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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
i just caught with ur ff,luv the way u keep us hanged in suspence
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
u guys tnx 4 liking my ff......will update 2 marrow 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
maya great part yaar tum tho mujhe addict banadiya tumare FF ki......... 😆
but really loved the part and cant wait to read more of it......... 😉 😉 😉
great effort with paining fingers......
so i give u a
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and ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh to fingers......... 😳 😳 😳
dard kum ho gaye kya...... 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
tanx.....that was sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet 😃 mahalakshmi2303 🤗 it helpd 😆 😉
ok here goes..............i prob wont b here 2marrow so i m given 1 now


armaan and ridds both fall....armaan grabs ridds and go towards a corner....every thing starts falling.......then.....it stops armu and ridds make there way out......
oh tank god u r okkkkkkay says sasnk and hugs ridds...but ridds was staring at armaan...who gave a smile and winkd before he was surrounded by every1.....they were given 1st aid......and the patients were transformd 2 a different hospital......every1 goes home..
back home armaan doesnt turn the lights on goes 2 his room falls on his bed an closes his eyes..he sees ridds face.he gets up and thinks;agar aj riddhima ko kuch ho jata tu....she was so close to it....he wuldnt dream of it...why does she care 4 anjie wen she likes me....and he falls rite back an closes his eyes.......unable 2 keep her thoughts out of his head....

things get back 2 normal in sanjeevani....the hospital was fixd.all the interns r given cases.ridds gets a guy calld sam[he wud b manoj bohra.....the prem/yudi guy 4rom kasauti zindagi ki]
ridds cures him in no time....but they both become friends....not that ridds likd him in anyway...he was a friend 2 her....but armaan used 2 get jealous..ALOT.then sam gets dischargd an he goes.....[in case u r wondering hell b important in the coming parts 😉 ]
the interns r all calld on the intercom and they all go 2 the meeting room.....
now doctors sanjeevani mein aap sab everyday apne ghar se aate hein.....well we ve made a decision..u will stay in a separate house which is very near the hospital so that wen there is a case u can come quickly an easily.....so i want all of u 2 get shiftd by 2marrow..there is separate 1 4 the boys behind the house...ok any questins ...no then lets get back 2 work
there day is nearly over an they all decide 2 go home an bring there stuff.........
ridds remebers that she had 4gotten her pager in the locker so she runs back....seeing her go armaan decides 2 follow..
ridds taks her pager an turns arond 2 find armaan rite behind her.she goes aroud him but he holds her hand...she tries hard but armaan doesnt loses his grip....armaan plz kya says ridds....why dont u love me...why....why...because of angie...she doesnt even care about u......armaan woh meri behan hai....plz let go di is waiting plz.......armaan had tears in his eyes but lets her go...ridds hesitates.then she hears angie calling an she leaves the room.she knew how armaan was feeling.......but she didnt notice someone behind the door.....haolding a bouqey,and now looking really sad.

the interns all brought their stuff that same night an shifted in 2 the house.angie sapna and ridds in main house....armu an atul in the guest house....they all tidy up there stuff an wen ridds was going 2 bed angie says plz ridds kya mein wahan s sakti hoon..mujhe fan ke begair need nahin aati....ridds says sure di app chaley ja oo

it was about 2 be 12;00...every1 was asleep wen someone enters the girls room.he moves towards ridds bed and stands there admiring her beauty 4 a while..ridds shifts slightly....he moves the hair from her face an ridds opens her eyes very slowly an gets a shock



there was armaan.he puts a hand on her mouth 2 stop er 4rom speaking outloud.and tells her to fget up and follow him.riddds gets up sacared that angie/sapna might get up.

he takes her 2 the balcony.;armaan tum is waqt yahan kya kar rahe ho... koi dekh le ga tu.. oh my god armaan.says ridds
he listens to her quitly then moves 4ward an says happy birthday riddhima....an here is my 1st gift...
an before ridds cud react he moves 4ward takes her face in both hands an gives her a lonnnnnnnnnng .....sweeeeeeet....kiss 😳
ridds closes her eyes.then armaan moves towards her ear his face against her cheek an wispers....i love 2 kiss...wish u porpose u and i will achieve u...no matter wat....this is 1 birthday u will never 4get then he moves away an takes 2 pakcets 4rom his pocket....1 contained the ring an the other a small cute locket..he says i lovd this ring an i will b our engagement ring...but i wont give it 2 u now cause then it mighte hurt u but its urs.he puts it back in his pocket and takes the locket it had a diamond heart witha small heart attached .he goes around towards ridds back.ridds was paralysd.he moves her hair an puts the lockte on then he kisses her there 😳 😳 [aahhheemm]
then turns her around an gives her a last kiss on the cheeek an leaves.....via a pipe!!!!.ridds stood there unable 2 move.she wntd armaan 2 stay 2 hug him an tellhim she loves him...but she culdnt......if only she cud.............................

there MIGHT not b a part 2marrow....cause my brothers an parents r home then go on the computer an dont give it 2 me 😡 ....thats why i got up at 9;00 today. 😕 😊
well enjoy an do reply 😉
cheeerrrs

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
lovely part 😳,please dont take too long to update cuz i am already at the edge of my seat
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg tht was sooo cute and sweet:d

radhika. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
hey!! tht was an amazing part 👏 👏
pliz cme back wid the next part soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
omg omg omg... I CAN SO NOT WAIT TILL U CONTINE MAYA:D:D

radhika😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
wow Maya.. just caught up with all the parts. Must say you are really talented.. cant wait for the next part.please continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
wow gr8 work 👏 continue soon will be waitin

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