Tears of Love..Sujal&Kashish...Last-part

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#261

woww...atlast kashish gets her maayka ka saath with her sasural ka saath..this is absolutely awesome...kashish kii koshish to end her life has made sujal realize kii how much kashish means to him...bechara sujal,kashish ke liye tadap raha hai..awww...sadd...lekin i'am glad kii kashish ab theek hai & sujal is by her side along with that now om has accepted both kashish & sujal..that is coool....yippee.... yeh part padne ke baad me very very khush...now it is time to party..very well written part... 👏 please do post the next part soon..me waiting for it very eagerly.... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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Faiza Sait

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Posted: 17 years ago

#262

great part... kashish is back with her family is really happy to see them all together.

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sonali2027

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Posted: 17 years ago

#263

kashish is fine...its a good news yaar..I hope now sujal and kashish will be together forever....

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samrah

@cute_samrah

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Posted: 17 years ago

#264

thanks god kashish is fine..................grt part

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#265

Last Part

AFTER 3 MONTHS...

Aaj Charu aur Akshat ki shaadi ka din hai.........aaj puri Sinha Family Akshat ki barat leke Garewal House aanewale hai........Barat ka waqt ho raha hai........Kashish apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi thi jab Sujal aata hai..........Sujal Kashish ko dekhta hi rehta hai..........

Kashish: aise kya dekh rahe ho.........achchi nahi lag rahi main..........

Sujal; achchi to tum her roz lagti ho lekin aaj kuch jyada hi haseen lag rahi ho...........

Kashish; kya baat hai aaj to tum bahot hi romantic mood me ho.........

Sujal; kya kare jab biwi hi itni romantic mili ho to koi kya kar sakta hai.........

Kashish: yeh baat to thik hai...........

Sujal; Kashish ek baat kahoon.............hasogi to nahi.......

Kashish: ab batao bhi.........

Sujal; chalo na phir se shaadi karte hai...........

Kashish: phir se yani tisri bar.........

Sujal: haa woh kya hai na jab hamari pehli do bar shaadi huyi tab main in rasmo ko nahi manta tha........ab main phir se yeh shaadi pure rasmo se apne dil se apni rooh se karna chahta hoon..........aur tumhe to khush hona chchiye ki tumhara pati teen teen bar ek hi insaan se shaadi karna chahta hai...........aur woh ho tum............

Kashish: Mr. Garewal aap bhool gaye hai to main aap ko yaad dila deti hoon ki aaj se saat mahine bad aap baap bannewale hai...........

Sujal: to kya hua.......main to apne barah bache hone ke baad bhi itna romantic rahunga..........lekin tumhara muje nahi pata...........

Kashish: kya kaha..........main romantic nahi hoon.........

Sujal; nahi.......kabhi apne aap ko aaine me dekha hai..........aaina tut jayega..........

Kashish: kya kaha........main ja rahi hoon.......muje nahi karni tumse koi baat...............

Sujal: suno to sahi.........meri honewale bache ki maa............romance karna maine tumse shikha......

Kashish: kyunki tum to Mr. Khadus hi ho..........tumhe kya pyaar karna aayega........

Sujal; madam aap bhool rahi hai ki mere hi pyaar aap ki khokh me pal rakha hai.............

Kashish: achcha baba........mere bache ke baap mere pati main manti hoon ki aap is duniya ke sabse achche pyaar kanrewale hai........ab khush............

Sujal: khush lekin itna nahi........

Kashish: kya.......

Sujal: muje ek jaldi se Kiss de do na.......

Kashish: Sujal ......pagal ho gaye ho.........ghar me itne sare log hai...........koi kabhi bhi aa jayega...........

Jab Veena aati hai........

Veena: tum log abhi bhi yahi ho..........chalo barat aa gayi hai...........

Veena yeh kehkar chali jati hai............

Sujal: meri Kiss.........

Kashish: udhar.............chalo...........

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Sujal, Kashish, Veena, Tulsi, Karan and Nandini with children welcomes the barat.........

Veena: kashish.......yeh lo aarti karo...........

Kashish: jee mama,,,,,,,

Kashish Akshat ki aarti karti hai aur zor se naak khichti hai..........

Akshat: yeh kis liye,,,,,,,,

Kashish: yeh dekhne ke liye ki kahi tum bina nak ke to nahi..............

Veena: andar aao beta..........shaadi ka waqt ho raha hai...........

Angad aur Sujal akshat ko leke mandap me jate hai.........Kashish aur Kripa Charu ko lene jate hai.................Charu Akshat ko har pehna ne ja hi raha tha jab......

Sujal: Akshat.........agar aaj juk gaya to zindagi bhar zukta rahega................

Kashish: tum to aise baatein kar rahe ho jaise tum apni shaadi me nahi juke........

Sujal: isi liye to bata raha hoon.........taki yeh bechara woh galti na kare................

Kashish: Akshat tum iski baatoin me mat aao..........

Charu har pehnane jati hai lekin phie se Akshat zukta hi nahi.......

Kashish: woh Akshat tumhare pair pe kuch hai..........

Jaise hi akshat juk ke dekhne jata hai Charu use haar pehna deti hai...........

Phir Sujal aur Kashish Charu ka Kanyadan karte hai..........aur phir phere hote hai...........aakhir Shaadi khatam ho jati hai aur Bidaai ke baad sab log apne apne ghar chale jate hai............

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Sujal aur Kashish chat pe beth ke chand ko dekhte rehte hai..........

Sujal: kitna kubsurat lamha hai.......hai na...........

Kashish: khubsurat aur khamosh bhi......

Sujal; agar gaur se suno to yeh khamoshi bhi kuch bolti hai.................yeh dheere dheere behnewali hawa bhi kuch afsane gunguna rahi ho shayad........

Kashish: shayad kahi isi me hamare dil ki dhadkan bajti hai........

Sujal; isi dil ki dhadkan me hamare pyaar ke sur bajte hai........bandh sako to badh lo is sur ko apne dil se............

Kashish: dil me aur koi sur ki jagah hi nahi bachi.......sab to aapke pyaar se bhar gaya hai.................

Sujal; kash yeh lamha yahin tham jaye.......jaha sirf hum dono ke beech hai to mohabbat........

Kashish: kash main aapki yeh khwaish puri kar sakti.......lekin aanewale her lamhe ko aise khubsurat lamhe banne ki koshish karungi..........

Sujal; kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki pyaar aapki zindagi ko badal ke rakh deta hai...............aaj yeh main manta hoon kyunki maine kabhi pyaar jaise shabd pe yakeen nahi kiya........lekin pyaar ka asli aaina tumne muje dikhaya hai.......pyaar ke haseen khawabo ki takti tumne muje di hai..........aaj yeh chand hamare pyaar ka gawah hai.........maine ghanto is chand ko dekhta raha lekin aaj se pehle kabhi itna khubsurat nahi laga............

Kashish: jante ho main apne sari khusiyaan aur gum sab main inse baat karti hoon............yeh chand mujse jyada meri zindagi ke bare me janta hai.........

Sujal; thik hai.....main aaj is chand se hi puchta hoon ki meri biwi ko kya chahiye aaj is khushi ke moke pe........

Kashish: vaada.........kabhi tum muje ya hamare bache ko kahi chod ke jaoge...........de sakte ho muje yeh tohfa..........

Sujal; vaada raha.........apna dum main tumhari bahoin me toduga............main is janam me nahi agle saat janam tak tumhara saath dena chahta hoon..........Kashish...........main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon..........

Kashish: hum bhi aapse bahot pyaar karte hai...........

Sujal; i love you Kashish........

Kashish: I love you..........

Kashish Sujal ke gale lagti hai............aasman me reh jate hai to sirf chand aur uske saath uski chandani..........waise aaj sujal ke saath uska chand kashish aur chandni uska pyaar tha...........kehte hai kabhi pyaar ke aanshu bhi meethe lagte hai.........jo aanshu Kashish ne apni zindagi me bitaye the uske ek ek aanshu ke badle Kashish ki zindagi me pyaar ka lamha aaya.........rab se na koi khwaish bachi thi na mangne ki khwaish...........

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#266

I want to thank my friends for support through this journey of this ff.........i really appriciate your comments ......i like to thank you for liking and loving my story..........i promise to come up with something new.......thank u all........bye

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kashish

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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jyothi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#267

hey i loved this story of yours i really wish idid not have to end

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#268

kashish that was a amazing end to the story..i liked it very very very much..actually i did not like it but it would be correct if i say i loved it..the scenes between sujal & kashish were just so sweet...& un dono ke beech kii baatein..where sujal says kii let's get married again.. then uska kashish ko kehna kii she is not at all romantic.. kashish ka rootna..sujal ka usko manana...all were just awesome..really damn amazing....kashish maa banne waali hai..very good...and sujal is such a sweetheart uska kehna kii he will love kashish even jab unka bachcha bada ho jayega...this sooo sweet romantic....tooo gooddddddd..... 😳 then woh akshat,sujal,kashish ka scene..this was all very nice...this showed that the family was bonded together....totally superb dear.... 👏 and phir the last scene...sujal,kashish ka saath unki sabse badi taakat hai...this was shown...aur sujal joh vadaa kartha hai kashish se..haila shooo cute..main mar jawaan...mann kar raha hai main bolun kii kahiin nazar na lag jaye inki jodi ko...they have crossed all the hurdles & difficulties and are getting the happiness that they deserve....really a lovely scene..& this was a perfect end to a perfect story... really is se achcha end is story ka ho hii nahii saktha tha...it was really marvelous, fantastic,excellent,par excellence,rocking, superb,cool,dhassu,jhakaas, bindass, raapchik.. very well written part... your writing completety rocks & so does your fanfic....⭐️ now i cannot say continue soon on this fanfic... i'll really miss this fanfic..me sad that it has ended... 😭 😭 😭 but as they say every good thing in this world should come to an end some day or the other.. i'll be waiting for you to start a new fanfic.... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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sonali2027

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Posted: 17 years ago

#269

hey kashish this is one of the wonderful love stories i have ever read..I simply love this story and ur way of writing..Its very sad tht u ended but u gave it a beautiful ending...i am very happy abt tht...i would be really waiting for all other fan fictins......