mst read luv ff..! hey i m coming back!!! - Page 24

Originally posted by: Sanaya_86

well well well...this is my very first post on dmg-forum.
wowowow wht a ff.im goin crazy abt it.i read ur entire story in one go.damn gud!! 👏 👏
n u made me fall in love wid this couple!!though i liked thm earlier but this is impeccable!!
just can't wait for the next part!!c'mon dont keep us waiting.sorry if i sound really pushy but wht to do it's excellent 😆

hey sanya thank u darling.....................i really appreciate that

nxt part in 2 hrs😉

ok heres the nxt part.....................

armaans moves 2 sanjeevani 2 get his treatment despite his dads warnings.....they had a big fight...armaan reminded his dad that it was ridds because of whom they were close now....but armus dad didnt listen
at the end armaan just came 2 sanjeevani ignoring his dad.........
[now make a guess who was put incharge of armaan... 😆 ]

dr shsankan dr keerti were talking of putting ridds incharge of armaan..
but dad ridds ki waja se yeh sab hua.....aur app ussay inchare kar rahe hain....mein armaan ka better khyal rakho gi...says anjie
ridds is not responsible 4 watever happened.....an ridds will only b incharge of armaan....clear...plz get back 2 work...said shsank angerliy.......

ridds slowly makes her way 2 armaan s room....she still felt guilty 4 wateva happend...even tho armaan had himself said infront of every1 it asnt ridds fault....she still remeberd it so clearly
[flashback]
armaan comes 2 sanjeevani.........every1 is in armaans room......
thank god armaan tum ab better ho........says sapna
yeah we thought that u might hav turnd into keema!!!...says atul.sapna nudges him
haan ...aur koi paagal ridds ka dewana tumhe marne chala tha.......aur waise kyon...i mean atul bhi hai....magar tumhe kyon...yeh ridds ki waja se hi sab khuc...
excuse me..magar riddham ne kuch nahi kia...i want 2 make every1 gets tat...she savd my life.........plz dont say that again.......................

back in reality
atul sapna an anjali were in armaans room......they see ridds coming into the corridor......
armaan agar tum kisi se pyar karte magar kisi waja se woh tum se confess na kati tu tum kaise react karte.....says angie watching armaan from corners of his eyes.........
agar aisa hota tu mein..........kaise react karta...hmmmmm
ridds walks in 2 the room...
armaan gets up slowly....hes on cruches.....every1 looks at him....ridds was half way 2 his bed,but seeing armaan come towards him she gets scard an moves back........armaan comes face 2 face with her an says
agar mein kahoon ke mein tum se beintiha[extreame] pyaar karta hu tu......says armaan an he moves closer....
armaan tum..y..yeh says ridds looking around..
tum ne mujhe pagal bana diya hai.........na jawab deti hu....aur na iqrarr karti hu........tum aise kyon karti hu.....
yeh dil raat din tumhare khyalon mein dooba rehta he......tumhari khoobsurat ankhein..........inhoon ne pagal kar diya hai mujhe!...kisi din me mar jayon ga....tumhare intazar main.................
mujhe abhi jawab do...
armaan plz move ....
answer me now...
armaan
mujhe jawab do.......warna... armaan moves towards the table an pickke yeh sab sach hai......s up the fruit knife.........
mein khud ko maar doon ga
ARMAAN.......pagal ho gaye ho kya...ARMAAN ......
answer me....answer me ...
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
every1 in the room start laughing.....but armaan experesion were still stern...he lookd ridds straight in the eye........
wow armaan ....ridds ko tu tum ne dara diya tha.....ek minuite ke liye tu humhe laga yeh sab sach hai...says sapna
[the song...tere ishq mein....starts playing at the background...hav 2 create the atmosphere 😆 .....heres the link if u wnt 2 hear it http://www.youtu be.com/watch?v=sd9kTpL_3wg....beautiful song...]
every one sort of fade except armaan an ridds ...
then ridds leaves

hope is good....
do comment 😛

nice work...and i am the first to reply....continue 😉

heyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......tht was gr88888....finally rids confesses tht she luves armaaaannnn....waitin for the roamtic scene between ar.......n yah....when will atul...sapna get 2 knw...tht ar luv each other????....anyways lovely part.....luved it totally.....ur a gr8 writer...plzzzzzzzz do continue soooonnn....can't wait..... 👏

luv
gita 😊

It was great Maya! 👏 👏 Really quite dramatic with Armaan picking up the fruit knife and all. So glad she finally confessed! 😃

Can't wait to read on.

Anu 😃

gosh...........im still drolling over it 😳 . im addicted to the fanfic.........IT WAS SIMPLY AWESOME.....loved it..............waiting 4 the next part 😃

Okay I have no words to express how I feel about this fic! Sorry. I just caught up. I read up until the part where Shashank tells Ridz that she's not his daughter and it ends there. I just caught up today! You rock kudiye! Jaldi se continue karna! I really want to know what's going to happen!!! And you use all of my favorite songs! Most of them are from Humko Tumse Pyaar Hai!!!! Great choices!!!!

Komal

gr8 part 😳 luved it 👏 continue soon

omggggggg....maya i dun hav words to express how much im luving ur ff.....so cute


itz amazing yaar.....continue soon....i cant wait for more romantic scenes yaar...

such a nice part! man the rest of the group (sapna, angi and atul) are sooo clueless! how can they not see the chakar going on between armaan and ridz?!! lol continue soon!