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Posted: 17 years ago
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part-1

"doc...doc..."screamed the nurse.
"wat is it sister??"asked a female voice.
"doc..patient 39...he is critical.he has got attacks again"
"sister arange the equipments.i dont want any delay!oxygen cylinders,sedatives,injections...everything"ordered the doctor.
"yes doc"answered the panting nurse.
doc rushed to patient 39's cell.he,lying on the floor,was shaking delibrately.the sight ws lil scarry.she checked his pulses,breathing n heart beats with her stethoscope.then injected the sedatives down his veins.he calmed down in few minutes n entered in deep slumber.
"doc he is fine now"reported the nurse who once agn chkd his pulse,heart beat n breathing.
"u move on , i will be here few more minutes."
the nurse went away.she stood there looking at the man which lay on the bed.handsome face,solid physique,he is not that old..she thot.except the overgrown beard n deadly paleness b'coz of mediscenes ,he ws a fine young man.she turned to move towards her cabin bt agn turned back to look at this not so old man.
"kya hua hoga??"she ws in her own thots when she jst escaped a collision wid the nurse.
"sister mary.."
"yes doc."she askd wid a smile.
"i want patient 39's case file."
"jst a min doc....i wil bring"she went away n appeared in a min."here doc...he has been here fr 5 yrs now.strong man."declared the old sister mary n gave the file.
"5 yrs!!!hmmm...quiet a long time."the doc wondered.
she saw his stretcher being transferred to his cell.his dark cell.she wasnt his doc,she jst chckd him in emergencies still she ws so much intrested in him.why??
she didnt had the answers but DESTINY had!
"out of curiosity"she said just to satisfy herself.

even doctor didnt knew wt the destiny had in stores for her,patient 39 and.........

****
"come in doctor nethra singhania(aamna sharif)."commanded an old but strong voice.she entered the cabin n saw a man of 45 yrs of age.the penstand on one side and indian flag on other side clearly reflected his position n power.
"wat brings u here doctor nethra"askd the man.
"sir,call me nethra."said she.
"ok nethra,wat is it??"askd agn the old man.
"i m here to discuss abt patient 39 in HOPE mental asylum,dehradun."
"his name is RAHIL.dont cal him patient 39 doctor"said an angry voice.
"i m sorry sir."apologised the scared doc.
"i m sorry doctor,he is like my son n best officer a force can have,he deserves respect!!"told the man.
"i m not his doctor sir,but i want to take hold on his case."
"7 docs n 5 yrs,now i hv u who hv come up to take the case.you know,no one has been able to cure him.but i want u too cure him.not fr me bt fr his parents n his organisation."
"organisation??sir plzz tell me abt rahil.i m keen on knowing abt him."
"you hv the case file..."
"i hv read that,but i want to meet every person mentioned in file n ask in detail."interrupted nethra.
the man ws impressed...
"sure,young lady."said he wid a smile.a hope cud be seen in his eyes,finally.
"wat u wanna know??"continued the man.
"sir,why is he here??"
"its still a mystery that only he can tell.it ws an accident,how n why,no one knows."
"hmmmm..,i hv seen sir he is quiet young n charming,so any love angle??"
the man ws silent so nethra continued.."sir its that in these yrs no one has come to meet him...so i wantd to know.."clarified nethra.
"i m glad abt ur predictions doc,i will tell u all abt him."
"thnx sir.i m eager to know."replied nethra.
"just come up to me tom evening at my house,i will tell u all."
"thnx sir"she stood up,shaked hands n left the place.

****

"tum kahan thi,fone hi nahi utha rahi thi,pata hai kitna pareshan tha main?"askd a male voice on fone.
"avi,i had a meeting wid vijas singh rajput."
"vijay singh rajput,he is our defence minister dear NE."
"yes avi he is our defence minister.i m here to talk abt the new case i took."
"wat new case??"
"dont know much abt it.bt will tell u soon,as soon as i know."
"ok..u n ur work,u nvr hv time fr ur good best frnd who is smart dashing n handsome!!"
she laughed over fone.
"its nothing like that avi,u know.i have whole day tom wid u,in eve i hv to meet sir rajput agn."
"ok NE,kal main tumhe pick kar lunga,movie chalenge."
he made the plans....

this ws avi,aviral choudhry who is best frns wid nethra frm coll days.he himself is a doctor now.nethra is NE fr aviral n aviral is AVI fr nethra.

"bas movie,maine to socha tha ki shopping bhi karenge."
"SHOPPING!!plzzz wo nahi NE."pleaded avi.
"kya yaar itne din baad aayi hoon fir bhi..."
"chal ab senti mat maar,chalenge.theek hai."
"thnx avi,u r the best."
"i know.kal aaunga,tayar rehna."
"haan theek hai."

the nxt day ws a really a fantastic day,movie--bhul bhulaiyaa ws too good,the comedy ws awesome.then they went to CP fr shopping n enjoyd a lot.the whole day went out fast.

"chalo avi mujhe sir ke paas jana hai.mujhe wahan chhod do."
"bilkul.waise aisa kya case hai jo tum unse mil li.??"
"main bhi case file padh rahi thi to unka naam baar baar aaya tha,unhein call kiya to guess wat??listening to name rahil,he immidiately gave me an appointment.i ws shockd too."

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nxt updt no idea...when it will be.
but will be long one!





i m so glad u all liked the fic.thnx everyone.
i will thank u all individually soon.until then i m really sorry.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome start, i m getting hooked to it, its really interesting 😊 😊 waiting for next part eagerly
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey menhdi the part was really interesting 👏 . but why is rahil in this state and in mental asylum .i think that 5yrs ago while going somewhere rahil and asmi had an accidet jismein asmi ki death hogayi hogi and rahil saw that and went in that shock 😲 .ohhhhhh.....it's too bad to see him like this in that teribble state 😭 .hmmmmm......so netra is going to be the doctor of rahil . that's cool 😉 .i mean i am sure ki woh uska ilaaj ache se kar payegi.maybe it will take some time for her but will surely cure him 😳 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzz.............can't wait any loger.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really interesting pls cont soon will b waiting 4 it eagerly.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome..great..simply cooll..superb..too interesting.. lovely...wonderful..just too damn goodd...very very very well written...super.. 👏 do continue soon me waiting eagerly for the next part... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow ...awesome ...hai ye kya kiya Rahil ke saath 👏 ....waise the concepts jus too good ...& the mysry is well .....outstanding .....this was the word propping out in my heart while reading the part....u know my heart was intrested in writing this word too....but kya karegaa....bichaaraa anpadh hai 😆 ......besides this silly joke .....I wanna say u to cont before I die thinking of the real mystry ...so babes cont soon...thanks
Akanksha 😛
Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART-2


"well thats strange yaar..!!so wt happnd in meeting??"asked avi.
"i met him n he talked a lil abt rahil n his accident.i wantd to knoe the details so he has askd me to come over his house this evening.."
"that means u gonna xtend ur trip??"
"yeah...i really wanna know abt him avi."she said...seriously!!
the serious tone in her voice ws somehow not liked by avi.he got a lil uncomfortabe...
"chalo tumhein chhod doon"he said.

****

"i was waiting fr u only!!"said the old man.
"i m sorry i ws late.
"its fine.come lets talk over a cup of chai."

"he wanted to swipe off crime frm delhi.he started an organisation...ACC..Anti Crime Cell.he searchd 4 more officers and with them challenged in press that he will solve any murder case in span of just 48 hrs.not more.their team worked day n night fr any murder case that came n solved it in 48 hrs.he is my best officer.n his team is best one.and he still managed to take time out fr ASMI,his love.i never met this girl,she ws always on trips as she is a model...."



"why hasnt she came down to meet him in these 5 yrs"intruptd nethra..
"we dont know this nethra....any of u dont know why asmi has never came.."
"kya kisi ne use bataya nahi??"
"i dont know...abt asmi u shud talk to his fellow officers who now helps hisfather in their huge business!!"

"his father...he never came too!!"
"he lost his menta state when he heard of accident...frm that day he believes that rahil is abroad fr business meetings."
"ohk..!!"

"if u wanna know anything abt asmi,i can give u their no. nn can fix a meeting.by the way rahil is son of sohail dixit,leading IT company INFOMEDIA's CEO.n he himself is an engineer,its just that he had intrest in being a cop.."

nethra ws really shockd on knowing this.she continued aftr pausing fr few mins...

"i want to meet them!!"she said.

"beti..."the old man said....setiing his specs aside he continued "i want him back beti....and wid u around i found a hope that he will be able to make up this time.no one showed intrest in his case,maybe it ws a high proile one or simply b'coz everyone believed that he has gone insane,bt i knoe he hasnt."

"i know sir,he will and i promise u that he will b alright again"promised nethra.

"thnx beti....god bless u "n he swiped the moist in his eyes.

nethra left with a mission in her eyes,she really wanted to make those old eyes happy.she really wanted to meet his frns n know more abt asmi.she ws lil restless of asmi.she didnt knew y she ws lil scared of knowing the truth!!but stll she moved on withjout looking back....she had to..it ws her destiny!!



****

"come in"said a handsome n dashing voice.
"rajput sir told me abt u.we are glad that u r intrested in sir's case.i will help u in every possible way."continued the same voice.

"i want to know abt rahil n asmi."she came to the point directly.
"i will tell u everything."said a female voice this time.
she ws accompanied by 4 more people.it ws a conference room where they all were standing and looking at nethra with hopeful eyes!!

"i m amardeep huda,he is ali,she is pooja n she is sonali n he is Rishi".said the same voice who welcomed nethra.
nethra shaked hand with everyone.
"so tell me abt him."demanded nethra.



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Posted: 17 years ago
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so here is the nxt part!!

i m nt promising nxt updt soon as i hv one imp xam coming up on 23.in eve itself i will post a looooong part!!

i hope u r liking the fic!!

i m agn sorry as i m nt able to reply to ur individual post bt i will soon do that also.

bt plzz keep posting ur replies....!!!

luv u all
mehndi!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mehndi that was just tooo good dear...simply awesome... it is so different & interesting... me tho very damn curious about this fic...me hooked up to this story.. very damn well written..superb..amazing..lovely..wonderful...rocking. excellent..fantastic..dhassu..bindaas..raapchik..jhakaas... simply mind-blowing...keep up the good work going... 👏 do continue as soon as possible..kyunke me literally biting my nails yeh jaanne ke liye kii agge kya hoga... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah!!! what was the past even i want to know it .i think that she left him because of some reason 😡 .hey yaar lekin joh rahil ki halat hai i can't see him like that 😭 . it hurts a lot 😔 .you know even i have faith now that netra will be able to take him out of that condition for sure 👏 .i am eagerly waiting fro the next part to hear what those all 4 say about asmi and rahil relationship 😉.the part was great 👍🏼!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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