WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 64

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

aww, this was a sad part; this shouldn't have happened. but well written 😊

hey thank you

yeh it shouldnt have but thats where the new tiwst begins.

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Posted: 17 years ago

hmmmmmm yeh kahani me kesa twist le aayee aap bahut hi dukhi kar diya is baar......itne dino ke baad post kiya aur itna sad part.....lekin ha likha bahut hi accha he..... 👏 👏

plzzz is baar post karne me itna time mat lena

Edited by tekhum - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tekhum

hmmmmmm yeh kahani me kesa twist le aayee aap bahut hi dukhi kar diya is baar......itne dino ke baad post kiya aur itna sad part.....lekin ha likha bahut hi accha he..... 👏 👏

plzzz is baar post karne me itna time mat lena

ab twist hoga tabhi to maza aaehga

well get ready to feel sad even more kyu ke aage bohat saare parts aane waale hai jisme rona dhona hee hai. kya karu me happy parts se ab bore hogayee hu isliye ab yeh karahee hu.

dekhtee hu kab karsaktee hu.

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey MSD,,,,,wen are u going to post the part??
cant wait,,,,,,i m waiting to cry,,,u must be knowing why,,,,,,,,,ab toh ek bahana mil gaya phooth phooth ke rone ka,,,,wat say??
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

hey MSD,,,,,wen are u going to post the part??
cant wait,,,,,,i m waiting to cry,,,u must be knowing why,,,,,,,,,ab toh ek bahana mil gaya phooth phooth ke rone ka,,,,wat say??



hey zahra.
ur the first one who is actually waiting for these sad scenes as ive been getting complaints from others that they dont want to cry.


hehehe so u wanna cry, i'll give u a better way. Just listen to sad songs and u'll automatically cry. 😭 😭

it works all the time.

i'll try and post it today okay. will make it a bonus crying session as i'll post two sad parts.
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Posted: 17 years ago
sad depressing and am disgusted with kashish and her lawyer i cant imagine that she would stoop so low its kindaa mean but both bro and sis kashish and angad r sometimes disgusting idiots loved ur writting
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Posted: 17 years ago
part ninety nine

Meanwhile Angad arrived back to Mumbai and he went straight home.

Angad:
Kashish Di! 😊 Sujal Jijz! 😕 kaha hai sab?

Akshat: Angad tum?

Angad: (turns around in whiplash and as soon as sees Akshat 😡 his blood boils) Tum yaha kya karahe ho Akshat? 😛 maine to socha tha ke ab tak to tum doom daba ke baag chuke honge. Aakhir hamesha wahi to karte ho tum

Akshat: Bhaag jaane kee baat tumhaare mooh se ajeeb lagtee hai 😳 Angad. Is baat me to tum maahir ho

Angad: Koun kis me maahir hai, yeh to waqt hee batayega. 😒 me yaha tumse behes karne nahi aaya. Just tell me ke Kashish di kaha hai

Akshat: Me koi tumhaare baap ka naukar nahi hu 😵 jo tumhaaree her baat maanu

Angad: 😡😡 khabar daar Akshat jo mere baap ka naam liya to...

Akshat: (steps forward in Angad's face) nahi to kya karloge tum?

Angad: dekh Akshat 😡 is waqt me tere mooh nahi lagna chahta. sidhee tarhaase 😳 batade ke kaha hai wo log

Akshat: kyu 😛 darr gaye?

Angad: Darr te wo hai jo pedaishee kayar hote hai per tum yeh nahi samjhoge

Maria: Are Angad baba 😊 tum aagaye?

Angad: (turns away from Akshat) Maria, Kashish di kaha hai?

Maria: Wo sab to court gaye hai aaj onke case kee hearing hai na

Angad: 😲 kya? wo aaj hai?

He looked at his watch and then quickly ran out of the house towards his car and rushed towards the court house. he knew if he hurried then he would be able to catch everyone there.

Back at the courthouse everyone were just leaving. Saumya was sitting in the empty courtroom going over all the events that just took place. Then all of a sudden he got up and rushed outside. He was searching for someone and then he found her climbing down the stairs from the court. He quickly climbed down too non- stop and caught up with her.

Saumya:
Kashish!

Kashish turned around with surprise 😲 and when she saw Saumya she turned away again ignoring him.

Saumya:
Kashish 😔 please mujhe tumse baat karnee hai

Kashish: I'm sorry mister Saumya Parashar 😳 aap ko jo bhi baat karnee hai wo mere lawyer se baat kijye.

She continues walking off

Saumya:
Kashish 😔 please mujhe tumse baat karnee hai. meree baat to sunlo, please!

Kashish turned around and saw the pleading in Saumya's eyes. this is exactly where she wanted him to be 😈

Kashish:
Theek hai, kaho

Saumya: hum kahee or jaake baat karsakte hai?

Kashish: (looks at the lawyer and then back to Saumya) theek hai 😳 lets go.

Both walk off towards Saumya's car. Just then Angad arrives at the court and as soon as his car stops he sprints out towards the court's stairs, desperately lookig for his family members. He searches the empty courtrooms and other meeting rooms but there was no sign of anybody 😔. Then he found a lawyer in the corridor.

Angad:
Excuse me, kya aap bata sakte hai ke yaha pe Sujal Garewal ka case chalraha tha na, to wo...

Lawyer: wo case kee hearing aaj khatam hogayee hai

Angad: kya? 😲 per wo kya huwa?

Lawyer: Adalat apna faisla kal sunaye gee. 😳 now please excuse me, mujhe ek important case larna hai.

After the lawyer left Angad went into deep thought 😍 Then his eye caught something which made him turn around. He saw Kripa walking towards a taxi, she was really disturbed and lost in her thoughts. Without wasting anymore time he literally ran down the stairs in order to catch her before she left.

Angad:
Kripa! Kripa!

Unfortunately 😔 Kripa was oblivious of him calling her and she just sat in the car. Everything that happened was eating her up 😭 because she knew the truth and knew exactly how both Saumya and Pari would be feeling right then.

Angad missed her by a fraction of a second. He tried stopping the taxi but he was too late.

Angad thought: Damn it! 😡 wo bohat upset lagrahee thee 😔 of course hogee, aakhir me Saumya oska bhai hai. Mujhe ghar jaake Kashish di se poochna hoga.

He returns to his car and drives off home.

Kashish and Saumya drive to an isolated cliff and then get out to talk.

Kashish:
Ha to ab kaho Saumya 😳 kya kehna chahte ho?

Saumya walks towards the edge of the cliff and stares out towards the clouds.

Saumya:
Kashish me jaanta hu ke tum mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karpaogee 😔 Tum shayad mujhse itnee nafrat kartee ho ke...Me ye bardaasht karne ka aadi ho chuka hu lekin (turns towards her) 😒 koi mere parivaar ko nuksaan pohochai wo me kabhi bardaasht nahi karunga. Kashish tumhaaree dushmani mujhse hai. Tumhe mere saat jo bhi karna hai, karsaktee ho, lekin mere parivaar ko kyu beech me ghaseete rahee ho?

Kashish: Kamaal kee baat hai Saumya. 😛 Apne parivaar pe aanch aayee to forun haath barha diya lekin tumne jo Sujal ke parivaar ko nuksaan pohochaya 😡 hai oska kya?

Saumya: Maine Sujal ke parivaar ko koi nuksaan nahi pohochaya 😒 Jab ke wo mera parivaar hai to me ose kese...

Kashish: Oh please Saumya 😡 mere saath yeh naatak karne kee zaroorat nahi. Tumhaaree wajese or sirf tumhaaree wajese Sujal ka accident huwa tha 😡. Sirf tumhaaree wajese 😡 Sujal Paralysed hogaya. Sirf tumhaaree wajese 😡 mere or Sujal ke beech dooriyan peda hogayee. Sirf tumhaaree wajese 😡 Sujal ko itnee takleef huwee. Sirf tumhaaree wajese 😡 Sujal ke parivaar ko itna bara nuksaan utha na para. Sirf tumhaaree wajese 😡 or tum kehrahe ho ke tumne koi nuksaan nahi pohochaya?

Saumya: Yeh sach hai ke meree wajese Sujal ko kahi takleef huwee hai 😔 lekin maine wo kabhi jaan bujke nahi kiya 😒

Kashish: Ab yeh sab kehke kya fiada. Jo tumhe karna tha wo to tumne kardiya. Ab tumhe oskee saza 😡 milnee chaheeye

Saumya: 😭 Me her saza jhelne ke liye tayaar hu. Lekin please mere parivaar ko yeh saza mat do. Pari 😒 ka in sabse koi lena dena nahi to kyu oska naam beech me jore rahee ho? (falls down on his knees) 😭 me tumhaare saamne hu. Jo bhi tumhe karna hai, mere saath karo. Tum jo chatee ho wo me karunga, lekin please Kashish, Pari pe yu zulm mat karo. Wo sehan nahi karpaehgee.

Kashish: Aaj tumhe Pari ka dard dikh raha hai 😔😡 Os waqt jab mujhe dard huwa tha oska kya Saumya? Jab maine Sujal ko maut se larte huwe dekha tha, 😭 tub mujhe kitna dard huwa tha. Kabhi socha tumne?

Saumya: Socha tha maine Kashish kyu ke wahi dard maine bhi mehsoos kiya hai

Kashish: 😡😡 JHOOTH! Dard de ne waale ko kabhi dard mehsoos nahi hota. Saumya tumne mujhe or Sujal ko dard ke ilawa kuch nahi diya. Puree zindagee barbaad kardee hai tumne hamaree.

Saumya: Theek hai 😔 me maanta hu ke maine yeh sab kiya hai. Me sab kuch kabool karne ke liye tayaar hu. (joins his hands together) Please Kashish, 😭 tumhe jo karna hai mere saath karo, lekin Pari 😒 ko chore do. Tum jo kahogee me wo karunga.

Kashish: Soch lo Saumya. Me jo kahungee karpaoge tum

Saumya: apne parivaar ko bachane ke liye me kuch bhi karsakta hu

Kashish: theek hai 😳 to phir Sujal ko chore do.

Saumya: 😲 kya?

Kashish: Ha Saumya. Tore daalo Sujal se saare rishte, naate. Chale jao oskee zindagee se or rehne do ose apne haal pe.

Saumya: 😲 Kashish yeh tum...

Kashish: Hairaan hone kee koi baat nahi Saumya. Agar tum apne parivaar ke liye kuch bhi karsakte ho to me bhi apne parivaar ke liye kuch bhi karsaktee hu. Me jaantee hu Sujal kee bhalai isee me hai ke tum 😡 osse hamesha ke liye dhoore hojao. Wo yeh kabhi nahi hone dega isiliye tumse kehrahee hu ke ose apnee zindagee se nikaal do. 😡 Bhool jao ke Sujal naam ka koi dost tha tumhaaree zindagee me. Osse itnee dhoore chale jao jahase waapis laut na namumkin ho. Bolo Saumya 😳 kar pao ge ye? Hai tum me itnee himmat? Apne parivaar ko bachane ke liye itnee hadd tak jaa sakhoge?

Saumya sat there digesting everything Kashish said. His world felt as if it collapsed 🤢 right in front of his eyes. he was being asked to do something which was impossible for him 😒 She was asking him to seperate from his soul and everyone knows you can't survive without your soul.

Kashish:
Kya huwa Saumya 😛 ab tumhaare paas kuch kehne ke liye nahi? abhi, abhi to bari baate karahe the ke me apne parivaar ke liye kuch bhi karsakta hu, to phir saabit karo Saumya 😡 Agar tum chahte ho ke tumhaaree Pari pe koi aanch na aaye to phir tumhe yeh qadam uthaana parega. Batao Saumya 😳 kya chate ho tum, apne parivaar kee khushi ya to phir apnee dosti? Ab faisla tumhaare haath me hai

She turned away from him and began walking off back to the car.

Saumya:
Ruko Kashish!

She froze

Saumya: (walking up towards her)
Faisla lene kee baat karahee ho tum, 😔 jab ke wo lene ka haq bhi cheene liya hai tumne. Aaj tumne wo baat kehdee jo maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha. Agar tumhe lagta hai ke mera Sujal se dhoore ho jaaane se oskee zindagee sudhar saktee hai to phir me Sujal ke liye kuch bhi karsakta hu oskee khushi hee sabse ziada maine rekhtee hai, meree zindagee me. Agar wo isee me khush rehta hai to yahi sahi. Or agar isse mere parivaar pe bhi koi aanch nahi aati to phir yahi sahi. 😔 Tumne kabhi mujhe samjha hee nahi Kashish. Bachpan se lekar aaj tak maine hamesha wahi kiya hai jisse Sujal khush hota hai, jisse osse khushi miltee hai 😊 😭 Agar mere is qadam se wahi hota hai to phir theek hai me tumhaaree yeh shart maan ne ke liye tayyar hu 👍🏼 Me Sujal se saare rishte tore dunga 😔 bhool jaaoonga ose, lekin Kashish mujhe yeh batao ke kya tum oske dilse mujhe bhoola paogee? Will you be able to convince him to forget me? Kya tum oske dilse wo yaadein meeta paaogee jo hum dono kee hai?

Kashish: (looking at him with hatred 😡 written all over her face) Ab Sujal ko nayi yaadein bana nee hogi or is dunya me kuch bhi namumkin nahi hota. 😡 Tumhaaree nafrat hee ose yeh karne pe majboor karegee.

Saumya: Tum kabhi 😒 hum dono ke rishte ko samjh hee nahi paayee or shayad kabhi nahi samjh paaogee (wipes his tears) khair ab jo tum chahtee ho wesa hee hoga. Me Sujal ke dil me mere liye itnee nafrat bhar dunga ke mohabbat ke liye jage hee nahi rahegee 😔 Dhoore hojaaoonga me oskee zindagee se.

Kashish: Agar bhool se bhi tum apni baat se mukhar gaye to phir oska anjaam is baar se or bhi bura hoga. 😡 Aaj ke baad tumhaara manhoos saaya me Sujal ke aas paas bhi nahi chahtee. Tum apna waada nibhao or me apna. Baksh dungee tumhe or tumhaare parivaar ko. Acchee tarha se samjh lo yeh.

She walked off away from there and caught a taxi from the main road. she didn't give Saumya another glance.

Saumya was left with nothing anymore 😔 he felt as if Kashish stole him of the most precious thing he held to his heart. Everything was finished 😔 over.

Garewal house

Kashish told Angad what happened in court and how the case was in their favor now.

Angad:
Aap aisa kese karsakti hai 😒 di? Aakhir Saumya bhaiya ne aisa kya kiya hai jo aap unse itnee nafrat kartee hai?

Kashish: Angad 😡 jo baat tumhe samjh me nahi aati, ose jaane ke koi zaroorat nahi

Angad: 😔 lekin di aap...

Kashish: Maine kaha na, 😳 bus or koi sawaal nahi karoge tum.

She walks off

Angad:
Aap chaahe mujhe na bataye di, per ek din me pata karke hee rahoonga is nafrat ka raaz.

end of part.

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

sad depressing and am disgusted with kashish and her lawyer i cant imagine that she would stoop so low its kindaa mean but both bro and sis kashish and angad r sometimes disgusting idiots loved ur writting

hey thanks for that

hmm they are borther and sister but the difference between them is that Angad realised his mistake but Kashish wont do right now. hey i've posted the next part too.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow, that was a intense court scene! The prosecution is horrible!!! 😡 😡 😡 Dragging Pari into it, manipulating the phone call 😡 I feel so bad for them! 😭 How humiliating it must be!

Ohh, poor Saumya, separating him from his brother like friend 😭 I hope Sujal gets well and tells Kashish the truth!

What's Akshat doing at Angad's house by the way?

Well written part! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow; this new twist can cause problems everywhere; why is kashshs being selfish , saumya did nothing intentionally.

this is going to create problems for angad and kripa as well

awesome part

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