WhenLoveCalled pg112 discontinuation note - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part six

Kashish has no choice. She manages with bit difficulty but does it. After the three buckets ?are full she hangs them on the donkey and then takes the leash to pull. The donkey ?doesn't budge. She pulls harder and then it starts to move. ?

Sujal: Or ha, condition no 3 – tumhe round aankhe band karke maarna hai or yeh ga kar ??– 'Saathi haath bharana' 😆?

Kashish innocently takes forward the task, whilst Sujal keeps giggling.😆 😆She begins her ?rounds with her eyes closed, which made her bump into many people but she still carried ?on. ?

Kashish: Saathi haath bharana?

There was a racket among passer bys because she was behaving stupidly. Kashish was so ?involved in saying her mantra that she didn't notice the laughter was for her. The trio ?were following her, constantly laughing. ? 🤣

Kashish: Saathi haath bharana

Sowmya gestured everyone to say with her to make more fun out of it. ?

Everyone:
Saathi haath bharana! Saathi haath bharaana!?

Kashish: Saathi haath bharana

Principal: 😡 yeh sab kya ho raha hai??

Everyone froze dumbstruck because now it was the time to leave. Kashish opened her ?eyes and saw an angry yet concerned bald man in front of her.?

Kashish: sir me wo 3 conditions puree karahee thee jo principal saab…(she pointed ?towards Sujal who immediately made a cut from there)?

Principal:
What nonsense. I am the principal and I didn't tell you anything. ?

Kashish: Kya!😲 Per sir wo to…?

Principal: follow me to my office right now!?

After she left the trio came out from the hiding and gave each a high five, gesturing that ?they are too good. ?

Sujal:
guys I hope the principal is not too mean with her

Sowmya: are yaar yeh pehlee baar thoree na huwa hai. Per mujhe yeh bata, tujhe itnee ?fikar kyu hai??

Sujal: 😳 nahi muhe kuch bhi nahi, bus yuhi soch raha tha. (he constantly was ?trying not to show his real feelings to Sowmya, infact to anybody at that point). ?

okasys the part eds here.

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

part six continued------

Principal's office

Principal:
what kind of behaviour is this??

Kashish: sir, aaj mera pehla din hai or mujhe kaha gaya tha ke koi or principal…?

Principal: (put his hand up, gesturing her to be quiet) yeh zaroor on teeno kee shararat ?hogee. 😡Yaha pe aksar pehle din sab students ke saat aisa hota hai. U just stay away from ?them and I'll see that they get their punishment. ?

Kashish didn't know who he was talking about but by the looks of what happened she ?knew that the fake principal was one of them. The way he was checking her out, she ?should have realised it then. ?

Principal: you may go now

It was time for her first class and there was a rowd going on amongst them. As she ?entered all eyes went on her and then a snigger began from behind.😆 😆She found a seat in ?the front. Sowmya sat at the back and as soon as he saw her he stood up and gestured ?like a musician for a chorus👏

Sowmya:
Saathi haath bharana!?

Everyone joined in. Kashish turned around and gave him a stern look.😒

Everyone ?continued laughing and singing.🤣 👏She saw Sujal sitting in the back bench as well with a ?😊on his face and she immediately recognised him as the fake principal. Her eyes ?were blood shot red with anger.😡😡 Sujal noticed her feeling uneasy. ?

Sujal: hey yaar chore na ab, bohat hochuka.?

Sowmya: 😆come on yaar, its fun. ?

Sujal: dekh ose bura lagraha hai. Bus chore. (he convinced Sowmya to sit down just at the ?right time as the professor arrived). ?

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome fic i loved it.

thanx, im glad u luved it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part seven

At lunch time in the canteen Sujal arrived before his friends so he searched around for a ?seat, when his eyes caught her again. She was sitting alone munching a sandwich. Since ?he had seen her that morning it felt the rest of the world didn't exist,😍 it was just him and ?her. He imagined her with her hair flying😍 and her eyes twinkling. ?

Sujal thinks: kya soch raha hai Sujal, yehi acha moka hai dosti karne ka. (he walked ?towards her and hovered on top) Hi!?

Kashish was a bit 😲 so she just stared at him.?

Sujal:
I'm sorry about earlier. Wo kya hai ke mere dost ne convince kiya isliye thora ?mazaak kiya,😆😆 warna me to bilkul aisa nahi hu. ?

Kashish doesn't say anything just continues eating her sandwich. ?

Sujal: by the way mera naam Sujal hai. Sujal Garewal. (he put his hand out in order for ?her to shake it but there was no response from her). Dekhye hamaree shuruwaat buree ?huwee, to ab me ise theek karna chahta hu (he reached into his upper pocket and took out ?a white rose) yeh, naraazgee or maafi maangne ke liye hai.😳 Agar aap ise accept karlegee ?to mujhe lagega ke aap ne mujhe maaf kiya.?

Kashish hesitantly accepts it and gives him a weak smile.😳 😳Then Sujal reached into his ?pocket again and took out a yellow rose. ?

Sujal: ab jab maafee mil hee chukee hai to phir zahir see baat hai ke ab hame dosti ?karlenee chaheeye.😉 Agar aap yeh phool accept karlegee to mujhe yeh lagega ke ab hum ?dost hai.?

Kashish was surprised but there was something in his gaze which made her hypnotised ?and she accepted everything he told her. She took the flower and then stood up to leave ?when Sujal stopped her. ?

Sujal: sunye. Ab jab hum dost ban hee chuke hai to phir aage barne me itnee dair nahi ?lagegee,😉 to kyu na abhi se hee yeh shuroo hojaeh. (he took a red rose out of his pocket) ?agar aap yeh phool accept karlegee to mujhe lagega ke aap bhi mujhse pyaar kartee hai. ?

She stared at him, then gave a sweet smile and held onto the rose but didn't full y accept ?it.☺️ A smile was developing on Sujal's face. ?


here ends another part.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part eight

Kashish: Tumne mujhe yeh phool dene kee himaat kaisee kee.😡(she slapped him across ?the face.)?

The whole canteen went silent. Sujal stood there stunned with his hand on his cheek. He ?was in a trance for a few minutes. A few other girls gathered around their table. ?

Girl no.1:
theek kiya tumne

Girl no.2: yeh larke to hote hai awara

Girl no.3: all men are like that. ?

Kashish: ainda mujhe bakra bana nese pehle yeh thappar zaroor yaad rakhna. ?

As she left, Sowmya and Pari came towards Sujal. They had witnessed the slap episode ?from the door way. ?

Sowmya: kya huwa??

Sujal: yaar, yeh khud ko samaj tee kya hai??

All three went out and saw Kashish complaining to another bunch of girls about the ?episode. The guys gathered their gang and challenged the girls. They broke into a song

Sujal: khud ko kya samjhti hai itna akar tee hai, college me nayee nayee aayee ek larki
? Hai – 2?

Oh yaaro yeh haemin lagtee hai sarphiree, aaoh chakhade maza!?

Kashish: khud ko kya samjhta hai, itna akar ta hai, college ka naya naya majnoo yeh ?dekhta hai – 2 ?

Oh yaaro yeh haemin lagta hai sarphira, aaoh chakhade maza! ?
?(sorry guys I don't have the full lyrics for this song so just imagine the full song with both ?boys and girls going against each other and the usual nhok jhok.)?

After the song finished Sujal straightened himself up, brushed is dusty clothes and made ?himself look cool again. Then he walked up towards Kashish. She kept on staring at him ?with awe because he some how had managed to impress her. Her inner feelings said ?something else. She had a sudden yearing for him. ?
Sujal took out the red rose once again but this time with style and gave it to her. ?She blushed, smiled and was unable to meet his eyes. Then she accepted the red rose. ?
There was a big roar in the crowd and Sowmya came with the other guys and ?picked Sujal up, whistling away and cheering him up. ?

------------------------------END OF FLASHBACK-------------------------------

its also the end of this part. enjoy.

? ?

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part nine

Pari: Sowmya…Sowmya? (she shook his shoulder, seeing he was sitting there staring into space like a statue.)

He blinked😍 and saw that he was back into the present in his office. He wiped his moist eyes and then pretended to clean the table.

Pari: kaha khogaye the aap?

Sowmya: huh,😕 oh nahi wo, actually kuch nahi bus thora sa kaam…

Pari: jaantee hu kitna kaam hai. Saara ka saara karobaar aaphi k sambhaal rahe ho. Daddyji or mummyji bahaar gaye hai or phir Sujal kee aisee halat kee wajese dono companies ko aap he sambhaal rahe hai. Aapko shyad ehsaas nahi per me dekhtee hu aapko roze or yeh halat aapkee dekhee nahi jaatee mujhse.😔

Sowmya: kya huwa hai, kuch bhi to nahi (tries a weak smile but is unable to glow. He avoids eye contact).😒

Pari: idhar dekhye (she cupped his face in her hands and made him turn towards her) aapkee aakhen saaf bata rahee hai ke kitnee raatose aap soye nahi. Aapkee puree khabar rakhtee hu mein.

Sowmya: (hugged her by the waist) tum mujhe itnee ache tarha se pehchaantee ho. Pata nahi kya karoonga tumhare bina or pata nahi ab aage kya hoga.

Pari: filhaal to aap abhi khaana khaaenge. Chalye utye.😃😃

Sowmya followed Pari, hand in hand towards the side of the office where there were a couple of sofas surrounding a big glass coffee table. Pari had laid out all the food she had brought from home.

Sowmya: itna saara khaana?😲 Kya itne dino ka ek saat hee khilaane ka program hai?

Pari playfully smacked him on the shoulder.😆😆 Then she served food on his plate and made sure he ate it.

Pari: kya puranee yaado me khoye huwe the?

Sowmya: ha Pari. Tumhe yaad hai wo college ke din, me, tum, Sujal aur Kashish kitnee maze karte the. Har din koi naya hungama.

Pari: 👏😆 mujhe to wo din yaad hai jab Sujal ne pehlee baar Kashish ko red rose diya tha or ose jore ka thappar paratha.

Both laughed like small children.🤣

Pari: Dekhlena Sowmya. Wo din phirse lout aaenge. Sab kuch theek hojaega.

thats it guys

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part ten

At Thaapar house, Prince as usual has come home for lunch.?

Prince: Rani jaldee karo, aaj teen baje meree client se important meeting hai.?

Rani: (comes out of the kitchen with a bowl in her hand and puts it on the table.) agar ?itnee hee jaldi hai to phir ghar pea aye kyu? Me khaana office me bhej waadetee.?

Prince: to kya me ye moka gawa deta.😉 Tum jaantee ho ke purey din me sirf yehi waqt ?hota hai jaha pe sirf hum dono akele hote hai, or koi nahi (he hugs her from the waist).🤗?

Rani: bus, bus.😳 😳Aapko yaad hai pichlee baar jab aap aise mood me the to kya huwa tha? ?

Prince: kya huwa tha? (he wonders and then remembers) Are ha! ?

---------------------------FLASHBACK------------------------ -----------
Rani was dusting in the house, stood up on a stool. Prince just entered the house from the ?office and stood in his tracks after what he saw. He was able to view Rani's slender ?frame and most of all her cute kamar. He couldn't resist so he crept up from behind. ?

Prince: RANI!? 😆

She got startled lost her balance, but luckily Prince caught her. They had an eye locking ?session for a while😍 until Rani broke the ice. ?

Rani: Prince, yeh kya karahe hai aap?😳 Chore yeh hame. Koi aajaehga

Prince: ghar me koi nahi hai, ise acha moka kab milega?😉😉(he crushed her in him more) ?

She pushed him away and got down. Just then Prince put something on her shoulder. ?

Prince: Rani Dekho chipkali!?🤣

Rani shrieked and removed her sari paloo to throw the animal. She instantly hugged ?Prince still in that condition. Both of them held each other tightly and it was going ?towards being an intimate moment. Both were completely lost into each other when ?somebody coughed. ?

Voice: ahem, ahem. ?

They let go immediately and Rani straightened her sari going full red with ?embarrassment 😳😳😳because the person coughing was none other than Surekha. When ?Surekha had come, she found the two locked together. She herself got a bit embarrassed😳 ?and tried not to look straight forward. ?

Surekha:
hai bhagwan! Kab sudroge tum dono?😡 Kuch sharm karo, yu sarhe aam ishq lara ?rahe ho. ?

----------------------------END OF FLASHBACK------------------------
Both Prince and Rani were smiling. ?

end of part


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Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

nice parts continue soon

im glad ur appreciating my work 😊😃

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Part eleven

Prince:
Maa ko dekhkar kesa laal😳 face hogaya tha tumhara

Rani: 😆 sirf mera? Aap to puree taraha pani, pani hogaye the, aisa lagta tha ke abhi ?behosh hojanenge, ?

Both shared a light laugh when Prince got a naughty idea. ?

Prince: wese Rani aaj bhi moka acha hai.😉 (he stood up)?

Rani: (got tensed by his intentions) Prince kya karahe hai? ?

Prince: abhi to kuch nahi per bohat kuch karne ka irada hai.😈 Moka bhi wahee hai, 😉😉waqt ?bhi wahee hai. Or itefaaq dekho tumne sari bhi wahee pehnee hai. ?

Rani:(walking backwards) Prince…nahi

Prince: 😆 ab nahi chorunga. ?

He attempted to grab her but she escaped. He ran after her trying to catch her but failed ?each time. Rani ran looking behind at Prince when she collided with someone. She was ?surprised😲to see it was Surekha. ?

Surekha:
kya hai?😡 Theek tarhase chal na. kya huwa? ?

Before Rani could answer Prince grabbed her from behind not seeing Surekha.?

Prince:
Yes! Pakarliya (he instantly let go😳 when he saw Surekha looking at him with an ?ashamed face.) ?

Surekha: acha to yeh sab chalraha hai😳 (she pulled Prince's ear again) kuch to sharam ?karo, ek jawaan betee ke ma baap hone ke bawajood abhi tak bachpana nahi gaya.😡 Kab ?sudroge tum dono? Chal ab office ja! Mene teree diary me sudhe dekha tha ke teree aaj 3 ?baje important meeting hai, or abhi tak tu yahi hai??

Prince: Maa, pichle janam me tum zaroor Hitler rahee hogee.?😆😆

Surekha: maroongee ek!😡😡 Chal ab ja. ?

After he leaves Rani and Surekha share a laugh. ?

Surekha:
Pagal.🤪 ?


end of part
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great fanfic.. had fun time reading.. hope sujal gets better!!!

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