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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgggg....suspense pe suspense....now wat'll happen im eagerly waiting...

maya ur story is tying knots in my stomach
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
ur soo gud...i wanna no wat happenz nxt
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
that was brilliant!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
from where did you get the info. do you have a video of this. please upload it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
hey...tht was rocking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......wanna know wat happens next.......waitin for loooaaadddssss of riddhima n armaan scenes......plzzzzzz continue sooon....

luv
guddi 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
hi maya i didnt read the last to part so couldnt reply soon........... 😭 😭
but wat a part maya the birthday part sooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic i loved it a lot...... 😳
ur the best u know in writing like this 🤗
the last part good yaar i hope kuch problem hoga aur armi ridz ko save karega......... 😉 😉 😉
loved ur parts ur great....... 👏 👏 👏
keep up the posting of parts........... 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tanx guys 4 liking my work......i dont hav a video!!!!!!i just think of it........
heres part..........i m not sure!! but anyways ill check...here u go

next day was full of tension in sanjeevani.....there were policemen inside an every1 was worried...it was tense
the police comes 2 take rohits statement and ridds gives her statment also and tells rohit she will support him in this
it was night but the interns were told 2 do a night duty......it was 12.23 and ridds goes towards rohits room 2 give him his medicenes an 2 check on him.a policemen outside the door was sitting on the chair in a very awakward position ...his eyes closed.ridds trys to move him but he seemd unconsoius.
suddenly it clicks an ridds runs through the corridor towards rohits room .there were 2 men in there wearing masks over there mouths.rohit was sleeping and they had a sireng ready 4 him.
stop it now.......kya kar rahe ho tum...says ridds an moves 4ward
stay away aur we,ll kill u says 1 men pointing the sirenge directly at ridds but the other nudges him an they both make to escape.they push ridds an she clashes with glasses an medicens....rohit wakes up

meanwhile armaan and atul were walking down the same corridor when they hear a loud noise.they see the awakward position of the policemen and realize in a second about suituation.they burst in 2 rohits room...
there were 2 men standing near the fire exit and there was ridds...her hand bleeding.
riddhima cries armaan an the 2 men run out the door.
r u ok ridds asks atul
yes i m
an atul an armaan run after the 2 men...........
they catch them an nearly the hospital is awake by then
the police is called and high security is put on the hospital.....ridds is bandaged an ridds ia bandaged by armaan since every1 was gone towards rohits rooom an they didnt knew about this.atul was being questioned
they didnt talk much....but wen ridds winced because it hurt her armaan says
its ok it wont hurt much afterwards.....u kno i was actually looking 4 u wen this happened ...thats why i agreed to accompany atul 2 cafe....promise me u willneva get urself into trouble agin.armaan now lifts his eyes an stares at her..still holding her injured hand.....
ridds replies weekly i promise; lowering her eyes..

all the interns are in the corridor waiting 4 dr keerti....
ridds tumhe pata hai na yeh jo tum social service kar rahi ho is se dad ko kitna nuksaan ho raha hai.says angie
par di me tu sirf sachai ka saath de rahi hoon....plz aap aisa mut kahe says ridds
oh pleeaassseee ridds tum bachi nahi rahi...kya har baat tum ko samjani parti hai...tum kabhi dad ko proud nahi karo gi....hamesha tum in ke liye aur mere liye trouble create karti ho...tum na

yeh kya ho raha hai yahan!!!!!!!!!!!dr shsank, drkeerti and sis padma had just come in the atmosphere became tense..every1 stoppd an stard.
why do u always fight.....ok i kno u r not real sisters but ......
he stops.ridds an anjie both look up
not real sisters.....
shasank closes his eyes an says ridds......ur not my child...
everything was quite now.ridds had tears in her eyes.
u were the child of my very good friend dr sambav.....
his wife had died giving birth 2 u an then wen u were 3 he had an accident...before dieing he gave u 2 me......

ok guys gotta run...hav 2 my hw

heres a little precap;ridds is driving an atruck is following her.she is on the phone.....she has an accident an is kidnaaed........

hope u enjoy......waitin 4 reply 😉




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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
wow gr8 work awesome. i jus totally luv it. suspence pay suspence.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
offu...dis is turnin out 2 be a total high end drama 😉 ....2 gud babes..continue soon..waitin 4 da next part... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
omg!!!!
your stories are soooooo good i luv them just keep them up. luv the suspense drama love all mixed. hun you're a star 👏

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