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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks a lot goldi2

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Part ninety seven

Saumya is reading the newspaper at the breakfast table and he looks quite disturbed 😔 Then his mobile rings

Saumya:
Hello?

Lawyer: Newspaper para?

Saumya: Ha. 😔 yeh to hona hee tha, kal hearing hai to baate to hongi hee na.

Lawyer: me jaanta hu tum upset ho Saumya, 😔 lekin yeh media waale to yuhi sab bakwaas likh te rehte hai 😡 kal sab ke mooh band hojaenge jab tum hearing me aaohge.

Saumya: ha ab me yeh maamla jaldse jald suljha dena chahta hu 😒 wese bhi bohat lamba hogaya hai

Lawyer: Don't worry 😳 Saumya is baar hamare paas kuch aise saboot hai jiske wajese hum prove karsakhenge ke tumne kuch nahi kiya. Sab kuch apne favour me hoga okay 👍🏼

Saumya: I've full faith in you 😊

Both cut the phone and Saumyua sits lookig down at the article, still quite tensed 😔 This was the fourth time when the hearing had being postponed. The first two times had been because of their request but the third time it had been because of the judge's ill health 🤢 now finally the fourth hearing had been finalised for tomorrow. He had tried to keep this case as low profile as possible but the publicity had increased and now they were all over the place.

Saumya:
Me apne parivaar ko in sab baato se dhoore rakhna chahta hu 😳 Jo kuch bhi huwa ha, sab meree wajese huwa hai to iskee saza bhi mujhe hee milnee chaheeye. (his mobile rang again) Hello 😕

Pari: 😔 Aap please apna dil chota mat kijye

Saumya: 😲 Pari tum?

Pari: Jaantee hu is waqt aapke dil pe kya beet rahee hogi lekin hum to sacchai jaante hai na

Saumya: Mujhse mile bina mere dil ka haal jaan letee ho tum

Pari: aapka dil mere seene me dharakta hai 😊 to kese nahi jaanoongi?

Saumya: Gosh what will I do without you? 😃 Tumahaare beghair to jese zindagee hee khatam hojaehgee

Pari: 😒 aisee baate nahi karte. Chalye choreye yeh sab. Me jaantee hu aap ka mood kaise theek karsakte hai 😛

Saumya: acha 😉 zara hum bhi to sune ke maleka - e - husn is naacheez ke baare me kitna jaantee hai

Pari: hmmm... 😛 aapse miloongee tab bataoongee lekin filhaal aap jaldi tayaar hojaye, office ke liye dair horahee hai

Saumya: aapka hukoom saraakho per 😊 sach me Pari kabhi kabhi to me soch ta hu that I don't deserve you 😔 Yeh bhi adab thi hamaree ke teree mehfil me aa bethe
banke zameen kee khaak, aasmaan se dil laga bethe

Pari: Oho shayar sahab 😛 ab yeh shayari band kijye or jaldi se jaaye 😃

Both laugh 😆 at their idiocrisies and then cut the phone. Saumya however goes back to being glum 😔

Saumya:
😔 Abhi to tumhaara mujhpe anth vishwaas hai Pari. Darr ta hu 😒 jab tumhe mere past ke baare me wo sacchai maloom paregee tub kya hoga? 😕 tab bhi mere saat hee rahogi?

He sits with his head in his hands.

Angad is returning back to Mumbai via plane as their college group had already left two days ago. He couldn't wait to get back and see Kripa. Her cute smile 😊 her beautiful chocolate brown eyes 😍 her flowing shiny waist long hair, all were captured in the camera of his eyes and during the journey that's all he could see . He had his guitar with him so he began strumming a tune, despite of others around. He could imagine others singing along

Chorus:
laakh chupa le deewaane
banke rahenge afsaane
chaahe tu maane na maane
hogaya tujhko pyaar


Angad: Ghumsum hai dil mera, aaj kal ghumsum hai dil mera
ghumsum hai dil mera, aaj kal ghumsum hai dil mera.
ho khawaabo khayalo me
uljhe sawaalo me
bus dekhe rasta tera


(He got up from his seat) oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar
oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar


Chorus: (they all came behind him) laakh chupa le deewaane
banke rahenge afsaane
chaahe tu maane na maane
hogaya tujhko pyaar


Angad: (He walked down the aisle playing the guitar entertaining everyone and then he saw Kripa sitting there gigling at his behaviour. he went over to her) Aakho me neend, neendo me khwaab
khawaabo me tum mere
dil ke kareeb, dharkhan ke paas
rehna hai mujhe tere


(she disappeared so he just grinned at his madness and brushed his fingers in his hair) tera saath, oho tera saath oho her pal rahe din raat
meree duwaoh me, teree sadaooh me, tu mere man me basa

oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar
oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar


Chorus: (the people sitting joined in) laakh chupa le deewaane
banke rahenge afsaane
chaahe tu maane na maane
hogaya tujhko pyaar


Angad: (he settled himself in one of the random empty seats, dreamily) wo paas aaye, lab thar tharaye
khamosh ho zabaan
haalat hamaree, aakhir me tumse kese karu bayaan


(Josh came over to him which made him excited again all of sudden) ek baar, ho, ek baar jo kehde ke mujhse hai pyaar
saara jahan bhooloo
me aasmaan chooloo
hojaao bus me tera


(he got up and began swaying along the aisle whilst others just clapped along with him) oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar
oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar
oh jaana, oh jaane jaana oho is dil ka ilaaj kar

Ghumsum hai dil mera, aaj kal ghumsum hai dil mera
ghumsum hai dil mera, aaj kal ghumsum hai dil mera


Next day in Mumbai

The d- day of the court trial had finally arrived. This was the continuation of what had already started and the media were all hyped up waiting outside the court house for both the parties to arrive.

Soon two cars approached the courthouse of each other. From one emerged Saumya, Pari and Kripa and from the other was Kashish and surprisingly Sujal. Saumya was shocked 😲 to see Sujal there too because he always use to stay away from all this. He knew all of this was so hurting but still came. Both exchanged glances, wanting to speak to each other but were restrained. however they did manage to speak through their minds.

Saumya thought: Sujal 😔 tu yaha kya karaha hai?

Sujal thought: Me yaha apne dost kee himmat hafzayee karne aaya hu 😳

Saumya thought: Tu jaanta hai ke Kashish ne kya kiya hai, phir bhi...

Sujal thought: Osne jo bhi kiya hai 😒 wo sarasal be bunyaad hai. Sach kya hai sirf hum do jaante hai. Me jaanta hu tujhe 😊, teree nas, nas se waakif hu. Tu kabhi sapne me bhi mujhe nuksaan nahi pohocha sakta.

Saumya: Tera yeh vishwaas hee to mera sabse bara hathyaar hai

Sujal thought: Me jaanta hu ke jeet sirf teree hogee 👍🏼

All of them make their way inside the court, ignoring the grilling by the press. Inside everyone settled down and soon the judge arrived and the trial began.

Defendent:
Your honour, pichlee sunwaai me yeh saabit kiya gaya tha ke mere muwaakil Saumya Parashar pe be bunyaad ilzaam lagaya gaya tha ke onhone Sujal Garewal ko jaanse maardene kee saazish rachee thee. Asal me to wahi thi jinhone Sujal Garewal kee aakhir me aake jaan bachai. 😊 sirf itna hee nahi your honour, Sujal Garewal kee jabse aisee aapahij haalat huwee hai tubse onka pura ilaaj sirf Saumya Parashar ne karwaayaa hai. Kuch maheeno pehle to wo bistar per se uth hee nahi sakte the lekin aaj wo is mukaam pe pohoche hai 😃 ke wo yaha aakar baith sakte hai. Yeh rahee saaree reports (hands papers to the usher who passes on the judge) Ab me adalat se poochna chahta hu ke kya ek insaan jisne apna pura waqt, pura paisa apne bhai jese dost ko theek karne me laga diya, ossee kee jaan lesakta hai? kya wo itna bewacoof hoga ke apna itna nuksaan karega? Agar onhe Sujal Garewal ko maarna hee tha to phir itna naatak karne kee kya zaroorat thi? itnee mehnat karne kee kya zaroorat thi onhe bachaane me? Meree adalat se darkhwast hai ke yeh nayi roshni pe gore kare or mere muwaakil ke saat insaaf ho. That's all your honour.

The courtroom began buzzing again with people discussing the latest development.

Judge: 😡
Order! order! Mr Prosecutor aap kuch kehna chahte hai?

Prosecutor: Your honour me kya kahu 😆 meree to hasee hee nahi rukh rahee. Mere kaabil dost nai abhi, abhi jo bhi kaha wo kaabile taarif hai 👏 per afsos adalat jaasbaato or bhavnaoh pe hee sirf nahi chalti. balke sabooto pe chalti hai, onko maantee hai. Yahape aisee kahaani kahee gayee hai milord jise sacchai pe parda phirgaya hai. Me adalat me kuch aise sabbot or gawaah paish karne kee ijazat chahta hu jisse yeh saabit hosakta hai

Judge: Ijazat hai

Prosecutor: Me apne pehle gawah Mr Garewal ke physiotherapist ko bulaana chahoonga

The physiotherapist comes and stands in the witness box.

Prosecutor:
Kya aap bata sakte hai ke kya Saumya Parashar her therapy me haazir rehte the?

Physio: Ji ha shuru, shuru me wahi onkee madad karte the

Prosecutor: Yaani ke ab nahi karte?

Physio: 😒 nahi, karte hai per...

Prosecutor: karte hai ke nahi?

Physio: karte hai per wese nahi karte

Prosecutor: Iska matlab nahi karte, right?

Physio: Ji...

Prosecutor: Yeh bataye ke jab aapne Mr. Garewal kee swimming therapy shuru kee to kya tub bhi Saumya Paarashar haazir the?

Physio: Ji ha

Prosecutor:
Kya yeh sach nahi hai ke is therapy me Mr Garewal kee jaan ko bhi khatra huwa tha?

Physio: Ji ha. Saumya Parashar kee galati kee wajese huwa tha

Prosecutor: Kya aap adalat ko bataenge ke kya galati huwee thee

Physio: Jab Sujal Garewal kee therapy chal rahee thee tub Saumya Parashar thoree dair ke baad aaye. Wo kissee ke saat phone pe baat karahe the or kaafi dair tak baat huwi. Oske baad onhe bhi kaha ke pool me aake madad kare. Jaise hee onhone Sujal Garewal ko pakra, tabhi onka phone phirse baja 😔 or onhone Sujal Garewal ka haath chore diya jiske wajese Sujal Garewal paani me dhoob gaye.

Saumya closed his eyes to suppress that terrifying 😔 memory. He had blamed himself for so many days.

Prosecutor:
To aap kehna chahte hai ke Saumya Parashar ne jaan bujhke haath chore diya?

Physio: mera matlab yeh nahi tha...

Prosecutor: Onhone jaan bujke ke kiya ke nahi?

Defence: 😡 Objection milord. yeh gawaah pe dabao daal rahe hai

Judge: sustained!

Prosecutor: to bataye ke kya huwa tha?

Physio: Darasal maine onse kaha tha ke floor slippery hai to sambhaalna phir bhi wo...

Prosecutor: phir bhi onhone haath chore diya onka phone call attend karne ke liye

Physio: Ji

Prosecutor: Thankyou. Your honour yeh jaante huwe bhi ke pool ka floor slippery hai, Saumya Parashar ne Sujal Garewal ka haath chore diya kyu ke apne cell phone kee ziada paree thee onhe. ek taraf se yeh jaatate hai ke wo Sujal Garewal kee kitnee madad karahe hai jab ke asaliyat to kuch or hee hai. yeh to sirf ek parda hai onka shaitaani maksat chupaane ke liye. Saumya Parshar ne jaan bujhke cell phone ko bahaar nikaala taake yeh haadsa sirf ek accident kee tarha lage jab ke yeh onkee sochee samjhi saazish thee.

Defence: 😒 objection your honour, Mr. Prosecutor do alag baato ko jore rahe hai

Prosecutor: Yeh baate ek duje se juree hai milord kyu ke aise haadse kaafi baar huwe hai or ittefaaq se Saumya Parashar hamesha phone pe hee the.

Prosecutor: Milord wo phone calls saare official the. Saumya Parashar S.G Enterprises ke phone calls attend karte the, jo onhe itna busy rakhta tha

Proecutor: Official? Your honour yeh phone calls kitne official the or kitne personal yeh abhi kuch dair me saabit hojaaehga (he brought some papers from his file and presented it to the court) Yeh hai Saumya Parashar ke phone kee list of the last few months. yeh sab incoming or outgoing hai or isme to mujhe sirf ek number hee ziada nazar aaraha hai your honour, or yeh number naahi koi enterprise hai or nahi koi dusre officials ka. yeh number hai Pari Thaapar ka.

everyone were surprised 😲 as well as Saumya and Pari because where did this angle come from? why was Pari being dragged into this?

Defence:
Objection milord, yeh onka neechee maamla hai jo is case se related nahi hai

Prosecutor: related hai your honour. related hai abhi abhi yeh baat kahee gayee hai ke Saumya Parshar official calls me busy rehte the per yaha se yeh baat saabit hotee hai ke aadhe se zida waqt to wo apnee mashooka se baat karne me laga te the. ise yeh zaahir huwa ke naahi Saumya Parashar S.G enterprises ka koi kaam karte the or naahi Sujal Garewal kee therapies me interest lete the. Yeh sab dikhaawa tha, sirf ek naqaab jisse yeh lage ke kitna kuch karte hai yeh apne aziz dost ke liye jab ke asal me yeh onke hee peet me chura bhoke rahe the. kya pata milord yeh in dono laila majnu kee chaal bhi ho...

Defence:
Objection 😡 Mr. Prosecutor adalat ko gumraah karahe hai dusree saaree baate laake

Judge: sustained! 😳 Mr prosecutor aap ke paas thos saboot ho is baat ko saabit karne ke liye tabhi yeh saabit hosakta hai warna yeh baat sirf ek theory hai

Prosecutor: me adalat se maafi chata hu. Mere paas aise saboot hai jo yeh saabit karsakte hai.

Judge: onhe paish kiya jaaye.

As the case took new turns both Saumya and Pari became pale with anxiety as to what exactly was going to be presented. Saumya couldn't allow his life to be violated like this, especially Pari's. He had to stop this right now but how?

end of part

okays here it is. What will happen next? will Saumya and Pari's personal relationship be exploited in the court or will Saumya be able to stop it all.

to get the answers be sure to catch the next part.


Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Heyy! Seems I'm the first to reply!

First I love your hindi/urdu diction.."himmat hafzayee," "saazish rachee" etc. they make the writing so realistic 👏

Second, I love your smileys! They are like automatic comedy
for me like imagining the judge like "Judge: 😡 Order! order!" and the dancing media, "media were all hyped up"

Although I don't know the Pari/Saumya jodi, I like the way you portrayed them with the filmy malika-e-husn and your heart is with me dialogue.

I like this judge, he sustains all of the defense's objections!😆

One last thing, the song, Angad was singing, which movie is it from?

Wonderful part! 😃
Edited by sweetmagic4u - 17 years ago
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awesome part.. but it really sucks.. i hate the other laywer..uggrr.. he shud just got ot hell..

sam.
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the prosecuting lawyer was disgusting am really disgusted with kashish now shes been real evil and disgusting do con soon cant wait
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kashish ko toh mein 😡 great part.
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Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

Heyy! Seems I'm the first to reply!

First I love your hindi/urdu diction.."himmat hafzayee," "saazish rachee" etc. they make the writing so realistic 👏 - hey thanks a lot for appreciating. yeh well thats what u get for seeing too many films 😆

Second, I love your smileys! They are like automatic comedy
for me like imagining the judge like "Judge: 😡 Order! order!" and the dancing media, "media were all hyped up" - thanks, thats the first time someone's commented on them.

Although I don't know the Pari/Saumya jodi, I like the way you portrayed them with the filmy malika-e-husn and your heart is with me dialogue.

I like this judge, he sustains all of the defense's objections!😆

One last thing, the song, Angad was singing, which movie is it from? - it's from the movie Kya love story hai. i really like this song.

Wonderful part! 😃

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Originally posted by: chocolate p

awesome part.. but it really sucks.. i hate the other laywer..uggrr.. he shud just got ot hell..

sam.

thanks for appreciating

yeah the other lawyer is terrible but then again he is the prosecutor.

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Originally posted by: armaghan0

the prosecuting lawyer was disgusting am really disgusted with kashish now shes been real evil and disgusting do con soon cant wait

yep he is really horrible and Kashish well she's just so blind in her hatred that she doesnt know wat she's doing.

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Originally posted by: monikaseth

kashish ko toh mein 😡 great part.

yeh kick her by all means 😃

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