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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiii frnds well for some day i am going out of town so when i will return i will start the fanfic.. as there is no use starting and leaving the story in between...

really sorry for the inconvience
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
sounds interesting.... strt soon please 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsum intro cont. soon plzz recarnation has alwayz interested me 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowowowowo so sweet dear 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wowww interesting concept...Reincarnation!
Plz continue soon... 😃
Hehehe I think Armaan and Neha would look fab together 😳
Armaan's real name is Karan Singh 😃

pallavi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

Story starts on the hills of shimla… its dawn, and the sun rays are still dim and the whole shimla is looking like as if god himself painted on canvas. A guy
(Iqbal Khan) is jogging, and then he does some exercises… after a while he sits in the calm environment on a rock, looking at the rising sun.. and then he smiles and starts thinking,


Wow, this is so beautiful, there is no place as beautiful as shimla….from my childhood… I have received the love of my family, they are everything for me.. but when I have started growing up, I found that my life is not limited till Shimla… I want to become a successful Film director, but my dear dad wants me to look after his small shop.. I love my parents but they don't understand, that if once I become successful, so all are financial crisis will be over, but who will make them understand…..
( and then a child shouts from the back)

Child:- VARUN BHAIYAA.. YOUR DAD IS CALLING YOU.. (varun, says to himself and smiles)
Varun:- lets get ready, for one more lecture…(and then he says to the boy) YAA, I AM COMING!!! (and then, varun comes back home, and then his father starts)
Father:- dear son, can u please tell me.. that last night I asked u to check the account and why the register is still empty…
(and then, varun looks down and says) dad actually, I was busy writing my script.. and later I it got too late and I slept,
(and then, varun's father says to his mother) r u listening varun's mother..
(his mother comes out of the kitchen).. what happened..
Father:- yesterday night I asked him to check the account and he was busy with that stupidity
(and varun corrects it) Script,
Father:- yaa.. whatever.. varun, when will u grow up, why don't u understand that, that life is not for us.. those dreams are not for us, we r very common people… and are destiny will be the same forever
( varun didn't like what his father says, but he do not argue and goes straight to his room, and then varun's dad says to his mother) look at your son, I am telling u namrata, this boy is asking for trouble…
Varun's mother:- ok ok… come now, leave it..he is a kid and will grow up with time. (then varun's father leaves the place and varun's mother looks at the Ganesha's idol and says) ohhh god, please do something about my son.. he don't know what he is asking for…(the focus then goes to the ganesha's idol)

And the scene shifts to another ganesha's idol made of silver.. and a lady is standing in front of it and reciting a GAYATRI MANTRA…
Lady :- om, bhur bhuvasv tatsavitur varenayam bhargo devasya dhimhi, dhiyoyonam pracho dayat… OM….
(she is Gayatri jaysingh, neha's mother)

(and then comes other family members, and Gayatri gives AARTI to everyone, and then she asks Sherya ( neha's cousin sister) about neha)

Gayatri:- where is neha..
Sherya:- Badi maa, she must be in the gym,
Gayatri:- but, today is her b'day and I asked her to be on morning AARTI..
(and then, Sherya's mother Reshma interrupts).. Reshma:- ohh come on bhabhi, is there any use of calling her, u know she never attended any puja, and nor she will attend in the future… u know how she is.. it's worthless calling her, she only understand money..
(and then gayatri quietly listens to it, and feels bad)…
(then gayatri leaves the place and then Reshma's husband, Nikhil (Raj jaysingh's younger brother says)
Nikhil :- u'r too much reshma,
Reshma:- now what…
Nikhil:- u always need a chance to taunt gayatri bhabhi.. (and then reshma makes a face and leaves, and then Nikhil says to himself) GOD KNOWS!! What will happen to this family….
(and then enters, Ashish (karan singh), Nikhil looks at the doorstep and says )
Nikhil:- ohhh… finally one more demon in our family( he whispers, indicating Reshma and Ashish, and then Nikhil goes to Ashish) …
Nikhil:- ohh Ashish,
Ashish:- Good morning, uncle… how r u..
(and then Nikhil thinks again) how can I be fine, when u r around… (and then says) ohhhh… I fine son… u tell me.. how u r here…
(Ashish.. blushes, and says) actually uncle… I was trying to contact neha, but her phone is switched off.. so I thought
(and Nikhil interrupts) SO… u thought to come here and find from ur own …that why she is not answering her phone…
Ashish( blushes).. exactly uncle..
Nikhil:- I knew this… well she is in the gym… working out…
Ashish:- ohh thanks uncle I will go there..
Nikhil:- alright see u ..
Ashish:- yaa see u later…
(and Ashish leaves, and then Nikhil says to himself)
Nikhil:- pata nahi kyun neha iss ullu ke patthe se shaadi kar rahi hai (why she is marrying this idiot)..
Scene changes, ashish sits in the car and plays the music.. and then the focus goes to the music player and the scene shifts to the gym….with neha working out..

After half an hour, when neha was busy in her work out.. some body calls her from the back
GOT U… (and neha turns back…. All sweat and looking very hot in the black short skirt and sleeveless back top, her hair is open and wet, and a hair band, tied on her forehead.. looking completely ravishing, and she looks at the person with lots of attitude in her eyes)..

And this part ends here….

Frnds, read this and do comment 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmm interesting wow neha has attitude so nikhils nehas dad right great going would love to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very interesting start.
awesome part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part... seems like a really interestin story, cnt wait to read more!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good part. I like the story, can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait for more. TAke care.

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