Akss (Angad & Kripa) pg11 comments - Page 4

Great part.
liked it.
awww...poor Gayatri...i feel really bad for her that she don't have any say in any matter...her husband is an idiot...what is mean by to kha diya so kha diya...not good.
plz cont. soon

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
liked it.
awww...poor Gayatri...i feel really bad for her that she don't have any say in any matter...her husband is an idiot...what is mean by to kha diya so kha diya...not good.
plz cont. soon

😃 i am not getting it where u read kha diya so kha diya.... but may be it can be "keh diya so keh diya" which means i said what i wanted to say

Recap of part 2
Ashish tells neha that her father is ready for their marriage and he is returning from Dubai. Neha gets very happy about the news.. scene shifts to Gayatri and Nikhil.. Gayatri says that she do not like Ashish and she doesn't think that he will keep her daughter happy.. Nikhil asks gayatri to talk to Raj jaysingh(gayatri's husband) but gayatri says that there is nothing in her hands, and cant do anything about it.. later raj returns home with Ashish and neha and announces their wedding.. everyone in the family gets happy except gayatri and nikhil later in the morning gayatri talks to Raj about it, but he do not listens to her.

Now Part 3 begins,

When Raj says the most hurtful words to Gayatri, she leaves the room. And straight away goes to Ganesha's idol and weeps

Gayatri:- WHY GOD!!!... WHY ….. I CAN SEE IT VERY WELL THAT MY DAUGHTER IS SPOILING HER LIFE,….. but I can't stop her from making that mess. PLSSS.. PLSSS HELP ME… HELP MY DAUGHTER..

Scene now shifts to shimla to Varun(Iqbal khan), Varun was at the caf and was doing something on computer.. when his sister comes..
Sister:- Varun bhaiyaa..
Varun:- Tanvi!!! (still working) wat r u doing here..
Tanvi:- well bhaiyaa, I came here to tell u that Rohan ur best friend came from Mumbai.. (suddenly Varun looks at her with surprise)..
Varun:- REALLY???
Tanvi:- and he is asking about u…
Varun:- stupid … why didn't u told me b4…
Tanvi:- come on I was coming to tell u..
(in a hurry)
Varun:- ok ok.. lets go..(he switches off the computer and goes with Tanvi)

Scene shifts to Varun's house, where his frnd Rohan was sitting with Varun's parents drinking tea and was talking about Mumbai…

(now Varun and Tanvi enters)
V:- HEY ROHAN.. (Rohan looks at Varun and smiles)
R:- HEY BUDDY!!! How r u…
V:- I am fine… but wat about u… I think u lost a lot of weight (Rohan giggles), Tanvi u remember, when last time he came here… how fat he was..
Tanvi:- ohhh ho Varun bhaiyaa, stop bullying him.. Rohan u came from such a long journey… get freshen up, till then, let me prepare the dishes..
R:- ohh ok…

(after the lunch, Rohan and Varun were sitting on a rock and looking at the beautiful mountains of Shimla)
Varun:- Rohan… do u remember, earlier we used to come here on regular basis…
R:- yaa… specially in our school days…
V:- yessss… and how we used to bully are class mates…(and then both of them giggles)..
R:- (smiling) everything changes with the time… I mean look at urself, u used to be so naughty, but now I can't say the same about u…
V:- SO??? Tell me… wat r u doing these days??
R:- Well u know, I always had an keen interest in computers, so now I am a software engineer…
V:- ohhh that's great..
R:- ohh yaaa.. but the job is very hectic.. and wat about u… wat u r doing??
(then varun makes a face full of disgust)
V:- ohhhh better don't ask me about it…
R:- why?? Wat happened…
V:- actually Rohan … u know from a very long time I wanted to be a film director… but..
R:- But??? But What??
V:- Dad…. My dad wants me to join his small shop…. He thinks that middle class people don't have the right to dream.. it's only made for rich people… NOW …. U tell me, is that fair… I mean… how can I do something, in which I don't have an aura of interest…
(Rohan listens to him and after a pause he says)
Varun… u don't worry… I mean u r right… u know u shuld do something in which u have interest,… otherwise.. u will not achieve anything in life.. but Varun, remember one thing… the carrier u have chosen is not at all easy… there are many who everyday lands up in Mumbai to act, direct etc etc… but there are few who gets the taste of success. U should be very sincere and hardworking, then only u can get wat u want…
V:- u r right rohan.. only one thing I have to do now is to convince dad….

Scene shifts back to Mumbai…. Neha was at the studio preparing for a dance, when suddenly she slips and gets a sprain in her left leg… and she was rushed to a nearby hospital, and was advised a bed rest for one week….

Scene now shifts to Jaysingh mansion… Gayatri was in the hall room and was watching TV, when neha comes with her secretary with her injured leg… n gayatri when looks at neha she gets shocked

Gayatri:- NEHA…. WAT HAPPENED…
N:- nothing mom.. its just a minor sprain….
G:- IS THIS MINOR… LET ME SEE….
(and gayatri bends to see her foot)
N:- MOM.. MOM….. I am telling u its ok…..
G:- how u got this…
N:- well I was rehearsing for a dance, when I slipped…. (and then the secretary adds)
Secretary:- and the doctor asks her for complete bed rest….
G:- ok… let me take u to ur room….
(and when gayatri neha and her secretary were moving towards neha's room… suddenly a news flashes in the TV…. About J.R. Singh a middle aged leading successful businessman… starting another new company of textiles, and the reporter was taking his interview… when neha hears his voice… she stops and looks back at the T.V. and listens to his interview…. For a minute neha even forgets her pain and constantly looks at him… her face becomes pale, and sign of fear appears in her expressions, ….

Gayatri:- wat happened neha….
N:- mom……(after a pause) who is man??
(gayatri looks at the TV)
Well he is J.R Singh….
For a minute…. Neha looks at her mother with lots of questions in her eyes and after a pause her mother says…
G:- What happened??? U r looking very tensed… r u fine…
N:- I don't know why mom… but I feel I heard this name before…
G:- WHO?? J.R Singh??
N:- yess….
G:- beta??? But this is the first time, he came to India… then where u heard his name?
N:- I don't know mom…. I don't know…

Then Gayatri and neha's secretary takes neha to her room..

hi..... this part ends here
plsssssss do comment 😃 😃 😃

great part! but it's very short! 😳
continue soon with a longer part! between u forgot to update the title 😃

hey sorry havent been around lately 🤢 🤢 soccer 😛 😛 it can really make u busy anyway great part continue soon<333

hmm interesting RJ singh who could that be

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

great part! but it's very short! 😳
continue soon with a longer part! between u forgot to update the title 😃

yeah buddy thanx for reminding me😃😃

Recap of part 3
When Gayatri tells Raj that Ashish is not the right match for their daughter.. so Raj gets very annoyed and asks Gayatri to leave the room.. and gayatri gets upset. scene changes to Varun(Iqbal khan), he was working on a computer,when his sister Tanvi comes and tells him that his frnd Rohan came from Mumbai...Later Varun and Rohan shares about their lives and Varun tells Rohan that he wants to be a Film director but his father wants him to join the small shop... Rohan tells him that everything will be alright but he should remember that to reach at the top is difficult specially in Mumbai... scene then shifts to Neha...when she was rehearsing for a dance in a studio she slips and gets a sprain on her foot. later her secretary gets her back home from the studio, gayatri comes gets shocked to see Neha with a sprain.. she was about to take her in her room... when Neha suddenly stops after she hears a voice of a man on the telivision... when Neha asks her mother about the person, she tells her that he is JR Singh a known businessman... Neha becomes pale and a sign of fear comes on her face.. neha says that she know him.. but her mother says that he came to India after a long time, and there is no possibility of her knowing him.

Now part 4 begins

same scene

neha is resting in her room... after a while in her dreams she starts imagining, she sees.. that some body puts a knife on a guy's stomach.... and he falls on the floor... and a girl was standing at the door step competly shocked... the guy was howling in pain and was trying to reach at the door step.. the floor was completly full of blood.... neha shouts and wakes up....her mother was sitting beside her
Gayatri:- Neha!!!! BETA WAT HAPPENED.. (gayatri herself became a little shocked)
neha was unable to speak anything, and then Gayatri hugs her and gives her a glass of water...
G:- neha... take this....
then she takes a sip of water... her face was completly pale... and she was very afraid..
G:- neha...... wat happened beta... tell me... why u got so scared,..
and then she hugs her mother tightly and then speaks up
N:- mom... i saw a very bad dream....
G:- what?
N:- i saw somebody puts a knife on a guy's stomach...
G:- WHO??? WHO IS HE??
N:- i don't know mom... and then the guy falls on the floor... the floor was completly filled with blood... and then i saw a girl standind at a door step.... the guy who fall on the floor was trying to reach to the girl.. but coudn't do it...
then gayatri holds neha gently and says
G:- dear... its just a bad dream, nothing else.... as u are tired... and working from so many days for ur film.. definatly, there is a tiredness in ur mind.. u need rest..and that why u r imagining such things... i tell u, u sleep for a while.. and everything will be fine..
Neha looks at gayatri with lots of mixed expressions... as she was unable to understand anything... she again lays down... and asks her mother to be at her bed side.

scene shifts... to Varun.... he was talking to Rohan(his frnd from mumbai)
Varun was lookin at the mountains and was thinking something, when Rohan asks
Rohan:- what r u thinking Varun...
and varun looks at Rohan...
Varun:- well, i don't know i shuld tell u or not... i mean i never discussed this thing with myself also..
Rohan:- what?
Varun:- Rohan... i don't know why??? but from childhood.. i have an attraction for going to Mumbai... i am not talking about my carrier... u know... its like... i feel someone is calling me there, i mean in know this sounds totally crazy but... u know very well rohan... that i am a happy person... i am very optimistic about my life.. but still i feel there is a certain kind of emptiness... which i can feel every moment,, but can't express it in words... sometimes i feel a very beautiful voice is calling me... when i close my eyes.. i see her beautiful eyes staring me from a distance.... i know i am sounding completly filmy... but this is happening to me from a long time...

Rohan smiles and says
ohhh my god.... that is so romantic... u know, if u said this lines to any girl so she must have gone unconsious... at the very moment... (Varun giggles) But Varun who is this girl??? whats her name?
(varun makes a face)
V:- ohhh come on dumbo..... i havent seen her... i don't who is she... but can feel her presence in the air....
R:- but Varun.... remember about ur carrier...
V:- yeah, but Rohan? u got to help me out... look... i know wat i want to be it's not easy... first of all i need to settle in mumbai and then think further .... u do one thing... that get me a place to live... SEE... recently... i had a conversation with MR Sahani... he is a manager in a multinational company... from many days i was talking to him for a job... he said that my qualifications can get me a good job in the company in mumbai... so today he told me to come Mumbai as soon as possible... for the job... but i need a place to live so u plss arrange one for me...
R:- i think u took the right decision.... u first have to settle there and then think further... so ok.... i will arrange a place for u to live... and u talk to ur father.... for the permission... as nothing in ur family happens without his decision..
(varun makes a face)
V:- yea yeah....i will.... but the million dollar question is HOW????????
R:- hmmmmm... do one thing... talk to your mother... she will definatly understand ur problem....
(first... Varun gets very happy about the idea but then he becomes nervous and asks )
r u sure she will understand me..
R:- look... talk to her... and if she says no.., then i will talk... ok???
V:- hmmm ... yeah.. ok....(and now Varun looks relieved).

scene shifts, its night and Rohan was in Varun's bedroom.

And was packing his bags... when Varun comes biting an apple and says
ohhhhhhh.. come on Rohan... why r u going so soon... u came today only.. n now tommorow u r again going back to delhi....
(rohan smiles and says)
nothing is in my hands buddy.. my boss... Mr JR singh is arriving after three days to delhi for a presentation... and i have a little bit work left... i have to go back soon...
(when rohan says JR Singh.... Varun looks at Rohan and a sense of tension appears on his face)
R:- what happened Varun...
V:- huhh???
R:- what happened..??? u r looking tensed
(and then varun changes the topic.. with a smile)
V:- ohhh no... nothing....
(then Varun's mother comes to the room)
Varun's mother:- Rohan... Varun... come.. have ur dinner....Rohan pack ur bags latter... first have ur dinner...
R:- ok. aunty... lets go Varun...

Scene shifts next morning rohan was about to leave for delhi.... and for a moment he talks to Varun

Rohan:- hey buddy... i will miss u... but don't worry, we will be meeting soon... and remember, wat i said to u yesterday... just talk to ur mother.. n if she doesn't approve ur idea then i will talk to her..ok??
Varun:- yeah... thanks rohan.... take care...
Rohan :- yaa you.. too... BYE TANVI....
Varun's father:- ok.. rohan take care... n give us a call when u reach delhi
Rohan :- yaa sure uncle....

and then rohan leaves.

scene shifts to Ashish sitting in his office with his friend Tarun.. who knows everything about his plans...

Tarun:- So.... Mr Ashish... how is everything....
Ashish smiles
A:- great.... evrything is just going the way i wanted it to be..
Tarun:- good for u...
A:- u won't believe, very soon i will the son in law of Raj jaysingh..... and then i will get the share of Neha's property...
Tarun:- but Ashish... if Raj jaysingh gets to know about ur truth after u and neha's marraige..
A:- ohhhhh... till then he will be helpless...
T:- and if he finds ur truth before ur marraige... then ??
A:- don't worry tarun.... Neha loves me madly.... if she hears somethin against me.. so she is never going to belive anyone....u know?? she loves me very much...
and ashish laughs.....

scene shifts to jaysingh mansion, when neha was sitting and thinking something when Raj jaysingh enters her room

Raj:- neha??
N:- dad... plsss come in...
R:- neha beta.... ur mom told me yesterday u got a sprain...
N:- ohh yeah.. actually i was rehearsing for a dance when this happened
R:- dear... u should properly take care of urself... now listen... i asked the doctor he said after a week or so... u will be absolutly alright
N:- ohhh thank god... atleast i can go back to the reheasal....
R:-NO... NOT AT ALL... after that..... u will go to jaipur with ur mother and Ashish for a holiday
N:- dad... dad...... u know that is not possible... look i want to complete the portions of the films as soon as possible b4 my wedding... so if i take so much time ... so i will never be able to complete it on time...
R:- neha... i want u to work .. but not at the cost of ur health.... i want u to take a little break from ur work so u can also enjoy life... and u r my daughter... Raj jaysingh's, u r not going to work according others.. i want that others will work according to ur wishes.... am i clear....
neha smiles then...
N:- dad.... u will never change.... (and then both giggles)

this part ends here........ plss do comment... 😃 😃 😃

And Happy Diwali to all of u..... may this diwali fills all of ur lives with happiness and joy.....enjoy ur diwali😃😃

really excitng interesting thrilling and scary pls con soon just loved it

Great part!!! I love the part when Varun was talking about he feels something is calling him to Mumbai. I like it. Happy Diwali Continue soon.