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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah i agree wid bithee .......... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz delete the sis part ............. i guess we all want dat only ............. oderwise , it's awsum .....................
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!! The hairs on the back of my neck are standing on end! 😉 It was amazing 👏 ...please continue, I really want to find out what happenes next!

Anu 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was great yaar i loved it coz it is from dtph but i want to wat happens next so continue yaar............ 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well ppl....here it is the 2nd part.....
oh an ill remeber da triangle love thing and try to improve it..but i already wrote this out so here goes

ridds locks da door....just then there is a knock on da door.ridds thinks it is angli since she told her that she will give her the jewelary she borrowed off her..she moves 4ward..wipes her tears an opens the door
there standing in the doorway was armaan....wet.ridds moves back....surprised.armaan moves in an closes the door.ridds says:look armaan i dont love u...........leave from here..armaan moves 4ward..puts his hands on her arms an says:meri ankhon mein dekh kar kaho that u dont love me.....i dont beleive u...i dont kno the reason why u said that but i kno its not true
it is armann just go says riddhima..............
just then someone knocks on the door.they both turn around to look.ridds gets frightened.she says keeping her voice low;armaan plz let go of me........koi hai plz jao tum...then armaan replies calmly;no i wont.not untill i get my answer.from outside angies voice comes;ridds hurry up open da door its cold here;riddhima looks at armaan;plz let go of me armaan she begs why says armaan.riddds says cause i dont want di to kno..........armaan lets go of her arm and looks at her.........he now understood everything....it was 4 angie that ridds had said that but he wasnt gonna admit it to her......she will say it 2 him
he moves behind the crtain an ridds opens the door;wat took u so long.....an why are u still dressd in these clothes.....ok neva mind take this i hav 2 go...goodnight;says angie an goes out the door.ridds closes the door slowly an walks 4ward.armaan comes out.ridds stops.
so this was the reason u said u dont love me...he says slowly an takes few steps 4ward.ridds starts moving back......no its not she says....ar..armaan just go...
but armaan still moves 4ward.ridds backs up against the wall.armaan ....dekho tum plz.;shhhhhh says armaaan.ridds trys 2 leave but he puts a hand on the wall.he takes his hand an moves her hand 4rom her face then leans 4ward an kisses ridds on the cheek 😳 😳 ridds closes her eyes an wen she opens them.......armaan is gone ............................................
do reply an tell me wat u tink 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Great!!!!!!! Cute, romantic and Ishhhhhhh 😳 Please do continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hailaa.. 😳 😳 😳 It was so cute and romantic.. Please continue...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
I haven't enough words to describe how fab this ff is! 👏 👏 I am totally caught up in it after only these 2 sections. 😃 Please, please continue soon...I'm dying to know what's going to happen next. And you have captured Armaan and Ridz so well - I can really picture it in my head! 👏 👏

Thanks!
Anu 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was really a very romantic part maya............ 😳
plzzzzzzzzzz do continue yaar i loved it............ 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhh tnk u.i was neva good at writing.....tanks all
well here goes....hope u like it
next morning...........
every1 is ready 2 go...every1 has packed up and are going in the cars.from morning,ridds avoids armaan.
they all do the last minute packing and say goodbye 2 every 1............
angali is standing near a armaan an ridds is quite near them.then angali says;look at these flowers......aren,t the beautiful!
armaan looks at ridds who was standing few feet away.she looked up at him.;yeah absolutely beautiful;replies armaan looking at riddhima.she looks away.
they all come back home an next day ridds goes 2 sanjeeevani.she,angali and armaan get a case.it was a girl who had tried 2 commit suicide.........she gets operated an recovers.then all 3 of the doctors go to her room.
ridds; how r u feeling ...
patient[ria];fine........she looks away tears in her eyes
anjali;tum ne aisa kyon kya.....koi apni jaan kaise lay sakta hai
ria;because.....because i love somone an my parents r getting me married 2 someone else........i;ll die but will not marry someone else
anjali frows and leaves the room.ria is crying.there is silence in da room
armu;i kno how u feel.......he says looking at ridds..;jab hum kisi say pyar karte hai aur woh hamhe na mile.......tu buhat dard hot hai;he says....his eyes locked on riddhima
then ridds pager rings an she leaves................
in the city the suitation was bad.people were out on the road.....killing innocent people.there were fire breaking out everywhere.dr.shasank gets worried.he calls all the doctors 4 an urgent meeting
;so no one is 2 leava the hospital no matter what;he says then realises that ridds was missing.....
riddhima.....where is she..he asks .panick rising
who tu ghar gai thi half hour ago....relies angali carelessly 😡
WHAT...............EVERY1 GETS FRIGHTENED.just then dr shsank;s phone rings....it was riddhima
riddhima tum kaha ho...he asks
papa who mein....juhu beach ke paas hu ..yahaan...there is disturbance .....dr shsank could hear bullets an people shouting....then the phone gets dissconnected
shsank gets upset.....no one will leave the hospital...i will call up police commisioner...an he leaves
oh no....ridds wahan par kaisi ho gi....says atul
oh god plz shes fine..says sapna
oh come on shes fine....ridds ki aadat hai..says angali
armaan leaves the room.he goes out an decides to look 4 ridds.he heads 4 his car.......an starts driving fast...hoping against hope that ridds is fine
ridds gets hurt while trying 2 save a small girl...her arm was bleeding badly.then a gang of hooligans run after riddhima with knives and hockey sticks......ridds keeps running....
....then a hand grabbs her an pulls her behind a wall....she was about to scream..when some1 puts a hand on her mouth...............
tell me if its good or not plllllllzzzzzzzzz 😕 😛

cheers 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
kab likho ge nxt part
tht was awsome
plx jaldi likho

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