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aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesommmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeee gurlie
wht else i can say its jux mind blowing
but one mistake itx tooooooooooooooooooo shrt

but u done a unpredictable job i have no compliments to give
bcoz dere is no compliment exists in the world whch can appreciate but one
MASHAALLAH

Originally posted by: mahalakshmi2303

maya i really loved ur part yaar............ 👏
wow at last u made ridz save armi always u made him save her............ 😆
ok on a serious note who could be the mysterious person i am wondering........
ok anyway u will reveal it in upcoming parts so waiting for it............
maya do continue and this is for ur fab parts........
👏

thank u girl!!!!!!!!

nxt prt.......well i m on it...soo its coming soon😛

uh ohhh u guys..... i hav 2 go......dads going workin....an is dropping me 2 my aunts house 😭
CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WILL 100 PERCENT HAV THE NXT PART BY TOMARROW AFTERNOON........................OK

Originally posted by: maya_2u

uh ohhh u guys..... i hav 2 go......dads going workin....an is dropping me 2 my aunts house 😭
CHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WILL 100 PERCENT HAV THE NXT PART BY TOMARROW AFTERNOON........................OK

no probs maya take ur time i am waiting for it........

plz post it by SUNDAY 7TH OCTOBER unless we will die waiting for u.. 😕 😕

guys nxt part coming up real soon.......am working on it now!

thnx maya....we all appreciate ur efforts....

n luv to read them.....hope u come up wid more exciting parts 😊

okay guys here u go
sorry 4 the delay................. 😊

ARMAAN.....ARMAAAN look up......armaan...say somthin..armaaaaaaaaannnnn.....ridds cries armus name again an again...
armaans arm was bleedind badly.............ridds taks her dupatta....ripps it....an puts it on armus arm[the typical bollywud scene 😆 ]...
they had taken the car.......ridds moves armaan close 2 a tree..............so that he doesnt get wet by the rain....
then she runs to the road.....and trys 2 stop the cars......none did..............
then wen ridds gave up.....a car stopps..........an a eldery man steps out........
plz...plz..help me....says ridds
the man helps ridds carry armaan to the car....
they bring him 2 the nearst hospital............asha hospital..
the man goes....an the wardboys take armaan inside.....................................
they take him in immediately........................
ridds was still crying....she phond shsank.....an armus dad telling them wat happened........

shasank an armus dad arrive at the hospital......
ridds was still 2 shockd 2 belive wat had just happened....
wen shsank comes....ridds breaks....
PAPA..............papa armaan ....woh.wwoh...buhat critical hai..........us ne mujhe phone kiya tha......woh..woh jis ne woh card behja tha....us ne yeh sab kuch armaan ko kiya........papa.
ENOUGH ridddhima.....look up....its ok....dont cry..calm down riddhima get hold of urself..........an ridds calms down a little.......
they stay in the hospital............all night
then wen it was dawn....the doctor comes up 2 them an says;armaan has broken a leg an arm.............thank god that his head wasnt hurt badly.........just sign a few forms....an u can meet armaan after 2 hrs.....hes still unconcious.....

ridds, shsank, armus dad,atul an sapna[who came later] all go in 2 armaans room....he was bandaged......an lookd real pale..............................
armaan how r u feeling...says shsank.ridds stays a bit back away 4rom armanns sight[because she felt guity]
how will he feel..........because of ur daughter...aaj mere beta marte marte bacha....an ur asking him hows he feeling!! replies armaans dad pointing at riddsus at ridds
dad...aap kya khe rahe ho.....is mein riddhima ka koi kasoor nahi tha..................says armaan now getting up..
tum chup karo............haan dr gupta....jawab do....hai koi jawab..says armaan dad
shsank an ridds leave the room....ridds in tears...........
she nearly bumps into a boy of 23 stding rite outside the door..
he was wearing a blue jumper..............ridds doesnt look up at his face an appoligies
he backs out


woh bach kaise gaya.....itna tu marna tha ke chal phir na sake..........mein tum se kaha tha.a boy was standing outside the asha hopsital talking on phone angerliy.he was wearing a blue jumper........
kisi kaam ke layk nahin ho tum...........ab suno......is admi ke peche raho....abhi kuch mat karna....lekin sahi muke par khatam kar dena....samjhe!
he hangs up curses an leaves

hope its good enough.....p.s in coming parts there will b a party................................an a real nice ar scene
waitng 4 ur comments.... 😉

thnx maya...ur a darlin....n awesome ff

thankss!!!!!!!! awww poor riddz!.. cant wait for u to continue!!!!!!!!! 😃 😳

love,
Avanti