’what DESTINY holds’--RA-part19+epilogue..

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liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

so aftr long i hv posted a looooong part as promised.i will post one more looooong part.

do reply , comment suggest on the above part.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ohhhhhhhh godddddddddd.....kaha thi yaar tum....aikdum gayab hi hogayi. i thought abb yeh fic band hogayi paar finalllyyyyyyyy.....you updated mehndi 😆 .hey the part was rocking yaar ⭐️ . i mean this is how they started form hatred and landed up loving each other unconditionally 😳 ki jaab juda huye toh rahil ki aisi halat hogayi.paaryaar asmi kaha gayi 😭 . like did she die ya phir modelling mein hi aise contacts aaye ki she married some other guy due to which it will be profitable for her carrer 😭 . the story is really interesting 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

awesome story yaar 👏!!!!!!!!!..........i didn't knew about this story 😭, till now 😊!!!........i'm soooo happy that you are writing this story 👏 😉 👏! .......awesome characters 😉!!!........really nice the way u started the story 😉.....!!!!!!!! it's different from your previous story , but same as interesting 😉!!!!!!!!!!!..........soo nethra is trying to help rahil 😊! he's begin in that place for almost 5 yrs 😭........!!!!!!!!! she's goes to his friends n co-workers to get more information abt him n his past 😊!!! .........his friends n everyone near him are desperate to have their "rahil" back 😊.....always fun-loving, creaking jokes 😆 😛 😉!!!!!!!............asmi n rahil 1st meeating was really funny 😆........they are always fighting 😆!!!!!!!.............but just to postpone their marriege 4 their parents head they do all that drama 😆 😊 😉!!!!!! unhe kya pata tha ke yhea drama karte karte unke darmian pyaar baar chaega 😉!!!!!!!!! .........................continue soon yaar, can't wait for the next part 😭!!!!!!!!!..........what happened to asmi n rahil? will nethra will be able to help rahil? where is asmi? is nethra falling for rahil 😉? ...many more questions 2 ask u 😊...but i know u can't answer them all 2ghter 😆!!!!!!!.........can't wait yaar, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.............rn?? 😕

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jyothi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey a lovely part after a really long time ab jaldise cont karo

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liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

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thnx for the replies frnz....!!

i m sorry fr posting parts so slow...bt thnx fr bearing me...

@fravashi----nikki i ws damn busy wid coll n xtra xams in final yr.....tabhi gum thi 😉 .i will try n be regular frm now on..!!

@vandu--its Rajeev-Amna dear.... 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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PART-6

unka relationship bad raha tha......pyaar ki taraf.....kaisa rishta hai unka.....pehle

dushmani , fir shayad thodi si dosti , fir sagaai aur ab gehri dosti jo bad rahi thi pyaar

ki taraf.....this is wt destiny is....isnt it??

**

"dekho hamare paas sirf 4 din hain , aur in chaar dinon mein i will show u sara dehradun."
"arrey waah 1 redymade guide jisko kuchh pay bhi nahi karna padega."
"bilkul.....at ur service mam." he said bowing down.

n she smiled.....thats when she looks like an angel , he thought.

"to chalein."

**

"ye hai yahan ke fruit orchids."
"my god they r so b'ful.n the valley is so b'ful.i must say u hv come to very b'ful place fr

training."

[guys i m not gonna detail their tour to the b'ful valley so i will fast forward the part

directly to 4th day that is the last day.but during these days they both felto something fr

each other.n it ws realised by rahil 1st.]

"pata hi nahi chala na kaise 4 din beet gaye."
"hmm."
"kya ho gaya rahil....main kal se dekh rahi hoon kuch dull ho?"
"nahi aisa nahi hai asmi...its just that..."
"just what?"
"just nothing...!!"
"come on tell me rahil....i know we were foes initially but now we r gr8 frnz aren't we??"
"yeah...."
"then just tell me wt is bodering u??"
"i need to ask u a question asmi....a serious one."
"u dont need permissions fr that."
"wen u got the offer , i ws the first person u called...hai na??"
"yes.."she replied with a smile as if reliving that special moment again.
"why??"
"what type of question is that??"
"leave it."
"rahil....plzz explain wt u mean to say?"
"see , i ws the 1st person u called when u got to know abt ur offer...rite?"
"yes..."
"why me?we were not talkin fr past so many mnths n then suddenly u called....."
"i too dont know rahil....and i never give a thot to that.....i seriously dont know."
"chalo lets go....u hv a plane to board...its kinda late."
"haan..."

asmi wondered in sudden change of his topic.

"lekin abhi totime hai rahil."
"nahi hai time.....aur is se pehle time kam ho jaye ya khatam ho jaye....chalo!!"

she didnt understand what he meant or what he is concealing within himself but she ws kind

of frightened coz of his sudden anger so she didnt argued more.

"10 min mein tumhe jaana hai."he told her

all the way they didnt spoke a single word.she ws confused , scared n he ws confused too.

the final annocement ws done n now she had to leave.there ws strange kind of uneasyness

between them.

"bye asmi...tk cr."he managed to say.
"u too."

usne uska haath apne haath me liya , held it fr a second , fir dheere se chhod diya.this

sweet gesture bought a tear at the corner of her eye , unknowingly.she didnt understand but

maybe he did.it felt as if something is going to break.the didnt break their eye contact

eider atleast rahil didnt stopped staring her.she went two steps n then agn turned to see

him.he too had turned.

"rahil..."

he now turned to face her.

"haan asmi....."
"i will miss u n these days.pichhle kuchh din meri life mein bohot maiyene[importance]

rakhte hain.thnx fr them."
"u dont need to thank me asmi."
"i know but i felt like telling u that i missed u the past months n may be thats y i called

u 1st."
"hmmm...now go u will miss ur flight."
"bye."

she left.....frm dehradun , frm his life...............for the time being to come back with

a bang....

----------------------------after few weeks-----------------

"hi rahil...asmi here."
"hi...nice surprise...hows ur new job."
"i got the message rahil."
"what message u r talking abt asmi??"he asked totally confused.
"u know what i m talking abt."

he remained silent.asmi continued.

"tum jante ho na...plzz aise chup mat raho kuchh to jawab do."
"haan lekin is se kya farak padta hai."
"padta hai rahil , ab mujhe bohot farak padta hai."
"kaise??"
"kyu...k-kyu k-ki....."
"kyuki..??"
"main tumse milna chahati hoon....i m coming there."
"nahi main aata hoon."
"i will wait."
"theek hai."

aate jaate,hanste gaate
socha tha maine mann mein kayi baar,
wo pehli nazar,halka sa asar,
karta hai kyu is dil ko bekraar.

ruk ke chalna,chal ke rukna,
na jaane tumhe hai kiska intezaar,
tera wo yakeen kahin main to nahi,
lagta hai yahi mujhe kyu baar baar.....

yahi sach hai shayad maine pyaar kiya,
haan haan tumse maine pyaar kiya.

aate jaate,hanste gaate
socha tha maine mann mein kayi baar,
hoton ki kali kuchh aur khili,
ye dil pe hua hai kiska ikhtiyaar,

tum kaun ho,batla to do,
kyu karne lagi main tumpe aitbaar,
khamosh rahoon ya main kehdoon,
ya kar loon main chupke se ye sweekar....

yahi sach hai shayad maine pyaar kiya,
haan haan tumse maine pyaar kiya.

(title track-movie:maine pyaar kiya)

-------------aftr 4 days-----------------------

rahil is at airport , he has come to pick her up......the flight has alredy landed.as soon

as he sees her he sighs , she ws wearing suit , copper in color , noodle strap , n long

earrings.his skips a beat.she too sees him.smiles n before rahil cud know she came running

with such a force that rahil steped backward fr support.he cudnt understand what ws

happening.asmi his her face in his solid chest n held him tightly around the waist.he too

put his arms arnd her.both had tears in their eyes.

"tum bohot bure ho."complained asmi.

rahil smiled.

"bohot bohot bure ho.bohot dukh diya tumne mujhe."
"kaise??"
"kitna socha maine pichhle hafton pata hai.jaante ho jab tumne mera haath pakda fir chhoda

to aisa laga jaise tum nahi meri zindagi hi chhoot rahi hai mujhse.us waqt to chali gayi

lekin itne din yahi sochti rahi ki aakhir mera tumhara rishtaa kahan pahunch gaya."
"fir kya jawaab mila??"

she blushed a little.

"yahi ki...main aur tum.....chahe jitni bhi nafrt kar lein , bane 1 dusre se ke liye hi

hain."
"sach."
"bilkul."

"i love you."
"i know."
"no seriously i do love you."

she looked in those brown n intense eyes.it ws definately heaven....atleast fr her.it has

taken them almost an year to realise the true feelings.and when they know....it shudnt be

late.

"i love u too."she confessed.

they hugged.n seprated when realised that people around them has started laughing n

clapping.they still were at airport.it ws embarassing n blushing moment fr them.they hurried

out og airport n reached the hotel where asmi had to stay.

"chalo mummy papa se baat karte hain."
"kis baare mein."
"shaadi ke baare mein RAHI."
"RAHI....tum mere pyaar mein itni kho gayi ho ki mera naam bhul gayi ho??its RAHIL....not

RAHI."
"mere liye to tum mere rahi hi ho na"she caressed his cheek n continued."...humrahi...to bas

maine keh diya to keh diya...rahi rahi rahi rahi."
"ye ajeeb zabardasti hai."
"bas aise hi hai."
"aise kaise....main nahi manta."he ws enjoying fighting wid her...............aftr

looooong!!!!!
"rahi...rahi."

she said n turned away as if angry.

"abhi to pyaar hua hai...ab se hi narazgi."
"main to tumse kabhi nahi naraz ho sakti."she said suddenly n hugged him.he caressed her

hair , kissed on forehead n said
"main bhi.chalo jaldi se shaadi karte hain."
"lekin tumhara kaam??"
"wo to rahega hi."told rahil
"aur training??"
"wo bhi khatam hai bas join karn baki hai , uske liye delhi to jaana hi hai."

she became so happy n kissed him on his cheek.n then blushed.

rahil had finished his training n started his own department.....ACC.....Anti Crime Cell.he

chose his 5 colleagues
rishi
pooja
neha

they worked day n night to solve the case that were handed over to them.it had work related

to underworld n mafia so naturally they were getting many threats but didnt bothere n worked

on same pace.so rahil had many enemies , n a very strong network to know abt these dons too.

while asmi ws a leading model n cud be seen on every ramp.shaadi ka muhurat ws very late

after 8 mnths.so they chose to establish their new careers n were sucessful too.they used to

talk n meet a lot.all of his colleagues were very good frnds with asmi too.
their parents were happy too as their children were to settle down soon in their

life.everything ws going excellent
until.........!!!!!!!

asmi got a new assignment , international , her parents accompanied her to singapore.the

b'ful singapore which left worse memories in their life.

"rahi i m very tense.this is my 1st international modelling."
"u r gr8,i know u will do it fine.just go on...dont think too much."
"ok."i love ya."
"luv u too."

--later--

"tum kaise feel kar rahi ho."
"its better mom."

she ws in hospital,abhi abhi hosh aaya tha use.

"wt happened mum??" she asked her mom.
"kuchh nahi...lagta hai tum zyada hi nervous thi....."
"nervous to thi lekin itni bhi nahi....ki ramp par chalte chalte hi gir jaun...."
"halka sa chakkar aa gaya tha...kitni dafa kaha hai sahi se khaya kar.....sab kehte

hain...lekin tum sunti kiski ho...jab rahil ki nahi sunti to meri kyu sunogi."
"ma...i m in hospital...yahan bhi dantna shuru kar do."
"to kya karoon...................................................... ............."......

her mom left the room , crying , n went straight towards the small church kinda thing in

hospital itself.

"apne aisa kyu kiya....kya galti ho gayi meri bachi se jo aap use itni badi saza de rahe

hain."n she burst into tears.

meanwhile in hospital room.

"hows u feeling asmi??"
"fine doc."
"good."
"until when i will be here , in hospital??"she asked.
"not much time dear....u can leave in few hrs i hv to take some test.tell me did you felt

these dizzying feeling more often??"
"not at all doc...infact it ws fr 1st time.but y??"
"ok...take some rest.nthing just like that."
"thnx doc."

"i will not tell this to rahi , khamakha hi preshaan ho jayega." thot asmi.

she agn felt sleepy n dozed off.

****

"rahi....rahi....rahi......."she crashed into some1 while running here there on road n

shouting fr rahi.
"thankgod tum mil gaye rahi.....main dar gayi thi bohot darr gayi thi.fir kabhi mujhe akela

mat chhodna.nahi chhodoge na??bolo??vaada karo...abhi..."
"tum meri jaan ho asmi , meri dil ki dhadkan ho , jab ye band hongi tab bhi nahi

chhodunga....."
"main bhi."
n she hugged him tight...more...more tight....
n then they parted asmi held his hand , felt his warm palm n dheere se chhod diya n

disappeared into air while rahil screamed......"asmi...asmi..."

n he woke up...this ws the dream that ws bothering rahil fr past few days , he felt

something sad is gonna happen....he called asmi immidiately......

"why the hell she is not taking my call...???"said he in frustration.

****

"u can leave now asmi" told the nurse.
"thnx."
"the doc will come up to see you."
"i will wait."

"hey asmi..hows u??"askd the doc.
"feeling good...little weakness though."
"hmm...u can go now...but take care....n by the way u hv got nice name."
"thnx.rahi likes also it."

the puzzled ecpression on doc's face mase asmi to giggle a little then she continued...

"he is my fiancee....very cute n dashing..."
"ohh.."
"where is mom n dad??"
"they are waiting fr u in car."
"ok."

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"beta how r u??"
"oh ma...i m good..its so good to be out of hospital.i dont like that place at all."

listening to this her mother broke down.

"wat is it ma??"
"we shud hv told u this b4 only..."told his father.
"wat dad??"her tone now serious.
"we r flying directly to LA,USA...."
"but y dad...i want to meet rahi...."
"this fr ur good only beta...its like..."
"like wat dad??"asmi ws angry now.
"beta..."they had reached airport..."there is some doctor in LA that we have to see."
"i m not getting anything dad."
"well...there is some clot in ur blood that has reached ur brain while circulation n....it

is....fatal."

she didnt spoke , didnt cried , didnt reacted..

"asmi...asmi..."said his dad.
"this cant happen papa....this cant....i...we just started understanding love...we just

started the life papa."

'papa'...very few times asmi calls his dad 'papa'....only when she really is SHATTERED!!
he cried.

"we will fight this asmi...we will..come on"he said forcing a smile.

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"shit..shit..this is the 100th time i hv called her..."said frustrated rahil.
"wat is it rahil..."askd rishi.
"rishi..it has been over a month since we talked her mobile is going switched off...."

n he hugged rishi n tears flowed down his face.

"calm down rahil...go n find out wats happening...wt if she needs u??"
"yeah n that dream itd eating me frm inside...but.."
"dont worry abt that mafia case...i will handle..go."
"thnx rishi."

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"n when he ws returning he met wid an accident n we dont know wt happend there in

singapore!!"told rishi to nethra.
"u never tried to find out?"
"we did nethra,bt we cudnt find anything.bas itna hi ki asmi did her show bt fainted coz of

so much public....thats it."it ws ali this time.
"she ws a top model ali....how can she be scared of crowd??"
"but she ws...rem she called rahil telling him how nervous she ws to face the international

crowd."
"nothing more???"asked nethra

they all nodded in a no.

"ok i will see u all soon hope nxt time i come with rahil."

their eyes shone....with hope...

she began to leave bt turned agn...

"can i hv any of asmi's pic??"

they all had questions in their eyes but...

"yes...we always keep her foto in rahil's cabin table hoping he wud be back n ask fr it the

1st thing....i will get one.."

she looked at the pic.....fair , cheerful , long silky hair , b'ful smile , sharp

features.....rahil ws lucky....very lucky...

"can i get one foto of rahil as well??"

even asmi ws lucky too....seeing at rahil's then pic she thought!!
they suited each other....very well!!

'people are lucky to get lovers like that...'she murmered.

nethra left....wid hope of curing rahi....giving hope to his frnz...may be this ws the

DESTINY each was subjected to!!

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end of part-6

nxt part....Nethra...n Rahil!!

Edited by liquidfantasy - 17 years ago

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Hey cool part!! Nethra ko to pic pasand ani hi thi 😆 ....Ab Rahil hai hi itna Handsome 😳 😳

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liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

PART-7

A bright sunny day , the sunrays lighten the rom n disturbs the sleep of person.he gets up n his eyes see 2 foto frames hanging frm wall just in front of him.

one is smart n handsome guy , smiling....
other is very b'ful girl , divine beauty , cheerful n lovely smile.

he shuts is eye immidiately as in pain.then opens them suddenly , gets up n throws the frame of man...on ground the glass crashes....nxt it ws frame with the foto of girl....he throws but stops at last second.....sees it again...and then suddenly hugs it.tears flowed down.....all meories were crystal clear....how much angry he ws wen he saw her......but he loved her immensely at the same time n cudnt see her the way she ws...he ws angry..but her smile on seeing him aftr long n her pain nade gim forget all his anger.
why why..why life is so harsh on him,what destiny has for him..why he had to lose her....

ishq ka dard hai,dard hai ishq ka,

meri duniya mein aake mat ja , mat jaa , mat jaa,

kya maine pa liya hai,
kya maine kho diya hai,
shayad ye sochkar hi dill aaj ro diya hai.
tu hi to tha mera apna,
kaise fir ye tuta sapna,
tu jo milke kho jayega,
jeena mushkil ho jayega.

meri duniya mein aake mat ja , mat jaa , mat jaa,

ye ishq ki hai raahein jin par main chal raha hoon,
is aag mein najane kabse main jal raha hoon,
main to hoon tera deewana,
tune mujhko na pehchana,
dilbar mere aisa na kar ,
chahat mein tu ruswa na kar.

(movie:tum bin)

he was sitting on his knees,holding the foto,
this all ws witnessed by dr nethra...all this made her a little sad..
what effect asmi had on him,her foto can make him cry aftr so many years.

"u do love her rahil...then y dont u speak up??"she said to herself.

she entered he room.he got up n kept the frame beside his bed.

"goodmorning mr rahil."she said.

--no response--

"i know u not gonna reply to eider.its 2 months since i m wishing u n u hvnt wished me even once.thats not fair.."she said in somewhat childlike manner.
"but i m still not gonna leave this habit of mine....so enjoy your day."she decided to leave.

but as if she rememberd something n turned to say that.

"waise how ws the foto...did u liked it??"

--again no reply--

"u know how much disappointed asmi wud be seeing u like this...whenever she comes."she said last part aftr a pause.

he looked his doc....with eyes so helpless n terribly sad!!

"she won't."

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end of part.