Lost - (RN) pts 1 - 54

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aarthi

@aarsow

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1001

This was the most hilarious update of Lost

MY God! Naina is certainly aroused and big time!

Rajveer is so adorably naughty in this fic, loooooove him

he shudnt torture her like that and same goes for her.

I pity Alekh who has to witness such embarassing moments so often

poor Naina!!!

the dream sequence was fabulous for a second i thought 'what the hell, theyl get caught and everything will go wrong' but then i understood that it has to be a dream, never ever will Rajveer risk the mission.

waiting for ther nxt part! :)

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hey my views were similar to Ashi's,i understood in the beg itself tat it must be a dream,

excelent n lovely dialogues rockin,

super,

Aarthi

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1002

thank you Aarthi for appreciting this part and yeh the dream sequence was just an eye catcher for the readers.

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sofia

@mystified

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1003

my my what an update....after reading this part all i can say is that poor naina has completely lost it....

i mean she is totally unfocussed now and raj is like making it worse for her...i wonder how u come up with these ideas....

ok so now all except ali and pooja know the truth but i wonder y nobody is bothered about poor yudi...coz i know for sure that he had known about r2 for long now and may be he has gone for a new mission altogether....

raj was completely nuaghty and woh naina ke peeche hi pad gaya...bechari naina....

now bhargav is going to make an entry...as much as i hate him i am eager to know about the cat and mouse game between uncle tom anr raj...i mean r2....

good going and what a way to finish the update....that is why i call u the suspense maker and twistmaster (i dunno if others already call u so but i am gonna call u twistmaster from now on)....keep up the good work and do continue soon....

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sofia

@mystified

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1004

what!!!!😲😲😲

yudi is dead...i mean poor him😭😭😭...bechare ki umar hi kitni thi😃....try to bring him back dear coz i don't think raj would allow a death like that....btw y do i smell something fishy when u said yudi is dead....i think even i am beginning to think like the twistmaster now😆😆😆...

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1005

hehehehe perhaps there is something fishy going on

sochte rehte raho or us enjoy karte raho baaki ke updates,. 😃

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Anuradha

@diya7000

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1006

awra.....iss baar tumne mujhe koi bolne layak nehi choda......raj ke baatein sunke main sharma gayi yaar...uff....😳😳

😳

☺️

Naina...really aaj after this update I found a new side of her...n this side is tooooooo good.....her day dreaming part was excellent....☺️

Aalekh bhi jo dialogue usne diya Raj n Naina ko was superb!!!!👏👏👏..................

Last scene....bechara Huda n Aalekh....really dekha bhi to kya dekha........🤣

Aur haan achha kiya ke aur zada nehi likhha.....main aur sharama nehi sakti yaar....

Yeah do update as soon as possible

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: diya7000
awra.....iss baar tumne mujhe koi bolne layak nehi choda......raj ke baatein sunke main sharma gayi yaar...uff....😳😳
😳

☺️

Naina...really aaj after this update I found a new side of her...n this side is tooooooo good.....her day dreaming part was excellent....☺️

Aalekh bhi jo dialogue usne diya Raj n Naina ko was superb!!!!👏👏👏..................

Last scene....bechara Huda n Aalekh....really dekha bhi to kya dekha........🤣

Aur haan achha kiya ke aur zada nehi likhha.....main aur sharama nehi sakti yaar....

Yeah do update as soon as possible