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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
gr8 ff.. your doing a good job-.. continue soon


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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
gr8 just gr8 plzzzzzzz continue asap it was awesome 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
wow... that was brilliant... haila.. Armaan and Riddhima both in hospital!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
great going maya. excellent part. plzz continue....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey...tht was amazin!!!!! pliz continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
well here is the.....part 5 👍🏼
1 more thing......there MIGHT not b any parts on weekend...probably on sat but not sure of sunday....hope u understand.... 😕


riddhima wakes up....she finds herself surronded by sapna atul an anjali.....
how r feeling asks atul.
i m fine.....what happened says ridds
u faintd an armaan brought here...u lost a lot of blood or.... sys sapna
wht happened askd ridds why r u all sad
woh .....armaan....says atul
armaan kya ....asks ridds now gtting scared
armaan got hurt while saving u.....hes in the icu...says sapna
WHAT.........says riddhims
or nahin tu kya.sab tumhari galti hai....poor armaan says anjali
dr shasank is in a special surgery rite now so he couldnt come but he calld twice an checked on u is well...says atul
ten the 3 doctors pager rings....we betta go says atul an they all leave.......ridds lays down again feeling very worried and guilty it was her fault that this happened...............

6;00 oclock-----------atul comes. kya hua armaan kaisa hai...is he fine asks ridds
armaan is absoulutly fine.he regaind consous half an hour ago an hes fine now....every1 is there ..why dont u come asks atul
no...........ill go latr replis riddhima
an atul leaves
ridds waits 4 15minutes then gets up an goes out 2 the corridor.it was crowded with people.it was easy 4 her 2 slip 4rom the crowd an go towards the room where armaan was


ridds moves towards the window an looks inside.armaan was lying on the bed......eyes closd.she moves 4wad an closes the door.she takes baby steps an reaches his bed.
he lookd pale.she had the feeling of reaching down an kissing his cheek 😳 .......but she abandons it.she pulls her trembling hand an puts it slllllowwwlllly on armaans head,moving his hair.then she takes her hand back an is about to leave wen armu grabbs her hand.she stops an turns around slowly.he was awake.i knew u wud come.....no mattr wat says armu.armaaan plz hat choro says ridds.....no iwont says armaan coolly.there were voices outside.armaan plz koi aa raha hai .....leave my hand begs ridds.pehle yeh kaho ke mujh se pyar karti ho.....says armaan..the door opens an armaan lets go of her hand.atul an anjali walk in

there was awkward silence then ridds says,tanx, an leaves....

1;32.......ridds leaves her room to get water which was in the corridor.she drinks it an starst walking back wen


wen


someone grabbs her arm an pulls her in an empty room.the room was dimly lit but she knew who it was...............armaan.
she says armaaan tum yeh....shhhhhhhhhhhhhh! says armaan an puts a hand on the wall.he moves his hand an places it on riddhimas face.....she moves slightly.he moves the hand down to her neck 😳 😳 .....
armaan let me go says riddhima in a slow,weak wisper
he kisses her on the neck......ridds closes her eyes he holds her hand tightly.... 😳then he moves closer an moves slowly towards riddhima........about 2 kiss her. 😍 .............wen......
hope u guys like it 👍🏼
same time.......tomarrow..
take care lots of love ❤️ 😉 😉 an do reply 2 tell me how it is...
MAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by maya_2u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Gee... main to sharma rahi hoon yaar Maya.. Wonderful.. Continue 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
hey maya.....thsi was rocking......u r a gr8 writer......waitin for the next part......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do write soooonnnnnnn....this was rreaaalllyyy romantic.....n n n n n......... 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
yaara maya maha is right
kuch kuch hota hai parh kar
plx itna suspence par khatam kya hai atleast pre cap to batao thtz not fair
u r absoluetly awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee writer do write soon lovez u
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
awww......how romantic........plz do write the next part soon.....i'm lovin this 😆

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