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Posted: 18 years ago
😛 wow i just love ur fanfic its really amazing and romantic 👏 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG!!! plz continue....no offence guyz but this is 1 ov d best ones i've read coz the others...change all the characters and it dusnt feel like that this stuff cud actually happen in dmg but wat ur writin jsut might have a chance 2 actually happen in dmg!!! DMG AND UR FANFICS ROCK MY SOCKS!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
I really loved it! 👏 😃 Please continue soon - I can't wait to find out what happens next and if Ridz will be rescued!
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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: nishat_1995

OMG!!! plz continue....no offence guyz but this is 1 ov d best ones i've read coz the others...change all the characters and it dusnt feel like that this stuff cud actually happen in dmg but wat ur writin jsut might have a chance 2 actually happen in dmg!!! DMG AND UR FANFICS ROCK MY SOCKS!!!!

wow tanks....that is big comment....😆

nxt part comin in 2 hrs😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
here it is......the next part...............

armaan an atul follow the van.....it takes them to a very old and dessertd area......then the 2 men park the van an come out....armaan stops the car way back an they also get off.....they follw the 2 men...atul wantd 2 hit the 2 men but armaan him an said this the only way we cud get 2 riddhima....
the 2 men go into the factory.....armaan an atul follow.it was a very lod place.the men went in deeper an deeper still arguing...
then they take a turn an.....there was riddhima..all tied 2 a chair an there were 3 more men there.ridds was badly bruised an in a bad condition.
armaan an atul find sticks an attack the gundas......there was much chaos....ridds was partly awake.....then atul rings the police....they fight untill all men were down...then only atul was having troble with a tough one......armaan runs 2 ridds an unties her.....makes her stand
RIDDHIMA!!!!! ridhima look up....say somthing...says armaan worriengly
mein ....woh....ridds became unconsious....just then police comes an ridds is taken 2 sanjeevani.she is treatd..immediatley.chopra an his partner are caught an put in jail..............shsank thanks armaan an angie sort of feels bad that ridds came back and that armaan rescued her....... 😡

things slowly come back 2 normal in sanjeevani.....holi came an all the interns an doctors of sanjeevani plannd 3 celebrate the holi in the house where the interns were staying...........

holi day.....
ridds meets atul an sapna an armaan outside she puts colur on atul an sapna an stops rite wen she had 2 put the colour on armaan.....she turns around an angie puts colour on armaan.........
ridds goes in 2 wash her hands.....an finds armaan inside waiting 4 her......he moves towards ridds...
dekhop armaan plz....sab yahan par hai...plz stop..says ridds an she 2 moves slowly back.........backs up against a walll
armaan streches out a hand......and....puts red colour on her cheek an says aaj is holi pay kuch karna dil karta hai........kar doon........
then anjie comes in an armaan starts talking 2 her an ridds leavs

some boys put :something: 😆 in the bhang.......atul forces ridds 2 drink it....
armaan refuses 2 drink.....alll the interns an doctors become drunk....except armaan an shsank......
armaan goes inside 2 the hall an finds ridds there....drunk...
riddhima tu yahan kya kar rahi ho....aare sambhal ke says armaan an ridds almost falls....he goes over 2 her an ridds says
hi armaan.......mein tumhe hi doondh rahi thi....tum kitne ache ho...tum ne mujhe chopra ke loogon se bachya.....chhhoooo sweat!!!!...tum mujhe buhat buhat buhhatttt ache lagte ho....cute.....
ridds almost falls backwards but armaan grabs her....she shaks his hands off an says...i will not love u tho...no...di loves u an i cant do it....she loves...loves u...an she falls straight 4ward into armaans arms 😉 .......she was asleep....
armaan stands there with ridds in his arma....asleep...an feels so happy.she did admit she lovd him....even tho she was drunk...........

hope its good
dont 4get 2 comment u guys 😉
will write soon
❤️ maya
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Posted: 18 years ago
great ff maya.....awesome...i luv the drunk riddz....so sweet 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

thanx guys.......
u kno the promo 4 next week resembles wat i wrote.....u kno the bangel scene sme as dil tu pagal hai 😆
coincedence BIG coincedence 😆

cant help smiling 2 myself now 😊 😉

cant wait...............

Edited by maya_2u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
chhhhhhhooooooo sweet 😆 gr8 part 👏 it was fuuny when ridz was drunk and accepted her love 4 armu 😆 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
just read...great story....i m lovin it...cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
tat was a fabulous part maya....... 👏 👏
ur just great wow ridz accepted tat she loves him tats so chweet of her...... 😳 😳 😳
cant imagine of waiting for more so plzzzzz continue yaar........... 😃 😃
here this is for ur parts......
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