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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
guys i apologise for my late posting.
i will post my nxt part kuchh hi dair mein!!
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Part-4

"tum dono pure pagal ho gaye...asmi...jante nahi main aur wo....wo aur main...kabhi nahi!!"

"achha fir tu hi bata is coll mein 1 aisi ladki jo tujh par flat na ho , smart ho , teri mummy ko pataye aur tere jaisa hi attitude rakhti ho??"questioned rohit.

"hmmmmm....kah to tu sahi raha hai."said he aftr thinking fr few mins.
"lekin yaar...wo thapad nahi yaad hai..meras to aaj bhi cheek par nishaan hai.kahin fir pad gaya to?"

"tu 1 baar try to kar!"said rohit.
"aur soch agar wo maan gayi to tera sapna pura ho jayega aur baar baar mummy force bhi nahi karengi shaadi ke liye."


rahil went away wihout replying to his frnz but kept on thinking.his frnz were correct bt the task ws difficult.obviously , how can he ask a girl who co-incidentaly happens to be his enemy , to be his temporary GF.even the thought gave him a jitter and he touched his cheek where he got the slap.

"main bhi kya soch raha hoon.un dono bewkuf ki baaton mein aa gaya.mujhe 1 thapad aur nahi khana."said he to himself.

he reached his locker , took his tennis kit n went to practice.he ws representing his coll fr the annual sports meet in tennis.while on the way the 'destiny' turned his way towards....
(lets see)

he ws going on his way to practice wen he noticed a girl , with her hair tied in a high pony , a band arnd her forehead n in a sports attire holding basket ball.
she dribbled the ball few times...stood on her toes with arms stretched and basket ball in her hands and very gracefully threw the ball towards the basket fr the shot!!!!

"PERFECT...BEAUTIFUL"said rahil who ws watching the girl all time without knowing that the girl is none other than asmi!

"tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??"askd the furious asmi.
"kuchh nahi...compliment kar raha tha"he replied coolly.
"koi zarurat nahi thi."she said with anger in voice.

"maine to de diya tumhe nahi chahiye to tum mat lo."
"tum pagal ho kya?ye kya keh rahe ho??"
"khush to tum bhi hui ho.har ladki hoti hai bas maan-na nahi chahati"
"ae mr. apne kaam se kaam rakho , meri khushi aur dukh ka hisaab nahi."
"tumhe pata hai tum.....rehne do!!"n rahil left frm there.
"mujhe pata hai i m good!"she said to herself n continued playing basket ball.


"sahi socha maine , wo ladki to har baat par gussa ho jati hai.aur compliment par to khaane ko daudti hai."said rahil to himself.

they faced opposite direction but again 'DESTINY' made them stand in front of each other.

***


"nahi ma.bilkul nahi.ab aap mujhe shaadi ke liye force mat karna.modelling to karne nahi deti bas ghar basane ki jaldi hai.nahi ma.bas.main abhi shaadi na kar sakti hoon na karingi.papa ko bhi aap hi samjha dena."
and the call ws disconnected.

"ye mummiyon ko har cheez ki jaldi kyu hoti hai?pehle padane ki ab shaadi karane ki.1 baar shaadi huyi to modelling to bas sapna hi reh jayegi.nahi.maa ko aise ideas milte kaise honge??"asmi wondered.



but wothout her knowledge some1 ws listening them.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
nxt part will b coming tom only!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey finallllyyyyyou updted. ohhhh...... abb samaj aaraha hai that rahil ko aik aise ladki se shadi karni hai jismein attitude ho, gussa jaldi aata ho aur woh saari qualities asmi mein hai 😆 😆 . toh i guess ki woh plan banayege ki agar yeh sab se kahe that woh dono shadi kar rahe hai then no one will force them again and again ki shadi karlo and all 👏 .toh this is there plan ki yeh saab settle hone ke baad they will seperate and all 😉 . paar aisa kuch hoga nahi 😉 . shayad issi dohoran they will fall in love aur sahi mein shadi karne ki sochege with each other 😳 . lekin shayad kismat ko yeh manzur nahi hoga .and something will happen jisse woh seperate ho jaye 😭 . i guess aisa hikuch hoga 😉 . i am waiting for the next part really eagerly kynki ussi mein pata chalegaki actual mein hua kya tha rahil ke saath jisse uski zindagi aise hogayi 😭 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzz..........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 nice part,........waiting for RA 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
very interesting...good going... i'am liking the way the parts are going forward very much.. 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i m so sorry guys i m nt able to updt the fic regularly.i hv got few xams coming up aftr that i will definately update a loooong part n be regular.

once i be regular it will be finished in 12-15 more parts.it isnt a long fic.

i m so sorry fr all the wait!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no problem..exams are the first priority... you do your exams well.. we all will wait for the next part of the fanfic.. All The Best.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39


HAPPY NEW YEAR readers....wishing u luv n luck.
i sorry fr not posting the part for long......n thank u all for bearing the long gap so patiently.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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since it has been a long time.....i m postig a quick recap n the next part.

i looooong one as i promised.

recap:

till now we see rahil is in some asylum n several docs has treated him but to no improvement.he used to get

frequent fits in which he used to harm himself n hasnt uttered a single word for past 5 yrs.now dr nethra wants

to take upon the case coz person she is moved wid the the lonliness on rahil's face.so she meets our defence

minister as he ws the mentioned name in records of rahil.

while in the meeting she gets to kinow abt the background of rahil.he is son of top IT person n a very brave cop.he

has got a love life too.
ethra then meets his colleagues n closr frenz.they tell her abt
ASMI n RAHIL's coll adventures.

n nethra too has a best frnd in aviral.

rishi , pooja n rest of frnz had started telling her the past life of rahil.

rahil was an intelligent student n asmi ws his junior.they startd fighting frm very 1st day.they were frm diff

backgrnds n values but had 1 thing in common.they wanted to achieve their goals with same problem.their parents

wanted them to settle.so they decide upon something.wat destiny made them to do....

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PART-5

"wo maine....wo mujhe....."
"kya hai??"
"mujhe tumse...actually 1 baat hai jismein hum dono ka fayda hai....."
"aisi koi baat ho hi nahi sakti jismein mera aur tumhara fayda 1 saath ho.!!!"
"pehle sun to lo asmi..."
"mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni....bye.."

she turned to leave but rahil held her hand.

"kaha na ruko...aur suno.."
"attitude huh??"
"whatever...maine tumhari fone par baat sun li hai....and u wont believe we hv the same problem!"
"matlab??"
"dekho tumhare parents bhi chahate hain ki tum shaadi kar lo aur mere bhi to kyu na..."
"what do u mean??ye zaruri baat karni thi tumhe??"
"haan...mera matlab nahi.....mera matlab suno to....."
"u r speaking crap mr rahil...i hv no intrest in listening to it!"
"i know u want to be model....top one....but ur parents will never allow u unles............"
"unless....???"
"unless u tell ki u r already in love n wanted to get settle wid only that guy.."
"ahaan...so u hv got the same probs...wt u want to be??"
"a cop.."
"u...." and she burst into roars of laughter....."i m sorry i nvr meant to laugh like that! but u speak on....it seems

intresting."
"dekho tum meri mummy ko impress karo...main tumhari ko karunga.fir tum kehna ki mujhe training ke liye jana hai

aur main kahunga ki tumhe modelling ka offer mila hai is se hum dono ke dreams poore ho jayenge.fir kuch time

baad keh denge ki we cudnt match up with one another so we broke up......"
"haan bohot maza aayega..."

she clapped her hands in excitement and a smile came to her lips...!!

"tum itni khush kyu ho?"

he rose his eyebrow!

"aise ulte seedhe kaam karne mein na bohot mazaa aata hai isliye!!"

he smiled and stared her.
white color collar shirt , with dark blue color capris , blue shoes , hair left loose , and the tiny klutcher at end of

her sleeves.how cud he forgot the famous attitude she carried.he too ws happy!

"to chalein??"
"kahan??"
"mummy ke paas,unhein to batana hoga na ki i m in love wid u!"
"abhi hi..??tum to bade stupid ho??"
"kyu kya hua??"
"1 dum se ladki ko le jaoge to mummy kaise manegi??thoda natak to karna hoga....aur mummy ko bhi involve karna

hoga."
"natak...mummy...kya kah rahi ho??"
"mr intelligent u r real idiot...tumhare mumma janti hain ki tum shaadi nahi karna chahate , fir tum mujhe le jaoge

to pakka unhein lagega ki tum kuch khichdi paka rahe ho...isliye pehle thoda base banayenge....fir batayenge..."
"main kuch samjhja nahi..."
"hmmm...let me think....lets meet in evening n i will tell u then....tab tak main kuchh sochti hoon!!"
"theek hai...lekin jaldi sochna jo sochna hai...."
"tumhari tarah lazy nahi hoon main."
"kisne kaha ki main lazy hoon??"
"kisi ke kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi.mujhe maloon hai."
"tum apni limits mein reh kar baat karo."

he pointed his finger towards her.

"ye ungli neeche rakh kar baat karo."
"uff...kaise hoga ye poora natak...."
"haan ye to hai...lets agree on 1 thing first...we shud control our anger...fine??"
"hmmm...theek hai!"
"today eve , COSTA COFFEE , at 5:00"
"i will be there."

-----------------COSTA COFFEE----------------------

"one cuppacino for the lady and expresso for me."

rahil took the order n sat in isolated place with asmi.

"to kya socha??"
"1 plan hai...badiya sa"
"kya?"
"sabse pehle to samajh lo lo aane waale 15-17 din bohot imp hain.to in dinon tumhe aise dikhana ki tumhe pyaar ho

gaya hai lekin tumhe abhi tak pata nahi hai...."
"lekin ye main karoonga kaise..."he cut in between.
"yaar sawal bohot puchhte ho.....ab atleast 10 min tak chup rehna fir sab puchhna theek hai.ab suno........
ghar par acting karo ki jaise tum khoye khoye huye ho...jab mumma samnbe ho to aise act karna ki tum har waqt hi

kisi ke baare mein sochte rehte ho....mummy ke saath shopping par jana...fir kuchh ladkiyon ke kapde dekhna aur 1

suit bhi le lena.....lekin mumma se chhup kar....aise chhupana ki mumma ko pata bhi na lage aur pata bhi lag jaye.aur

sabse best...start listening to romantic songs...is se tumhare mummy ko thoda alag to lagega ki sachmuch kuchh hua

hai tumhe.....samajh rahe ho na??"
"bolti raho....sab samajh aa raha hai."
"fir tumhare mumma hi puchh lengi ki kya hua...aur coll mein bhi hamein ye natak karna hoga....."
"tum mein to bohot dimaag hai...."
"janti hoon."

n he smiled agn.he ws happy ki this time his mom wont know the fact.the plan started frm nxt day only.

*****
"rahil...rahil...kahan ho.....arre yahi baithe ho to jawab bhi nahi de rahe....raahil.....sun rahe ho kahan khoye ho??"
"kuchh nahi mumma bas aise hi."

*****

"beta aaj koi bhi driver nahi hai!tu hi chal na...."
"kya...aur aapko shopping par jana hai??nahi ma main nahi jaunga"
"bas aur kuchh nahi sunungi...tu hi chalega..."
"chalo..."

his eyes shone, after all he sent away the 2 drivers....so that he can go...

"dekh ye kaisa hai..."

her mother asked showing him the pink beautiful saree......

"mujhe nahi pata ma...achhi hai...suno main abhi aata hoon...."

he bought a very b'ful n expensive dress , made the pay ment and settled something at the cash counter.

"chalein ma??"
"tu kahan gaya tha.....??"

listening to this he smiled n thought something dreamily....

"bol kahan gaya tha....kya ho gaya hai tujhe ajkal...??"
"kuchh nahi ma.....apne le liya jo lena tha??"
"haan...chal.."

"ye lijiye iske paise."said rahil giving him the money.
"sab kuchh saath hi pack kar doon??"asked the person.
"sab saath liyahai to saath hi pack karwayenge."answered rahil.
"jo suit apne pehle liya tha wo bhi??"asked the person.
"pehle liya tha??rahil kya liya tha tumne??"Asked his mom.
"kuchh nahi ma...use kuchh galatfehmi hui hai.kyu bhaisaab maine aur kya liya hai...bataiye."
"wo ladies suit......"
"aap bill kar dijiye jo bhi hai..."rahil said cutting in between.
"beta kya ho rahahai.....tumne ladies suit liya hai??par kiske....??
"ma...kuchh nahi liya maine...chaliye chalte hain...." rahil told her.

they went away frm there.while leaving he showed a thumbs up sign to cashier n thanked him.

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"aur fir us cashier ne itni achhi acting kari...ma to confuse ho gayi " he ws telling this to asmi on fone....
"hoon na main smart?" he asked asmi.
"tum smart...bilkul nahi...agar tum bhool na rahe ho to bat doon ki wo cashier wala idea mera tha jab tumne mujhe

mall se fone kiya tha tab maine bataya tha...."
"us se kya hota hai...sari acting to maine kari..."
"par planning to meri thi..."
agar acting mein kuchh kami hoti to planning kahan kaam aati....bolo??"
"planning hi na hoti to tum acting kahan karte...bolo?"
"achha theek hai.....we both have equally worked....thnx."
"ye theek hai."
"ab kya karna hai??"
"ab...tumhe aise dikhana hai ki tum kahin ja rahe ho....kisi ladki ke saath."
"ye kaise hoga??"
"full taiyyar ho kar jana...suit , perfume n all.car dhulwa lena....jab mumma puchhe to kehna ki frnd ka b'day hai.ab

koi ladka frnd ke b'day par suit to nahi pehnta...isliye unhein pata lag jayega ki tum jhooth keh rahe ho."
"lekin kya sachmuch hum dinner saath karenge??"
"main aur dinner wo bhi tumhare saath....kabhi nahi."
"ohh to matlab kisi ladki ko patana padega??"
"kya zaroorat hai...itni ladkiyaan tum hare peechhe pagal hai...kisi ko bhi le jao."
"tumse advice nahi maanga tha...." he said in angry tone.
"hum fir ladne lag gaye...achha hoga ki fone rakh dein....bye."
"bye."

*****

"ye itna taiyaar ho kar kahan ja rahe ho???kisi ladki ko date par.....??"

listening to this rahil thought......

"kehti sahi hai asmi....har baar ma ka shak badta ja raha hai.dimag to hai us mein."

"kahin nahi ma..bas frnd ka b'day hai wahi ja raha hoon."
"itna tayar ho kar??"she asked with a chuckle.
"oho...party thodi formal hai bas isliye ye suit pehna hai."
"theek hai...ja."

*****

"yaar tum to kamaal ho."
"janti hoon."
"antaryami ho."
"ye bhi janti hoon."
"oho..tumhari to kabhi tarif nahi karni chahiye.main serious hoon asmi."
"achha....baba theek hai.rahil,itne din ho gaye hain , tumhare mumma ne ab tak kuchh puchha kyu nahi

tumse??mujhe to chinta ho gayi hai ki kahin unhone seriously notice hi na kiya ho."
"arrey nahi asmi , wo sab dekhti hain bas abhi tak kuchh kaha nahi.jald hi ye bhi puchh lengi , aur tumhara plan

kabhi fail ho hi nahi sakta!!"
"haan ye to hai.."
"tum koi mauka nahi chhodti na apni taruf ka?"
"achha abhi to keh rahe the ki mein apni tarif nahi sunti...."
"oho...chhodo na..."
"suno...kahoge kya jan tumhari mumma puchhengi to??"
"maine to is baare mein kuchh socha hi nahi."
"to soch lo jaldi hi ye sawal tum par fire hone wala hai ki....'wo ladki kaun hai rahil?' "
"saari planning tumhari hai , tum hi bata do."
"hmmm...smile bhi karna aur mana bhi karna....fir 3-4 baar puchhne ke baad bata dena."
"theek hai."
"bas theek hai....us time kuchh gadbad mat karna warna itne dinon ki mehnat par pani fir jayega."
"tum bas ye batao ki kya karna hai...kaise karna hai wo main sambhal loonga...."
"par..."
"trust me.."

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'trust me' the 2 words were enuff , pata nahi kyu in 12-15 dinon mein wo rahil par trust karna seekh chuki

thi.anjaane mein hi wo apni zindagi se mil li.use to rahil bas 1 zariya laga apne khwab ko pura karne ka

lekin.....kismat ne to rahil ko uski manzil hi banane ka faisla kiya tha.aisi manzil jo shayad milkar bhi na mile.
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"ASMI..."
"rahil chila kyu rahe ho??"
"kal tumhe ma ne bulaya hai............wo tumse milna chahati hain."
"tumne unhein yaskeen kaise dilaya????"
"unhone mujhse akhir puchh hi liya ki bata tujhe ajkal hua kya hai?pehle to main sharmaya...fir chup ho gaya fir

kaha ki kuchh nahi...fir thoda blush kiya....fir chup ho gaya...isi tarah thodi der tak kiya fir mumma ko bata diya ,

jaisa tumne kaha tha."
"arrey waah main to tumhe idiot samjhti thi...lekin utne ho nahi jitne dikhte ho."
"ab meri tarif karna band karo aur chalo."
"in kapdon mein??"

she pointed towards the skirt n spaghetti top she ws wearing.

"tension nahi .....tumhare liye ye dress hai."
"mere liye??tumne mere liye dress liya??"
"haan..nahi...mera matlab hai us din shopping par gaya tha na to ye dress liya tha...to tumhe de raha hoon."

asmi had some confused expressions bt she smiled eventually n accepted the dress.

"bas mujhe 20 min do i will come ok."
"yes boss."

he ws reading the magazine to kill time , she came frm behind n said

"chalein..."
"bilkul...main to.................."

he got up n saw her.......the look ws enuff to drop his mouth n stare her without a blink.she ws looking gorgeous in

rust color suit that had a chudidaar with some sequins work that shone at some angles.such a simple dress he

bought yet it looked so b'ful is the suit se pretty or is it asmi who made it b'ful???

"kya hua achhi nahi lag rahi??"
"tum bohot sundar ho asmi."

he had seen asmi in suit fr the 1st time n without a doubt it looked damn elegant on her slim n maintained figure.
listening to his compliment asmi too , blushed fr a second n then come to her usual self.

"muh band karo aur chalo.....i know i m b'ful n plzz rahil....stop staring...."
"m..mai...main t-o..bas..."
"rahil...chalo."

*****

"tum theek to ho na asmi??"
"ji aunty...par kya hua???"
"nahi wo is pagal ko tum jaisi mil gayi na isliye puchha....tum ise sahi se janti to ho na??"

they were at rahil's home , n rahil's mom ws super impressed seeing such a b'ful n well mannered girl fr her son.

"ab aunty aap to janti ho na ki love is blind isliye...."
"haan ye bhi hai....kuchh achha kiya hoga isne tabhi itni sundar ladki mili hai."
"ma ab aap meri buraiyaan karni band karengi....meri GF ke samne..."
"hum to mazak kar rahe the rahil...chalo ise ghar chhod aao raat ho gayi hai."
"ji mumma."

"thnx asmi.tumne bohot sahi acting kari ab mera ssapna zaroor pura hoga.n all credit goes to u."
"aisa nahi hai rahil..tum bhi to meri help kar rahe ho.thnx to u too."
"pata hai jab tumse pehli baar mila tha na tab hi socha tha ki tumse main kabhi baat nahi karunga...kitni nakchadi

aur gussewali thi tum....aaj dekho kitni achhi ho..."
"aur tum....tum kya bohot achhe the tab....jab dekho ladte rehte the....."
"main ladta tha ya tum??bolo??"
"tum tum tum....aur kaun....sirf tum hi ladti thi...ladaki kahin ki."
"main ladti thi....theek hai to bas ab aaj se hamari dushmani fir se shuru....GET LOST!"
"main nahi tum GET LOST!...tum meri car mein ho...."
"theek hai...goodbye."
"goodbye."

she stormed out of his car.

"shit...main bhi na....bilkul pagal hoon......kahan use raat mein akele chhod diya....asmi...i m sorry...wapas aa jao."

BUT they were destined to fight always....always n destined to fall in love also!!

*****
"mumma shaadi ke liye keh rahi thi."
"meri bhi keh rahi hain."
"tumne apni mummy ko bata diya??"
"nahi....wo to tum bataoge na..."
"main...kyu??meri mumma ko tumne bataya tha ya maine...bolo?"
"tumne bataya tha....to meri mummy ko bhi bata do na...."
"lekin kaise ??tum hi idea do..."
"bohot simple hai....mera rishta le aao mere ghar par...apne mumma papa ke saath."
"hmmmm.."
"aur tabhi tum apne aur main apne career ke baare mein batayenge.....wo zyada se zyada bas engagement

karwayewnge......uske baad.....tum apne raaste aur main apne....theek!!"
"haan theek."

they stared in each other's eyes as is something is not done.....kuchh to hai jo dono ko ahsaas to hua par samajh

nahi aaya....alag hone ke khayal se hi dono shayad thoda darr se gaye the......lekin.....

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wel this thing ws the hot news in coll too.rahil's parents mer asmi's and agreed on engagement as they

assumed.every girl ws jealous of asmi.iniially they didnt believed coz they had seen them fighting like mads....bt

they had to believe.they were engaged n finally rahil got graduated.....he went fr his training n asmi who ws junior

to rahil....ws studying n side by side applying in modelling agencies.....n she got few offers too bt nt the one she ws

waiting for.all this while she never thot of rahil.she ws still would be bahu in rahil's parents eyes t nvr talked to

rahil neider did he.only once or twice the talked for few mins....they both assumed that nothing ws left between

them to talk abt......


"hello"
"hello"
"is that miss asmi singh"
"yeah"
"i m vijay kumar , calling from 'fresh talent' u applied as a model here?"
"yes i did."
"congrats mam....u hv become the lead model.u hv to come here in 4 days fr further formalities."
"i will surely be there , without a doubt mr kumar.thnx fr letting me know!"

"yes yes yes yes i got the offer.....i will tell this to rahil 1st....he will be very happy."

"hello."
"rahil rahil rahil......i m very happy today!"
"asmi...wat a surprise....aftr a long time yaar."
"yeah...i got my 1st BIG contract."
"cool yaar...where's the party?"
"wherever u say."
"comeon meet me yaar...."
"surely....i will be there after few days , i hv to go to office in 4 days n sign the agreement.....after that i will come

to ur training academy."
"thats fine...no issues...ur mom dad happy or wat?"
"rahil.... u r the 1st person to know...i will keep the fone now....tumne mujhe yaad dilaya ki i hv to tell them also."
"ya sure."
"tk cr...miss ya."
"same here...u tk cr too....bye"

she never bothered abt the small fact that she thot of rahil as 1st person to know the news that made her too

happy.but rahil did , he thot thot n thot that y suddenly asmi called n y he ws the 1st one to know such cheerful

piece of news.he cudnt get the answer bt always thot abt it.
finally he thot of asking asmi when she will come....but will she be there??
ya she said she will come.....or she said just like that....y he has started feeling like that suddenly.....!!
he will ask asmi this too....

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"rahil"

she shouted the second she saw him frm metres away.he kinda liked the way she called.....so he smiled...
but his smile has to get widened coz she came running n hug him tight....he too lifted her a little to match up to his

height.they remained like that for few seconds n then realised , everyone ws seeing them....

"rahil...sab dekh rahe hain."
"janta hoon....lekin bohot time baad mile hain....dil nahi kar raha tumhe chhodne ka."

he said that in trance of feeling her after long.but suddenly realised n kept her down.

"kaisi ho?"
"khush hoon."
"hamesha raha karo....achhi lagti ho."

they both noticed the engagement ring in each other's fingers...it felt something good in some corner of heart.

"jante ho...i m on top of world....i got the assignment."
"congrats dear."
"thnx.hv to leave fr australia nxt week."

he didnt said any thing fr a second.

"wt so soon....promise me until then u r wid me.i will take off too."
"ok done, i hv nothing to do also....we will relive the old times...."
"yeah...we will"
"to chalo lunch par chalte hain."
"chalo....lekin promise me asmi we wont fight."
"yeah we shudnt...kitna ladte hain hum dono."
"sachi....chalo shanti se lunch karte hain chalo."

unka relationship bad raha tha......pyaar ki taraf.....kaisa rishta hai unka.....pehle dushmani , fir shayad thodi si dosti ,

fir sagaai aur ab gehri dosti jo bad rahi thi pyaar ki taraf.....this is wt destiny is....isnt it??

-- ------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------ --

end of part-5
nxt part:-little romantic.

Edited by liquidfantasy - 17 years ago

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