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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx monika

yes its a sweet nok jhok which is common before any love story begins

im glad u liked it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks to all of you guys who commented and also to those who read this ff.

Part eighty five

The dance had ended but Angad and Kripa were still engrossed in each other that they didn't let go. Angad rested his chin on her shoulder whilst she was still breathing heavily with her eyes closed. The closeness was sending different vibes throughout her entire body, making her tremble with desire. His light breath felt like lava on her bare shoulders and the light stubble on his chin felt itchy. Both of them didn't want this proximity to end.

Akshat came and pulled Kripa's hand.

Akshat:
πŸ˜’ Come on Kripa, mujhe lagta hai ke ab hame chalna chaheeye.

Angad: 😑 Akshat, Kripa ka haath choro

Akshat: stay out of this Angad

Angad: 😑 mene kaha leave her alone

Akshat pushes Angad away a bit. This enrages Angad 😑😑 and he comes forward and punches Akshat in the face. Akshat collides with a guy who simultaneously collides with a woman. the woman's boyfriend gets annoyed 😑 and punches who fell on her. That guy gets thrown on a table where two guys are drinking beer. It gets all spilled so one of them charge on the fallen guy 😑, but they miss and instead hit another guy.

This carries on, eventually leading to a bar fight, where everyone are hitting each other. πŸ˜†

Angad and Akshat were still fighting oblivious to what was happening around them. The whole bar had turned into a circus where people were smashing bottles furniture on anybody they could find.

Kripa found a hideout behind the bar counter and she kept on peeping up to see what was happening. Since she was drunk she thought everyone were dancing and just having fun πŸ‘ She just kept giggling πŸ˜† everytime someone fell on the counter.

Finally the bar tender managed to call the police but one guy came and snatched the phone from him whilst another guy came and pulled him in the fight.

After ten to fifteen minutes the police could be heard whistling in which made everyone run around. Angad was about to punch Akshat but he froze and dropped his collar and left before the police caught him. Akshat also ducked out of there.

As Angad ran he passed by the bar counter and saw Kripa sitting on the stool and drinking. He was dumbstruck but soon came to his senses and went up to her.

Angad:
Kripa, yeh kya karahee ho?

Kripa: Bare smart bante ho πŸ˜› Dekhai nahi deta?

Angad: πŸ˜’ Kripa chalo yahase

Kripa: πŸ˜” nahi mujhe yahi rehna hai

Angad: raat bohat ho chukee hai, ab ghar jaana hai 😳

Kripa: are raat to abhi shuroo huwee hai 😊 let me enjoy! πŸ˜†

Angad: Come on leave this (took the glass out of her hand) Chalo utho

Kripa: you know what Angad, you're such a shweetie muchy πŸ˜† (struggling to get up)

Angad:
I think ab tumhe apne kamre me jaana chaheeye.

Kripa: (she's delusional) yeah.

She's not able to walk properly so Angad supports her but she protests. Then he has had enough 😑 so he carries her in his arms and rushes out of the club before the police got to them.

Kripa: (giving blows on his chest )
I said leave me! 😑 put me down! Leave me!

Angad: (puts her down aggressively) Chup! 😳 Bilkul khamosh 😑

Kripa: (innocent child face) Chup horahee hu πŸ˜” Daante kyu ho?

Angad: Daant nahi raha hu. Samjha raha hu

She starts crying like a child 😭 really loudly. Angad becomes embarrassed 😳 and looks around at passer bys.

Angad:
😑 Kripa. stop crying

Kripa: 😭 Pehle tum mujhe kaho I'm sorry.

Angad: Okay I'm sorry

Kripa: Aise nahi πŸ˜’

Angad: kya matlab? πŸ˜•

Kripa: (still wailing 😭) aise daant ke nahi. Pyaar se kaho

Angad: (frustrated with her behaviour 😑 but he had to stop the attention they were getting so he suppressed his anger and forced a smile) 😊 Okay Kripa. I'm sorry. Ab chale.

Kripa: Pehle waada karo ke phirse nahi daantoge.

Angad: Me waada karta hu, okay.

Kripa: sachi muchi πŸ˜›

Angad: (through grinded teeth) 😑 ha, ha sachi muchi. Ab chalo

He pulled her towards the lifts and then as they were waiting he realised she had left his hand and had disappeared. He panicked 😲 and began searching her in the lobby when he saw her exiting through the main doors. Angad hurried over there to bring her back but she was quicker than him and had disappeared somewhere.

Angad:
Kaha chalee gayee yeh

He looked around in circles but still didn't find her. The state in which she was in, it wasn't safe for her to be alone. Then he began walking when he spotted Mishti.

Angad:
Hey Mishti 😊 tumne Kripa ko dekha?

Mishti: My, my. πŸ˜ƒ itnee raat ko Kripa ko kyu dhoond rahe ho?

Angad: Mishti yeh mazaak ka waqt nahi hai πŸ˜’ I desperately need to find her.

Mishti: I'm sure you do πŸ˜‰

Angad: uff! 😑 dekho Mishti Kripa ne bohat saaree sharaab pee lee hai to is waqt wo nashe me hai to God knows kya kar bethegee πŸ˜”

Mishti: What? 😲 Angad tumne ose shaarb pee laadee?

Angad: yeh waqt jagra karne ka nahi hai. We've got to find her.

Both of the go together looking for her when they end up in a mela. There are too many people around so Angad and Mishti are having a hard time finding Kripa.

Soon Angad spotted her showing herself off in front of a group of guys. He shook his head πŸ˜’ and went over to grab her away.

Angad: (holding her around the shoulders)
Tum yaha kya karahee ho?

Kripa: Hey Angad, tum mere dosto se mile? πŸ˜ƒ (pointing towards each one) Yeh Monu, yeh Bablu, yeh Chintu, yeh πŸ˜†

Angad: Kripa me inse baad me miloon ga. Is waqt tum ghar chalo 😳

Kripa: nahi πŸ˜” mujhe nahi jaana. Mujhe nahi jaana (throwing tantrums like a kid)

Angad:
okay! 😳 nahi jaate. Lekin yaha se to chalo. (walking her away from those guys)

Kripa:
Angaaad! You're such a shweetie muchy πŸ˜† (pulled his cheeks)

Now he was getting annoyed with the way she kept on doing that. He held her hand and attempted to make her walk back to the hotel with him but her force was stronger and she kept on making him walk the other way.

Kripa:
πŸ˜ƒ Hey dekho, giant wheel (leaped with joy ) chalo na.

Angad protested πŸ˜’ but she pulled him with her and by force he had to sit with her. She began screaming and howling every time the wheel went up and she even attempted to get up at times but Angad pulled her down, making sure she behaved. It was hilarious πŸ˜†

Once they got off, now Angad again attempted to walk her back but she was more interested into something else. A group of boys were dancing in the middle, so Kripa pushed through the crowd and joined in. She was fooling around πŸ€ͺ and the guys messed around with her. Angad pushed through the crowd and grabbed her away but she shook his hand away πŸ˜’ and went back to dancing this time Angad literally dragged her away.

Angad:
πŸ˜” pata nahi yeh Mishti kaha rehgayee (then he saw Kripa slipping away again) Hey ruko!

He rushed after her.

Kripa: (peeking from behind a bush)
πŸ˜† Angaaaad!

Angad: Kripa waha kya karahee ho? 😳 jaldi se yaha aajao warna...

Kripa: πŸ˜† pakar sakte ho to pakarlo

She runs away from there and Angad tries to obstruct her but she escapes by ducking under him. It happens quick so he doesn't get time to stop her.

Angad:
God! 😑 yeh larki mujhe paagal kardegee.

Kripa: Angaaad! πŸ˜†

Angad: Kripa!

Both of them continue the cat and mouse game for a while, when both of them end up at a booth, which makes them stop. Kripa stops because she's in wonders 😍 after seeing the sign and Angad stops because finally he caught her.

Angad:
bohat hogaya Kripa. Ab chalo (grabs her hand)

Kripa:
ha chalo (she's delusional and begins walking towards the booth rather than with Angad. She manages to pull him with her)

Angad:
Kripa yaha nahi πŸ˜’ (attempts to pull her but she resists and continues walking)

the booth was an entrance to a stage and both of them only realised that when they got out. Angad is dumstruck 😲 but Kripa is excited πŸ‘ seeing the crowd cheer πŸ₯³ and clap πŸ‘. She began waving back to them and blowing out kisses.

Angad stops her from doing all that and to prevent from further embarrassment begins taking her back from where they came from but suddenly the spot light appears on them so they freeze.

Commentator:
Hey ladies and gentlemen πŸ˜ƒ I think we've got a new entry

The crowd cheered πŸ₯³ and clapped πŸ‘ whislt the commentator went towards Angad and Kripa on the stage and they had no choice but to turn around.

Commentator:
Hey guys πŸ˜ƒ are yeh to state competition ke participants hai. In fact the top jodi. Wow! πŸ˜†

The audience were excitied now and began roaring and whilstling.

Commentator:
Isn't this great guys? Yeh bataye ke aap log yaha kis liye aaye? Let me guess for publicity?

Angad: 😳 actually hum wo...

Kripa: (pushed him aside and took the mike) Wo kya hai ke hum yaha celebrate karne aaye hai πŸ˜ƒ

Commentator: Really? Your success so far?

Kripa: No actually me kuch aap logo ke saat share karna chahtee hu

Angad became worried and tried to stop Kripa πŸ˜’ but couldn't show it in front of the audience so he forced a smile in front of them whilst glared at Kripa.

Kripa:
ab hum dono Angad or Kripa nahi rahe πŸ˜† balke...

Angad pinched 😡 Kripa to be quiet but she ignored it and kept smiling 😊 like a clown.

Kripa:
balke ab hum Mr. and Mrs. Dumdhere hogaye hai

Commentator: Dum what? πŸ˜•

Angad: (near her ear) yeh kya kehrahee ho? No Kripa, no! 😲

Kripa: Yes. hum dono ne shaadi karli. And here's my shweetie hubby (pulled his cheeks again) πŸ˜ƒ Mr Dumdhere. (laughed πŸ˜† like a crack head)

Commentator:
Wow! kamaal kee baat hai ke shaadi bhi hogayee or pata bhi na chala πŸ˜› Well guys here's the newly wedded couple Mr. and Mrs. Dum...πŸ˜• what was it? oh yes πŸ˜ƒ Mr and Mrs. Dumdhere

Everyone cheeered πŸ₯³ and applauded πŸ‘ as an embarrassed 😳 Angad dragged an over excited Kripa off the stage before she showed herself up even further. He couldn't belive she actually brought the Dumdhere part again. He couldn't believe she actually remembered all that still.

Once they were out again, he held his head with frustration and sat down on a step, whilst Kripa kept twirling around in circles.

It was at that time when Angad saw something he had never seen before. She looked innocent and her face was sparkling. she looked like a fairy who was dancing around in her fairy dust. He was so mesmerized 😍 by looking at her that he never realised Kripa coming towards him.

Kripa:
Angaaad! (she sprinkled water over him)

Angad: (startled)
😲 Kripa! (got up to chase her)

She began running away and escaped him many times when he grabbed her hand and twisted it behind her. Then he brought her closer to him and then the laughter finished when they had become really close. Both stared into each other's eyes. Both had mutual feelings about wanting to melt into each other's arms but there was a part of them which told them to maintain the distance.

Soon Kripa again got out of his grip and ran away, feeling shy 😳

Angad: (followed her)
Kripa rukh jao 😳

Kripa: πŸ˜† he, he, pakar sako to pakro

Angad: Dekho agar tum nahi aaohgee to me jaaraha hu

Kripa: acha? πŸ˜” mujhe chore ke chale jaohge?

Angad: Ab tum aana hee nahi chahtee to...

Kripa: theek hai

Angad: Me mazaak nahi karaha hu πŸ˜›

Kripa: πŸ˜†
jese tumharee marzi

Angad pretends to turn around and leave when he sensed Kripa coming behind him.

Kripa:
Angaaad! apna haath do

He smiled 😊 and turned around to put his hand out. As soon as he did that she clicked a pair of handcuffs on him with one side on her hand.

Angad: 😲
yeh kya kiya?

Kripa: Ab tum mujhe chore ke kahi nahi jaa sakte πŸ˜ƒ

Angad: 😑
Kripa tum...

Mishti: Oh thank god! Angad tumhe Kripa milgayee. Itnee dair kaha the tum log?

Kripa: Hey Mishti πŸ˜† (drooling over Angad ) Tum mere pati se milee?

Mishti: πŸ˜•
what?

Kripa: Here meet my husband πŸ˜ƒ my shweetie muchy Mr. Dumdhere.

Angad gave an innocent smile 😊 and then tried to explain to Mishti but Mishti stoppd him when she saw the handcuffs.

Mishti:
Oh GOd Kripa! Or yeh sab kya hai? 😲

Angad: I think we should take her away, ise pehle ke wo or damage kare.

Mishti: Lekin iska kya karenge? πŸ˜• (pointing towards the handcuffs.)

Angad:
ise baad me dekhenge, filhaal meree madad karo 😳

Both try and drag Kripa out from the mela and finally reach the hotel.

Mishti:
Angad, under jaane se pehle you better remove the handcuffs πŸ˜” I mean log kya kahenge?

Angad: wese bhi logo ne aaj kafi dekhliya hai πŸ˜›

Mishti:
Phir bhi

Angad: okay (looking towards Kripa) chalo Kripa 😳 mujhe chaabhi dedo

Kripa: Kounsee chabhi?

Angad: In handcuffs kee. Come on now be a good girl 😊

Kripa: πŸ˜† chaabhi chaheeye? (shows him the key)

Angad:
ha (attempts to grab it)

Kripa:
chaabhi chaheeye? πŸ˜† (still playing around with it)

Angad:
Kripa come on! 😑

Kripa:
Theek hai yeh lo (throws it in the fountain)

Angad: 😲
No Kripa! (tries to stop her but its too late. He's really stunned 😲)

Kripa: (laughing πŸ˜† like a cracked pot)
Ab kaha se laoge chaabhi?

Now Angad had had enough. He picks Kripa up in his arms and carries her inside, ignoring her protests. Now he was going to take her up to her room no matter what. If this is what she wanted then that's what she'll get.

Mishti:
Angad tum ose mere kamre me hee sulaado

Angad: πŸ˜’ nahi Mihsti, phir tumhaare room mates ko bhi pata chal jaehga. Remember me bhi iske saat hee rahoonga. Don't worry 😊 me ise iske kamre me sahee salamat sulaadoonga.

Mishti: Okays. Me subah miltee hu 😊

She got off on her floor and looked at them with tensed eyes. The way Angad stood with Kripa in his hands was completely messed up amd as the lift doors closed she prayed that both of them behaved and didn't do anything wrong.

Angad managed to get up to their room eventually and as soon as he opened the door he rushed to the bedroom. Then he laid Kripa down, but she kept moving from here to there.

Kripa:
Angad to ganda hai πŸ˜† Angad to ghadha hai πŸ˜†

She kept on shaking her feet and hands, whilst he tried to control her and take off her shoes, that too with only one hand. Then she pulled him closer to her which made him land on top of her.

Kripa:
Angad to bohat pyaara hai

Both stared into each other's eyes 😍

Kripa:
I love you Angad! (she fell back on the pillow laughing πŸ˜† and soon fell asleep)

Angad was surprised 😲 after hearing that and then stared at her sleeping. She looked like a small child, so sweet, so cute, so innocent. He lightly kissed her forehead and then soon fell asleep too on top of her.

end of part.


Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
πŸ‘ awesome cute kripa sooo sweeet angad ko kitna nachaya oh god and at leaset she say i love you angad wowowowoow
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Posted: 17 years ago
🀣 that was darn funny and i wanna say congrats to mr. and mrs. dumdhere πŸ˜† so funny and so cute at last she said i love you 😳 😳 😳 nice part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

πŸ‘ awesome cute kripa sooo sweeet angad ko kitna nachaya oh god and at leaset she say i love you angad wowowowoow

thanx monika

yes she made him dance around her fingers πŸ˜ƒ

im glad u appreciated it. now finally their love story will get a kick in.

carrr on reading.

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanx

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Originally posted by: rima791

🀣 that was darn funny and i wanna say congrats to mr. and mrs. dumdhere πŸ˜† so funny and so cute at last she said i love you 😳 😳 😳 nice part cont soon

thanx rima

im glad u found it amusing.

hehehe dumdhere was the pun. now she is finally accepting and to see what happens next do be sure to catch the next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
u r gr8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
yeh part sabse zyada comedy tha,,,,,,,, πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
i could not stop laughing,,,,,,,,,,
nxt tym angad kripa ko sharaab ke paas bhi aane nahi dega,,,,,,,, πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: brite_dawn52

u r gr8,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
yeh part sabse zyada comedy tha,,,,,,,, πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
i could not stop laughing,,,,,,,,,,
nxt tym angad kripa ko sharaab ke paas bhi aane nahi dega,,,,,,,, πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

hey zahra, zahra, zahra

thanx for the appreciation

yeh ab to aisa karega hee nahi kyu ke is waqt to shaarb ke nashe me osne osko pati bana diya, kahi agli baar baap na banade πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

well haste raho or hasate raho. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
grt and sweet part..k was sooo funny...cont. soon
Edited by BABY-GIRL7 - 17 years ago

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