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gazal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#411

well..dat's all guys...

ab bas ek last update bachi hai...
finishing touches !

i've cried atleast three times while writing this...
main itni buri taraah is fic se attach ho chuki thi...
ki isse khatam hote dekha nahi jaa raha!

i feel really heavy...

i hope it was upto your expectations..
and if it wasn't..
i'm sorry.....

aaj ki highlights ...

woh God waala scene...
i let her live!

i got navin & tazz back!

traitors dead..

aalekh ki story revealed....

ab i'll wait 4 ur replies....

cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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388456

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Posted: 16 years ago

#412

Just read the update.......out of words............give me some time to come back....out of this update's daze..........sigh.....it was fabulous

and yes..............YIIIPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...........THANK YOU.....................tumne to saari requests puri kar di...........

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#413

Ahh I'm so happy. Navin n Tehzeeb r f9 n so is yudi. Sad to hear Aalekh's actual deed but then nothing cud be done.

And I really cant blv Raj is gonna be a father. Wow!!!!! That'll be so nice.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#414

hey Gazal...seriouslly dear...mind-blowing ud.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

matlab sabhi zinda hain...navin, tehzeeb, yudi...!!! haan...alekh k actual death k bare me read kar k dukh hua...!!! par us ne apni jaan de kar kai sare jaan bachai thi...!!! he's d real hero...!!! kitne log hote hain...jo apni nahin dushron k bare me sochte hain...!!!

aur haan...yeh Deepika ne sahi kiya shalini ko yudi k hathon shoot karwa kar...!!!

aur ab to raj PAPA bannewala hai...wow...!!! i hope...vo apne bete ka naam alekh rakhe...!!!

cont soon.

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz
Just read the update.......out of words............give me some time to come back....out of this update's daze..........sigh.....it was fabulous
and yes..............YIIIPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...........THANK YOU.....................tumne to saari requests puri kar di...........

thanks a ton

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: srojaleen
hey Gazal...seriouslly dear...mind-blowing ud.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

matlab sabhi zinda hain...navin, tehzeeb, yudi...!!! haan...alekh k actual death k bare me read kar k dukh hua...!!! par us ne apni jaan de kar kai sare jaan bachai thi...!!! he's d real hero...!!! kitne log hote hain...jo apni nahin dushron k bare me sochte hain...!!!

aur haan...yeh Deepika ne sahi kiya shalini ko yudi k hathon shoot karwa kar...!!!

aur ab to raj PAPA bannewala hai...wow...!!! i hope...vo apne bete ka naam alekh rakhe...!!!

cont soon.

i will

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#417

guys.....

honestly...

i think end kuch zyaada hi goody-goody ho gaya!
the other one would've probably been more realistic...
although tragic....

i'm glad u guys liked it..
kyonki yeh end maine aapki request se hi kiya hai..

i want to write the other ending too..
just one update...
but only wen i officially end this one....!

phir aap apna favourite end choose kar lena...
although this one is bound to be chosen!!!!!

thanks for stayin wid me till the end....
and i reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly
hope you guys had fun!!!

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#418

"what!!!!...main...main maamu banne waala hoon??"
navin shrieked in delight....
"that's so cool sis!!!"

navin and tazz hugged naina..
congratulating her...

while she tried to meet their eyes....
blushing....

"whoa!..
ab to madam interpol mummy ban jaayegi..
aur major banega dad!...raj...kuch to bolo?"
tehzeeb teased them....

his face hung down...
and they all wondered what was wrong....

naina was worried now...
why isn't he happy?

"r..raj..don't you....."
she was confused...

he looked up...right into her eyes..

and she saw his moistened eyes....
along with a deep glow in his face...

immediately..she sighed...

so this was it..he was too happy...
in fact ecstatic..
so much so that words didn't come out..!

"a...ahem-ahem!..
mujhe lagta hai..humme miya-biwi ko kuch der
ke liye akela chod dena chaahiye!"
navi winked at them ...and left the room..

"kabse jaanti thi yeh baat?"
he asked her softly....

"us din subaah hi pata chala tha..
i tried calling you too..par tum
phone nahi utha rahe the"

"aur yeh baat jaante hue...
ki tum pregnant ho..tumne
woh drugs liye..."

she gave a brief nod....

"tumhaari zindagi us waqt
sabse zyaada maayne rakhti thi...
nothing else mattered to me..."

she turned away..

he shook his head..

"kabhi nahi badlogi na tum?
always putting yourself in the line of fire!
and i love you for that!...thank you...."

she smiled....
"love you too..."

"bas..ab i'd like...let's say...4 or 5 girls..
and all of them just like their mom!"

"that's discrimination!!!"

"one hundred percent!!"

he agreed huskily before he
began to kiss her again...
and they forgot everything but
the present moment...
....................................

"bhaai...mujhe yaad aaya...
why did you shoot raj at the bar?
sheikh to tum hi the naa!"

"a...i was hopin you'd forget that bit!
aur un gusse bhari nigaahon se aap
mujhe na hi dekhe to accha hoga...!

it was rather simple...
main apni identity disclose nahi kar sakta tha...
and you guys were blocking my way...

abhi traitors tak mujhe pahunchna tha..
so i had to fire..."

"hadh ho gayi!"

"navin did the right thing jaan...!
waise bhi..janaab expert shooter hai...
iska shot mujhe choo kar nikal gaya..."
raj smiled...
"that was rather clever!"

navin bowed...

"nevertheless..maaf kar dena yaar.."

"saale saab...agar aapne us din apni
identity disclose ki hoti..
to shaayad main kabhi naina tak
samay rehte nahi pahunch paata...

you knew it was B.C..isiliye aapne
woh letter mujhe bheja tha...
early morning..hosh ud gaye the mere!!

apart from dat..jaanti ho nia...
kabir ke saare godowns mein
bomb isne plant kiye the...
that bit was never in our plan!"

"par tumne raj ko shoot..."

"nia!!..shut-up!"
they both screamed at her..

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"naina...jaan ...
mera kurta-pyjama bed par rakha hai..
pakda do please..."
he was in the bathroom...

she knocked...
"yeh lo...."

and the expected happened....

he pulled her in...

"raj!!..kya kar rahe ho?
main geeli ho rahi hoon...
my clothes..."

"are supposed to be taken off..
by me..right now..."

she blushed...
as they stood under the shower...

his hands worked super fast...
as her nightgown slid down..
leaving her naked ...wet in his arms...

"it's been so long...
since i last made love to you..."
his voice was husky...
as he gently caressed her body....

"shaadi ke baad...
things have been really hard for us..."

"very..hard..."
he was just looking at her....

"aur biwi...you look delicious tonight..."
he bent and placed a string of kisses on her belly...

"that's for the kid in there..
moti ho jaaogi..to aur bhi cute lagogi..."
he held her closer...
and her hands massaged his slippery back..

ishq bedardi mujhko pata hai..
isaki chaahat mein milati saja hai..

bekaraari mein mar hi na jaau....
na samajh ko main kaise samajhaau...

dil hai ki maanata nahi hai...
bechaini jaanata nahi hai...
main karuun kya bata jaraasa ?...
saathiya saathiya.........

he entangled his hands in her hair..
taking her lips in his....
biting them..drawing her breath...
as hse gave herself up....
completely.......

"i want you jaan..."
he picked her up.....

narm khwaabon ki baahon mein jaagengi aankhein...
garm yaadon ke saaye mein bitengi raatein...

yaad toh aayegi, bekhudi chhayegi..
dard de jaayegi, tanhaayi tadpaayegi...

he was insatiable that night....
& the night proved to be wild...hot...

he became a part of her body...
and she was caught in a frenzy to satisfy him...

he carried her along on a rising wave
of pounding excitement..
until she wanted to scream with a wild joy...

she moaned....he groaned..and it went on..

saare aalam pe aahon ka chhaayega jaadu
apane hi jajbon pe toh hoga na kaabu.....
jakhm yeh ??jigar ho gaye sau asar...
na rahegi khabar bechida hoga safar....

it was an ecstacy..that became impossible to bear...
and finally..he filled her...
as she screamed with pleasure.....

she felt like a slave to him..
for he did things to her..
that went beyond her wildest imagination....!!!

......................
a week later...
a huge ceremony was taking place in delhi...

lots of people had been invited...

bhai..afterall..navin & tehzeeb deserved to be
married didn't they??!!

maut se lad kar aaye the dono...

khoob naach-gaana to hua hi...

saath hi mein apne pyaare yudi bhaai ko
ek aur haseena mil gayi...Khwaish...

huda janaab..aaj tak ladki ke liye bhatak rahein hai....!

and abhi too..is happily married...to a woman..
they call Tamanna...

today...five years later....

back in kashmir..
2 couples are celebrating their second honey-moon...

"mommy!!...utho...."

"kya hai aalekh!..
kyon dimaag kha raha hai..?
pata nahi yeh ladka sota kab hai!!!...."
she snuggled into her husband's arms....

"mere bete par dobaara chillaya na..
to dekhna...come on major..!"

he took his son in his arms...
pushing naina away...

"hadh ho gayi!...
chipke raho ussi se..
meri to importance hai hi nahi ab!"
she turned the other side and feigned sleep...

"arrey baap re!...
beta..ab agar maine aapki ma ko jaldi
se manaaya nahi na..to gadbad ho jaayegi..
aur papa ko baahar sofe par sona padega...
to you do one thing...."
he lovingly told his five year old son...

"wat dad?"

"jaa kar maamu ka sar khaao...!"

"aye-aye major!"
aalekh danced away....

"raj...that was so mean!...
bhaai-bhaabhi ki neend kyon kharaab...."

he shut her up with a kiss...
and she found herself aroused....
instantly.....
forgetting everything around....yet again..

.................

"subaah ho gayi maamu!..maamu!!
re maamuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!"

lil aalekh jumped on his uncle....

while tehzeeb ..already awake...
took the kid in his arms...
"kabhi maami-maami bhi gaa liya kar..."
she kissed his cheek...

"next time maami!..plomise.."

"tere baap ne bheja hoga tujhe yahaan..?
saala khud aish kar raha hoga apni biwi ke saath...
second honeymoon to bas usi ka hai na!"

"uff navin!...aalekh's sooooooooo cute!"

"woh to hai...aaja..."

"maamu..ghoda to bano...!!"
and the dear uncle obliged.........
........................................

the door to their room was locked....

and naina found every inch of her body
filled with exquisite sensations...

her legs parted ..slowly..
as his made way between them...
and the satin sheet glaced their bodies...

he kissed her peaks...teased them....

When moonlight crawls along the street....
Chasing away the summer heat..
Footsteps outside somewhere below...
The world revolves I let it go....

We build our church above this street...
We practice love between these sheets...
The candy sweetness scent of you..
It bathes my skin I'm stained by you..

And all I have to do is hold you..
There's a racing in my heart..
I am barely touching you....

Turn the lights down low,
Take it off,Let me show...

My love for you
Insatiable...

Turn me on..
Never stop..
Wanna taste every drop....
My love for you...
Insatiable..

initially it was gentle...sensitive..soft..
but the next moment...

it became cruel...demanding...
making her swoon with delight.....

he withdrew from her....

teased her..

made her want more...

and wen she was on the verge of fulfillment...
he pulled away....

the music suited the mood perfectly.....

The moonlight plays upon your skin..
A kiss that lingers takes me in...
I fall asleep inside of you..
There are no words..

There's only truth...
Breathe in Breathe out..
There is no sound..

We move together up and down..
We levitate our bodies soar..

Our feet don't even touch the floor..
And nobody knows you like I do..
The world doesn't understand..
But I grow stronger in your hands...

We never sleep we're always holdin' hands..
Kissin' for hours talkin' makin' plans...
I feel like a better man..
Just being in the same room..
We never sleep there's just so much to do...
Too much to say..
Can't close my eyes when I'm with you ...
Insatiable the way I'm loving you ...

and all they remember about their following days
wen they grow wiser..aren't days filled with trauma
or pain..or grief..or hurt...

but days...

and nights...

filLed by wildest of dreams...

pleasures...

romance...

love..

togetherness...

and most importantly....

their child..AALEKH...

A SYMBOL OF THEIR
FORGIVENESS FOR A FRIEND
AND THEIR INSATIABLE PASSION.....!!!!

THE END................................

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gazal

@gazal_sameer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#419

thankssssssssssssssssssssss guys!!

i hated ending this fic sumhow!!!!!!
mann hi nahi kar raha tha.....

and a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig
thanks to all those who loved it..and stuck to it till the end!

har baar fics ke end mein...
RN ke bacche ka naam NAVIN rakh diya jaata hai...
i thought..AALEKH mein kya buraai hai!
watsay?????

alternate ending main aaj yaan kal de doongi...

i hope you'll atleast read it!!

Edited by gazal_sameer - 16 years ago

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388456

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Posted: 16 years ago

#420

AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE............................................par i'll miss this fic way too much............u won't beat it....i was reading each word of the update twice...ok, i know u would have expected it but not just that i just wanted to cling onto it.........u know this is one of my favourite fics.....i guess i'll just have to read it all over again...hehe.....

Aalekh is way too cute....both the Aalekhs.....and Raj definitely has his 'ways' of sending Aalekh....bechara naveen.....ehehe....

the whole update was love-oriented.....hehehe....and i loved it.....u would have gotta be in a romantic mood to write soooo beautifully......hehehe....

Waiting for the tragic end too.....par don't kill her....plzzz..in the tragic waala too.....hehehe

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