Akss (Angad & Kripa) pg11 comments - Page 6

it's amazing!! really different concept!! will be looking forward to the next part! 😃

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hi.i read ur entire ff today.i read the frst part but after that some how forgot about it.u hav an amazin and different story.since i watched om shanti om recently.ur ff reminds me of that.but wonderfully written.

part 6

scene starts with Raj jaysingh and JR singh sitting and talking about there new project.. right now jr singh's face is not shown…..

R.J:- so…mr jr singh wat u think about the new project on mall….
JR singh:- well, I am ready for it…. Only we have to sign the deal… till day after tomorrow I will have the required papers for this projects…and then we will sign it..
R.J:- well… mr singh wat I want is to sign this deal after 15 days as… my daughter will get engaged then… so I wanted to sign this deal on that auspicious day…
Mr singh smiles…..
Ok… no problem… till then we will prepare the plan for the mall … wat do u think…
R.j:- yeah… that will be fine…

Scene now shifts… its evening time and varun was busy with his script work since afternoon.. so now he is feeling sleepy and then he soon fall asleep….
And then sees the vision of his past life…

Wat he sees is that a guy and a girl was standing in front of a Kali goddess temple… but the picture is very shabby.. he was only able to remember the picture….
But not their faces….
He sees that the girl in a salwaar kameez was standing with holding the hand of the guy.. as if like she was asking the guy to promise something…..

Scene for a while shifts to Varun…. With closed eyes.. and he was sweating and was trying to see more….

Then scene again shifts to the temple when the girl asks the guy…. Promise that u wont leave me, and the guys keeps his hands over her head and says…. I promise u that our love will always remain in our hearts, and Kali goddess will become the witness of our love… and then scene moved to Kali goddess idol…. And then to the temple bells which were moving to n fro by the wind force… and then to some locations… like mountains…. and then a cliff… where he see that same girl falling from the cliff, but as everything was shabby, so he can't see her face…..

When varun see this he wakes up in a shock…. And then he hears tht the phone is ringing…. Varun was very tensed… he do not picks up the phone and goes to the washroom… and puts water on his face and was looking at the mirror… in the mirror… he again sees the images he saw in his dreams ……and then by looking at the mirror. He thinks

Wat is happening to me…. Am I getting mad or wat??? Why I am getting pictures like this on my mind…
And thn he goes out of the washroom .

The phone was still ringing… and then varun picks up the phone…
Varun:- hello (in a tensed voice)
Rohan:- ohh hello…. Thanks for picking up the phone…
Varun:- ohh rohan…. Sorry yaar… actually I have fallen asleep so that's why I didn't answered ur call… sorry buddy
Rohan:- ok ok…..i called u, to tell u that… tomorrow … at 10:00 am u have to check out from the hotel….
Varun smiles
I know dear…
Rohan:- well I am reminding u because.. I know… u get up late…
Varun giggles…
No frnd… now onwards I have got serious of wat I want from my life… so these habits will change automatically
Rohan:- I hope so…. Anyways take care byeeeee..
Varun:- yeah take care byeeee

Varun puts down the receiver and thn for a minute he closes his eyes

Scene now shifts to neha with her mother sitting in a restaurant, when some people comes to her for her autograph…and then she smiles and says to her mother…

N:- u know mom… I really feel nice.. when so many people comes to me for autograph.. I get more happiness in this than getting awards….

Gayatri smiles….
Neha, u really fulfilled all your dreams.. u wanted to be an actress u got successful in it... now u r getting married to the person u love the most…

When gayatri says this.. neha suddenly looks a little confused in her expressions…

Gayatri:- what happened neha…
N:- huhh…. No..nothing mom,
G:- no… don't lie… u were thinking something…
N:- mom… actually… I don't know why.. but.. after getting wat I wanted in my life… I am still not happy… I don't know the reason.. but I feel there is something I am missing…

Gayatri smiles mysteriously and says

Neha…. Look, when a daughter grows up, her mother becomes her frnd…

Neha smiles and keeps her hands warmly and affectionately above gayatri, and says
Offcourse mom….

Gayatri:- so…. As ur frnd… can I ask u something…

Neha:- sure mom…

Gayatri:- dear….for a moment, think from ur heart and answer me…. Do u really love Ashish…
Neha for a while becomes quiet, and thinks….

G:- u didn't answered me, dear…
And neha looks with confusion towards gayatri, and then to hide it.. she says
Off course mom… I love him… and he loves me too….

Gayatri:- r u sure????
And then neha becomes quite…. And keeps a mum
Gayatri smiles and says
Now….. u gave the right answer… see, dear… u mean everything to me… look, I don't know why u r marrying ashish… wat made u take this decision… but let me tell u… always love a person… whom u can trust with ur closed eyes… and dear… remember, that if the base of the relationship is not strong… then no mantras or no power in the world can save ur relation… always keep that in mind….

Neha listens to it.. and the words completely let her think about her relationship with ashish..

Scene shifts…..
Next day,
Neha and gayatri visits a famous temple of jaipur… neha closed her eyes and was praying to Durga goddess idol… and she says

Maa ( Durga goddess), due to your blessings today I have achieved a good position in my carrier.. I got a loving and caring family, and very soon I am also going to get married to the person.. who is so important in my life… but I don't understand… what else I am missing.. there is something which I feel is not at its right place… pls God help me and show me the right path.. now I have left everything on you… pls help me…

And then gayatri calls neha
So dear, shall we leave…

Neha smiles
Yeah..

And then the focus goes on Durga goddess idol…..

Scene shifts….. neha and gayatri reaches their hotel room, and neha says to gayatri

Mom, I think its good that we both came here… it feels so nice after visiting the temple….

Gayatri smiles

That's why I took u there… and I think, that day by day my daughter is getting more mature and reasonable about every matter…

Neha smiles and then her mobile rings

N:- Hello….

Hello neha, this is Ravi here…… "ravi is a film director"

N:- ohh hello ravi ji how r u…

R:- I am fine neha….

N:- so how is everything…

R:- actually there is a problem…

N:- What?

R:- it happened that when I was watching the film for editing it.. I found some portions of the film are not up to what I was expecting…

N:- and????

R:- and … I think u have to come for the shootings….

Neha gets annoyed

N:- Ravi ji, this is not fair…. I told you that I am on a break.. and I won't be shooting for any film for some months… then how could u ask me to shoot now.. and secondly, u know I am on a holiday with my mother… I am sorry ravi sir.. I can't come…

R:- neha plsss try to understand…

N:- no I don't want to understand anything… (and she disconnects the call)..

And then gayatri asks neha

Wat happened beta…. Who was there on the phone…

N:- well my director…. \

G:- wat happened… ????

N:- nothing… he wants me to reshoot some of the portions of the film again… I told him that I am already on a break and right now I can't come for shoot…

G:- thn dear.. lets go back to Mumbai.. u should complete your film….

N:- no mom… u know that I want to spend some time with you… and I don't know when we will have another chance to go together for a holiday…

Gayatri smiles..

Don't worry beta, in future also we will have chances to go together.. look dear… your work should not take backseat in your life… u should seriously keep on working…. (then gayatri pointing towards her life indirectly says)….. because when a women becomes dependent she looses her freedom and sometimes even self respect……. (and then neha looks at gayatri… and then gayatri comes to the point and says)

So, dear that's why I want u to continue your carrier….

N:- ok mom… I will tell ravi that tomorrow I will be there at the shooting… ok??? (neha smiles)

G:- ok…dear

Then neha calls ravi and tells him that tomorrow she will be present at the shooting…

Scene now shifts its afternoon time… varun had checked out from the hotel and right now he is in the flight from delhi to Mumbai…….

Varun was sitting quietly and thinking about the visions he had yesterday and says to himself

Why all these things are happening in my life…. Why am getting these strange visions? This never happened to me b4

And to change his mood.. he takes out a magazine and starts reading it… after turning one or two pages… he sees an article written on neha, with her picture on side of the page, varun was about to look at the article when the air hostess comes and asks him for the coffee and he without looking at the page turns it… and then he sips the coffee and looks to other pages..

After some time scene shifts to neha and her mother also sitting in a flight from jaipur to delhi, as neha have to reach Mumbai for shooting of her film…. Right now her mother is sitting beside her and neha is fuming in anger… as she took a break but still have to go for shooting.

I am telling you mom, this is my last film with this director rani …..

Then her mother smiles and corrects her

Rani nahi ravi ( its not ran its ravi)

N:- yaa whatever !!!! but he knows that I am on a holiday… and my life is not only limited to films, I have other things to do in life… and this moron do not get this…

Gayatri:- ohhh my dear, don't get so angry… u don't look good when u r angry, even sometimes make up cant help u look good ( gayatri bullies neha, and neha couldn't stop but she giggles)

N:- mom???? You won't change…

(and the both of them giggles)


Now its 3:00 pm and both the flights landed in Mumbai….

Neha and gayatri were moving towards the exit door with their luggage… and varun was still waiting for his luggage.. then after a while he took his luggage and was about to move to the exit door… neha was walking and busy on the phone and gayatri was next to her… neha suddenly starts talking to gayatri again, and she do not look at the front where varun kept his bag.. and she trips off to it, varun at the moment watches it and holds her against falling… and then …………….

Neha and varun for the first time looks into each others eyes for a moment, and forget the rest of the world… and what can be heard is there heartbeats… they completely everything in that 1 minute… varun knows that neha is a successful actress but for the first time he is seeing her in a different way a beautiful girl he know from ages, and neha also looks at him as she knows him.. and then, gayatri feels a little awkward the way both of them were looking at each other, and she calls neha and breaks the ice of silence…

And then varun looks at gayatri and the both of them comes back to their life… and then neha says to varun

Thank you… actually I was talking with my mother and I didn't noticed your bag was lying on the ground….

V:- no its ok… actually, it was my mistake I kept the bag on the floor I should have kept in on the trolley.

They were talking to each other, but they were constantly looking at each other……. For a moment neha thinks

Why I am feeling so different, who is he?

And varun thinks

What is this strange thing I am feeling… I must have saw her so many times on television, but why I am feeling so different now….

And then gayatri interrupts

Lets go neha… we r getting late

Then varun says

Alright byeee

Neha:- byee (and she smiles)

And then varun for a while stands their while neha was moving towards the exit door and was looking at the back towards varun.. and both of the were feeling strange about each other.. can't understand anything….

And then a song begins

Ek ajnabee sa ehsaas dil ko sataye…..
Shayad yehi to pyaar hai….

(scene shifts to neha going 2wards exit door)

Betaabiyon mein dharkan meri chain paaey, shayad yehi to pyaar hai

(and scene again shifts to varun takes his bag and starts moving steadily)

Kuch bhi kaha naa, kuch bhi suna na, phir bhi betaab dil hai hamara…. Beheke kadam hai, mushkil mein hum hai phir bhi sambhlein bhala kaise yaara… ho ho ho

Ek ajnabee saa ehsaas dil ko sataye, shayad yehi to pyaar hai….

(scene shifts to neha now sits with gayatri in the car)

Nazarein beechaa dein, pehere laga de dil pe…. Par dil kisi ki naa mane…..

(varun stands out of the airport and was waiting for his friend..and then rohan arrives, but the song is going on… the dialogs are not audible)

Kaanton pe chalke… sholo mein jalke, lekin…. Milke rahengey diwaane…..

(now varun also sits in the car with his friend rohan,)

Accha lage jab tu saamne muskuraaye……. Shayad yehi to pyaar hai………….
Ek ajnabee saa ehsaas dil ko sataaye shayad yehi to pyaar hai….

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And this episode ends with this song…

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awww awesome part i feel so happy they finally met and sparks flew....yeah i wonder when they will realize what happens in their past...continue soon 👏

that was soooooooooooo long 😛 luved it it roocked continue soon<3333

Originally posted by: KaranB

that was soooooooooooo long 😛 luved it it roocked continue soon<3333

😆😃..............actually last time somebody commented that i shuld write a longer part..... so thats why i made it long😳...anyway have a nice day😃

Originally posted by: duyus

😆😃..............actually last time somebody commented that i shuld write a longer part..... so thats why i made it long😳...anyway have a nice day😃

o icic lol 😆 😆 😆 but hurry im dieing continue its been like a month already cant wait lol 😛

This story is about reincarnation, and Iqbal and neha are the two important characters in this story, who are reincarnated.
CHARACTERS

In this Iqbal is VARUN SHARMA, a simple boy.... from Shimla. but is very ambitious.. he wants to earn money and become something big in life.... whereas,
neha bamb is NEHA JAYSINGH, She is brought up in a punjabi family, Neha is a well known actress and director... she is as successful as her father... Neha is a very confident, outspoken girl of her age..and a little bit arrogant and stubborn, but she is having a golden heart... Recently, she decided to get married and settle down with her old college frnd Ashish Kapoor.. but

ASHISH ( KARAN SINGH OF "DIL MIL GAYE ) is a marrying neha because of her property and he already have a wife.

RAJ JAYSINGH neha's father a successful rich businessman…who only think about money and her daughter is very important to him. He is headstrong and stubborn person and have no place for emotions.

GAYATRI JAYSINGH neha's mother A devoted housewife and mother. She gave all her life in looking after her family, a very soft spoken women.. She is not happy with her husband's behaviour to dominate her and never taking her decision in any family matters, but Gayatri never utters a word.. she silently sacrificed her whole life..

NOW, the story starts in the hills of shimla, varun (Iqbal khan) who wants a good life, he loves shimla but knows he can't pursue his carrier there so wants to go to Mumbai to become a film director but his parents wants him to handle their small shop.... but thats not varun's dream...he wants something more in life and then SCENE SHIFTS to Mumbai AND FOCUSSES ON neha jaysingh (neha bamb) a successful actress about her stubborn nature and her stylish lifestyle and her relationship with ASHISH KAPOOR ( her college friend and would be husband, who is after her just because of her property) RAJ JAYSINGH (neha's father) is happy about the decision neha took to marry ashish as he don't know about ashish true nature….. SCENE SHIFTS AT SHIMLA TO VARUN (IQBAL KHAN) who one day meets his old childhood friend ROHAN and rohan tells him to go ahead with his carrier without wasting anymore time in shimla, which gives a spark to varun's (Iqbal) plans, later varun had a big fight with his parents and he decides to leave the house and go to Mumbai… in the whole journey, rohan helps varun to come to Mumbai. In between varun also have visions about his past life but was unable to understand anything. But one day in Mumbai airport he bumps off to neha.. and in that moment for a while both of them look into each other's eyes and completely forget everything but then both goes in their own paths.

Friends, I have written 6 parts till now and this is what happened in the story so far…. Plssss read and do comment…….. 😊

Recap of part 6

Scene starts with Raj jaysingh talking to Mr J.R singh ( Raj jaysingh's client) they were discussing about signing an important deal, when Raj jaysingh requests to sign the deal on the auspicious day of his daughter's engagement, Now Scene shifts to delhi at the hotel where Varun (Iqbal khan) was staying... he was busy working when slowly he feels drizzy and soon falls asleep... after a while in his dream he gets the vision of his past life, he sees that a girl and a boy was standing infront of a Kali goddess statue, where the girl asks the boy to promise something.... apart from it he sees many other visions about the place and everything and then varun wakes up looking fearful. then his phone starts ringing when he picks it up it was his frnd Rohan (who helped Varun to reach till delhi) he calls him to remind tht next morning he is having his flight to mumbai... scene shifts to neha (neha bamb) who was enjoying her holidays with her mother... she receives a call from her film director to reshoot some of the portions of the film, to which neha gets annoyed but her mother asks her to go to mumbai.....next day when Varun (iqbal khan) and Neha Jaysingh (neha bamb) reaches mumbai airport both bumps on to each other and tht is the first time the faces each other and for a moment they forget everything, but they realises tht they are in airport and then neha moves with her mother and Varun also meet his frnd rohan and leaves the airport... but still both of them think about each other as if something strange happened.

Now part 7 begins .....................

scene shifts to Varun and Rohan both reaches to Rohan's home... Varun holding his luggage enters with rohan....and then rohan says

Rohan:- come..... SO.... this is my home sweet home....how is it????

Varun smiles yeah thts nice..... but Rohan do u live here alone...

Rohan:- yeah.... actually my parents are living abroad... so they come here rarely... so thts why...

Varun:- ohh ok..

Rohan;- come.. let me show u ur room...do one thing u get fresh and then we will have our lunch....

Varun:- thanx....yaar.. u know what.. if u weren't there so these things was not possible.. thanx again

Rohan:- its ok varun... now go to ur room and get fresh...

Varun:- yeah (he smiles)

Sometimes after having lunch both were sitting on a couch and talking...

Rohan:- SO.... varun.. wat r u going to do now.... as u want to be a film maker and u know that it is not easy.. so how will u manage everything...

Varun:- well u know rohan that i am having a good degree so first i want to find a simple job and settle down in mumbai... and slowly i want to take my steps towards movies... but right now my main motive is to settle here.. i want to know this city first.. as right now everything is new for me... its like i dont want to sweep away with the glamour.. i am going to do everything very slowly and steadily....

rohan smiles and says.... i think my frnd u took the right decision... u must settle here first and then think about the future goals...

Varun:- rohan u remember u said that there is a vacancy available in your office... as u know i have a degree in computers and a working experience of 3 yrs in shimla so i want to try here.. so can i give the interview there...

Rohan:- YAA SURE.... our office need good employers... if u r the deserving candidate so definatly this job will be urs... tommorow sharp 9:00 am u have to reach the office...

Varun:- okk.....(smiles)

scene shifts to neha in the shooting.... she was sitting and reading her dialogs and suddenly she thinks about the incident in the mumbai airport...when she bumps off with Varun (iqbal khan), she keeps on thinking about it, when suddenly her mobile rings... she sees the number it was his fianc'e Ashish.......

Neha:- hello.... (she says in a very low voice)

Ashish:- hi darling... watss up... enjoying ur holidays....

Neha rolls her eyes upwards and says

N:- wat holidays??? i am back in mumbai.. and shooting...

Ashish gets tensed
but why... i asked u not to ruin ur holidays for me... but still you...

Neha:- ohhh ho.. listen to me...

Ashish:- yeah

Neha:- actually... my director wants me to reshoot some of the sequences of the film so thats why.... it;s like even i wanted to be in jaipur for somedays, but then mom said.. that i must continue with my work.. and thats why i m here again...i don't think i will ever get time for myself... its only work work and work... but how is ur work... u said u have a major problem in ur singapore office.. is it solved...?????

scene shifts to Ashish with his girl friend and talking to neha......he smiles and says..

no neha.. i need some more time u know...

Neha:- Ashish i hope u reach india before our engagement date...

Ashish:- ofcourse dear.. don't worry... i will be there...

Neha for a minute become silent.... and then Ashish asks

HELLO!!! neha ... r u there.....

N:- yeah... i am .... Ashish can i ask u something....

scene shifts to ashish putting hands around his girlfriend and says on the phone..

yeah plsss tell me wat happened....

Neha:- do you love me....

Ashish looks at her gf and says

yess.... i love u a lot.... and don't worry i will be there soon..

neha smiles on the other side...

i will wait for u... byeeee

Ashish:- byeeee

scene shifts to Ashish and his gf ......

Nisha, smiles and says...

poor girl....

Ashish smiles and says

yeah she is....

Nisha:- i don't understand why u r marrying her, when u don't love her...

Ashish:- ohhhh... well u know how rich she is... apart from it.. after marraige i will get her share of property from her father Raj Jaysingh.. thats why...

scene shifts it's evening time, Neha reaches home from her shootings... and goes to her mother's room..

her mother was sitting quietly and was thinking something, when neha comes and sits by her side....

Neha:- MOM!!

her mother suddenly comes out from her thoughts and looks at neha

Mother:- ohhh neha.. when u came

Neha:- just now !!!!

Mother:- what happened beta... u r looking tensed...

Neha:- no mama... i am just a little tired....

Mother:- neha.. this is not the first time i am watching u after ur shootings... i can see in your eyes that u r a little tensed about something... come on... tell me.. wat is it... which is disturbing you...

Neha holds her mother's hand and starts speaking....

mom do you remember that today i bumped off to a guy in mumbai airport????

Mother:- yes... SO???????

N:- Mom.. i don't know why.... u know.. i may have bumped off to so many people before.. but nothing like this happened....

Mother:- what was so special about it???? its ok... many times even i bumps off to so many people... there is nothing new about it..

N:- but mom.... do there images comes to your mind after u say sorry and moves on...????????????????

Gayatri (neha's mother gets surprised when neha asks this question)... NEHA... do u want to say that the guy u met at airport?? his image are still coming to your mind...?????????

Neha looks down.... and gayatri looks at neha...

Neha :- i don't know mamma why this is happening.. but there was something strange... u know i can't forget the way he was looking into my eyes... i felt as if he was looking into my soul... there WAS something unusual about the incident..

Mother:- dear....... do u have any idea about what u r saying... 4 days are left after that u will get engaged to Ashish... and u are the one who chose Ashish... neither I chose him for u nor ur father.....

Neha:- I KNOW MOM..... I chose Ashish... i am not saying that i don't love Ashish... it's like i really love him....

Mother:- THEN?????

Neha:- I was just telling you... about my feelings..nothing else.....( and then neha smiles and changes the topic)

OK MOM... now forget it.. tommorow we have to go for my engagement shopping.. and u got to help me........

but Gayatri still looks into Neha's eyes...

Scene shifts to Varun (iqbal khan) he was sitting and watching T.V. . when he was surfing the channels and suddenly watch neha's interview... where she was telling about her new films, her co stars and about Ashish........ Varun when watches her on T.V. he automatically forgets everything and keeps on looking at her... but when neha talks about Ashish... Varun feels some jealousy.... and then he thinks....

he remember when he met neha at the airport... and keeps on thinking about her...


and then the song begins.....and in between Varun remembers Neha...


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ek ajnabee sa ehsaas dil ko sataaye....... shaayad yehi to pyaar hai.....

(scene goes to neha sitting infront of mirror and looking at herself)

Betaabiyon mein dharkan meri chain paaey, shayad yehi to pyaar hai
(scene to Varun)

kuch bhi kahaa na kuch bhi sunaa na phir bhi...... bechain dil hai hamaraa.... beheke kadam hai mushkil mein hai dekho .... sambhle bhala kaisa yaaraa....

(scene to neha... she closes her eyes)

chaahe binaa hi nazdeek hum chale aaey.... shaayad yehi to pyaar hai......

ek ajnabe saa ehsaas dil ko sataaye ... shaayad yehi to pyaar hai.......

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