa (the pleasure will be all mine)' angad whispered under his breath.

She said her goodbyes as she got into the car with angad, fastening her seatbelt dreading spending time alone with angad with no hope of escape, awkward silence was soon filled with music.

Aman Hayer "Ik Vari haan" (Great song, me a music lover every part has to have a song 😳)
Ik var haan karde soniya *5
soniyeeeeeeeee ni............Soniye
ik vari haan karde soniye*4
ni mangda banke jaane
dil badle hai dil ni jaani
ik vari haan karde soniye*4
Ik var haan karde soniya *4
tere sohni dekj jawani
ve mein hoye tera diwani
Ik var haan karde soniya *4
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tEEk98BE53o[/YOUTUBE]
Angad being the first to break the ice 'kripa why did you lie to me', 'common sense ain't it, how can I tell a perfect stranger everything about me, you could've been a stalker a serial killer anything' kripa justified herself 'you always sounded so genuine, god you must be a good liar either that or a good actress hahahhaaaaa' angad teased kripa.

It took around 1 hr with some traffic to finally reach kripa's apartment 'finally tumhari manzil ageyi' angad said as the car came to a halt 'listen angad it was really nice getting to know you and since your liya's bro I would really like it if we can be friends JUST FRIENDS' kripa extended her hand of friendship, angad much obliged 'I would love to be friends but just friends hmmmmmm well I can't make any promises' both started laughing 'o god your incorrigible, thanks for the lift, bye' as kripa made her way out of the car and towards the main entrance of her apartment building while angad waited in the car until she was safely inside.

Keys jingling in the lock 'what took you so long missy' anittah stood with hands on hips 'your not my daddy' both were in splits and cheering like a pair of cheerleaders 'yes yes no limits no restrictions only freedom whooooohoooo' kripa made herself comfortable on the sofa and went on to fill anittah on the details of what happened that day 'Seriously kripa I'm telling you its kismet, I mean the worlds not that small that you keep on bumping into the same guy, staying connected to him one way or another, I mean your friends with his sister and he in his last year, in the same campus, AND NOW YOUR GIVING HIM A GO' anittah said teasingly 'aniTAH im not giving hime go, we're only friends okay and besides he's not my type' with this kripa made her way to her room 'What tall, dark and handsome ain't your type hihihihiiiiii' anittah shouted from behind as kripa's door closed.

(okay let me clarify angad lives in halls of residence, kripa and anittah have there own apartment near university as kripa's dad is quite well off, aliyah lives with her mum in their family home as she doesn't want to live away from her mum and bear the expenses of living in halls/on her own and travels to university using public transport with simone who lives in the neighbouring area)

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Thanks a lot for taking time out to read my ff. Hope that was alright, ignore blooper like is kripa was shown arond the house didnt she see any of angads/family pictures 😕 lets just say naina is a minimalist and all pics are in photo albums 😉 😆

o yeah i promise i will try n start moving the story along, i know its a bit slow 😳
Selina xXx
Edited by ShellyB - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
hey...yay u fin ai contd...lol awesome part...ahah luvd da part wen kripa shut dah door on angads face tinking huim to bi stalker not realizn that hi is aaliyas ro.....hmmm so a-k friends nw....cnt sooon cnt wait to kno wa appnz next
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Awesome ff.
Advice: u could add a index to make it easier t find the parts.
2: plz do a character sketch it would be much easier 4 u. Anyways gotta run gotta write my next part for my ak ff. :) Really good ff. pm me when u update. harjot.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
wowowwo tht was cooll part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Love the concept... continue soon!

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