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maya_2u thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank u guys......................
actuallly i might hav the nxt part tomarrow!!!!
mr bros might go...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
maya awesome ff 👏
take ur time for the nxt part....
but it better be great 😆 😆 ...ok...

the stakes are high now!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
how many times armaan's gona save ridz 😆 😆waiting 4 ur next part 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
waiting for the next part 😕 .....
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow great part yaar loved it....... 😳 😳
y was she on the road yaar how did she get there maya.......
wow picnic tats great it gonna be interesting........ 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey maya......tht was daaaaaaamnnnnn cuuuteeee....waitin for ur next part....n i'm damn sure its gonna b very interesting.....u can take ur own time......but it shud b a rocking one..... 😃 ....
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luv
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks.......nxt part in .....1hr 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great work !
i really enjoy ur story 😍
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Posted: 18 years ago
well here is the nxt part.......oh an mahalakshmi ridds was on the road because ridds was very upset an so she decided 2 go home....but she cudnt get any auto an she was walking in the rain so she became unconcous........! 😆


sanjeevani.......
all the doctors have a meeting..........they all were talking about improving the hospital facilities...at the end dr shsank made an annocment....
;1 more thing doctors........we have organised a picnic.......dr.keerti an myself along with the interns are going 2 the picnic.....
every1 startd talking at once......
we will b leaving the day after tomarrow....so i want every1 2 b ready........we,ll b leaving at night.....ok any questions....no...ok every1 get back 2 work plz.....

back at the house
all the interns were in the garden....they were all 2 excitd 2 go 2 bed.....they were talking about the picnic
yaar mein tu buhat excitd hoon.......ridds kya hum wahan par sher dekhe ge...say atul
sher.....yeh rite....atul hum jungle thori ja rahen hein.....aur waise bhi tumhare hote hua sher ki kya zururat hai.....tumhara chera sher se buhat milta ha...says angie
sapna atul an ridds get up 2 go get some food.......anjali an armaan were left...then armaan also gets up an goes saying he needs 2 check his pager...................
atul,sapna,an riddzy were walking along the corridor....atul an sapna were arguing an ridds was a step behind laughing about them......they come 2 the kitchen...they turn the light in the hall on......atul an sapna still arguing....atul an sapna get all the food they cud hold an leave....while ridds was taking the rest.........
armaan comes from behind.....ridds unaware.....ridds cudnt hold the packets of crips so she puts them down an decides 2 call atul back....just then she feels somone moving her hair from her shoulder.she moves her head 2 see armaan standing rite behind her.....armaan moves towards ridds ear an says
Khamoshiyan teri mujhse baatein karti hain,
Meri har aah har dard samajhti hain.
Pata hai majbur hai tu bhi,
Phir bhi aankhein tere deedar ko tarasti hain....
riddhima.....ab saha nahi jata.......
ridds turns an starts 2 leave but armaan grabs her arm an puts it behind her back......an says
dil karta hai tumhe dekhta rahoon.........mein pagal horaha hoon tumhare pyarr mein........jab bhi ankhen band karta hoon tu yeh badi badi ankhen ....yeh lambe baal.....tumhara masoom sa face meri jaan hi nahi chorte.............................he leaves her hand puts it on her face an kisses her forhead........
ridds opens her eyes an leaves...............

sanjeevani.....next day.......
ridds gets a phone call......she goes 2 attend it....she finds armaan an atul at the counter....they were waiting 4 the reports.....
ridds picks up the phone.......
ridds; hello.....hello...who is this....hello...
ridd...hi..maaaaaa i hope tumhein card acha laga.....woh jise tum red ink samhje rahi thi.....woh mera khoon tha...jis se mein ne tum se izhaar kiya..
ridds; kya.....kya bukwaas kar rahe hu tum....hu kaun...itni gandi harkat kyon ki...woh card tum ne bejha tha....how dare u...
relax....ridd..hi..maa ...tumhara lover tumhare bare mein sab janta hoon.....tum ghar kab jati ho...hospital mein kya karti ho.....aur tumhare boyfriend armaan ke bare mein bhi pata hai..........uss ki kher nahi..tum sirf aur sirf meri hu..araan ku rasste se mein hata doon ga...damkhi mat samjhna .................kar ke dekhaoon ga......i love u riddhima..
ridds slams the phone down....atul asks wat happened an she tells him an armaan everthing......
uss ki itni himat kaise hui.....itna ganda ha woh....says atul
next time uss ka phone aaye tum mujhe batana...says armaan.he was feeling anger pulsing thro him...he wished he knew who did this so he cud strangle him....armaan leaves...his fists clenchd
ridds stares at armaan an thinks...i hope woh armaan ko kuch nuksaan na kare........

all the interns were ready 2 leave
the bus wasnt coming...........armaan was a way behind...talking 2 a nuse giving her instructions....ridds moves over 2 him an says
armaan tum apna khayal rkhna.....jis ne mujhe phone kiya tha uss ne kaha tha ke woh tumhe nukaan puhancaye ga...........says ridds
tum mujh se pyar nahin karti......phir itna dar kyon...ya karti ho...
ridds becomes speechless
then they hear horn an the bus arrives
armaan says...dont worry mujhe kuch nahi ho ga....lekin jis din mujha pata chala woh shaqs kon hai.....woh tu gaya....................

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armania

ausumnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!1
you r a future writer for dmg for sure 👏

wow......thanks girl....................😛

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