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Posted: 16 years ago
👏👏t👏 tooo good......
loved d way it is progressing r2 at its annoyin best wen needed
nair is doin wat naina wanted............raj being his naughtiest best........aalekh n huda also did bit here n der
loved d way u described naina n her feelings n den dos dialouges of rn wer toooooooo cute......
well done
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh god this part was terrific....i enjoyed reading it.....bechaari naina..she is so shy but this rajveer is embrassing her more ...just like alekh i love to see their cute fights....When i read naina's dream part..i was shocked..for a second i thought this was really happening later i guessed it might be naina's dream.

Last scene is really hilarious ...i am waiting to see how alekh and huda will react if they see them like this.
Edited by yyyy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi dear,
this was one of the best updates of Lost RN.👏
..seriously i was laughing while reading the whole update..😛
I haven't seen dis side of Raj n it was really very funny..The way he teases Naina n she always become red...😉..Even I blushing while reading few lines..
Her dream sequence was really bold n daring..How on earth can she dream like dat ????????????/
But all is possible when u have a hubby like Raj😳......
but 1 thing Raj room's has hidden cameras so how come Raj n Naina were doing so much of naughtiness....Isn't Bhargav observing dat...???????just a query that raise in my mind while reading...
I loved the last scene ..It was too hilarious.😆
He just laughed at her getting all red as teasing her was the new tool he had got. He knew that Naina wasn't that tough as she showed herself to be and finally he had found her weak point which he could use for his advantage. Obviously just to love her even more. "Come on I'm waiting for an answer. Do you want me to remove my pants right now or do you want me to remove them in the future?"
"You're doing this on purpose aren't you. I feel like...i feel like..."
"You feel like pulling my pants off?" he just couldn't give up.
"Uggggggggggh, I feel like killing you." she literally charged on him throwing him on the floor. Then she sat on top of his bare chest strangling him whilst he pleaded for his life. It was hillarious.
"Are Naina nahi, nahi Naina bus karo bus karo warna marjaaoonga. Naina...Nai..." his voice choked and then just the door opened and eveyone were in for a shock. Raj and Naina were shocked to find the visitors finding them in that postion and the visitors were Aalekh and Huda who were shocked to find them in that postion as to them it looked something else. Rajveer was semi naked and Naina was sitting on top of him and leaning onto him. Naina literally blew it this time by projecting her lost desires.
Wat yaar ?????aaise point par chod diya n dat too for a week..............
Do update soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
by the way just forgot to say happy Ramazan
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey dear.... it was as awesum as ever........
so naina has finally started gettin all those feelings..... nd rajveer is making it even more tough for her.....
keep it going coz u nd ur story r jus so awesum!!!!
nyways ramzan kareem to u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
This was the most hilarious update of Lost

MY God! Naina is certainly aroused and big time!

Rajveer is so adorably naughty in this fic, loooooove him

he shudnt torture her like that and same goes for her.

I pity Alekh who has to witness such embarassing moments so often

poor Naina!!!

the dream sequence was fabulous for a second i thought 'what the hell, theyl get caught and everything will go wrong' but then i understood that it has to be a dream, never ever will Rajveer risk the mission.

waiting for ther nxt part! :)


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Posted: 16 years ago
thank you very much Sweta2005

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

t👏 tooo good......

loved d way it is progressing r2 at its annoyin best wen needed
nair is doin wat naina wanted............raj being his naughtiest best........aalekh n huda also did bit here n der
loved d way u described naina n her feelings n den dos dialouges of rn wer toooooooo cute......
well done

Thanks alot
yep everyone seems to be doing their part of the job pretty well especially Raj and Naina.
Yeah i thought it was abt time to put some romance and naughtiness in the fic after it being too serious and action packed.

Originally posted by: yyyy

Oh god this part was terrific....i enjoyed reading it.....bechaari naina..she is so shy but this rajveer is embrassing her more ...just like alekh i love to see their cute fights....When i read naina's dream part..i was shocked..for a second i thought this was really happening later i guessed it might be naina's dream.

Last scene is really hilarious ...i am waiting to see how alekh and huda will react if they see them like this.

Thanks a lot for appreciating dear
Hmm Naina to beechaaree hai per kuch kam nahi after all she did have all those erotic dreams about him.
heheheh I like to shock my readers from time to time.
hmmm yeh it will be a sight to see. Lets see what happens in the next part.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

hi dear,

this was one of the best updates of Lost RN.👏
..seriously i was laughing while reading the whole update..😛
I haven't seen dis side of Raj n it was really very funny..The way he teases Naina n she always become red...😉..Even I blushing while reading few lines..
Her dream sequence was really bold n daring..How on earth can she dream like dat ????????????/
But all is possible when u have a hubby like Raj😳......
but 1 thing Raj room's has hidden cameras so how come Raj n Naina were doing so much of naughtiness....Isn't Bhargav observing dat...???????just a query that raise in my mind while reading...
I loved the last scene ..It was too hilarious.😆
He just laughed at her getting all red as teasing her was the new tool he had got. He knew that Naina wasn't that tough as she showed herself to be and finally he had found her weak point which he could use for his advantage. Obviously just to love her even more. "Come on I'm waiting for an answer. Do you want me to remove my pants right now or do you want me to remove them in the future?"
"You're doing this on purpose aren't you. I feel like...i feel like..."
"You feel like pulling my pants off?" he just couldn't give up.
"Uggggggggggh, I feel like killing you." she literally charged on him throwing him on the floor. Then she sat on top of his bare chest strangling him whilst he pleaded for his life. It was hillarious.
"Are Naina nahi, nahi Naina bus karo bus karo warna marjaaoonga. Naina...Nai..." his voice choked and then just the door opened and eveyone were in for a shock. Raj and Naina were shocked to find the visitors finding them in that postion and the visitors were Aalekh and Huda who were shocked to find them in that postion as to them it looked something else. Rajveer was semi naked and Naina was sitting on top of him and leaning onto him. Naina literally blew it this time by projecting her lost desires.
Wat yaar ?????aaise point par chod diya n dat too for a week..............
Do update soon😛

thanks dear, I'm glad I was able to make you laugh.
yeh this is a new hidden side of Raj as R2's side effects are bound to stick on now aren't they.
Her dream? well it was just her hidden inner urges and yeh who wouldn't have them if Raj was their hubby dearest. Totally agree there.
Yeh the cameras are there and u'll know abt them in the next updt.
heheheeh intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai my friend.
Thank you for happy Ramazan.
Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Deeya

hey dear.... it was as awesum as ever........

so naina has finally started gettin all those feelings..... nd rajveer is making it even more tough for her.....
keep it going coz u nd ur story r jus so awesum!!!!
nyways ramzan kareem to u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks very much Deeya
yep her deep dark feelings have finally surfaced and Raj is taking advantage of it. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
thank you very much rituka7

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

This was the most hilarious update of Lost

MY God! Naina is certainly aroused and big time!

Rajveer is so adorably naughty in this fic, loooooove him

he shudnt torture her like that and same goes for her.

I pity Alekh who has to witness such embarassing moments so often

poor Naina!!!

the dream sequence was fabulous for a second i thought 'what the hell, theyl get caught and everything will go wrong' but then i understood that it has to be a dream, never ever will Rajveer risk the mission.

waiting for ther nxt part! :)

thanks alot
yeh Naina is quite a bit aroused now by Raj's naughty behaviour.
Well Aalekh is the one who saves them all the time and poor him has to get embarrassed along the way.
The dream sequence was just an eye catcher my dear and to mislead the readers. and i guess u had a shrp eye to see it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey AMAZING update……FABULOUS…..

After the two serious updates of truth finally being revealed….this was a great ice-breaker…..

I think that this has been the most funny update that you have given…..

Naina is getting attracted and aroused by raj's love and mischief …..big time…..

And Raj does not miss a chance to tease naina and pull her legs….he is so adorably cute.

The dream scene was SUPERB….for a minute I was shell shocked……what the hell happened…..but than realized that it was just a dream….

Poor alekh and huda will have to witness such embarrassing moments………..

Wainting eagerly for the next update.

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