Akss (Angad & Kripa) pg11 comments - Page 5

great part no wait... awsome part 👏 lol that part was great 😆 continue soon 😊

awesome parts dear...i thought i commented but it looks like it didnt show up...wonderful job...reincarnation 😲 awesome ff do continue soon 😃

sorry couldn't comment for last part
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ur ff is getting exciting with each part 😃 ,u r doing a wonderful job.plz cont soon 😊

wow!! loved the part!!
the story is getting more n more thrilling and exciting with each n every part! c 😃 an't wait for the next part!

Part 5

Recap of Part 4:- After neha gets a sprain in her foot.. her mother takes her to her room.. and soon she falls asleep, in her dreams she starts watching the images of her past lives... she starts watching a man (whose face is not shown) he puts a knife on a guy's stomach... and he falls on the ground... later the floor fills with blood all over n a girl was standing at the door step and the guy tries to reach to her... neha gets up and later tells her mother about it.. and her mother says that its a dream... as she is very tired may be that why she is thinking all these things... scene shifts to Varun and Rohan in Shimla and Varun tells Rohan.. that he always feels that there is someone's presence he can feel... a girl, whom he never seen, and Rohan jokes with him.. and asks him just to concentrate on his aim... Scene shifts, At night Rohan was packing his bags...as he have to go to delhi for his work... when Varun asks him to stay.. and then Rohan tells Varun about his boss JR Singh... and Varun.. gets a little tensed.. Scene shifts to Ashish in Mumbai (next day) when he tells his frnd.. that he is marrying neha.. because he wants her share of property Scene then shifts to neha sitting in her room quietly when her father comes and asks about her sprain and later tells her to go to jaipur for a holiday with her mother and Ashish....

Now Part 5 begins.......


Scene starts one week later, neha and gayatri is there in the airport waiting for Ashish, and Raj is there too....

N :- Dad.... where is this Ashish.... he is always late...
Raj:- beta... i am trying his mobile but... his mobile is switched off... don't worry he will be here soon...
and then... Raj's mobile rings....it's Ashish's call..Raj picks it up and says
Raj:- What??? but why??? (and very sadly he says) ok.. alright..

neha and gayatri were looking at Raj, when Neha asked
N:- What happened dad....
Raj:- beta... actually... ashish can't come with u on this trip...
N:- WHAT.... BUT WHY... (she looks shocked)
Raj:- actually... he have to go to singapore. for a meeting, and tht is very important...
then neha takes the mobile from her dad and calls Ashish....and he picks up the phone

N:- hello..
Ashish:- hello neha..
N:- yes... ashish.. tell me, what the hell u think of urself... i am waiting for u... we have a flight after one hour and u r saying that u can't come... do u think i am going to take this...
Ashish:- neha... neha listen to me, look i wanted to go with u on this trip, but the problem is that, suddenly there is problem occured in my singapore office and urgently i have to leave.... i swear upon u... baby... i love u a lot... and if this emergency never occured, so i have never cancelled the trip... i swear.... plsss forgive me this time... i won't do this again sweety...

after a pause, neha says
N:- okk.... but never do such a thing from next time...
Ashish:- sure baby.. u don't even have to tell me... next time i will make a trip for both of us... don't worry...but u go n enjoy..
N:- no... i am going back home... if u r not there then wats the point for going in this trip.... i am cancelling it...
Ashish:- hey neha..... baby... listen to me... don't spoil ur trip for me...u should go.. look atleast u should go for ur mom.. as she wants to spend some time with u... so u n aunty shuld go... as u don't get enough time from ur shootings... so now u r getting some quality time.. then why not use it... ok???
neha smiles
N:- okk....i will miss u...
Ashish:- i will miss u too baby

Scene shifts to ashish sitting with a girl in a flight
the Girl smiles
i think ur Gf trusts u a lot...
Ashish:- well thats a plus point.....but don't worry sweetheart... she is not going to catch us..
and he puts his hands around the girl.

scene again shifts to neha

Raj:- wat did he said?
Neha:- well he can't come..(neha says with a sad face)
Gayatri:- don't worry beta.... we r going together naa... we will enjoy...
(neha tries to smile)
Raj:- okk... neha... take care of urself... i think now u should go n check in at the airport....and gayatri take care of her...
Gayatri.. ok... n u take care of urself..
Raj:- yaa... i will...

and both goes inside the airport..

scene shifts to Shimla...varun's father was at the shop and his mother is working in the kitchen.. when varun comes and hugs his mother...
Varun's mother smiles
Varun's mother:- aree varun.... wat happened... anything special about .....
Varun:- mmmm... mom.. i need to talk to u...
Varun's mother:- yaa.. speak...
Varun:- well... u first come with me.. n leave ur work for a minute...
Varun's mother.. ohh ok.. come

and then they sit

Varun is nervous to talk, but still manages to speak..

mom actually.... u know from the very beginning that i want to be a film director... and want to go to mumbai...
varun's mother:- yess... so??
Varun:- so?? mom... the time has reached... now i want to go to mumbai....and i want ur permission
Varun's mother:- (after a pause his mother speaks), look son, see, u know i never had any problem of ur joining film industry.. neither i stopped u.. nor i ever stopped Tanvi to pursue the carrier.. she wishes for... but son.. ur father runs this family, u very well know..how tempermental he is.. and if he don't want any certain thing in this house.. so nobody can dares to do it... similarly... if he don't want u to go to mumbai.. and run his shop.. then u have to do what ur father want... as he is the head of this family...u have to obey him....
varun gets a little frustated

mom... how can u say this... u very well know.. i don't have any future here... i want to make my life big....and that is not possible here...
Varun's mother:- but son..????
Varun:- mom....i know wat dad want.... U KNOW.. ACTUALLY... HE NEVER WANT ME TO GET SUCCESSFUL IN LIFE.. he is stopping me...to pursue the carrier i want... U KNOW... its a parents duty to look after their children... and if he can't fulfill my dreams, then why he gave birth to me...

and then, Varun's Dad comes and slaps him

Varun's dad:- What u said....????? repeat what u said...
Varun's mother tries to calm the situation..
ohh leave it.. he is a kid... he don't know what he is saying...

Varun's father:- NO... NAMRATA... LEAVE ME... AND LET ME SPEAK..

varun was standing with his face down..
Varun's father:- LOOK AT ME.... I.... UR FATHER.... I SACRIFICED ALL MY LIFE.. WORKING IN A SMALL SHOP.... WHICH IS OUR ANCESTRAL SHOP... BECAUSE OF THAT SHOP... TODAY... U HAVE COMPLETED UR EDUCATION... BECAUSE OF THAT SHOP.... WE ARE GETTING OUR BREAD AND BUTTER.. AND U.............. U R INSULTING IT....
WHAT DO U THINK.... THAT IT IS VERY EASY TO BE A FILM MAKER........... IDIOT, MANY LIKE U LAND UP TO MUMBAI... EVERY DAY, JUST TO BE AN ACTOR OR DIRECTOR... BUT THERE IS ONE AND SINGLE PERSON WHO CAN GET THE FRUIT......

Namrata (varun's mother)..... i told u.... this boy.. will ruin his life... n i can clearly see his future.... he had no idea what he is doing...

and thn varun looks at his father and says

Dad... i have decided what i want to become... and a person can only fullfill his dreams.. if he has the guts to dream big.... if i started thinking like u... then my whole life will start and finish in that small shop... I KNOW... tht because of tht shop i got able to complete my education.... I VERY WELL KNOW... that it is our ancestral shop.... BUT DAD.. every generation have its own new rules to live their life...... and similarly.. i have my own rules to live my life.... and i have decided that I WILL GO TO MUMBAI.... u like it or.. not.....

Varun's father looks at him with a shocked expression... and then he says

get out of this house....

and then tanvi also comes out......

Varun's father:- I SAID GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE.....
Varun:- one day, u will understand me dad......
Varun says this and leaves the place....
Tanvi:- Bhaiyaa... wait...
Varun's mother:- VARUN.....
Varun's father:- LET HIM GO NAMRATA.... this boy is about to spoil his life.... and remember very soon.. he will come back......REMEMBER THIS....

later at night Varun packs his bags and leaves for Delhi...
Tanvi:- (with tearful eyes, his sister says) Bhaiyaa... plssss don't go.. we all need u here...
Varun smiles...
Tanvi.... i know u love me a lot.. and i love all of u... and i want to do something for this family... look, tommorow if i become successful.. so i can back up my family.. financially... BUT HERE.... here it is not possible.....
Tanvi:- bhaiyaa... u take care of ur health... alright???
Varun:- n u also take care of ur health... and listen.... take care of mom... and dad... also... as now u have to look after them... i am giving u this responsbility... ok??
Tanvi:- ok bhaiyaa.... (and tears moves down her cheeks)

then, varun comes out and his mom and dad were standing at the door side... then varun goes and takes his mother's blessings.... and when he moves towards his father....... he ignores him and goes inside the room..

Varun looks at him and leaves the house,with tearful eyes....

scene shifts to jaipur.....

in the hotel room... neha was sitting and watching T.V., when her father calls when the telephone rings n she picks up the phone..
N:- hello,
Raj:- hello... neha..
N:- hey dad... (she smiles)
Raj:- beta... how was ur journey... did u reached the hotel...
N:- yup....
Raj:- where is ur mother??
N:- well mom is out for some shopping and i am sitting at the hotel room...
Raj:- Why???
N:- actually dad i was not in the mood for shopping, so i sent mom...
Raj:- okkk.... dear i sent u there to enjoy not to sit at hotel room.... (he giggles)
N:- dad....
suddenly, neha hears a voice of a man, on the phone....and she again becomes serious

N:- dad... who is with u....
Raj:- why??
N:- no dad... first tell me...
Raj:- ahh.. well he is my business client...
N:- ohhh... (she again becomes normal)
Raj:- anything wrong dear....
N:- mmm no. dad... nothing....
and then the door bell rings
N:- well dad i think mom has arrived... i will talk to u later...
Raj:- ok...take care of urself
N:- yeah dad... u too n byeee
Raj:- Byee
then neha goes and opens the door... it was her mother holding a lot of shopping bags, neha smiles

mom.... puri dukaan uthaa laayin kyaa (did u bought all the shops)
gayatri smiles.... and says
ahhh... u can say this....,
and neha gives a glass of water to gayatri and then start talking...

scene shifts to Varun sitting in a train....

he looks at a child clinging to his mother and remembers about his mother and then about all his memories with his family......,

scene then again shifts to Varun's house where his father was sitting with varun's photograph and sobbing and remembering him.....


its next morning and Varun has reached Delhi station.... from here in delhi he have to take flight for mumbai... Varun... gets down from the train.. and calls his frnd Rohan....

scene for a while shifts to mumbai in an office and rohan working on computer...
Rohan:- hellow...
Varun:- hello.... Rohan... Varun here...
Rohan:- ohhh... hi Varun, did u reached Delhi...
Varun:- yess... ok... where is the man, whom u were about to send...
Rohan:- why??didn't he reached...
Varun:- no...
Rohan:- ok... let me check...

and then rohan calls someone on another phone.. and after a while he again comes to the line
Rohan:- yeah varun....
Varun:- yess..
Rohan:- yeah he is standing outside the station with a board and ur name is there in tht board... so go there...
Varun:- alright... thanks..
Rohan:- yaa ok...

and then Varun goes there and finds the man with a board and his name on it...and varun goes upto him...

hello.. i am Varun sharma...

ohh hellow sir... i am Rishi... Rohan sir sent me to pick u up... plss come with me...

and Rishi and varun leaves the station

then scene shifts to Rishi and Varun in the car.. and Varun was looking at the city....

Varun:- well i guess the city is nice....
Rishi:- yess sir... this city is good....
Varun:- well mr rishi ... r u from delhi itself... or from somewhere else...
Rishi:- no sir.. i am originally from delhi..
Varun:- ohh ok.. (he smiles)
then they reach the hotel.... and after reaching his room.. he calls rohan...
Rohan:- hello...
Varun:- yeah.. i have reached the hotel..
Rohan:- ohh good... alright ... u take rest.. as u came from the long journey... and then tommorow u have to leave for mumbai... ok... there i will come to receive u...
Varun:- thanks rohan... if u woudnt be there... so this journey.. was next to impossible...u r doing so much for me... i don't know if i would ever be able to return ur favors..
Rohan:- ohhh shut up Varun
Varun smiles
Rohan:- u r my frnd... n i am doing this for my frnd... and never talk about favors to me...
Varun:- ok baba i am sorry.. u win..
and both smiles…….

this scene ends here........ 😃
pls read this and do comment....... 😳

awesome part dear...i hope rohan isnt using varun though anyways continue soon dear 👏 👏 👏

Finished reading whole story...good going...new concept....loved the style u write...but I'm lil uncomfortable in rmember ing the names...AK/kyph ki bahut adat hogayi thi 😆 .

keep writing 👏

Originally posted by: vallanki

Finished reading whole story...good going...new concept....loved the style u write...but I'm lil uncomfortable in rmember ing the names...AK/kyph ki bahut adat hogayi thi 😆 .

keep writing 👏

lol thts funny😆😆

interesting and exciting hope neha and varun meets soon great that jerk of nehas finace is not with her

👏 great dear and awesome thx for pm 👏