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Posted: 18 years ago
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maya the part was excellent.......... 👏
ridz getting caught admist the riot OMG.........
armi is gonna save her....... 😳 😳 😳
i loved the part so plzzzzzzzzz continue...... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue

whn will u update da nxt part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
Oye kamaal kar dita yaar!!!! Jaldi naal continue kar oye! I just read all of the parts together. Tum itna acha toh likhti ho. Jaldi continue babes!!!

Komal
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Hey that was great... I'm all caught up.. Please continue... Can't wait to know what happens next... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
oh u left us in suspense please continue itz very good. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well guyz if ya want 2 continue reall badly...
sumone post the next bit with der own point ov u bcoz its been ages and she hasnt replied!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😉hey guys 😉 tank u so much 4 appreciating my ff....love u all
hey its getting harder an harder to write each section everyday....school homework..but ill try my best......... 😊 here u go........

riddhima didnt kno who had pulled her....she struggled but the grip remained firm......she couldnt see the face as he standing rite behind her....holding her still
then a familiar voice said.......dont worry..its me an instantly ridds knew who it was.armann.the gundas ran all past,then armu let go of riddhima.he turns her around and asks panickengly;r u ok;...yes i m fine replies ridds.she lookd down at her wound....it was deep but she didnt wantd 2 put aemaan in more trouble.
he couldnt see her properely cause it was too dark....;come on we betta leave before things get worse says armaan and grabbs ridds hand and moves 4ward...
back in hospital every1 found out that armaan was gone out........how could u help him go atul; said shasank
because he said he had 2 find riddhima....she was in danger
oh plzzzzz!!!ridds ko kuch nahin hua......who bas attention ke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai;says anjali
shasank stares at her....;noone leaves the hospital now....we have emergengy cases so lets get 2 work.ill call up commisiner again........
armaan an ridds move in silence hearing the cries an yells all around them.they were moving 4rom the back streets which were dark ....an empty.they were nearly 2 the place where armaans car was....wen suddenly he feels something warm and liquid in his hand .he lets go of ridds hand and loooks at his hand...........
there was blood on his hand....he looks shockingley towards riddhima ....an now he sees 4 the first time her arm socked in blood.the light was coming 4rom the road where his car was.he becomes solified 4 a second then he asksWHAT HAPPEND.....WHY DIDNT U TELL ME
ridds was feeling very dizzy.........;who admi jo mere peche tha red shirt isne........woh baby road par...and ridds swys an is about 2 fall wen armaan grabs her 4rom the waist..............
then he remebers something....ridds had given her blood 2 a girl that day who got hurt in the riot....she had lost alot of blod now..she needed 2 get 2 a hospital immediately but then he hears voices behind an there were the people who were chasing ridds.....an standing in the middle of them was the guy in red shirt..
he could feel his blood rising.genly he lay ridds on the flooor.
the 5 men ran towards armaan....they began having a fight....armaan knocked the 4 down...now there was only him and the red shirt guy .....he ran towards armaan with a stick but armaan got around an startd hiting that guy....the guy was bleeding badly but armaan didnt let go.3 of the men had ran away.....but then somone hits armaan on the head with a stick armaan felt dizzy......but turned around and head butted the guy behind him....they both ran away
armaan s head was paining alot.he picked up ridds an went towards the car,placed her in an drove as fast as he could...
he reached the hospital an brought ridds inside....only dr kerti an dr shabanker were availabel....every1 got scared looking at ridds condition.ridds was taken in 4 treatment....armaan lnt against the wall...his head painig but he didnt wantd 2 tell as only 2 doctors were available an he wanted ridds 2 b treatd 1st then atul comes over an starts talking 2 armaan.....then armaan feels really dizzy he moves away 4rom he wall and falls...

atul screams;oh my god armaan ....blood ....ohno

armaan gets critical an he is taken into icu.........

hope u like it next part 2marrow same time😉

Edited by maya_2u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
oh my good that is so dramatic really good keep going.............. 😛 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
awesome meri jaan fabolous dieing 2 read nxt one
loads ov love
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
I'm so gripped by your ff! It's really very well written and I'm dying to read what happens next! 👏 👏 😃

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