’what DESTINY holds’--RA-part19+epilogue.. - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-3

"tell me abt rahil n asmi"she said.
"but u hv to give our rahil sir back..."the voice ws requestful.

"i cant promise but i will......."
"dont try nethra , just do it.tumse pehle docs ne bhi yahi kaha tha...aur kuchh nahi kar paye.tum bas uska dhyaan rakhna."requested rishi.
"yahi to mera kaam hai rishi.i will n he will b there in front of u some day soon."replied nethra.her voice ws dedicated n firm!!

it gave strength n hope to all the people there.there eyes shown with twinkle....once again....they had courage to challenge destiny...once again...to be successful this time.


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5 yrs earlier

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"oh god...he is so kool."xclaimed a girl.
"dont see him, he is mine."said another girl with jealous.
"keep ur stupid views to urself miss , he is mine."

this ws usual wenever , rahil n his 2 frnz were used to enter college.both his frnz rohit n mohit , hunks themselves,were so envious wid him.

"yaar wo tujhe kyu itna pasand karti hain"askd rohit.
"kyuki he is rich,fair,intelligent,dashing....."he stopped wen he got a slap on back of his lower head(tapli...remember!!).it ws rahil.
"shut up!"said rahil..
"but its truth yaar"argued rohit.
"seems its ur turn now!!"replied rahil.

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he is in 3rd year of his bachelor's,still left with 3 semesters.not topper but very applicative mind.

"oh god! mummy to chali gayi aur mujhe yahan padne ke liye bhej diya.kitni baar kaha mujhe model banana hai...engineer nahi....fir bhi.pata nahi kab ye 4 saal poore hinge aur mujhe chhuti milehgi!ouch..is bike ko bhi beech mein khade hona tha.....ye le!!"and the girl , who ws talking to herself , kicked the jet black hayabusa parked in parking.

----ccrraasshh!!!----
"crap!!"

the bikes that stood in line fell one after the other.
"ab ye kya ho gaya....uff.."

she kicked the bike again in anger ...

"i saw that!!"said a male voice from behind.
"to kya karoon!!"answered the girl.
"that ws my bike"
"hell with it"
"how dare u say like that."
"HELL WITH IT....like this!"
"mere coll mein aa kar mujhe hi se aise baat kar rahi ho."asked the same guy.
"tumhara coll....mujhe to pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha.sada hua coll,sade huye students aur sade huye tum....aur tumhari bike."
"tum pagal to nahi ho??"asked the guy coming closer to her.
"nahi.lekin yahan reh kar ho jaungi."answered back the girl.
he tried to held her hand to stop her.but she took her hand out of his clutches n went.

"ajkal ki ladkiyaan..uff...pagal ho jaye koi inse baat kar ke."said the frustrated guy.

this ws the very 1st meeting of rahil n asmi.asmi in 1st yr n rahil in 3rd yr.perfect!!but they fought!!it ws in their destiny to fight , and.....


since that day they changed their way wenever they were to cross each other.

it ws final yr now n last cultural fest of rahil to attend.he arranged the skit , costumes , story , backdrops...everything.but did one mistake...left the job of choosing the female main lead to his frnz mohit n rohit.they chose....ASMI....!!

everything ws done...both rahil n asmi agreed to the siuation n started rehersing but just a day b4 final day , rahil , while practicing pulled asmi lil more closer to himself n asmi...well...SLAPPED him back and the play got cancelled!!

every girl ws angry on asmi n every guy ws scared of her now!

****

"nahi ma...abhi nahi.maine apko kitni baar kaha hai ki mujhe shaadi nahi karni.aur fir main abhi sirf final sem mein hoon.coll bhi nahi khatam hua hai.aur fir mera career bhi to hai."

"janti hoon.lekin career to papa ka business hai aur jab tum settle ho hi jaoge to fir rukna kyu??"

"par ma tum janti hoon mujhe police cop banana hai!!"

"janti hoon...fir hamare is business ka kya hoga??"

"main nahi janta lekin mujhe abhi police training leni hai fir officer banana fir hi shaadi karni!"

"lekin beta..."

"ma papa aur apke chahane par hi to main yahan pad raha hoon.bas iske baad mein apni marzi se hi chaloonga."

"nahi beta...1 baar tum shaadi karlo fir chahe jo karo...aur 1 ladki bhi hai.tum use jaante ho...shraddha."

"kaun jo mere coll mein hai??"

"haan."

"ma....bilkul nahi...wo pagal hai...poori pagal."

"to fir tum apni marzi humein bata do...nahi to hum koi ladki dekh lenge tumhare liye...yahi hamara akhiri faisla hai."and she disconnected the call!

"oh god...save me...ab 1 ladki kahan se laonga."
"lane ki kya zaroorat hai , itni hain na."said rohit.
"lekin kahan??"askd rahil.
"is coll mein bohot tujhe pasand karti hain kisi ko bhi le jaa."

"ye idea theek hai..."smiled rahil.

****

"tu chup kar ja rohit....teri sade huye , ghatiya idea ki wajah se hi aaj 6th lasdki bhi fail ho gayi.ma ko pata lag gaya ki main shaadi delay karne ke liye aise kar raha hoon."

"hmmm...wo sari ladki tujh par marti thi...isliye shayad wo wahan ja kar itni khush ho gayi ki aunty ko pata lag gaya.hmm...koi aisi ladki nahi hai jo tujhse pyaar na karti ho??"

rohit n mohit suddenly had smile on their lips n were staring rahil...

"wat??"he askd completely confused.

"no way guys....jo tum soch rahe ho wo nahi hoga."

"sirf wahi ladki hai rahil.soch lo , shaadi karni padegi..kisi shradhha jaisi ladki se."

"nahi main unse shaadi nahi kar sakta....par main asmi ke paas......u both hv lost it"

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry fr the dealy guys....but as i promised a long part...i hv written that!!

soon the romantic parts wud start!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: aaakkii

wow ...awesome ...hai ye kya kiya Rahil ke saath 👏 ....waise the concepts jus too good ...& the mysry is well .....outstanding .....this was the word propping out in my heart while reading the part....u know my heart was intrested in writing this word too....but kya karegaa....bichaaraa anpadh hai 😆 ......besides this silly joke .....I wanna say u to cont before I die thinking of the real mystry ...so babes cont soon...thanks
Akanksha 😛

thnx aki...the mystery will continue for more parts!!

hope u like them too!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

mehndi that was just tooo good dear...simply awesome... it is so different & interesting... me tho very damn curious about this fic...me hooked up to this story.. very damn well written..superb..amazing..lovely..wonderful...rocking. excellent..fantastic..dhassu..bindaas..raapchik..jhakaas... simply mind-blowing...keep up the good work going... 👏 do continue as soon as possible..kyunke me literally biting my nails yeh jaanne ke liye kii agge kya hoga... 😊 😛 😃

thnx dear for soooooooooooooo many adjectives u used fr my fic...but ur fics are amazing...more dhaasu 😉..lolzz!!

i m sorry fr nt able to read them bt i will reply soon once i m free!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: fravashi

yeah!!! what was the past even i want to know it .i think that she left him because of some reason 😡 .hey yaar lekin joh rahil ki halat hai i can't see him like that 😭 . it hurts a lot 😔 .you know even i have faith now that netra will be able to take him out of that condition for sure 👏 .i am eagerly waiting fro the next part to hear what those all 4 say about asmi and rahil relationship 😉.the part was great 👍🏼!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

hi nikki...so here i m back to replying few of my readers!!and as usual loved ur reply...i m late in posting but frm now on i will try to b regular!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@vandu:-

thnx dear..u will see RA soon.i know u love them more! 😉 😳
liquidfantasy thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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keep replying guys!!that keeps me going to post early!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome dear..the parts are going too damn interesting..mazaa aaraha hai.. seriously i'am enjoying myself way too , toooo , tooooo , toooooooo , toooooooooooo, muchhh...the flashback is going very interesting.... me hooked up to your story... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly...& dear it's ok you take your own time & comment on my story..i understand.. 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey the stroy is really ineteresting 👏 .ohhhhh sooo iss tarah they will start liking each other 😉 . maybe they will do natak ki they love each other and all aur shayad sach mein pyaar hojayega 😆 .lekin agar pyaar hai toh rahil ki halat aise kyun hai . kya asmi marr chuki hai ya phir she ditched him 😭 .ohhhh godddd!!!it's so confusing but really interesting 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz.......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi dear...jus caught up wid ur this new ff...looking interesting.. 😃 .....gr8 parts till now... 👏 ..cont soon... 😊

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