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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part twelve

Kashish: come on Sujal you can do it! Ek qadam barhao 👏

Today was Sujal's treadmill treatment and with support he had managed to step up it but ?couldn't hold on. Kashish gave him all the support. ?

Kashish:
come on Sujal! Ek qadam aage.? 👏😃

He tried his best but kept on falling so Kashish put her hand out for support. Just as he ?was going for it Sowmya gave his hand in between and pulled Sujal up. Sujal grabbed ?hold of it firmly and an instant 😊appeared on his face seeing his friend. Now he knew ?that his motivation wheels will roll.?

Kashish immediately became insecure with the bonding and felt angry😡 at Sowmya for ?coming in between yet once again. ?

Sowmya: yeh huwee na baat.😃 Cha lab aage bhar (Sowmya kept on repeating to motivate ?Sujal)?

Sujal tried his best to lift his legs but they just didn't budge, when at last he managed to ?move one foot a few inches. All three – Sowmya, Kashish and physio, cheered. 👏? 👏👏

Physio:
well Sujal. First step completed. Ab mujhe improvement nazar aarahee hai or wo ?din dhoor nahi jab Sujal apne pairo pe daur ne lagega. ?

Sowmya: sahi kaha. Mera dost phirse apne pairo pe khara hoga. ?

Kashish: (pushed Sowmya aside slightly and took hold of Sujal)Chalo ab tumhare khaane ?ka time hogaya hai.😒?

Sowmya felt the coldness in Kashish but he tended to ignore it because he was happy to ?see Sujal happy.?

Sowmya: theek hai Sujal, chal ab me chalta hu. It was brilliant today. (he held Sujal's ?hand firmly and gave his sute smile.😃 Then as he got up to leave Sujal didn't leave his ?hand.) Kya baat hai yaar, kuch kehna chahta hai??

Sujal thought: kehna to bohat chahta hu tujhe per majboor hu. Teree yeh udaasee ?chupee nahi hai mujhse mere dost.😭 Jaanta hu ke jabhi tu yaha aata hai to apne dil pe ?pathar rakh ke aata hai ke kahi Kashish kee karvi baate tujhe chote na pochade. Per ?teree wajese hee me aaj is muqaam per pohocha hu or aage bhi teree mehnat se hee ?theek hounga.?

Sowmya's heart somehow made him understand everything Sujal was thinking. There ?was this special bond between these two friends where sometimes they were able to figure ?out each other's thoughts without saying them. He gave Sujal an affirmative look 👍🏼 that ?everything will be fine. ?

Kashish: Sowmya tumhe dair horahee hai or Sujal ko bhi. Tum jaante ho ke waqt pe ?khaana, Sujal ke liye bohat zaroori hai. ?

Sowmya just smiled and left. Kashish's coldness ate him up each day but he knew that he ?had to stay strong for everyone else.😭 ?

Kashish: Sujal me soch rahee thee ke kyu na tumharee treatment hum Shimla me ?continue kare. Waha pe bhi saaree facilities available hai or wese bhi yaha pe mama or ?papa bhi nahi hai. Ab saara kaam mujhse akele nahi hota. Me tumhare saat zyada se ?zyada waqt beeta na chahtee hu. Or wese bhi waha pe mere papa hai or meree behne bhi ?to hai jo meree bohat help karegee. Yah ape to koi bhi nahi.?

Sujal thought: me jaanta hu Kashish tum kyu aesa karahee ho. Aakhir khaar kab tum ?Sowmya ko aise mujrim samjh tee rahogee.😡 Tumhe to oska ehsaan maan na chaheeye ke ?aaj me theek horaha hu. Per tumharee narazgee oskee taraf din bhar din bartee jaarahee ?hai. Tumhara yeh faisla bilkul theek nahi hai, per is waqt me tumhe kuch samjha nahi ?sakta. ?

Kashish: tum iske bare me soch na. Chalo ab yeh khaana khalo. ?

end of part.?

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#22
Part thirteen

Somwya's on the phone with Pari.?

Pari:aaj bare khush lag rahe hai aap?? 😊

Sowmya:Pari you wont belive it ke aaj kya huwa. 😃 ?

Pari:aisa kya hogaya? ?

Sowmya:aaj Sujal ne apna pehla qadam uthaya. ?

Pari: 👏 Sach! Yeh to bohat hee achi baat hai. ?

Sowmya:meree khushi ka me andaaza bhi nahi laga sakta. 😃 😃 ?

Pari:yeh sab aap kee wajese hwua hai. ?

Sowmya:mene to kuch nahi kiya Pari. Yeh sab to Sujal kee mehnat ka natija hai. ?

Pari:aapne bhi kuch kam mehnat nahi kee hai. Agar aap uska treatment itnee ache tarha ?se nahi karwa rahe hote to phir itnee jaldee yeh sab nahi hota

Sowmya:wo to mera farz tha Pari, warna mene to apne dost ko maar hee…?

Pari: 😡 kahbar daar jo aisee baat kee to. Aap jaante hai ke isme aap kee koi galatee nahi ?thee to phir kyu apne aap ko kose rahe hai. I don't want you saying that again. 😡 ?

Sowmya:okay your highness 😃 chalo aaj kahi bahar chalte hai lunch ke liye. ?

Pari:aaj to waake hee acha din hai. Bare dino ke baad aap ne kahi bahaar jaane ka ?program banaya. ?

Sowmya:are, pichle hafte to legaya tha tumhe. ?

Pari:Sowmya, wo mere ghar ka lawn tha. 😆 ?

Sowmya:ha to wo ghar ke baahar hee huwa na. 😆 😆 ab dekho maza to aaya tha na tumhe.?

Pari:aap bhi na. theek hai to phir me office aajaongee, wahase chalenge.?

Sowmya:theek hai. 'I love you'. 😉 ?

?end of part.
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Part fourteen

At lunchtime Pari reached Sowmya's office but he was on the phone and pretty tensed. ?

Somwya:
kese huwa?😲Are you sure? Theek hai me aaraha hu abhi. ?

Pari: kya huwa Sowmya? ?

Sowmya: Sujal kee tabiyat achanak kharaab hogayee, ose hospital legaye hai. ?

Pari: kese huwa yeh? ?

Sowmya: wo me jaaraha hu waha…I'm sorry Pari😔aaj baahar nahi jaasakte. ?

Pari: it's okay Sowmya. Yeh ziyada important hai. Aap jaaye, phir baad me baat karte ?hai. ?

At the hospital Sowmya arrives near Sujal's room and finds Kashish sitting outside with ?her eyes closed.?

Sowmya:
Kashish, kya huwa??

She looked at him with surprise😒and before saying anything the doctor came out. ?

Kashish:
ab kaisa hai Sujal??

Doctor:
don't worry ab sab kuch theek hai. Wo to tension kee wajese blood pressure low ?hogaya tha, per ab he's fine. Ose saqt araaam kee zaroorat hai, dimagagee tore pe. ?

Kashish: (blew a sigh of relief) kya me ose milsaktee hu? ?

Doctor: yes you can. ?

Sowmya:
Kashish me bhi aata hu.?

Kashish: please Sowmya. Abhi tumne suna nahi doctor ne kya kaha.😒Sujal ko dimaagee ?tore pe araam kee zaroorat hai or me nahi chahtee ke tumhe dekhkar oskee tabiyat phir se ?kharaab hojaeh. Wese bhi yeh tumharee wajese hee huwa hai.😡Nahi tum subhe aate use ?milne or nahi oskee tabiyat kharaab hotee. To please leave us alone.?

She walked off whilst Sowmya stood there completely shattered. ?

end of part.
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Part fifteen

Prince and Rani are having lunch at home and this time it is civilised because Pari is home. They were quite concerned as to why she hadn't gone to give Sowmya lunch, but after she filled them in about Sujal's sudden ill health and how Sowmya had to go, they understood.

Rani: Are Sowmya bete tum?

Sowmya just entered looking lost😔and glum.

Prince: sahi waqt pe aaye ho, abhi abhi khaana laga hai, chalo aao.

Sowmya: jee nahi uncle, me theek hu

Pari: kya theek hu. Pata hai mujhe ke aapne kuch nahi khaaya hai. Chalye abhi yaha.

She took him by the arm and walked him over to the dining table. Then, gestured him to sit down.😊 Then she served food on his plate. He sat there still lost in his thoughts.😍

Rani noticed this so she nudged Prince and made him notice Sowmya too. He then lip synced to Pari 😛 – 'what's wrong?'

Pari then saw Sowmya and how his food was untouched so she took the tomato sauce from the table and made a smiley face 😃 on his plate. Then she tapped him on the shoulder and made him look on the plate. As soon as he saw the smiley, a smile appeared on his face 😃 😃 and he began eating his food.

Prince: chalo Rani ab me chalta hu. Okay Sowmya beta, milte hai baad me.

Rani walks Prince to the door and then she leaves Pari and Sowmya alone.

Pari: kya baat hai Sowmya, phirse aap itne khoye, khoye kyu hai?

Sowmya: pata nahi Kashish ke mann me mere liye itnee karwahat kab kam hogee. Aaj bhi Sujal kee kharaab tabiyat ke liye osne mujhe hee zimedaar theraya.😭 Me to waha yeh dekhne gaya tha ke Sujal theek hai ke nahi, or agar nahi hota na to me eeth se eeth bajadeta oske ilaaj ke liye.

Pari: me jaantee hu Sowmya. Per aap sochye na ke Kashish roze jab Sujal ko aisee halat me dekhtee hai to oske dil pe kya guzartee hogee. Ek pal me oske saare sapne chore chore hogaye. Puree zindagee badal gayee. Kitna sehna parta hai osko. To phir kisee na kisee pe to ghussa utaarna chaheeye na. or hum ghussa osee pe karte hai jiskee hume parwa ho.

Sowmya: (took her hand and put it on his cheek) tum itnee achee kyu ho Pari?👏 Her insaan me tumhe achai hee kyu nazar aatee hai? Is baat ko bhi tumne ek aisa acha more diya ke me apna dukh bhoolgaya. Her baar meree maayusee ko itnee ache tarha khushi me kese badal detee ho?😊😊

Pari: hmm, yeh isliye kyu ke aap khud hee itne ache hai ke aap ke sangat me her ek acha hee hojaata hai. Aap dekhna ek din Kashish bhi aapkee achai ko pehchanegee or phir sab kuch pehle jese hojaehga. 👏👏👏

He kissed her palm and then continued eating.

Pari: acha, to phir Kripa agayee?

Sowmya: Kripa?😕

Pari: Sowmya aap bhool gaye.😲 Aaj Kripa Shimla se aane waalee hai.

Sowmya checked his watch and then exclaimed.

end of part

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Part sixteen

Sowmya: are baap re me to bhool hee gaya Aaj chaar baje kee flight hai. Oho Pari, tum agar na ho to mera kya hoga. Kuch yaad nahi rehta mujhe.

Pari: wese kuch or bhi bhool rahe hai aap

Sowmya: 😕 acha! Kya bhool raha hu me?

Pari: sochye, bohat hee ehem cheez hai yeh, jiske bina yeh sab shuroo hee nahi huwa hota. Hum yaha nahi bethey huwe hote.

Sowmya thinks harder but he can't figure out what it is she is talking about.

Pari: chalye me aapko do din ka waqt detee hu.😊 Agar do din me aapko yaad nahi aaya to…

Sowmya: to?

Pari: to phir me hee aapko bata doongee 😆

Sowmya thinks: najaane kounsa bomb phorne waalee hai do din me

Pari: phirse khogaye aap? Aap to asie ghabragaye hai jese me aap ko koi saza suna ne waalee hu😃 😆

Sowmya: do din ka challenge jo tumne diya hai wo sazaa jesa hee to hai. Pata nahi kya hoga.

Pari: theek hai chalye me aapko hint detee hu. (Takes out a picture of her and Sowmya from their college days)

Sowmya: 😃 wow so sweet. Yeh to hum hai. Per😕…yeh clue kesa?

Pari: yeh soch na aapka kaam hai. Ab chalye warna aapko dair hojaehgee or phir Kripa ko bhi lene jaana hai na.

Sowmya doesn't want to leave but Pari literally drags him to the door and makes sure he sits in his car and leaves.

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Part seventeen

Kripa:
Bhaiya! (an excited Kripa ran to Sowmya as as soon as she caught sight of him at ?the airport. She gave him a bear hug 🤗)?

Sowmya:
oho, bohat bhaaree hogayee ho. Kya khaatee thee Shimla me? 😆 ?

Kripa: (gave him a playful smack on the chest) kya bhaiya itne dino ke baad milrahee hu ?aapse or aap phir bhi mujhe chirarahe ho. ?

Sowmya: (holds his ears) okay baba, chalo kaan pakre. Chal ab ghar chalte hai. Ab kuch ?ghar me jaan aaehgee. 😃 😃 ?

Kripa: yeh kya bhaiya. Aaj bhi aap bhabhi ke bina aaeh. ?

Sowmya: wah! Hum aaeh oskee koi khushi nahi 😭 per apnee bhabhi kee value ziyada ?hogayee. ?

Kripa: kesee baate karahai hai. Aap hai to hee bhabhi hai na, to phir aisee kya…?

Sowmya: uff! Meree guriya to bura maan gayee. Actually me tujhe osee se pehle milaane ?jaaraha hu. ?

Kripa: sach! 👍🏼 (very excited because she admired Pari. She was like her best friend with ?whom she shared all her feelings) ?

Thaapar house

Kripa:
Bhabhi! (she ran straight in, hugged Pari, 🤗 🤗 twirling her around)?

Pari:
are, are, thoree saas to le. ?

Kripa: mujhe aapse bohat hee important baat karnee hai, chalye. ?

Pari: (being pulled by Kripa) pehle do saas to le, 😲 or bait. Phir baat karte hai. Sabse milto ?le. ?

Kripa: sabse milto chukee…?

Rani just enters the hall.?

Kripa:
namaste auntyji (she touches her feet and takes blessings) ab chalo, mileeya. ?

Rani: hey bhagwaan, yeh larki bhi na. ekdum toofan mail kee tarha hai. 😆 😃 ?

Sowmya: sach kaha aapne. Pari ke saamne to meree koi value hee nahi 😉 Hatta, katta, bhai ?khara hai saamne, ose oskee khushi nahi hai, 😔 per seedhe poochtee hai ke Pari bhabhi kaha ?hai.?

Rani: Pari me hai hee aisa jadoo ke sab oske keeche chale aate hai. ?

Sowmya: mujhse behtar yeh koun jaane ga…(looks dreamily. 😍 Then rembered about the ?challenge and decided to ask Rani about it) wese auntyji me aapse kuch poochna ?chahtahu.?

Rani: pooch beta

Sowmya: kya aisa kuch hai jo mujhe yaad rakhna chaheeye??

Rani:😕kya matlab??

Sowmya: nahi mera matlab hai ke koi aisee cheez jo huwee ho per mujhe yaad nahi or ?yaad honee chaheeye, kyu ke wo yaad hone waalee baat ho. 😆 ?

Rani: kya bawloa jesee baat karahai aaj??

Sowmya: dekhye me aapko samjhata hu. Yu samajh lijye ke ek situation hai jiska ?solution nikaal na hai. 😊 Ab wo situation ka pata os solution se hee pata chalega, per jab tak ?situation pata nahi chalta to solution pata nahi chalta. To osme situation or solution mix ?hojaate hai or ise banta hai confusion or confusion…? 👏 👏

Rani: 😡 yeh kya situation solution laga rakha hai? Zaroor Prince ne tujhe iske liye lagaya ?hoga. Aane do onko, tub me bataoongee (she leaves a helpless Sowmya behind)?

Sowmya:
uffo! Yeh auntyji to samjhee hee nahi. Chal Sowmya ab tujhe hee soch na ?hoga. ?

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Part eighteen

Pari:
ab bata, itnee khilee, khilee bohat nazar aarahee hai.?

Kripa: wo to aap sab se milne kee wajese huwa hai.?😃

Pari: acha, pehle jab bhi tu aatee thee to itna khila to nahi rehta ta, to ab kese? ?

Kripa: 😳kya bhabhi, aap bhi na

Pari: chal theek hai. Jo baat karnee thee wo to bata, bahar to kitnee utawlee horahee thee. ?

Kripa: Bhabhi wo…wo…? 😳😳

Pari: yeh kya wo, wo,😡 laga rakha hai. Aage bhi to bole. ?

Kripa: pata nahi kya huwa hai, per aisa lagta hai ke aasmaan dharti pe agaya hai.😍 Din raat ?kisee ke khayaalo me khoyee rehtee hu. Kuch karne ka mann nahi karta.?

Pari: 😊to yeh baat hai. Pagli tujhe to wo hogaya hai.?

Kripa: 😕 wo??

Pari: ha wo. Mera matlab hai pyaar hogaya hai.?

Kripa: 😲Pyaar? Nahi bhabhi, me to ose jaantee bhi nahi, sirf dekha hai or…?

Pari: to iska matlab ke sach me koi hai. Hmm. Tu to baree chuppee rustam niklee ??😆chal ab baata koun hai wo or kaha renta hai, kya karta hai? ?

Kripa: me kuch nahi jaantee.☺️ Bus yahi jaantee hu ke mera dil ose pukaarta hai. Jabhi wo ?mujhe dikhta hai to meree dil kee dharkan taiz hojaatee hai.😳 ?

Pari: tu to gumnaam ishq ke chakkar me aprgayee. Na milee, na baat kee, or sapne ?dekhne lag paree.🤪 Asie thoree na chalta hai. Mujhe yeh bata tu ose kese milee. ?

Kripa: mere saal ke pehle din, mene ose dekha. Wo hamaree hee college me jaata hai. Os ?din me azaad panchee kee tarha aasmaan me orna chahtee thee… ?


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A college in Shimla, where groups of students are gathering around in the campus, ?grounds. There are different people from different places. Some are dancers and some ?are singers. Some are cheerleaders so some are bimbos. Amongst them we see a petite ?girl, wearing wild clothes, ready to have a blast.?

Some of the dancers start dancing.: Dha dhin dha, dha dha dhin dha, ta dha dha, dhin ?ta, dhin ta
?(Aa…) ?

The girl joins them: Na na na na na na na na na na na na na…-2 What' s up? ?

Then as she turns around we see it is none other than our Kripa. ?

Kripa: Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan
Jaayein titliyaan jaise chaman chaman
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan
Hey hey! Hey hey! Hey hey! wo…?
Hey hey! Oho aaha…aa…?
Main diwaani dil ki raani, kabse anjaani
Sab kehti hoon woh karti hoon, jo hai thhaani
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan ?


Everyobe else join in: Dhum dhum dhum! ?
Aa chak dhum, dhum dhum dhum -3?
Aa chak dhum dhum! What' s up? ?
Say what? ?

Kripa: Koyi roke koyi aaye, jitna bhi mujhko samjhaaye
Main na sunoongi kabhi
Apni hi dhun mein rehti hoon
Main pagli hoon main ziddi hoon
Kehte hain ye toh sabhi
Koyi…nahin jaana, ke armaan kya hai mera
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan
Jaayein titliyaan jaise chaman chaman
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan
Hey hey! Hey hey! Hey hey! wo…?
Hey hey! Oho aaha…aa…?
Main diwaani dil ki raani, kabse anjaani
Sab kehti hoon woh karti hoon, jo hai thhaani
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan ?

Na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na -2
?

We see a motorbike enter the gates of the collge at a high speed. Then it stopped in the ?middle of the ground where all this singing and dancing was going on. A cool handsome ?dude got off wearing a blue leather jacket with black jeans and blue sleeveless shirt. All ?the girls surrounded him with awe. The guy joined in with the rest. ?

The guy: Aaye haseena ye toh aaye, mujhko dikhaane apni adaayein
Main bhi kuch kam nahin yeah!?
Aankhon mein aankhein jo daaloon
Dil main chura loon, hosh chura loon
Koyi ho kitna haseen
Mera..ho gaya woh…jo ik baar mujhse mila
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan
Jaayein bhawrein jaise chaman chaman
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan
?

Kripa noticed him and immediately felt a magnetic pull😳 towards him. there was ?something incredible about him. ?

Kripa: Hey hey! Hey hey! Hey hey wo…?
Hey hey! Oho aaha…aa… ?

The guy: Main diwaana main anjaana, kabse begaana
Hoon awaara lekin pyaara, sab ne maana
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan ?

Kripa:
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan ?

The guy:
Jaayein bhawrein jaise chaman chaman ?

Kripa:
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan ?

Both: Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan

Later Kripa found out from her friend Mishti, that the guy was the college president and ?everyone called him 'Hoxy'. The name sure suited him. ?

Mishti:
uska asli naam to pata nahi per sab ose yehi pukaarte hai. God, he's such a sex ?God!?

Kripa: ☺️chalna, chalet hai (she pretended not to be interested because she felt ?awfully shy). ?

Mishti: are ose mil to le (she pointed to the crowd approaching them)?

Kripa:
(panicked) nahi itne saare log hai. ?

Mishti: tub hi na Kripa.😛 Itne saare logo ke beech ghaana gaa saktee hai, per ek larkese ?baat nahi karsaktee. ?

Kripa: me to ose jaantee bhi nahi, kya kahoongee ose? ?

By the time they finished their conversation, the crowd had left them. She saw him leave ?and she felt a sense of dejection. Nearly everyday Kripa attempted to get a glimpse of ??'Hoxy' and even at times she built the courage to go and talk to him, but was unable to. ?She always found him amongst the popular crowd, who spent most of their time in the ?college canteen, the gym and the auditorium. Day by day Kripa's infatuation grew until ?the day came for her to leave.😭 ?

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thats the end of the part too. to find out who is 'Hoxy' continue reading further

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Part nineteen

Kashish sat in the living room going over Sujal's reports when someone from behind ?closed her eyes with his hand. ?

Kashish:
Angad!? 😲

Angad: kya di, aap mujhe her baar kese pehchaan letee hai? ?

Kashish: tujhe to me band aakho se bhi pehchaan saktee hu, 😃 kyu ke teree khushbu mere ?ang ang me base huwee hai.?

They both hugged. 🤗 🤗 ?

Kashish:
aise kese chala aaya, no koi taar ya khabar? ?

Angad: soch ta tha ke aapko surprise du. So here I am. 😊 😆 ?

Kashish: wo to me dekh hee rahee hu. Chal aa, khaana khaale. ?

Angad: of course di, bohat bhook lagee hai, per osse pehle me zara jeez se milke aata hu. ?

Thaapar house

Kripa:
jab mera aakhri din tha bhabhi to ek ajeeb see udaasi thee. 😔 Pehlee baar mujhe ghar ?aane kee khushi nahi horahee thee. ?

Pari: yeh to pyaar ka asar hai, madam. 😆 Ab to tu puree tarha se phas gayee. [:D/] ?

Kripa: bhabhi, you've to help me. Mujhe os larke ko dhund na hai kisee bhi tarha. ?

Pari: oske liye, oska aata pata, naam sab kuch jaana parta hai. Or tu to kuch nahi jaantee. ?Ab aise paagalo kee tarha rehna band kar or tere last year pe concentrate kar. ?

Kripa: wo baat to me bhool hee gayee. Ab me waapis Shimla nahi jaarahee. ?

Pari: 😲 kya??

Kripa: ha bhabhi, ab mujhse yeh doori bardasht nahi hotee. Parivaar adhura sa lagta hai. 😭 ?

Pari: waake me tu badal gayee. Tujhe yaad hai tune kitnee zid kee thee Sowmya se, ?Shimla jaane ke liye. Wo to tayaar hee nahi the, per aakhir me onko teree zid ke saamne ?haar maanee hee parhee. Or ab tu kehrahee hai ke yeh doori bardasht nahi hoti. ?

Kripa: dhoor rekhke hee apno ka ehsaas hota hai. Mene faisla karliya hai ke me apna ?final year yahi Mumbai me pura karoongee…?

Sowmya: koun kya pura karaha hai? ?

Both the girls were surprised to see a smiling Sowmya 😃 at the door of Pari's bedroom. ?

Pari:
aapkee yeh laadli ab naye faisle lena shuroo karahee hai.?

Sowmya: acha? Zara hum bhi to sune (he stood with his arms folded)?

Kripa:
bhaiya me waapis Shimla nahi jaarahee

Sowmya was shocked. 😲 😲

wells thats the end here. so wat do u guys think? ?

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cant belive , u can write such a good story..gudd v gudd i have read 10 parts and want to read all parts as soon as possible.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tekhum

cant belive , u can write such a good story..gudd v gudd i have read 10 parts and want to read all parts as soon as possible.

chalye hamein khushi hai ke aapko ab yakeen to huwa ke yeh hamenee hee likha hai

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