Akss (Angad & Kripa) pg11 comments - Page 3

Originally posted by: armaghan0

hmm interesting wow neha has attitude so nikhils nehas dad right great going would love to read more

no, nikhil is neha's uncle and neha's dad is Raj jaysingh

ooo nice concept, the first part was fab, very interesting, can't wait till they meet, cont. soon!!! 😃

nice start 👏 👏
looking forward for next part

the first part was great!! the story is quite interesting and i m hooked so do continue soon 😃 😃

part 2 begins

This part starts with Neha working out in the gym, when Ashish calls her and she turns around and looks at him

Neha:- You..(she says with attitude, and Ashish smiles),

Ashish:- u kno what!! one thing i must tell u, (and then he goes closer to her and neha looks into his eyes)

N:- What!!, Ashish:- u'r the most beautiful women, i have ever met...(neha smiles mysteriously, and says) so??? what's new about it???, this is one dialog u say every day..

A:- ohhh really,

N:- yesss, (and then he holds neha and says)

A:- but did i ever said that your father is ready for our marraige.. (neha gets surprised)

N:- REALLY??

A:- yaa.. today i had a conversation with your dad on phone, and he is very happy about us... and there is a another good news that your dad is returning from dubai today.. (neha gets very happy)

N:- you know what???

A:- what??, N:- hmmmm.... i think you r not as bad as i thought... (she bullies ashish)

A:- and u r not as ugly as i thought...

N:- Aashish...

A:- yessss...

N:- SHUT UP... (and then both giggles)...

Scene shifts to gayatri (neha's mother) sitting in her room and thinking when Nikhil enters

Gayatri was busy in her thoughts when Nikhil (neha's uncle) knocks the door and she comes out of her thoughts.

G:- ohhhh.. Nikhil.. come in,

N:- Bhabhi, wat r u thinking, wat happened???, (first, gayatri tries to hide)

G:- no.. i am fine, it's ok..

N:- Bhabhi.. i know u from 30 yrs now, and i know that when u r tensed u always try to hide it from others... but u r not only my bhabhi but u r like my elder sister, so pls tell me.. wats the matter.. (and at last gayatri speaks up) actually Nikhil.. i don't know why?? but this boy Ashish, i don't find him suitable for Neha, he is not the kind of guy who can take care of my daughter...Neha is a kid by heart and she doesn't understand wat is right and wrong for her... i am afraid that she might take a wrong decision and spoil her life...

N:- exactly bhabhi thats wat i think about it, I don't think that Ashish is suitable for Neha, many times i have found him asking for money from Neha... and every time he is with a new excuse.. i am also afraid neha might make a wrond decision,

Gayatri:- now everything depends on his (Gayatri's husband:- Raj jaysingh) decision..

N:- yes u r right bhabhi.. it depends on brother's decision.. if he said yes to their marraige so we can't do anything about it.. Bhabhi why don't u talk to brother about it..

G:- Nikhil... i spend 30 yrs in this family.. but just as his wife and neha's mother, but apart from it i don't have any identity because wat he believes is what he does... and never reconsider his decision, thats why i have stopped saying, but i will try to talk to him.. because this is not my life.. but its the matter of my daughter's life.. i can't stand still and let her go to hell... (and nikhil looks at Gayatri with lots of sympathy)...

Scene shifts in the hall room.. at the dinner time...

when Reshma (Nikhil's wife) again taunts Gayatri

Reshma:- Bhabhi...(and Nikhil stares at Reshma and thinks)

N:- ye phir bakwas karegi!!!, (gayatri looks upto reshma)

R:- Bhabhi!!! where is neha, is she not going to join us for dinner...

G:- well she must be in her shooting...

R:- ohhh yaa right!!! she is a star and why would she have dinner with us...

G:- no reshma... it's not like that.. actually (and as she was about to say something, neha enters with Ashish and dad, everyone look up to them and then nikhil goes to them)...

N:- Bhaiyaa... when did u return from dubai... u didn't informed us.. i must have sent a car at the airport.. (Raj jaysingh smiles) ohhh its ok nikhil... i have informed neha and Ashish about it.. and they picked me up frm the airport.. N:- ohh ok.. (and then Gayatri goes up to Raj), u must be tired, u get fresh and join us for dinner...

R:- ohh no.. its ok.. i had my dinner with neha and Ashish..

G:- ok...

R:- ALRIGHT EVERYONE.. I WANT TO ANNOUNCE SOMETHING TO ALL OF U... (and all family members look at him) Nikhil:- What bhaiyaa..

R:- well, i have decided that Ashish and Neha will get married.. (and then neha and Ashish looks at each other and smiles, and Gayatri and Nikhil looks at each other and get sad, neha notices this and goes up to Gayatri).. N:- wat happen mamma.. arent u happy about it...

G:- no beta it's nothing like that... i am happy for both of u... may god bless u... (but Raj finds something wrong)....

Next morning... when gayatri goes to Raj for giving him tea.. so Raj takes out the topic

Raj:- Gayatri...

G:- yess...

R:- i was thinking something...

G:- what???

R:- last night.. when i announced Neha and Ashish's wedding why u got so unhappy... u know nothing can be hide from me... so tell me.. what went wrong... (and then gayatri gathers the guts to take out the topic) G:- Raj... why u chose Ashish for Neha...

R:- because... he is perfect for my daughter... he is successful, rich, famous and the most important is that... that he loves my daughter and neha loves him too..

G:- no raj... u r mistaken, Wat i noticed in Ashish is that he is only after neha's money and he do not actually love her at all

(Raj gets annoyed) GAYATRI!!... today u said this... but never dare to say this again... i am full confident about my decision... and never try to change anything...

Gayatri:- BUT...

Raj:- thats it.... now leave me alone..

this part ends here.... frnds do comment.. and if any1 of u didn't read the first part so here is the link to it

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=753460&T PN=3

Hey!!!
Well nice ff....buh y u makin tht cutiepie doc a selfish evil man in ur story....pls yaar make him a positive character.... 😉

rocking part dear!
will be waiting for the next update 😳

interesting and here i thought nikhils the rotten apple but nehas dads an idiot

Originally posted by: armaghan0

interesting and here i thought nikhils the rotten apple but nehas dads an idiot

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Originally posted by: aanita12

Hey!!!
Well nice ff....buh y u makin tht cutiepie doc a selfish evil man in ur story....pls yaar make him a positive character.... 😉

well anita this story will go through a lot of twist and turn...... keep visiting this fanfic😉