Ek Ajnabi - RA / RN ff (Part 9 - Pg 13) - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Oye mujhe zara batao.Raj ka k8iske saath hoga toh main decide karungi ke main yeh fic padungi ya nahi kyunki Kashish toh mere bardast se bahar hai.lWoh jis fic mein hoti hai I do not touch it with a barge pole but I love RN fics.Toh answer me.

Aur mujhe Kashish ke upar yeh Basu sirname bilkul pasand nahi.

hey dear..sorry bt i can't tell u...who he will be at da end wid...coz its da real suspennse of this story...n as far as ur concern..don worry 4 RN jodi lovers...there surely scenes b/w both u will lik....so if u still wanna read ur welcome dear...as far as ur question is concerned m unable 2 answer tht 4 now...hop 2 see ur comment in future 2...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Mihir ne khoyi thi apni yaadarst
Isiliye gaya tha woh Mandira ke paas
Mandira ko bhi ho gaya tha usse pyaar
Par lauti uski yaadarst
Aur khali gaya Mandira ka vaar
Aakhir Tulsi ko hi mila uska saccha pyaar.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Yar continue plzzz.........jaldi post karo.....Nd plzz no RN pairing..........i dont like naina........so if u r not making it RA then make it RS(raj-shveta)......hahaha 😆 ....or raj with anyone but Naina 😕 .....

That point apart.......I love the story so im missing it very much.........kab post karoge!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
gr888888888 set of parts, guriya!!!!!! im really starting to love this FF!!!!! and im gonna agree wid Vandu, on the piring issue... i also do not like RN pairing!!!! all i like is RA jodi!!!!!!! and i know that tum bilkul buri nahi ho, aur tum apni readers ko FULL satisfaction deti ho...!!!!! 😉 plzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: togepe30

Yar continue plzzz.........jaldi post karo.....Nd plzz no RN pairing..........i dont like naina........so if u r not making it RA then make it RS(raj-shveta)......hahaha 😆 ....or raj with anyone but Naina 😕 .....

That point apart.......I love the story so im missing it very much.........kab post karoge!! 😳

i am posting da part dear...so do read n tell h was it...n don worry...ab i can't bring a third herione now ...so..hav 2 bear wid naina...n abt pairing chill...its a later issue...till now he is wid kashish na...so...njoy da parts...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sai-licious

gr888888888 set of parts, guriya!!!!!! im really starting to love this FF!!!!! and im gonna agree wid Vandu, on the piring issue... i also do not like RN pairing!!!! all i like is RA jodi!!!!!!! and i know that tum bilkul buri nahi ho, aur tum apni readers ko FULL satisfaction deti ho...!!!!! 😉 plzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!

thnx dear..m glad u liked it....n also thnx tht u knw..i won't dissapoint anyone...so...relax...n read da parts...as he is still in luv wid kashish only...jab naina ka hoga..tab k tab tension lo...so do read n comment...m posting in a few minutes...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part - 4

It was evening time we see a car entering the street from far and stops near a big house.When viewed closely the car is balck in color and its bmw latest model.
The door opens and we see atall and handsom guy coming out of the car,he rings the bell and the door is opened by a servant and after giving the keys he enter inside the huge house.
As he enters the main door to his surprise there is so much silence in the house and it feels like as the house has no beings living there but in real this house used t be like not this before.
A smile comes acroos his face as he remembers wen he first entered this house. The day was when his parents the bigget industralist Mr Mahen Kappor and his mom Mrs. Nikhila kappor took him along to see the girl,they have heard about lot from his sister palak.
Palak was studying with daughter of Shekhawat's and as kapoor's were looking for a bahu for their son she told them to just meet this girl as she will make a cute couple with there andsom hunk Shiv,the eligble bachelor in town at those times.
They entered the house and were greeted by Mrs.Maya Shikhawat and there son rajveer shikhawat the kapoor's elde ones were really impressed by them and even shiv went along with rajveer very well and in minutes of time it was looking like both families knew each other from v long time.
Then maya called Mahi there daughter whom they came to see and shiv when saw her coming downstairs it ws like love at first sight.She wsa wearing a seagreen churidar kurta with little embroidery on it and her head was bowed down beacuse of shyness and shiv when saw her he was like dumbstruck and immediately knew she was the girl who he dreamt as a wife.
The very traditional girl his family wanted and beautiful too with shyness like he loved in girls. Everything was going fine when elders gave them permission to talk to each other alone and they headed toward the garden. it was the beautiful place he had ever seen and got to know through mahi that his bro loves gardening and he especially takes care of this garden himself.
Soon the traditional and shy girl he saw inside changed into a very naughty girl and played themost hilarious prank on him which he remembered till date and thinking of that he laughed loudly. Maya who was busy in mandir heard that and came out and when she saw shiv, se came foward toward him,
M:aray shiv beta tum kab aye..andar aoo na..
Sh(coming foward bent and took her blesings):namaste aunti bas abhi aya..app sunaye kaise hain..apki tabiyat ab kaise hai..
M:bas beta tabiyat ka kya hai..aur umar bhi ho agye hai tu...(n both were now seated)
S:arey aunti..umar k tu baat na karein app aur burhi..never ur still young...apko yaad nahe jab main pehle baar aya tha..apko kaha tha..u don look lik mahi's mom..app tu uski..bari behan lagti ho..
M:chal badmash...phir shuru hogaya tera mazak..
Sh:mazak..kya aunti m serious..
M:acha pagla...aur suna..kidhar tha itney din se..mahi nahee thi tu...no aunti..aur mahi k ati he..hi hello aunti haan..
Sh:aisa kuch anhee aunti woh bas mein...
M:acha ab yeh sab chor bol kya lega...ab aya tu kahna bhi kha k jana..
Sh:khana woh actually..mainey socha tha..par...its ok..mahi tu na..yeh usi ne adat dali hai..bahir ka ghatiya fast food khaney k..mein tu apni aunti k hathon ka khaney ko taras gaya..so ajj..jo app khilao..
M:acha yeh baat hai..waisey baat kya karni hai..barey maskey lag rahein hain ajj..
Sh(came close and held her hand):coem on aunti..mein aur maska u knw...na...kabhi nahe..yeh tu geniuinely bol raha tha...
M:acha baba...maan liya..tu ja mahi shayad upar so rahe hai..usey bhi utha de..mein...cahi banati hoon tab tak..
Sh:ok aunti..waisey abhi tak so rahe ..kya aunti app ne..buhat dhel de rakhi hai..apni is ladli ko..mein apki jagah..hota tu..aisa kas k rakhta...k.
jus then a voice came frm behind...
V:kon kisko kas k rakhta hai..yeh tu waqt he batayega...mr shiv kapoor..
both maya and shiv turned & saw naina standing at the door..
Sh:hi naina...hru doing?
N:mein tu theek hoon...app sunaiye...mr shiv...mahi k atey he ab k bhi entry ho he gaye..warna humein tu laga tha...k app k bak bak suney k liye...elaan karwana pareyga...k we need someone 2 entertain us..so please come soon...
Sh:wht..main koi joker hoon who will entertain u...dekhiye aunti...yeh naina kya bol rahe hai...kya mein apko joker lagta hoon..
M:arey nahee beta woh tu bas aisey he..tum log batein karoo...mein chai lati hoon..
N:chai ko choriye...auntie..jokers ko mainey suna hai chai kahan pasand ati hai...inhe tu pranks peni k adat hoti hai na..(sayng with innocent look)
Sh:wht..ab buhat hua..look na auntie..shez being so un fair..after all mein is ghar ka honey wala damad hoon..kya izzat kar rahee ho meri larki...balki..lakri..
N:hey u don call me..lakri...samjhe..damad..honey walee na..huey tu nahee..n who knows..mahi irada badal de...acha hai..meiney tu idea diya hai..samjhdar hui tu maan jayegi..
Sh:acha tu yeh app hain jo meri fiance ko aisey sunherey mashwarey de rahe hain..even i wonder...why shez behavng all odd..ab pata chal kis k sanagt ka asar hai..
N:aur nahee tu kya achey logon k sangat ka asar bhi acha he hota hai..
Sh:achey log...kon achey log...aunti...apko yahan merey yah apke ilawa koi acha nazar aya nahee na...
M:tum dono jagharana ha jaghro..mujhe beech mein mat dalo...mein peesne wali nahee beech mein(laughng loudly)
N:arey aunti app kaisey nahee ayeinge beehc main...i knw ur at my side...iski maat suniyega ok...so app merey saath haina..
Sh:ji nahee aunti is wid me..
N:no wid me...
Sh:wid me...
N:wid me..
Sh:ji nahee i m her favourite..so shez wid me..
N:no am her jaan..so shez wid me..
Sh:ahan...m her honey wala damad...aur sasien damad k saath zyada hoti hain...so wid me..
N:ji nahee...bahu k close hoti hai saas so shez with me.
Sh:naah..saas bahu k jhagre tu har serial k kahani hai...so...she cant be at ur side...so i win..
N:no i win..as hum diff hain...nt lik typical serial saas bahu...so shez wid me..n i win thats final...
Sh:ji nahee...i win..as damad's always win..
N:nah..mainey tu ajj tak na suna...ik din damad ka..saad aur bahu k phir suney..tu..shez wid me..
Sh:nah..cahl theek hai..aunti se he pooch lete hain..
both turned 2 maya...who was lost somewhere but they didn't notice..n naina went foward n said..
N:cahliya aunti ab app isko bol k...bahu win..bataye..k i won..n he as always has lost..
Sh:ji nahee is baar i won...dekh lena...
suddenly both noticed shez quites n shiv wid eyes tld naina 2 ask her..
N:kya howa aunti...app ne jawab nahe diya...
maya came out of trance...n said..
M:chati tu main bhi hoon naina k haar baar k tarah meri bahu yani tu jetey par shayad..ab se yeh hak kho diya hai..so congrats shiv...is baar rum jeet gaye beta...
n sayng tht she went fastly 2ward the kitchen...n suddenly both relaized wht she meant n remained quite 4 a while. then naina went inside kitchen 2 see maya..n shiv went upstairs 2 wake mahi..
It was after the engagement b/w mahi n shiv took place that...naina and shiv met alot and as maya had asked naina's parent her hand 4 rajveer...n they agreed 2...lng back...shiv gt 2 knw tht...bt there was no annoucement of the relation of naina and rajveer in public..only close ones knew tht..shiv and naina always had a fight tht who maya liked her damad or her bahu n always naina used 2 win as she was more close 2 maya frm her childhood.
and today when shiv nad naina met they just wanted 2 cheer up maya so the house might have same laughter as it used 2 have b4 in pst 4 sometime but in da end all wnet wrong and she gt hurt more..
Upstairs shiv went inside mahi's room...n he saw mahi...sitting on the bed with a photo frame in hand...he knew...whose photo it was as tears were clearly seen in mahi's eyes..
shiv came in and went near amhi...n sat on da bed near her..she looked up and when saw him...hugged him tightly and as if she was waiting 4 him only...tears came in more flow frm her eyes..n he didn't knew what else 2 do..n jus pat her back..tryng 2 console her..
Ma:why shic..humarey saath he kyun..kya bigara tha hum ne bhagwan ka..balke..mama tu sabse zyada unko manti hai..tum tu jante ho..kitni pooja paat karte thein woh...aur ab bhi unki shrada mein koi kami nahe aye phir kyun..humara ik he sahar tha..kyun woh bhi cheen liya...kyun..
n she strted cryng again bitterly..
sh:plz mahi..ron abadn karo...dekho roney se kya hoga..aur ajj agar raj bhi yahan hota..tu usey ahca lagta..tumhein aisey dekh k..usey tu ik bhi naso nahee bhata tha..tumhare gaal par..aur kahan yeh..dekho mahi..janey wale laut k nahee atey..par unke peeche..rona bewakofi hai...achi yadoon se yaad karo na raj ko na k yun ro k...aur roey se janti ho aunti ko aur dard hoga..woh ab bhi..is taklef deh daur mein hai k unka jawan beta..tum unka iklota shara ho ab mahi..u hav 2 be brave ..
shiv let her face him n wiped her tears kissed on her forhead..
sh:ok..good grl ab koi rona nahe..aur mein jis mahi ko jnata hoon woh tu buhat brave hai..woh tu...kisi larke ko first mulaqat mein kiss k offer karney se bhi nahee darte aur ajj..yeh meri mahi he hai na..yah..
Ma(hittng on his hand):ik baar ghlati hogaye tu uski saza kya puri umar dogey...n mind it u were the first guy i met as respective groom 2 marry me...aur kismat dekho..aur kisi ko dekney ka mauka he nahe mila..warna...
Sh:warna kya...hello...jus i m da one..who has rite 2 kiss these beautiful lips...don dare gave anyone else..samjhi..
Ma:samjh gaye mr shiv kapoor...waisey...i still remember ur face when i said tht 2 u...u were like...
Sh:k yeh larki khiski hui hai...
Ma:n u were so...red n all..i was da grl...i shld be rad n all bt...
Sh:bt u shld acknowledge me 2...madam...i gt da trick soon...n when i said ok...4 da kiss..app bhi yaad karye..ap k shakal kaise hogaye thi..u were all sat 2 run away..
Ma:but u never gave me way 2...n
Sh:instead of that..gt da most beautiful kiss of da world...frm da most gorgeous looking grl..
mahi blush don tht comment n hugged him..as she remembered da kiss n was nt able 2 face him...he hugged her back..
sh:kiss was 2 gud..par...i stil remember uskey baad k maar...zalim...raj was sure short hitler's janasheen tht day..
Ma:hmm...yah..when saw raj bhaya..i was like...oh no...n when...he was beating u lik anything...woh tu main na hoti tu...u would hav nt been here only...
Sh:so true..bacha liye..hadi pasle i karney he wala tha us din...tu meri...rishta karney aye the...aur..arthi uthwani k ghari a jati..
n as he said tht..mahi kept her hand on his mouth..
Ma:aisa phir kabhi maat bolna shiv...pehle he..raj bhaya k janey se...adhi maar chuki hoon..tum bhi tu...
Sh(hit her slightly on head):pagal..merey marney ka sun k...all drama..aur jo khud apna bol rahe ho woh...tumhe kuch hogaya mahi tu even i can't dream my life..so don dare say tht again also..acha ab chalo neeche chalte hai..naina aur aunti wait kar rahein honge..jao n wash ur face quickly..n be brave 4 aunti sake ok..
mahi noded n went foward 2 washroom..while shiv was sitting there only...n then he held da photo mahi was viewing ..n saw rajveer smiling...
Sh:raj tumhari kami s gahr mein koi chahey bhi tu pori nahee kar sakta...m tryng k tum se kiya wada nibhaoon...par...itn asaan nahee hai...
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sujal was sitting in his room..all happy as he gt da news frm charu tht..he would be livng in with basu's after his discharge...firstly he was against it...n was thinking tht he would be a burden on them as till when they can keep him...he owed so much 2 them...they were keeping him here in hospital also free of charge n even never asked him 4 a single peny and above all now he would be liing wid them. But when he talked with prerna...she gt angry n asked him tht she used 2 consider him as a son n was askng a son 2 come live wid them but he never think her as a mother n so is not agrreing 2 come...he didn't knew why bt when she said she was like her mother...he can't say knw 2 her..he somewhere in his heart knew..tht if there was her mother somewhere in thsi world she would be lik her only and so he agreed and was now happy also cause of kashish being tehre.
he himslef had no idea why he liked 2 tease her irritate her,make her angry on him just knew one thing tht those eyes she had..make him mad...n he can neva see wht he is doing when he see those eyes..jus knows one thing tht he wants 2 jus concentarte on her eyes..n want 2 flow deep into them....
as he closed his eyes...da two beautiful pair of eyes...came infront of her...
song in background...

maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
aankhein teri,aankhein teri,(we see kashish eyes only..wid kajal in them...looking so beautiful...)
kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
ishq hai(opens his eyes..n gives his all time sweet smile)
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere

ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu(its another day and we see a nurse in his room checking on his reports ad talking wid him and he lost somewhere else only)

mujhase yeh har ghadi, meraa dil kahe
tum hi ho usaki aarzoo(closes his eyes..avoiding evryone there)
mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe
teri hi ho sab guftagoo(thinking when she used 2 be angry on her..h beautiful she used 2 look....last time when she gt angry...)
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab kartaa hoon
phoolon si aaye, khushaboo(smiles n sees opens eyes..n see nurse smilng 2ward him...saying..."ur madly in love...keh do usko ab"..n leaving...)
ishq hai.....

(evening time...he was out 4 a walk when he saw her gng home...n saw another young male doctor wid her n both talkng n he as if offering her 2 drop..n when she accepts...he unable 2 see her wid anyone..as he himelf did not no y..he was still not clear abt his feelings 4 her..all in hospital..nurses doctors...even charu told he has fallen 4 her..bt he was nt convinced...n now seeing her wid someone..he was really gtg jealous..)
rakh loon chhupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon
rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tere, main hi rahoon(walking back 2 room....he laid on da bed..n as if want 2 avoid her..closed his eyes..bt again..she was there..wid her hair open..lookng lik an angel..)
julfen teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon
saaye me, inake main jiyoon
ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere

meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaz yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa

meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaz yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa

meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaz yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa(opening his eyes again da nxt morning he was confident now tht he was head in heals in love wid her n there was no doubt left...frts he was thnkng..it was jus 4 fun as he was lovng 2 tease her but...nt tht was da case he was actually fallng 4 her beauty her charisma..her style...n now he was very sure...that he has fallen 4...according 2 her co workers n fellow doctors...badbaoli,attitude wale,bhao dekhaney wale Dr.kashish basu and he wasn't regreeting tht as he loved her da way she was..different frm all...all herslef...)
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ok guyz this is the nxt part 4 u all...sorry if any mistakes...as i was in hurry n never rechecked....hope u will like it...do comments n tell me h it was...plz...i love 2 read response on this...n it encourages me 2 write more..
nxt part nt sure whts comng up...bt yah 4 sure its our bakbakiya...Dr.kashish turn 2 steal da show...
till nxt time..tc..
wid luv...
guriya...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome yaar!!!!!i am very emotional yaar...i had tears in my eyes....poor naina how would she felt, her raj is missing.....and raj's sister mahi and mum their al miss him a lot.... 😭 and sujal he is getting crazy about kash...lord save him from kashish 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part!!!!!! i hope kashish feels the same way for sujal as well!!!!! 😳 i don't want to see sujal hurt!!!!! 😭 plz continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey just caught up with the parts. i must say they were awersome and rocking. specially now that sujal has lost his memory and living in kashish basu's house i am sure he is going to not leave her alone at all now.the part was great!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.

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